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* BetterAsFriends with everybody he's gotten the guts to confess to.
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I make [[http://perfectioninsteel.bandcamp.com/ some music]], but the original songs suck. There are [[BuffySpeak game arrange things]], such as a rock album of [[Game/ClockTower]], a rock/piano album of {{[[Mother3]] Mother 3}}, and a general piano album.
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I make [[http://perfectioninsteel.bandcamp.com/ some music]], but the original songs suck. There are [[BuffySpeak game arrange things]], such as a rock album of [[Game/ClockTower]], Game/ClockTower, a rock/piano album of {{[[Mother3]] [[{{Mother3}} Mother 3}}, 3]], and a general piano album.
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I make [[http://perfectioninsteel.bandcamp.com/ some music]], but the original songs suck. There are [[BuffySpeak game arrange things]], such as a rock album of Clock Tower, [[Game/ClockTower]], a rock/piano album of {{Mother3 {{[[Mother3]] Mother 3}}, and a general piano album.
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I make [[http://perfectioninsteel.bandcamp.com/ some music]], but the original songs suck. There are [[BuffySpeak game arrange things]], such as a rock album of Clock Tower, a rock/piano album of {{Mother3}}, {{Mother3 Mother 3}}, and a general piano album.
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* AbusiveParents [[strike: (Father)]] Both of them. Father's physically abusive, mother's emotionally abusive.
* AbusiveParents [[strike: (Father)]] Both of them. Father's physically abusive, mother's emotionally abusive.
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I make [[http://perfectioninsteel.bandcamp.com/ some music]], but the original songs suck. There are [[BuffySpeak game arrange things]], such as a rock album of Clock Tower, a rock/piano album of Mother3, {{Mother3}}, and a general piano album.
* AbusiveParents [[strike: (Father)]] Both of them. Father's physically abusive, mother's emotionally abusive.album.
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Oh, and I made a Clock Tower [[http://perfectioninsteel.bandcamp.com/album/rock-tower arrange thing]].
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* AndIMustScream: Recently had sleep paralysis. Only a few minutes long, but when you have a cold and can't breathe through your nose, and can't force your mouth open, it's unbearable.
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* AndIMustScream: Recently had sleep paralysis. Only a few minutes long, but when you have a cold (which means no nose-breathing) and can't breathe through your nose, and can't aren't able to mouth-breathe because you have no way to force your mouth open, it's unbearable.[[HighOctaneNightmareFuel unbearable]].
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* AndIMustScream: Recently had something like locked-in syndrome. Only a few minutes long, but when you have a cold and can't breathe through your nose, and can't force your mouth open, it's unbearable.
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* AndIMustScream: Recently had something like locked-in syndrome.sleep paralysis. Only a few minutes long, but when you have a cold and can't breathe through your nose, and can't force your mouth open, it's unbearable.
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* AndIMustScream: Recently had something like locked-in syndrome. Only a few minutes long, but when you have a cold and can't breathe through your nose, and can't force your mouth open, it's unbearable.
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* MitadakeHigh: It was inspired by a roleplay on here, although the similarities stop shortly after the beginning.
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* MitadakeHigh: It was inspired by a roleplay on here, although the similarities stop shortly after the beginning.beginning, which is a blatant {{Homage}}.
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* CharacterBlog: The story is meant to read like this, but since it's in real time, [[HowUnscientific Maro has a]] [[DoingInTheWizard technology-induced]] [[HowUnscientific psychic link to his blog]], which is actually [[PostModernism the very book you're reading]]. It's HandWaved using LampshadeHanging and a ShoutOut to AppliedPhlebotinum.
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* CharacterBlog: The story is meant to read like this, but since it's in real time, [[HowUnscientific Maro Belmont has a]] [[DoingInTheWizard technology-induced]] [[HowUnscientific psychic link to his blog]], which is actually [[PostModernism the very book you're reading]]. It's HandWaved using LampshadeHanging and a ShoutOut to AppliedPhlebotinum.
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* Nikola is named after, [[NikolaTesla well]]...
* [[FinalFantasyI "I, Nikola, will knock you all down!"]]
* [[FinalFantasyI "I, Nikola, will knock you all down!"]]
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Tropes present in my work, ''Both Of Whom Die''.
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Tropes present in my work, ''Both Of Whom Die''.
Die'', which will get its own page when the final volume (each "volume" consists of one month, see CharacterBlog) is released.
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* The end of [[MetalGear ''The Best Is Yet To Come'']] is the intro-quote.
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* NightmareFuelNightmareFuel: To him, ''EVERYTHING''.
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Tropes present in my work, ''Both Of Whom Die''.
[[folder:Shout Outs]]
*The title and end of author's note is one to {{Narcissu}}.
*One to {{Hyadain}}'s "Quick!!" in the beginning.
*[[MetalGear ''The Best Is Yet To Come'']] is the intro-quote.
* [[AppliedPhlebotinum Phlebotinum]] is used as an excuse for it being made to read like a blog somewhat, but being first-person and real-time.
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*EmotionlessGirl: Tabella
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*MitadakeHigh: It was inspired by a roleplay on here, although the similarities stop shortly after the beginning.
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*The title and end of author's note is one to {{Narcissu}}.
*One to {{Hyadain}}'s "Quick!!" in the beginning.
*[[MetalGear ''The Best Is Yet To Come'']] is the intro-quote.
* [[AppliedPhlebotinum Phlebotinum]] is used as an excuse for it being made to read like a blog somewhat, but being first-person and real-time.
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*EmotionlessGirl: Tabella
*ForegoneConclusion
*LampshadeHanging
*ManicPixieDreamGirl: Maro attempts to be a male version for [[EmotionlessGirl Tabella]].
*MitadakeHigh: It was inspired by a roleplay on here, although the similarities stop shortly after the beginning.
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I am a young man who [[SelfDeprecation thinks he is badass, but most definitely is not]]. Oh, and I only just turned 13 in 2009, although my [[WhatDoYouMeanItsNotForKids taste in fiction]] might not make that obvious. I'm quite shy about revealing my age, since when I do people think that any of my problems in life are just {{Wangst}} and [[BerserkButton never take my philosophical beliefs seriously, saying that I'm too young to know anything]]. Yes, I've had to put up with people like that.
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I am a young man who [[SelfDeprecation thinks he is badass, but most definitely is not]]. Oh, and I only just turned 13 in 2009, I'm a bit young, although my [[WhatDoYouMeanItsNotForKids taste in fiction]] might not make that obvious. I'm quite shy about revealing my age, since when I do people think that any of my problems in life are just {{Wangst}} and [[BerserkButton never take my philosophical beliefs seriously, saying that I'm too young to know anything]]. Yes, I've had to put up with people like that.
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Cleverbot: Yes.
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Cleverbot: [[CrowningMomentOfAwesome A feeling that cannot be described.]]
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User: Have you heard of Mother3?
Cleverbot: Yes.
User: What is it, then?
Cleverbot: [[CrowningMomentOfAwesome A feeling that cannot be described.]]
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User: [[CrowningMusicOfAwesome Simple as can be.]]
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User: Raise your voices.
Cleverbot: I raise my hand.
User: All day long now.
Cleverbot: [[Ptitlei015gc004kw4 We're on the road and getting' strong.]]
User: Love grows strong now.
Cleverbot: [[WhatIsThisThingYouCallLove Are you saying love evolves?]]
User: Sing a melody of love.
Cleverbot: [[CannotSpitItOut If you have something to say, say it.]] Or I will sign off.
User: Oh love.
Cleverbot: [[CrowningMomentOfFunny Oh vexations.]]
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User: [[EarthboundZero Take a melody.]]
Cleverbot: I can't see you.
User: [[CrowningMusicOfAwesome Simple as can be.]]
Cleverbot: I hate girls who start drama.
User: Raise your voices.
Cleverbot: I raise my hand.
User: All day long now.
Cleverbot: [[Ptitlei015gc004kw4 We're on the road and getting' strong.]]
User: Love grows strong now.
Cleverbot: [[WhatIsThisThingYouCallLove Are you saying love evolves?]]
User: Sing a melody of love.
Cleverbot: [[CannotSpitItOut If you have something to say, say it.]] Or I will sign off.
User: Oh love.
Cleverbot: [[CrowningMomentOfFunny Oh vexations.]]
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Oh, and I made a Clock Tower [[http://perfectioninsteel.bandcamp.com/album/rock-tower arrange thing]].
