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** Overall, [=GamerJay=] grew rather distasteful towards the much more graphic/crude elements present throughout the story, with him actively going back to tone things down and admitting that he's not proud of what he wrote.
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** The Brother Gods [[spoiler:are Makyrs in this version. The final episode of Volume 9 of Ruby would reveal that they were the creations of the Ever After Tree.]]
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Cinder's past as an orphan is intact in this fic. It's briefly referenced in Chapter 37.
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** The fic also had Cinder's backstory as the daughter of cultists who made the mistake of summoning Marv Talg, who proceeded to rape ''and'' brutally dismember everyone present, only being stopped by Salem before he could get to Cinder. [[spoiler: In Volume 8, it would be revealed that Cinder was an orphan who was treated as a slave by a cruel hotel owner and her daughters, eventually killing them and the one person who was kind to her to become the power-hungry sociopath we know and hate today.]]
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* OutdatedByCanon: The idea that the Doomguy and Doom Slayer are father and son was disproved with the release of ''VideoGame/DoomEternal'', which revealed that [[spoiler: they are the exact same person]].
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* OutdatedByCanon: As both RWBY and DOOM had ongoing stories and world-building when this fic was first published, this was inevitable.
** The idea that the Doomguy and Doom Slayer are father and son was disproved with the release of ''VideoGame/DoomEternal'', which revealed that [[spoiler: they are the exact same person]].
** The idea that the Doomguy and Doom Slayer are father and son was disproved with the release of ''VideoGame/DoomEternal'', which revealed that [[spoiler: they are the exact same person]].
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** The fic was hit with this big time when it came to the origin of Hell. [[spoiler: In this fic, the demons are the corrupted souls of the first batch of Remnantians, who the God Of Darkness wiped out to punish Salem. ''The Ancient Gods'' would reveal that the demons and Hell were originally the people of Jekkad, Davoth's realm, who became corrupted after the Maykrs locked Davoth away into Jekkad, where his fury would turn the place into Hell.]]
** The fic also had Cinder's backstory as the daughter of cultists who made the mistake of summoning Marv Talg, who proceeded to rape ''and'' brutally dismember everyone present, only being stopped by Salem before he could get to Cinder. [[spoiler: In Volume 8, it would be revealed that Cinder was an orphan who was treated as a slave by a cruel hotel owner and her daughters, eventually killing them and the one person who was kind to her to become the power-hungry sociopath we know and hate today.]]
** The fic also had Cinder's backstory as the daughter of cultists who made the mistake of summoning Marv Talg, who proceeded to rape ''and'' brutally dismember everyone present, only being stopped by Salem before he could get to Cinder. [[spoiler: In Volume 8, it would be revealed that Cinder was an orphan who was treated as a slave by a cruel hotel owner and her daughters, eventually killing them and the one person who was kind to her to become the power-hungry sociopath we know and hate today.]]
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* AccidentallyCorrectWriting: While the circumstances are different from the games, ''Remnant Inferis: DOOM'' inadvertently predicted the [[spoiler:DemonOfHumanOrigin nature of the demons]] well before ''DOOM Eternal'' was released.
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* AccidentallyCorrectWriting: Well before ''DOOM Eternal'' was released...
** While the circumstances are different from the games, ''Remnant Inferis: DOOM'' inadvertently predicted the [[spoiler:DemonOfHumanOrigin nature of thedemons]] well before ''DOOM Eternal'' was released.demons]].
** Also, the Doom Slayer [[spoiler: [[SuddenlyVoiced breaking his silence]], though only at certain crucial points during the game.]]
** While the circumstances are different from the games, ''Remnant Inferis: DOOM'' inadvertently predicted the [[spoiler:DemonOfHumanOrigin nature of the
** Also, the Doom Slayer [[spoiler: [[SuddenlyVoiced breaking his silence]], though only at certain crucial points during the game.]]
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* HypotheticalCasting: According to WordOfGod in the author's notes at the end of Chapter 7, the Doom Slayer is voiced by Creator/BrianBloom, and sounds like B.J. Blazkowicz without a Southern accent. In Chapter 12, it's stated that his child-self is voiced by Maile Flanagan.
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* HypotheticalCasting: According to WordOfGod in the author's notes at the end of Chapter 7, the Doom Slayer is voiced by Creator/BrianBloom, and sounds like B.J. Blazkowicz Blazkowicz, but without a Southern accent. In Chapter 12, it's stated that his child-self is voiced by Maile Flanagan.
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* AccidentallyCorrectWriting: While the circumstances are different, ''Remnant Inferis: DOOM'' inadvertently predicted the [[spoiler:DemonOfHumanOrigin nature of the demons]] well before ''DOOM Eternal'' was released.
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* AccidentallyCorrectWriting: While the circumstances are different, different from the games, ''Remnant Inferis: DOOM'' inadvertently predicted the [[spoiler:DemonOfHumanOrigin nature of the demons]] well before ''DOOM Eternal'' was released.
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* HypotheticalCasting: According to WordOfGod in the author's notes at the end of Chapter 7, the Doom Slayer is voiced by Creator/BrianBloom, and sounds like B.J. Blazkowicz sans Southern accent. In Chapter 12, it's stated that his child-self is voiced by Maile Flanagan.
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* HypotheticalCasting: According to WordOfGod in the author's notes at the end of Chapter 7, the Doom Slayer is voiced by Creator/BrianBloom, and sounds like B.J. Blazkowicz sans without a Southern accent. In Chapter 12, it's stated that his child-self is voiced by Maile Flanagan.
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* HypotheticalCasting: According to WordOfGod in the author's notes at the end of Chapter 7, he's voiced by Creator/BrianBloom, and sounds like B.J. Blazkowicz sans Southern accent. In Chapter 12, it's stated that his child-self is voiced by Maile Flanagan.
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* HypotheticalCasting: According to WordOfGod in the author's notes at the end of Chapter 7, he's the Doom Slayer is voiced by Creator/BrianBloom, and sounds like B.J. Blazkowicz sans Southern accent. In Chapter 12, it's stated that his child-self is voiced by Maile Flanagan.
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* HypotheticalCasting: According to WordOfGod in the author's notes at the end of Chapter 7, he's voiced by Creator/BrianBloom, and sounds like B.J. Blazkowicz sans Southern accent. In Chapter 12, it's stated that his child-self is voiced by Maile Flanagan.
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* CreatorBacklash: Specifically in regards to early parts of the story.
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* CreatorBacklash: Specifically in regards to the early parts of the story.
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** The author originally intended for Jacques Schnee to be an irredeemable monster and one of the masterminds of the demonic invasion, but after watching Volume 7, decided to make him a pawn of the real mastermind, Merlot.
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** The author originally intended for Jacques Schnee to be an irredeemable monster and one of the masterminds of the demonic invasion, but after watching Volume 7, decided to [[UnwittingPawn make him a pawn pawn]] of the real mastermind, Merlot.
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** [=GamerJay=] has also regretted the scene in Chapter 27 that was inspired by ''Film/EventHorizon'', realizing it was too much. As a result, he want back and altered it to be far more ambiguous and less explicit.
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** [=GamerJay=] has also regretted the scene in Chapter 27 that was inspired by ''Film/EventHorizon'', realizing it was too much. As a result, he want back and altered it to be far more ambiguous and less explicit.explicit in detail.
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** [=GamerJay=] has also regretted the scene in Chapter 27 that was inspired by ''Film/EventHorizon'', realizing it was too much. As a result, he want back and altered it to be far more ambiguous and less explicit.
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** The author intended for Deag Nilox to survive the fic so the events of the second game could play out like normal before changing their mind and having Doom Slayer kill him.
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** The author intended for Deag Nilox to survive the fic so the events of the second game could play out like normal before changing their mind and having the Doom Slayer kill him.him early.
