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** Ted was originally was going to do ajoke involving the Carnegie Hall, but didn't have space.
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** Ted was originally was going to do ajoke a joke involving the Carnegie Hall, but didn't have space.
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** The author wished he had more space to delve into more of Rough Diamond's "backstory and/or motive". Ultimately Babs and Trixie took the priority.
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** The author wished he had more space to delve into more of Rough Diamond's "backstory and/or motive". Ultimately Babs Seed and Trixie took the priority.
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* WhatCouldHaveBeen:
**Ted was originally was going to do ajoke involving the Carnegie Hall, but didn't have space.
**The tracking chip would've had a more prominent role in the story. Specifically, it would involve the heroes tracking Rough Diamond to her secret hideout. It also would've looked like a ''literal'' chip of rock.
**The infiltration sequence would have been longer and included all of the "classic heist tropes."
**The author wished he had more space to delve into more of Rough Diamond's "backstory and/or motive". Ultimately Babs and Trixie took the priority.
***Source:https://tedlyanderson.tumblr.com/post/94635881434/annotations-for-my-little-pony-issues-21-22
**Ted was originally was going to do ajoke involving the Carnegie Hall, but didn't have space.
**The tracking chip would've had a more prominent role in the story. Specifically, it would involve the heroes tracking Rough Diamond to her secret hideout. It also would've looked like a ''literal'' chip of rock.
**The infiltration sequence would have been longer and included all of the "classic heist tropes."
**The author wished he had more space to delve into more of Rough Diamond's "backstory and/or motive". Ultimately Babs and Trixie took the priority.
***Source:https://tedlyanderson.tumblr.com/post/94635881434/annotations-for-my-little-pony-issues-21-22
