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* OutdatedByCanon: The story reveals that at first, the first five Loud sisters had their own rooms until Lincoln was born, by which he was Lynn Jr.'s roommate. The "Life is Better Loud" sequence in ''WesternAnimation/TheLoudHouseMovie'' would since reveal that Leni and Lori were always roommates from the start, as were Luna and Luan.
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* OutdatedByCanon: The story reveals that at first, According to the story, the first five Loud sisters had their own rooms at first until Lincoln was born, by which he was Lynn Jr.'s Lynn's roommate. The "Life is Better Loud" sequence in ''WesternAnimation/TheLoudHouseMovie'' would since reveal later show that Leni and Lori were always roommates from the start, as were Luna and Luan.
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* PlayingAgainstType: As opposed to his other dark fics, this marks the author's first cute fic for ''The Loud House''.
** That said, he does evoke MoodWhiplash when a bonding experience involving Lincoln taking Lily home from preschool on his bike is interrupted by them barely avoiding being hit by a car.
** That said, he does evoke MoodWhiplash when a bonding experience involving Lincoln taking Lily home from preschool on his bike is interrupted by them barely avoiding being hit by a car.
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* PlayingAgainstType: As opposed to his other dark fics, this marks the author's first cute fic for ''The Loud House''.
**House''. That said, he does evoke MoodWhiplash when a bonding experience involving Lincoln taking Lily home from preschool on his bike is interrupted by them barely avoiding being hit by a car.car.
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* OutdatedByCanon: The story reveals that at first, the first five Loud sisters had their own rooms until Lincoln was born, by which he was Lynn Jr.'s roommate. The "Life is Better Loud" sequence in ''WesternAnimation/TheLoudHouseMovie'' would since reveal that Leni and Lori were always roommates from the start, as were Luna and Luan.
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** That said, he does evoke MoodWhiplash when a bonding experience involving Lincoln taking Lily home from preschool on his bike is interrupted by them being hit by a car.
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** That said, he does evoke MoodWhiplash when a bonding experience involving Lincoln taking Lily home from preschool on his bike is interrupted by them barely avoiding being hit by a car.
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* PlayingAgainstType: As opposed to his other dark fics, this marks the author's first cute fic for ''The Loud House''.
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* PlayingAgainstType: As opposed to his other dark fics, this marks the author's first cute fic for ''The Loud House''.House''.
** That said, he does evoke MoodWhiplash when a bonding experience involving Lincoln taking Lily home from preschool on his bike is interrupted by them being hit by a car.
** That said, he does evoke MoodWhiplash when a bonding experience involving Lincoln taking Lily home from preschool on his bike is interrupted by them being hit by a car.
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* PlayingAgainstType: As opposed to his other dark fics, this marks the author's first cute fic for ''The Loud House''.
