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** Diamond and Sapphire were actually going to end up having children at the end of the story, but Diamond would have begged Sapphire to take care of her's [[InSpiteOfANail because she still would have left to go look for two cats]]: [[spoiler:Lilac, [[InSpiteOfANail who would have gone missing after Garnet and Citrine died]]]] and Dusk, who would have disappeared while she was pregnant.
* TheWikiRule: It may have fewer than a hundred pages, [[https://flightamberkittiversion.fandom.com/wiki/Flight_(by_AmberKitti)_Wiki but it exists]].
* TheWikiRule: It may have fewer than a hundred pages, [[https://flightamberkittiversion.fandom.com/wiki/Flight_(by_AmberKitti)_Wiki but it exists]].
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** Diamond and Sapphire were actually going to end up having children at the end of the story, but Diamond would have begged Sapphire to take care of her's [[InSpiteOfANail because she still would have left to go look for two cats]]: [[spoiler:Lilac, [[InSpiteOfANail who would have gone missing after Garnet and Citrine died]]]] and Dusk, who would have disappeared while she was pregnant.
* TheWikiRule: It may have fewer than a hundred pages, [[https://flightamberkittiversion.fandom.com/wiki/Flight_(by_AmberKitti)_Wiki but it exists]].pregnant.
* TheWikiRule: It may have fewer than a hundred pages, [[https://flightamberkittiversion.fandom.com/wiki/Flight_(by_AmberKitti)_Wiki but it exists]].
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::: and taking off her necklace and dropping it on the ground. Sapphire then exiles Diamond from the palace and forces her to change her name to a commoner's name. She changes her name to Marigold and then becomes mates with Dusk, the commoner she'd been seeing.
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::: and [[DramaticNecklaceRemoval taking off her necklace and dropping it on the ground.ground]]. Sapphire then exiles Diamond from the palace and forces her to change her name to a commoner's name. She changes her name to Marigold and then becomes mates with Dusk, the commoner she'd been seeing.
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* TheWikiRule: It may have fewer than a hundred pages, [[https://flightamberkittiversion.fandom.com/wiki/Flight_(by_AmberKitti)_Wiki but it exists]].
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::: Sapphire then exiles Diamond from the palace and forces her to change her name to a commoner's name. She changes her name to Marigold and then becomes mates with Dusk, the commoner she'd been seeing.
** Diamond and Sapphire were actually going to end up having children at the end of the story, but Diamond would have begged Sapphire to take care of her's [[InSpiteOfANail because she still would have left to go look for two cats]]: [[spoiler:Lilac, [[InSpiteOfANail who would have gone missing after Garnet and Citrine died]]]] and Dusk, who would have disappeared while she was pregnant.
** Diamond and Sapphire were actually going to end up having children at the end of the story, but Diamond would have begged Sapphire to take care of her's [[InSpiteOfANail because she still would have left to go look for two cats]]: [[spoiler:Lilac, [[InSpiteOfANail who would have gone missing after Garnet and Citrine died]]]] and Dusk, who would have disappeared while she was pregnant.
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::: and taking off her necklace and dropping it on the ground. Sapphire then exiles Diamond from the palace and forces her to change her name to a commoner's name. She changes her name to Marigold and then becomes mates with Dusk, the commoner she'd been seeing.
** Diamond and Sapphire were actually going to end up having children at the end of the story, but Diamond would have begged Sapphire to take care of her's [[InSpiteOfANail because she still would have left to go look for two cats]]: [[spoiler:Lilac, [[InSpiteOfANail who would have gone missing after Garnet and Citrine died]]]] and Dusk, who would have disappeared while she waspregnant.pregnant.
* TheWikiRule: It may have fewer than a hundred pages, [[https://flightamberkittiversion.fandom.com/wiki/Flight_(by_AmberKitti)_Wiki but it exists]].
** Diamond and Sapphire were actually going to end up having children at the end of the story, but Diamond would have begged Sapphire to take care of her's [[InSpiteOfANail because she still would have left to go look for two cats]]: [[spoiler:Lilac, [[InSpiteOfANail who would have gone missing after Garnet and Citrine died]]]] and Dusk, who would have disappeared while she was
* TheWikiRule: It may have fewer than a hundred pages, [[https://flightamberkittiversion.fandom.com/wiki/Flight_(by_AmberKitti)_Wiki but it exists]].
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* DevelopmentGag: Most times Diamond is shown with flowers, they are marigolds, which is probably a reference to what she would have ended up changing her name to in an earlier version of the story.
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* TheWikiRule: It may have fewer a hundred pages, but [[https://flightamberkittiversion.fandom.com/wiki/Flight_(by_AmberKitti)_Wiki it exists]].
* WhatCouldHaveBeen: An earlier version of Flight was going to have a completely different plot:
* WhatCouldHaveBeen: An earlier version of Flight was going to have a completely different plot:
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* TheWikiRule: It may have fewer than a hundred pages, but [[https://flightamberkittiversion.fandom.com/wiki/Flight_(by_AmberKitti)_Wiki but it exists]].
* WhatCouldHaveBeen:An earlier version of When Flight was going in the earliest planning stages, it was intended to be a prequel to an unreleased story about [[DeletedRole Diamond's daughter]], and have a completely different plot:
* WhatCouldHaveBeen:
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:::: Sapphire then exiles Diamond from the palace and forces her to change her name to a commoner's name. She changes her name to Marigold and then becomes mates with Dusk, the commoner she'd been seeing.
** Diamond and Sapphire were actually going to end up having children, but Diamond would still have left to go look for two cats: [[spoiler:Lilac, who would have gone missing after Garnet and Citrine died]] and Dusk, who would have disappeared while she was pregnant.
** Diamond and Sapphire were actually going to end up having children, but Diamond would still have left to go look for two cats: [[spoiler:Lilac, who would have gone missing after Garnet and Citrine died]] and Dusk, who would have disappeared while she was pregnant.
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** Diamond and Sapphire were actually going to end up having
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** [[spoiler: Lilac and Citrine weren't going to be related,]] removing that drama.
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** Sapphire was also going to be more spoiled and [[TookALevelInJerkass meaner]].
** Lilac wasn't going to be [[spoiler:Lilac related to Citrine or get anyone as a mate]].
** One of the main plot points was going to be Sapphire finding out that Diamond was visiting a commoner and ordering Diamond to stop, to which Diamond replies:
---> ''[[GrewASpine "Then I won't be part]] [[WhamLine of the royal family anymore."]]''
:::: Sapphire then exiles Diamond from the palace and forces her to change her name to a commoner's name. She changes her name to Marigold and then becomes mates with Dusk, the commoner she'd been seeing.
** Diamond and Sapphire were actually going to end up having children, but Diamond would still have left to go look for two cats: [[spoiler:Lilac, who would have gone missing after Garnet and Citrineweren't going to be related,]] removing that drama.
**died]] and Dusk, who would have disappeared while she was pregnant.
** Lilac wasn't going to be [[spoiler:
** One of the main plot points was going to be Sapphire finding out that Diamond was visiting a commoner and ordering Diamond to stop, to which Diamond replies:
---> ''[[GrewASpine "Then I won't be part]] [[WhamLine of the royal family anymore."]]''
:::: Sapphire then exiles Diamond from the palace and forces her to change her name to a commoner's name. She changes her name to Marigold and then becomes mates with Dusk, the commoner she'd been seeing.
** Diamond and Sapphire were actually going to end up having children, but Diamond would still have left to go look for two cats: [[spoiler:Lilac, who would have gone missing after Garnet and Citrine
**
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* TheWikiRule: It may have fewer a hundred pages, but [[https://flightamberkittiversion.fandom.com/wiki/Flight_(by_AmberKitti)_Wiki it exists]].
* WhatCouldHaveBeen: An earlier version of Flight was going to have a completely different plot:
** Diamond was going to be more of a ShrinkingViolet than the friendly, energetic character we see in the comic.
** [[spoiler: Lilac and Citrine weren't going to be related,]] removing that drama.
**
* WhatCouldHaveBeen: An earlier version of Flight was going to have a completely different plot:
** Diamond was going to be more of a ShrinkingViolet than the friendly, energetic character we see in the comic.
** [[spoiler: Lilac and Citrine weren't going to be related,]] removing that drama.
**
