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Five doesn't want to wake up.
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[[TragicDream Five doesn't want to wake up.]]
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* The revelations about Solis's past and the reason why he, Corona, and Kotori are [[VitriolicBestBuds the way they are]]. After Solis lost his old friends at the lab, he gained Kotori as a girlfriend and Corona as a friend to help him move past it. Except that eventually 1) Kotori broke up with him, and he tried to be as adult as possible and [[AmicableExes still be friendly regardless]]; and 2) ''[[DarkAndTroubledPast something]]'' happened to Kotori that caused her [[UsedToBeASweetKid previously energetic and curious self]] to treat everything as a waste of time and start hanging out with him and Corona less. All this inevitably led to Kotori distancing distancing herself more and more from them, and since [[WithFriendsLikeThese Corona and Solis]] couldn't get along on their own, their friendship also deteriorated as she became closer to Suvillan and he focused on living quietly and doing his job.
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* The revelations about Solis's past and the reason why he, Corona, and Kotori are [[VitriolicBestBuds the way they are]]. After Solis lost his old friends at the lab, he gained Kotori as a girlfriend and Corona as a friend to help him move past it. Except that eventually 1) Kotori broke up with him, and he tried to be as adult as possible and [[AmicableExes still be friendly regardless]]; and 2) ''[[DarkAndTroubledPast something]]'' happened to Kotori that caused her [[UsedToBeASweetKid previously energetic and curious self]] to treat everything as a waste of time and start hanging out with him and Corona less. time. All this inevitably led to Kotori distancing distancing herself more and more from them, and since [[WithFriendsLikeThese Corona and Solis]] couldn't get along on their own, their friendship also deteriorated as she became closer to Suvillan and he focused on living quietly and doing his job.job. Essentially, he lost all of his friends ''twice''.
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Five doesn't want to wake up.up.
* The revelations about Solis's past and the reason why he, Corona, and Kotori are [[VitriolicBestBuds the way they are]]. After Solis lost his old friends at the lab, he gained Kotori as a girlfriend and Corona as a friend to help him move past it. Except that eventually 1) Kotori broke up with him, and he tried to be as adult as possible and [[AmicableExes still be friendly regardless]]; and 2) ''[[DarkAndTroubledPast something]]'' happened to Kotori that caused her [[UsedToBeASweetKid previously energetic and curious self]] to treat everything as a waste of time and start hanging out with him and Corona less. All this inevitably led to Kotori distancing distancing herself more and more from them, and since [[WithFriendsLikeThese Corona and Solis]] couldn't get along on their own, their friendship also deteriorated as she became closer to Suvillan and he focused on living quietly and doing his job.
* The revelations about Solis's past and the reason why he, Corona, and Kotori are [[VitriolicBestBuds the way they are]]. After Solis lost his old friends at the lab, he gained Kotori as a girlfriend and Corona as a friend to help him move past it. Except that eventually 1) Kotori broke up with him, and he tried to be as adult as possible and [[AmicableExes still be friendly regardless]]; and 2) ''[[DarkAndTroubledPast something]]'' happened to Kotori that caused her [[UsedToBeASweetKid previously energetic and curious self]] to treat everything as a waste of time and start hanging out with him and Corona less. All this inevitably led to Kotori distancing distancing herself more and more from them, and since [[WithFriendsLikeThese Corona and Solis]] couldn't get along on their own, their friendship also deteriorated as she became closer to Suvillan and he focused on living quietly and doing his job.
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--->You have to help Five. You'll take on the last burden he left behind.
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--->You have to help Five. You'll take on the last burden he left behind.behind.
* Five's [[DreamingOfTimesGoneBy dream flashback to her time at the lab]] consists of her running to give "Sis" a flower crown that she made for her. Pretty cute, except for the fact that Five very clearly knows that this is just a flashback and is [[PleaseDontLeaveMe frantically trying to deny it and stay asleep]].
-->Five bestows the present upon her friend. The friend whom Five calls "sis". She is everyone's sister, she loved- ''loves, she LOVES, present tense'', she loves everyone and everyone loves her. Sis said thank you Five and Five laughed- ''laughs, present tense, laughs'' and sis laughs and they all laughs laughing and laughing and laughing ''present continuous tense'', nothing is in the past. \\
Five and everyone had- has, has so much fun and the fun never ends and nothing terrible happens. Five didn't sleep and wake up to everyone being gone no the friends never left Five it never happened they were- are, are always always together and Friend never hurt Five. \\
There was no monster prince to tell Friend to be mean to Five and there was no fire in Five's home and nobody was missing everything was fine- is fine, all is fine and continues to be fine. \\
Five doesn't want to wake up.
* Five's [[DreamingOfTimesGoneBy dream flashback to her time at the lab]] consists of her running to give "Sis" a flower crown that she made for her. Pretty cute, except for the fact that Five very clearly knows that this is just a flashback and is [[PleaseDontLeaveMe frantically trying to deny it and stay asleep]].
-->Five bestows the present upon her friend. The friend whom Five calls "sis". She is everyone's sister, she loved- ''loves, she LOVES, present tense'', she loves everyone and everyone loves her. Sis said thank you Five and Five laughed- ''laughs, present tense, laughs'' and sis laughs and they all laughs laughing and laughing and laughing ''present continuous tense'', nothing is in the past. \\
Five and everyone had- has, has so much fun and the fun never ends and nothing terrible happens. Five didn't sleep and wake up to everyone being gone no the friends never left Five it never happened they were- are, are always always together and Friend never hurt Five. \\
There was no monster prince to tell Friend to be mean to Five and there was no fire in Five's home and nobody was missing everything was fine- is fine, all is fine and continues to be fine. \\
Five doesn't want to wake up.
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[[DramaticIrony And now, the burden of their conclusion fell entirely on him]].
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[[DramaticIrony And now, the burden of their conclusion fell entirely on him]].him]].
** She also concludes from this that there's only way she can be useful to Nino anymore.
--->You have to help Five. You'll take on the last burden he left behind.
** She also concludes from this that there's only way she can be useful to Nino anymore.
--->You have to help Five. You'll take on the last burden he left behind.
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* Kotori's horrified stare when she finds Aria knocked out by Corona and is going to be executed. For better or worse, Aria was right about Kotori not wanting to kill her.
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* Kotori's horrified stare when she finds Aria knocked out by Corona and is going to be executed. For better or worse, Aria was right about Kotori not wanting to kill her.her.
* Once Aria escapes her imprisonment, where does she go first? Immediately back to the scene of Decimate, to confirm if Nino really did [[DisneyDeath fall into the rift]]. She then proceeds to target a TheReasonYouSuckSpeech at herself (told via the narration).
-->You stupidly did nothing useful, even up to his final moments. The whole time, he's been holding your hand and guiding you. He was protecting you. He allowed you to ''rely'' on him.\\
[[ArmorPiercingQuestion But what were you?]]\\
You weren't reliable in the slightest. You believed that everything will be magically fine if there was someone to push you into action, someone for you to follow. Whenever he smiled and talked, it felt like it'll all be fine, even if his decisions were reckless.\\
[[DramaticIrony And now, the burden of their conclusion fell entirely on him]].
* Once Aria escapes her imprisonment, where does she go first? Immediately back to the scene of Decimate, to confirm if Nino really did [[DisneyDeath fall into the rift]]. She then proceeds to target a TheReasonYouSuckSpeech at herself (told via the narration).
-->You stupidly did nothing useful, even up to his final moments. The whole time, he's been holding your hand and guiding you. He was protecting you. He allowed you to ''rely'' on him.\\
[[ArmorPiercingQuestion But what were you?]]\\
You weren't reliable in the slightest. You believed that everything will be magically fine if there was someone to push you into action, someone for you to follow. Whenever he smiled and talked, it felt like it'll all be fine, even if his decisions were reckless.\\
[[DramaticIrony And now, the burden of their conclusion fell entirely on him]].
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** It gets worse when Nino tries to cheer her up by down talking Kotori and saying that she deserves better than her. She absolutely refuses to believe Kotori would try to hurt her voluntarily (of course, she's right, but she doesn't know that) and refuses to listen to Nino. She then calms down, by tearfully claiming that everything was her fault, that she's only caused trouble for Nino and Five, that she's a burden to all the people she cares about, and says they should just leave her. Becomes Oceanfalls/Heartwarming when Nino refuses and refutes her.
* Kotori's horrified stare when she finds Aria knocked out by Corona and is going to be executed.
* Kotori's horrified stare when she finds Aria knocked out by Corona and is going to be executed.
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** It gets worse when Nino tries to cheer her up by down talking Kotori and saying that she deserves better than her. She absolutely refuses to believe Kotori would try to hurt her voluntarily (of course, she's right, but she doesn't know that) and refuses to listen to Nino. She then calms down, by tearfully claiming states that everything was her fault, that she's only caused trouble for Nino and Five, that she's a burden to all the people she cares about, and says they should just leave her. Becomes Oceanfalls/Heartwarming heartwarming when Nino refuses to leave and refutes her.
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* Kotori's horrified stare when she finds Aria knocked out by Corona and is going to be executed. For better or worse, Aria was right about Kotori not wanting to kill her.
* Kotori's horrified stare when she finds Aria knocked out by Corona and is going to be executed. For better or worse, Aria was right about Kotori not wanting to kill her.
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** It gets worse when Nino tries to cheer her up by down talking Kotori and saying that she deserves better than her. She absolutely refuses to believe Kotori would try to hurt her voluntarily (of course, she's right, but she doesn't know that) and refuses to listen to Nino. She then calms down, by tearfully claiming that everything was her fault, that she's only caused trouble for Nino and Five, that she's a burden to all the people she cares about, and says they should just leave her. Becomes Oceanfalls/Heartwarming when Nino refuses and refutes her.
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* The way Aria reacts to Kotori betraying her: she ''[[HeroicBSOD doesn't]]''. She's just left with [[DullEyesOfUnhappiness glassy eyes]], [[ThousandYardStare staring at nothing]], and Nino has to practically drag her out of town.
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* The way Aria reacts to Kotori betraying her: she ''[[HeroicBSOD doesn't]]''. She's just left with [[DullEyesOfUnhappiness glassy eyes]], [[ThousandYardStare staring at nothing]], and Nino has to practically drag her out of town.town.
* Kotori's horrified stare when she finds Aria knocked out by Corona and is going to be executed.
* Kotori's horrified stare when she finds Aria knocked out by Corona and is going to be executed.
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* The way Aria reacts to Kotori betraying her: she ''[[HeroicBSOD doesn't]]''.
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* The way Aria reacts to Kotori betraying her: she ''[[HeroicBSOD doesn't]]''. She's just left with [[DullEyesOfUnhappiness glassy eyes]], [[ThousandYardStare staring at nothing]], and Nino has to practically drag her out of town.
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* After Nino explains his plan to find a way back to the human world, Aria gets uncomfortably quiet, and says he should go see Kotori. Despite Nino recognizing that something is wrong, Aria [[BlatantLies repeatedly insists she's fine]] and that he needs to go. All Nino can think to do is ask Five to keep her company, and then leave. Five waves him goodbye, but Aria keeps her back to him. After Nino leaves, one panel shows Aria's face. She's ''crying'' and desperately trying to hide it. It really shows how Aria has been [[IJustWantToHaveFriends desperate for any sort of human companionship for]] ''[[IJustWantToHaveFriends years]]''.
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* After Nino explains his plan to find a way back to the human world, Aria gets uncomfortably quiet, and says he should go see Kotori. Despite Nino recognizing that something is wrong, Aria [[BlatantLies repeatedly insists she's fine]] and that he needs to go. All Nino can think to do is ask Five to keep her company, and then leave. Five waves him goodbye, but Aria keeps her back to him. After Nino leaves, one panel shows Aria's face. She's ''crying'' and desperately trying to hide it. It really shows how Aria has been [[IJustWantToHaveFriends desperate for any sort of human companionship for]] ''[[IJustWantToHaveFriends years]]''.years]]''.
* The way Aria reacts to Kotori betraying her: she ''[[HeroicBSOD doesn't]]''.
* The way Aria reacts to Kotori betraying her: she ''[[HeroicBSOD doesn't]]''.
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* After Nino explains his plan to find a way back to the human world, Aria gets uncomfortably quiet, and says he should go see Kotori. Despite Nino recognizing that something is wrong, Aria [[BlatantLies repeatedly insists she's fine]] and that he needs to go. All Nino can think to do is ask Five to keep her company, and then leave. Five waves him goodbye, but Aria keeps her back to him. After Nino leaves, one panel shows Aria's face. She's ''crying'' and desperately trying to hide it. It really shows how Aria has been [[IJustWantToHaveFriends desperate for any sort of human companionship for ''years'']].
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* After Nino explains his plan to find a way back to the human world, Aria gets uncomfortably quiet, and says he should go see Kotori. Despite Nino recognizing that something is wrong, Aria [[BlatantLies repeatedly insists she's fine]] and that he needs to go. All Nino can think to do is ask Five to keep her company, and then leave. Five waves him goodbye, but Aria keeps her back to him. After Nino leaves, one panel shows Aria's face. She's ''crying'' and desperately trying to hide it. It really shows how Aria has been [[IJustWantToHaveFriends desperate for any sort of human companionship for ''years'']].for]] ''[[IJustWantToHaveFriends years]]''.
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* Five explaining why she was banished is this mixed with NightmareFuel. After he heals her, she explains how she was forcibly banished by her former friend (later shown to be Solis) after [[EvilPrince Prince Suvillan]] ordered them to.
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* Five explaining why she was banished is this mixed with NightmareFuel. After he heals her, she explains how she was forcibly banished by her Her former friend (later shown to be Solis) was forced to banish her after [[EvilPrince Prince Suvillan]] ordered them to.to.
** Though, this is later mitigated by the fact that it was probably not Solis, but a [[OurSpiritsAreDifferent Spirit]] mimicing him in order to torment her.
** Though, this is later mitigated by the fact that it was probably not Solis, but a [[OurSpiritsAreDifferent Spirit]] mimicing him in order to torment her.
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* Five explaining why she was banished is this mixed with NightmareFuel. After he heals her, she explains how she was forcibly banished by her former friend (later shown to be Solis) after [[EvilPrince Prince Suvillan]] ordered them to. She explains how she was made to transform [[HumanResources so she'd be useful]], but is terrified of going through with it. Becomes heartwarming again when Nino assures her that's not happening.
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* Five explaining why she was banished is this mixed with NightmareFuel. After he heals her, she explains how she was forcibly banished by her former friend (later shown to be Solis) after [[EvilPrince Prince Suvillan]] ordered them to. She explains how she was made to transform [[HumanResources so she'd be useful]], but is terrified of going through with it. Becomes heartwarming again when Nino assures her that's not happening.
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* Five explaining why she was banished is this mixed with NightmareFuel. After he heals her, she explains how she was forcibly banished by her former friend (later shown to be Solis) after [[EvilPrince Prince Suvillan]] ordered them to. She explains how she was made to transform [[HumanResources so she'd be useful]], but is terrified of going through with it. Becomes heartwarming again when Nino swears that he won't let that happen to her.
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* Five explaining why she was banished is this mixed with NightmareFuel. After he heals her, she explains how she was forcibly banished by her former friend (later shown to be Solis) after [[EvilPrince Prince Suvillan]] ordered them to. She explains how she was made to transform [[HumanResources so she'd be useful]], but is terrified of going through with it. Becomes heartwarming again when Nino swears assures her that's not happening.
* After Nino explains his plan to find a way back to the human world, Aria gets uncomfortably quiet, and says he should go see Kotori. Despite Nino recognizing that something is wrong, Aria [[BlatantLies repeatedly insists she's fine]] and that hewon't let that happen needs to her.go. All Nino can think to do is ask Five to keep her company, and then leave. Five waves him goodbye, but Aria keeps her back to him. After Nino leaves, one panel shows Aria's face. She's ''crying'' and desperately trying to hide it. It really shows how Aria has been [[IJustWantToHaveFriends desperate for any sort of human companionship for ''years'']].
* After Nino explains his plan to find a way back to the human world, Aria gets uncomfortably quiet, and says he should go see Kotori. Despite Nino recognizing that something is wrong, Aria [[BlatantLies repeatedly insists she's fine]] and that he
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* Nino's encounter with Five is this mixed with NightmareFuel. After he heals her, she explains how she was forcibly banished by her former friend (later shown to be Solis) after the prince ordered them to. She explains how she was made to transform [[HumanResources so she'd be useful]], but is terrified of going through with it. Becomes heartwarming again when Nino swears that he won't let her transform.
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* Nino's encounter with Five explaining why she was banished is this mixed with NightmareFuel. After he heals her, she explains how she was forcibly banished by her former friend (later shown to be Solis) after the prince [[EvilPrince Prince Suvillan]] ordered them to. She explains how she was made to transform [[HumanResources so she'd be useful]], but is terrified of going through with it. Becomes heartwarming again when Nino swears that he won't let her transform.that happen to her.
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* Nino's encounter with Five is this mixed with DarthWiki/{NightmareFuel}.
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* Nino's encounter with Five is this mixed with DarthWiki/{NightmareFuel}.NightmareFuel. After he heals her, she explains how she was forcibly banished by her former friend (later shown to be Solis) after the prince ordered them to. She explains how she was made to transform [[HumanResources so she'd be useful]], but is terrified of going through with it. Becomes heartwarming again when Nino swears that he won't let her transform.
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* Nino's encounter with Five is this mixed with DarthWiki/{NightmareFuel}.
* Nino's encounter with Five is this mixed with DarthWiki/{NightmareFuel}.
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