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* Chapter 46 reveals [[spoiler: Atla's connection to Avalon is causing her to get dreams of ''Archer's'' memories sometimes. Several times now Shirou's had to stay up with her when she's woken up shaking (and in one case vomiting) from the memories.]]
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* Chapter 46 reveals [[spoiler: Atla's connection to Avalon is causing her to get dreams of ''Archer's'' memories sometimes. Several times now Shirou's had to stay up with her when she's woken up shaking (and in one case vomiting) from the memories.]]
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* Immediately after being summoned, Shirou begs for the King to let him go back to Illya, swearing he will come and fight the Waves as long as he's allowed one week to stay besides her as she's about to undergo surgery. The narration mentions Aultcray isn't indifferent to the Sword Hero's distress -- of course he would know how it feels to lose a beloved sister -- but cannot grant his wish.
** How bad is Shirou taking his accidental abandonment of Illya? He unlocks his Cursed Series weapon, the Sword of Sloth, barely a few minutes after the summoning.
** How bad is Shirou taking his accidental abandonment of Illya? He unlocks his Cursed Series weapon, the Sword of Sloth, barely a few minutes after the summoning.
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** After centuries of being depressed and no purpose in life, Tyr finally learned happiness from Rhea, Azu's mother, and Azu herself. But then, the Aotatsu Clan burned Rhea and stoned Azu to death's doors ''all because of their jealousy''. No wonder Tyr went on a RoaringRampageOfRevenge and didn't want to discuss the topic before. And worse for Azu who was just 5 years old when it happened and left some scars on her.
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** After centuries of being depressed and no purpose in life, Tyr finally learned happiness from Rhea, Azu's mother, and Azu herself. But then, the Aotatsu Clan burned Rhea and stoned Azu to death's doors ''all ''[[GreenEyedMonster all because of their jealousy''.jealousy]]''. No wonder Tyr went on a RoaringRampageOfRevenge and didn't want to discuss the topic before. And worse for Azu who was just [[WouldHurtAChild 5 years old when it happened happened]] and [[BrokenBird left some scars on her.her]].
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* Chapter 46 reveals [[spoiler: Atla's connection to Avalon is causing her to get dreams of ''Archer's'' memories sometimes. Several times now Shirou's had to stay up with her when she's woken up shaking (and in one case vomiting) from the memories.]]
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* The third mini-chapter gave us some details regarding Azu and her father Tyr's backstory. After centuries of being depressed and no purpose in life, Tyr finally learned happiness from Rhea, Azu's mother, and Azu herself. But then, the Aotatsu Clan burned Rhea and stoned Azu to death's doors ''all because of their jealousy''. No wonder Tyr went on a RoaringRampageOfRevenge and didn't want to discuss the topic before. And worse for Azu who was just 5 years old when it happened and left some scars on her.
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* The third mini-chapter gave us some details regarding Azu and her father Tyr's backstory. backstory.
** He laments at humans' extremely short lifespan compared to his, which included the Shield Hero of his time.
** He fathered many children with his wives over the years and tried to instill to them a sense of justice based on what little he understood from the Shield Hero. He failed spectacularly and most, if not all, of his children grew up to be monsters who will kill for fun, and oftentimes each other. It caused him to fall into a depression and stop having children altogether.
** After centuries of being depressed and no purpose in life, Tyr finally learned happiness from Rhea, Azu's mother, and Azu herself. But then, the Aotatsu Clan burned Rhea and stoned Azu to death's doors ''all because of their jealousy''. No wonder Tyr went on a RoaringRampageOfRevenge and didn't want to discuss the topic before. And worse for Azu who was just 5 years old when it happened and left some scars on her.
** He laments at humans' extremely short lifespan compared to his, which included the Shield Hero of his time.
** He fathered many children with his wives over the years and tried to instill to them a sense of justice based on what little he understood from the Shield Hero. He failed spectacularly and most, if not all, of his children grew up to be monsters who will kill for fun, and oftentimes each other. It caused him to fall into a depression and stop having children altogether.
** After centuries of being depressed and no purpose in life, Tyr finally learned happiness from Rhea, Azu's mother, and Azu herself. But then, the Aotatsu Clan burned Rhea and stoned Azu to death's doors ''all because of their jealousy''. No wonder Tyr went on a RoaringRampageOfRevenge and didn't want to discuss the topic before. And worse for Azu who was just 5 years old when it happened and left some scars on her.
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* The third mini-chapter gave us some details regarding Azu and her father Tyr's backstory. After centuries of being depressed and no purpose in life, Tyr finally learned happiness from Rhea, Azu's mother, and Azu herself. But then, the Aotatsu Clan burned Rhea and stoned Azu to death's doors ''all because of their jealousy''. No wonder Tyr went RoaringRampageOfRevenge and didn't want to discuss the topic before. And worse for Azu who was just 5 years old when it happened and left some scars on her.
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* The third mini-chapter gave us some details regarding Azu and her father Tyr's backstory. After centuries of being depressed and no purpose in life, Tyr finally learned happiness from Rhea, Azu's mother, and Azu herself. But then, the Aotatsu Clan burned Rhea and stoned Azu to death's doors ''all because of their jealousy''. No wonder Tyr went on a RoaringRampageOfRevenge and didn't want to discuss the topic before. And worse for Azu who was just 5 years old when it happened and left some scars on her.
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* Chapter 43 gave us some details regarding Azu and her father Tyr's backstory. After centuries of being depressed and no purpose in life, Tyr finally learned happines from Rhea, Azu's mother, and Azu herself. But then, the Aotatsu Clan burned Rhea and stoned Azu to death's doors ''all because of their jealousy''. No wonder Tyr went RoaringRampageOfRevenge and didn't want to discuss the topic before. And worse for Azu who was just 5 years old when it happened and left some scars on her.
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* Chapter 43 The third mini-chapter gave us some details regarding Azu and her father Tyr's backstory. After centuries of being depressed and no purpose in life, Tyr finally learned happines happiness from Rhea, Azu's mother, and Azu herself. But then, the Aotatsu Clan burned Rhea and stoned Azu to death's doors ''all because of their jealousy''. No wonder Tyr went RoaringRampageOfRevenge and didn't want to discuss the topic before. And worse for Azu who was just 5 years old when it happened and left some scars on her.
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* Chapter 43 gave us some details regarding Azu and her father Tyr's backstory. After centuries of being depressed and no purpose in life, Tyr finally learned happines from Rhea, Azu's mother, and Azu herself. But then, the Aotatsu Clan burned Rhea and stoned azu to death's doors. No wonder Tyr went RoaringRampageofRevenge and didn't want to discuss the topic before. And worse for Azu who was just 5 years old when it happened and left some scars on her.
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* Chapter 43 gave us some details regarding Azu and her father Tyr's backstory. After centuries of being depressed and no purpose in life, Tyr finally learned happines from Rhea, Azu's mother, and Azu herself. But then, the Aotatsu Clan burned Rhea and stoned azu Azu to death's doors. doors ''all because of their jealousy''. No wonder Tyr went RoaringRampageofRevenge RoaringRampageOfRevenge and didn't want to discuss the topic before. And worse for Azu who was just 5 years old when it happened and left some scars on her.
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* Chapter 43 gave us some details regarding Azu and her father Tyr's backstory. After centuries of being depressed and no purpose in life, Tyr finally learned happines from Rhea, Azu's mother, and Azu herself. But then, the Aotatsu Clan burned Rhea and stoned azu to death's doors. No wonder Tyr went RoaringRampageofRevenge and didn't want to discuss the topic before. And worse for Azu who was just 5 years old when it happened and left some scars on her.
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* It's not hard to feel bad for Aultcray once he realizes that he may have inevitably killed his own sister in his RoaringRampageOfRevenge when he realizes that Aurora(Atla) and Sol(Fohl) are Hakuko Demi-humans.
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* It's not hard to feel bad for Aultcray once he realizes that he may have inevitably inadvertently killed his own sister in his RoaringRampageOfRevenge when he realizes that Aurora(Atla) and Sol(Fohl) are Hakuko Demi-humans.
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* Rishia, after she devoted her entire life to after her traumatic experience as a slave, was accused by Itsuki of being a traitor and a spy and kicked her out of the party in an even worse way than canon, being thrown down a flight of stairs. She was immediately DrivenToSuicide like canon, though this time she planned to throw herself of a tower instead of drowning herself in the ocean, and would have been successful had Shirou arrived too late to save her. Shirou had to temporarily suppress all her memories so she can hopefully find the will to live on her own.
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* Rishia, after she devoted her entire life to the Bow Hero after her traumatic experience as a slave, was accused by Itsuki of being a traitor and a spy and kicked her out of the party in an even worse way than canon, being thrown down a flight of stairs. She was immediately DrivenToSuicide like canon, though this time she planned to throw herself of a tower instead of drowning herself in the ocean, and would have been successful had Shirou arrived too late to save her. Shirou had to temporarily suppress all her memories so she can hopefully find the will to live on her own.own.
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* Rishia, after she devoted her entire life to after her traumatic experience as a slave, was accused by Itsuki of being a traitor and a spy and kicked her out of the party in an even worse way than canon that she was immediately DrivenToSuicide and would have been successful had Shirou arrived to late to save her. Shirou had to temporarily suppress all her memories so she can hopefully find the will to live on her own.
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* Rishia, after she devoted her entire life to after her traumatic experience as a slave, was accused by Itsuki of being a traitor and a spy and kicked her out of the party in an even worse way than canon that she canon, being thrown down a flight of stairs. She was immediately DrivenToSuicide like canon, though this time she planned to throw herself of a tower instead of drowning herself in the ocean, and would have been successful had Shirou arrived to too late to save her. Shirou had to temporarily suppress all her memories so she can hopefully find the will to live on her own.
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* Atla reveals to Shirou that she is UnableToCry (produce tears to be precise) even if he were to die. This was after she tells him that his aura disappeared after taking a strong attack, implying that she wanted to cry right at that moment, but was unable to.
* Rishia, after she devoted her entire life to after her traumatic experience as a slave, was accused by Itsuki of being a traitor and a spy and kicked her out of the party in an even worse way than canon that she was immediately DrivenToSuicide and would have been successful had Shirou arrived to late to save her. Shirou had to temporarily suppress all her memories so she can hopefully find the will to live on her own.
* Rishia, after she devoted her entire life to after her traumatic experience as a slave, was accused by Itsuki of being a traitor and a spy and kicked her out of the party in an even worse way than canon that she was immediately DrivenToSuicide and would have been successful had Shirou arrived to late to save her. Shirou had to temporarily suppress all her memories so she can hopefully find the will to live on her own.
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* It's not hard to feel bad for Aultcray once he realizes that he may have inevitably killed his own sister in his RoaringRampageOfRevenge once when he realizes that Aurora(Atla) and Sol(Fohl) are Hakuko Demi-humans.
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* Jian's mini-chapter reveals two awful downside of [[GrewBeyondTheirProgramming developing a human-like intelligence]]: heartache and self-doubt. Once the Legendary Holy Sword's self-awareness became advanced enough to understand human emotions, she realized that Shirou has every reason to hate her because ultimately ''she'' was the one that separated him from his loved ones in his home world by choosing him as her wielder. Jian also becomes less sure of herself after the incident with the Mutant Griffin definitely proved that Shirou is indeed ''weaker'' than he would be without her, and he'll remain so for a long time [[EvolvingWeapon until she can grow strong enough]] to compensate for it, making her [[PleaseDontLeaveMe deadly afraid of being abandoned by him]] due to holding him back.
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* Jian's mini-chapter reveals two awful downside downsides of [[GrewBeyondTheirProgramming developing a human-like intelligence]]: heartache and self-doubt. Once the Legendary Holy Sword's self-awareness became advanced enough to understand human emotions, she realized that Shirou has every reason to hate her because ultimately ''she'' was the one that separated him from his loved ones in his home world by choosing him as her wielder. Jian also becomes less sure of herself after the incident with the Mutant Griffin definitely proved that Shirou is indeed ''weaker'' than he would be without her, and he'll remain so for a long time [[EvolvingWeapon until she can grow strong enough]] to compensate for it, making her [[PleaseDontLeaveMe deadly afraid of being abandoned by him]] due to holding him back.
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* Jian's mini-chapter reveals her insecurities and fear of being abandoned by Shirou due to holding him back.
** It also shows that she's afraid of being hated by her hero, and that she wants him more than ever and hopes that he'll reciprocate.
* Chapter 37 has one for those who know how the event goes in {{Canon}}. Naofumi trapped a group of knights in his [Shield Prison] and leaving them to fend for themselves after their leader's failed attempt to kill him. Yami says that it's a pity that the young would have to die due to their superior's mistakes. Said younger members are the exact same knights that later decides to pledge allegiance to Naofumi. Due to the fallout, it may no longer happen.
** It also shows that she's afraid of being hated by her hero, and that she wants him more than ever and hopes that he'll reciprocate.
* Chapter 37 has one for those who know how the event goes in {{Canon}}. Naofumi trapped a group of knights in his [Shield Prison] and leaving them to fend for themselves after their leader's failed attempt to kill him. Yami says that it's a pity that the young would have to die due to their superior's mistakes. Said younger members are the exact same knights that later decides to pledge allegiance to Naofumi. Due to the fallout, it may no longer happen.
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* Jian's mini-chapter reveals two awful downside of [[GrewBeyondTheirProgramming developing a human-like intelligence]]: heartache and self-doubt. Once the Legendary Holy Sword's self-awareness became advanced enough to understand human emotions, she realized that Shirou has every reason to hate her insecurities because ultimately ''she'' was the one that separated him from his loved ones in his home world by choosing him as her wielder. Jian also becomes less sure of herself after the incident with the Mutant Griffin definitely proved that Shirou is indeed ''weaker'' than he would be without her, and fear he'll remain so for a long time [[EvolvingWeapon until she can grow strong enough]] to compensate for it, making her [[PleaseDontLeaveMe deadly afraid of being abandoned by Shirou him]] due to holding him back.
** It also shows that she's afraid of being hated by her hero, and that she wants him more than ever and hopes that he'll reciprocate.
* Chapter 37 has one for those who know how the event goes in {{Canon}}. During his first Wave, Naofumi trapped a group of knights in his [Shield Prison] and leaving them to fend for themselves in retaliation after their leader's failed attempt to kill him. Yami says him via UnfriendlyFire with ''two'' large AOE fire spells that it's a pity that destroyed the young would have village Naofumi's party fought so hard to protect, [[KarmicDeath leaving them to die due in the fire they started under the guy's orders]] and [[MisplacedRetribution without stopping to their superior's mistakes. Said younger members consider that not every knight in there was likely to be in on it]]. Shirou may have saved the knights and punished the actual culprit right afterwards, but chances are that few, if any, of the exact same knights that later decides to pledge allegiance to Naofumi. Due to allied with the fallout, it may no longer happen.Shield Hero in canon for the next Wave and on will do so in this story.
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** It also shows that she's afraid of being hated by her hero, and that she wants him more than ever and hopes that he'll reciprocate.
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** It also shows that she's afraid of being hated by her hero, and that she wants him more than ever and hopes that he'll reciprocate.reciprocate.
* Chapter 37 has one for those who know how the event goes in {{Canon}}. Naofumi trapped a group of knights in his [Shield Prison] and leaving them to fend for themselves after their leader's failed attempt to kill him. Yami says that it's a pity that the young would have to die due to their superior's mistakes. Said younger members are the exact same knights that later decides to pledge allegiance to Naofumi. Due to the fallout, it may no longer happen.
* Chapter 37 has one for those who know how the event goes in {{Canon}}. Naofumi trapped a group of knights in his [Shield Prison] and leaving them to fend for themselves after their leader's failed attempt to kill him. Yami says that it's a pity that the young would have to die due to their superior's mistakes. Said younger members are the exact same knights that later decides to pledge allegiance to Naofumi. Due to the fallout, it may no longer happen.
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** It also shows that she's afraid of being hated by her hero, and that she wants him more than ever and hopes that he'll reciprocate.
** It also shows that she's afraid of being hated by her hero, and that she wants him more than ever and hopes that he'll reciprocate.
