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* The massive {{Downer Ending}} we are left with: [[spoiler: Amon is killed and the Equalists are stopped, but Ba Sing Se is in chaos, Mako (and possibly Bolin) are dead, Korra has lost her bending, Asami has just about lost everything she once had, and Kuvira is shaping up to be the main antagonist of Book 3, playing everyone for fools and tools like the {{Well Intentioned Extremist}} she is in canon.]]
* The massive {{Downer Ending}} we are left with: [[spoiler: Amon is killed and the Equalists are stopped, but Ba Sing Se is in chaos, Mako (and possibly Bolin) are dead, Korra has lost her bending, Asami has just about lost everything she once had, and Kuvira is shaping up to be the main antagonist of Book 3, playing everyone for fools and tools like the {{Well Intentioned Extremist}} she is in canon.]]
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--> '''Mako''': Asami? Do you know something? Did Korra say something about this to you?
--> '''Asami''': No, but... (sighs) I never wanted to be right. If I was right, then I never told anyone, and then... all this would be my fault. (bitterly smiles) So, I guess it really is my fault in the end. I could have stopped it years ago.
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--> '''Mako''': Asami? Do you know something? Did Korra say something about this to you?
--> '''Asami''': No, but... (sighs) I never wanted to be right. If I was right, then I never told anyone, and then... all this would be my fault. (bitterly smiles) So, I guess it really is my fault in the end. I could have stopped it years ago.
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--> '''Mako''': Near thekitchen as they kitchen. (quietly) They both loved cooking.
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---> '''Mako''': You don't get it at all, do you? Me and my brother, we've been orphaned for years, and there was nobody willing to look after us. We had to survive on our own, doing whatever we could to survive. Sure we can both bend, but no company wants to hire kids. The gangs aren't so picky; some of them can use kids with those talents. And not for anything good. But it was a choice: Work for the gangs or starve in the gutter. At least our gang gave us protection from my parent's killers. The police lost interest real quick. And I can't just walk away from it now. Not while my brother still needs me.
---> '''Mako''': You don't get it at all, do you? Me and my brother, we've been orphaned for years, and there was nobody willing to look after us. We had to survive on our own, doing whatever we could to survive. Sure we can both bend, but no company wants to hire kids. The gangs aren't so picky; some of them can use kids with those talents. And not for anything good. But it was a choice: Work for the gangs or starve in the gutter. At least our gang gave us protection from my parent's killers. The police lost interest real quick. And I can't just walk away from it now. Not while my brother still needs me.
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--> '''Zaheer''': (shaking his head) Not this time. They can no longer take care of you. Something terrible happened to your home and we need to keep you safe. I'm sorry, but you cannot go back."
--> ''Korra'': (beginning to cry) "But... but I want to,"
--> ''Zaheer'': "I know this is a difficult time, and this is a shock. But we cannot let you go back. You are too important. We will keep you safe until it is the right time. Korra?"
--> ''Korra'': (body shaking) "Uh-huh?"
--> ''Zaheer'': "I must apologize. I did not start this conversation in quite the right way. My companions and I will be your protectors and your teachers. We will be your new parents."
--> ''Korra'': (beginning to cry) "But... but I want to,"
--> ''Zaheer'': "I know this is a difficult time, and this is a shock. But we cannot let you go back. You are too important. We will keep you safe until it is the right time. Korra?"
--> ''Korra'': (body shaking) "Uh-huh?"
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-->''Korra'': '''Korra''': (beginning to cry) "But... But...but I want to,"
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-->''Zaheer'': "I '''Zaheer''': I know this is a difficult time, and this is a shock. But we cannot let you go back. You are too important. We will keep you safe until it is the right time. Korra?"
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-->''Korra'': (body shaking) "Uh-huh?"
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--> ''Korra'': "I... I want to go home now." She stopped walking, her gaze fixed on the snow. "I want my mommy and daddy."
--> ''Zaheer'': "You will be home soon."
--> ''Korra'': "I will?"
--> ''Zaheer'': "Yes. But it is not the same home. Korra, I am so sorry, but your parents are gone."
--> ''Korra'': "But... but they'll be in the hut. Sometimes Daddy goes away, but he always comes back. He always comes back. And Mommy will be there now. She's always there."
--> ''Zaheer'': (shaking his head) "Not this time. They can no longer take care of you. Something terrible happened to your home and we need to keep you safe. I'm sorry, but you cannot go back."
--> ''Zaheer'': "The North Pole."
--> ''Korra'': "I... I want to go home now." She stopped walking, her gaze fixed on the snow. "I want my mommy and daddy."
--> ''Zaheer'': "You will be home soon."
--> ''Korra'': "I will?"
--> ''Zaheer'': "Yes. But it is not the same home. Korra, I am so sorry, but your parents are gone."
--> ''Korra'': "But... but they'll be in the hut. Sometimes Daddy goes away, but he always comes back. He always comes back. And Mommy will be there now. She's always there."
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-->''Korra'': "I will?"
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-->''Zaheer'': "Yes.'''Zaheer''': Yes. But it is not the same home. Korra, I am so sorry, but your parents are gone."
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--> ''Korra'': "I... I want to go home now." She stopped walking, her gaze fixed on the snow. "I want my mommy and daddy."
--> ''Zaheer'': "You will be home soon."
--> ''Korra'': "I will?"
--> ''Zaheer'': "Yes. But it is not the same home. Korra, I am so sorry, but your parents are gone."
--> ''Korra'': "But... but they'll be in the hut. Sometimes Daddy goes away, but he always comes back. He always comes back. And Mommy will be there now. She's always there."
--> ''Zaheer'': (shaking his head) "Not this time. They can no longer take care of you. Something terrible happened to your home and we need to keep you safe. I'm sorry, but you cannot go back."
--> ''Korra'': (beginning to cry) "But... but I want to,"
--> ''Zaheer'': "I know this is a difficult time, and this is a shock. But we cannot let you go back. You are too important. We will keep you safe until it is the right time. Korra?"
--> ''Korra'': (body shaking) "Uh-huh?"
--> ''Zaheer'': "I must apologize. I did not start this conversation in quite the right way. My companions and I will be your protectors and your teachers. We will be your new parents."
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--> ''Korra'': "Where are we going?"
--> ''Zaheer'': "The North Pole."
--> ''Korra'': "I... I want to go home now." She stopped walking, her gaze fixed on the snow. "I want my mommy and daddy."
--> ''Zaheer'': "You will be home soon."
--> ''Korra'': "I will?"
--> ''Zaheer'': "Yes. But it is not the same home. Korra, I am so sorry, but your parents are gone."
--> ''Korra'': "But... but they'll be in the hut. Sometimes Daddy goes away, but he always comes back. He always comes back. And Mommy will be there now. She's always there."
--> ''Zaheer'': (shaking his head) "Not this time. They can no longer take care of you. Something terrible happened to your home and we need to keep you safe. I'm sorry, but you cannot go back."
--> ''Korra'': (beginning to cry) "But... but I want to,"
--> ''Zaheer'': "I know this is a difficult time, and this is a shock. But we cannot let you go back. You are too important. We will keep you safe until it is the right time. Korra?"
--> ''Korra'': (body shaking) "Uh-huh?"
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!!Chapter Eighteen: Rebellion
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[[folder:Book One: Healing]]
!!Chapter One: The Girl in the Snow
* Despite how heartwarming Asami and Korra's first meeting was, it was sad they were unable to meet again.
* The scene with Asami's mother was heartwarming, but it is sad knowing what will become of her later.
!!Chapter Two: Escape to Republic City
!!Chapter Three: The Missing Child
* Senna fearing that Tonraq would accuse her of cheating on him when Korra begins firebending. Luckily, that did not happen.
* The story of Korra being kidnapped by the Red Lotus.
* The fact that Senna and Tonraq were unable to have another child after Korra was kidnapped leaving them childless for fourteen years.
!!Chapter Four: First Meeting
!!Chapter Five: Adventures and Misfortunes
!!Chapter Six: Memento
!!Chapter Seven: Search of the Lotus
!!Chapter Eight: The Chiblocker Lady
* Mako and Bolin losing their home.
!!Chapter Nine: Uncharted Territories
!!Chapter Ten: Connection
!!Chapter Eleven: For Whom the Fire Burns
!!Chapter Twelve: City of Fireworks
* This chapter really illustrates how much of a FishOutOfWater Korra is in terms of anything outside of training with the Red Lotus.
!!Chapter Thirteen: The Game
* While the party celebrating the Fire Ferrets' first victory was heartwarming, the mood is immediately soured by [[spoiler:the Red Lotus' arrival.]]
!!Chapter Fourteen: Terror
* This chapter illustrates how messed up Korra's psyche is after being raised by the Red Lotus all her life [[spoiler: since she felt the need to apologize to them for running away despite feeling imprisoned by them and the fact Zaheer struck her face.]]
* Asami feeling powerless as [[spoiler:Korra is being kidnapped right in front of her.]]
* Asami's ItsAllMyFault moment after [[spoiler:Korra is taken away by the Red Lotus.]]
!!Chapter Fifteen: Assassination
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!!Chapter Sixteen: Broken Chains
* Korra believing that her friends would not want to have anything to do with her after she left with [[spoiler:the Red Lotus.]]
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[[folder:Book One: Healing]]
!!Chapter One: The Girl in the Snow
* Despite how heartwarming Asami and Korra's first meeting was, it was sad they were unable to meet again.
* The scene with Asami's mother was heartwarming, but it is sad knowing what will become of her later.
!!Chapter Two: Escape to Republic City
!!Chapter Three: The Missing Child
* Senna fearing that Tonraq would accuse her of cheating on him when Korra begins firebending. Luckily, that did not happen.
* The story of Korra being kidnapped by the Red Lotus.
* The fact that Senna and Tonraq were unable to have another child after Korra was kidnapped leaving them childless for fourteen years.
!!Chapter Four: First Meeting
!!Chapter Five: Adventures and Misfortunes
!!Chapter Six: Memento
!!Chapter Seven: Search of the Lotus
!!Chapter Eight: The Chiblocker Lady
* Mako and Bolin losing their home.
!!Chapter Nine: Uncharted Territories
!!Chapter Ten: Connection
!!Chapter Eleven: For Whom the Fire Burns
!!Chapter Twelve: City of Fireworks
* This chapter really illustrates how much of a FishOutOfWater Korra is in terms of anything outside of training with the Red Lotus.
!!Chapter Thirteen: The Game
* While the party celebrating the Fire Ferrets' first victory was heartwarming, the mood is immediately soured by [[spoiler:the Red Lotus' arrival.]]
!!Chapter Fourteen: Terror
* This chapter illustrates how messed up Korra's psyche is after being raised by the Red Lotus all her life [[spoiler: since she felt the need to apologize to them for running away despite feeling imprisoned by them and the fact Zaheer struck her face.]]
* Asami feeling powerless as [[spoiler:Korra is being kidnapped right in front of her.]]
* Asami's ItsAllMyFault moment after [[spoiler:Korra is taken away by the Red Lotus.]]
!!Chapter Fifteen: Assassination
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!!Chapter Sixteen: Broken Chains
* Korra believing that her friends would not want to have anything to do with her after she left with [[spoiler:the Red Lotus.]]
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