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** [[spoiler:The day Daenerys and Tyrion's son Rhaegar was born, Dany's dragons Drogon and Viserion perished.]]
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** [[spoiler:The day Daenerys and Tyrion's son Rhaegar was born, Dany's dragons Drogon and Viserion perished.]]
** [[spoiler:Jon heads to the far north to watch incase the Others ever return. Val goes with him and they marry, but the fact that he's immortal means eventually he'll find himself alone.]]
** [[spoiler:Jon heads to the far north to watch incase the Others ever return. Val goes with him and they marry, but the fact that he's immortal means eventually he'll find himself alone.]]
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* Chapter 110: [[spoiler: Tyrion and Brienne attending Jaime's funeral.]]
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* The Epilogue: [[spoiler: With the war over, the Starks rebuild Winterfell, with Sansa acting as regent for Rickon. However, Rickon continues to become more wild and uncontrollable until it becomes clear he cannot rule in his own right. Finally, Sansa allows him and Shaggydog to abdicate and roam free in the wild.]]
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** [[spoiler: With the war over, the Starks rebuild Winterfell, with Sansa acting as regent for Rickon. However, Rickon continues to become more wild and uncontrollable until it becomes clear he cannot rule in his own right. Finally, Sansa allows him and Shaggydog to abdicate and roam free in the wild.]]
** [[spoiler:The day Daenerys and Tyrion's son Rhaegar was born, Dany's dragons Drogon and Viserion perished.]]
** [[spoiler: With the war over, the Starks rebuild Winterfell, with Sansa acting as regent for Rickon. However, Rickon continues to become more wild and uncontrollable until it becomes clear he cannot rule in his own right. Finally, Sansa allows him and Shaggydog to abdicate and roam free in the wild.]]
** [[spoiler:The day Daenerys and Tyrion's son Rhaegar was born, Dany's dragons Drogon and Viserion perished.]]
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** His only consolation is that [[spoiler: he has a vision in which Little Robb will eventually replace him as the three-eyed crow, freeing him from the burden.]] Which as shown in the epilogue, eventually happens.
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* Chapter 112: [[spoiler: With nowhere else for him to go, despite Asha pleading with him to accompany her back to the Iron Islands, Theon bids his sister farewell before leaving King's Landing to die alone, finally at peace with himself]]
--> [[spoiler: ''It seemed no more impossible than anything else. Theon took a step, and then another. It grew easier and easier; he no longer felt his broken feet, his missing fingers, his missing self, or anything at all. Sounds fell away, and even the trees, and all time, and everything that was or had been. And then at last, greater than the sun of the new-broken morning, greater than the night's ending, greater than life itself, Theon Greyjoy saw the light.'']]
--> [[spoiler: ''It seemed no more impossible than anything else. Theon took a step, and then another. It grew easier and easier; he no longer felt his broken feet, his missing fingers, his missing self, or anything at all. Sounds fell away, and even the trees, and all time, and everything that was or had been. And then at last, greater than the sun of the new-broken morning, greater than the night's ending, greater than life itself, Theon Greyjoy saw the light.'']]
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* Chapter 112: [[spoiler: With nowhere else for him to go, despite Asha pleading with him to accompany her back to the Iron Islands, Theon bids his sister farewell before leaving King's Landing White Harbor to die alone, finally at peace with himself]]
--> [[spoiler: ''It seemed no more impossible than anything else. Theon took a step, and then another. It grew easier and easier; he no longer felt his broken feet, his missing fingers, his missing self, or anything at all. Sounds fell away, and even the trees, and all time, and everything that was or had been. And then at last, greater than the sun of the new-broken morning, greater than the night's ending, greater than life itself, Theon Greyjoy saw the light.'']]'']]
* The Epilogue: [[spoiler: With the war over, the Starks rebuild Winterfell, with Sansa acting as regent for Rickon. However, Rickon continues to become more wild and uncontrollable until it becomes clear he cannot rule in his own right. Finally, Sansa allows him and Shaggydog to abdicate and roam free in the wild.]]
--> [[spoiler: ''It seemed no more impossible than anything else. Theon took a step, and then another. It grew easier and easier; he no longer felt his broken feet, his missing fingers, his missing self, or anything at all. Sounds fell away, and even the trees, and all time, and everything that was or had been. And then at last, greater than the sun of the new-broken morning, greater than the night's ending, greater than life itself, Theon Greyjoy saw the light.
* The Epilogue: [[spoiler: With the war over, the Starks rebuild Winterfell, with Sansa acting as regent for Rickon. However, Rickon continues to become more wild and uncontrollable until it becomes clear he cannot rule in his own right. Finally, Sansa allows him and Shaggydog to abdicate and roam free in the wild.]]
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* Chapter 112: [[spoiler: With nowhere else for him to go, despite Asha pleading with him to accompany her back to the Iron Islands, Theon bids his sister farewell before leaving King's Landing to die alone, finally at peace with himself]]
--> [[spoiler: ''It seemed no more impossible than anything else. Theon took a step, and then another. It grew easier and easier; he no longer felt his broken feet, his missing fingers, his missing self, or anything at all. Sounds fell away, and even the trees, and all time, and everything that was or had been. And then at last, greater than the sun of the new-broken morning, greater than the night's ending, greater than life itself, Theon Greyjoy saw the light.'']]
* Chapter 112: [[spoiler: With nowhere else for him to go, despite Asha pleading with him to accompany her back to the Iron Islands, Theon bids his sister farewell before leaving King's Landing to die alone, finally at peace with himself]]
--> [[spoiler: ''It seemed no more impossible than anything else. Theon took a step, and then another. It grew easier and easier; he no longer felt his broken feet, his missing fingers, his missing self, or anything at all. Sounds fell away, and even the trees, and all time, and everything that was or had been. And then at last, greater than the sun of the new-broken morning, greater than the night's ending, greater than life itself, Theon Greyjoy saw the light.'']]
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--> ''"[[spoiler: I will die.]] Lord Snow will return to Castle Black, and do what he must. If we are strong enough, if we face it and do not fail, the Long Night will be over. So we must pray, at least. And so, you are released. Your charge to me is ended. My Hand and heir, Lord Davos, may choose to take up my claim to the throne, and in such case, I expect you to fight as long and loyally for him as you ever did for me. But if not...Serve no usurpers or madmen. Do justice and live rightly. Burn a nightfire for me. [[ItHasBeenAnHonor And remember. Remember always]]."''
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--> ''"[[spoiler: I will die.]] Lord Snow will return to Castle Black, and do what he must. If we are strong enough, if we face it and do not fail, the Long Night will be over. So we must pray, at least. And so, you are released. Your charge to me is ended. My Hand and heir, Lord Davos, may choose to take up my claim to the throne, and in such case, I expect you to fight as long and loyally for him as you ever did for me. But if not...Serve no usurpers or madmen. Do justice and live rightly. Burn a nightfire for me. [[ItHasBeenAnHonor And remember. Remember always]]."''"''
* In Chapter 111, [[spoiler: Lady Stoneheart executes Littlefinger. His pleading for mercy is pretty pitiful, but the real tragedy is that Catelyn has to kill her childhood friend because he completely and ''utterly'' destroyed her life. Then, with her vengeance carried out, she walks out of the Moon Door.]]
--> [[spoiler: [[TogetherInDeath Oh Ned]]...]]
* In Chapter 111, [[spoiler: Lady Stoneheart executes Littlefinger. His pleading for mercy is pretty pitiful, but the real tragedy is that Catelyn has to kill her childhood friend because he completely and ''utterly'' destroyed her life. Then, with her vengeance carried out, she walks out of the Moon Door.]]
--> [[spoiler: [[TogetherInDeath Oh Ned]]...]]
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* Chapter 77. [[spoiler: Bran becomes the new three-eyed crow and even gets to walk again, but realizes too late that it came at the cost of his friends' lives so that it would happen. Also, he takes Meera's death pretty badly, blaming himself for her death.]]
-->[[spoiler:''"He'd fled from that, terrified. And then, out of nowhere, he'd seen his sister Sansa, far away under another hollow hill, among the roots of another weirwood, with a hooded corpse-woman and a band of ragged outlaws and a big man with a burned face. [[ILetGwenStacyDie Meera was dead]]. He thought he had seen his brother Rickon, but couldn't be sure. [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone Meera was dead]]. His sister Arya was too far away to even catch an echo. [[MadnessMantra Meera was dead]]. Even his own wolf, Summer, appeared and disappeared, a separation he found horribly unfamiliar and shocking, after how long he had lived in Summer's soul. But Summer was the warg of Bran Stark. To the three-eyed crow, he was only one skin among many."'']]
-->[[spoiler:''"He'd fled from that, terrified. And then, out of nowhere, he'd seen his sister Sansa, far away under another hollow hill, among the roots of another weirwood, with a hooded corpse-woman and a band of ragged outlaws and a big man with a burned face. [[ILetGwenStacyDie Meera was dead]]. He thought he had seen his brother Rickon, but couldn't be sure. [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone Meera was dead]]. His sister Arya was too far away to even catch an echo. [[MadnessMantra Meera was dead]]. Even his own wolf, Summer, appeared and disappeared, a separation he found horribly unfamiliar and shocking, after how long he had lived in Summer's soul. But Summer was the warg of Bran Stark. To the three-eyed crow, he was only one skin among many."'']]
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Much like its source material, this fic will render readers into sobbing wrecks.
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* The death of [[spoiler: Meera, in order to make an HeroicSacrifice for Bran by giving him her life energy, just like Jojen did. Complete with Bran giving her an AnguishedDeclarationOfLove. Also, in her final moments she kisses Bran so he wouldn't see her die.]]
-->[[spoiler:''"Meera...I love you"'']]
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* Chapter 24. [[spoiler: Jojen dies after giving his life energy to Bran in order to become the next three-eyed raven. When Meera finds out, she falls into the DespairEventHorizon.]]
* Chapter 50. [[spoiler: Meera dies in order to make an HeroicSacrifice for Bran by giving him her life energy, just like Jojen did. Complete with Bran giving her an AnguishedDeclarationOfLove. Also, in her final moments she kisses Bran so he wouldn't see her die.]]
-->[[spoiler:''"Meera...I love you"'']]
* Chapter 50. [[spoiler: Meera dies in order to make an HeroicSacrifice for Bran by giving him her life energy, just like Jojen did. Complete with Bran giving her an AnguishedDeclarationOfLove. Also, in her final moments she kisses Bran so he wouldn't see her die.]]
-->[[spoiler:''"Meera...I love you"'']]
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* The death of [[spoiler: Alysane Mormont, as she protects Jeyne Poole and Val from the Others, her dying words the words of her ancestral house: "Here we stand".]]
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* The death of [[spoiler: Alysane Mormont, as she protects Jeyne Poole and Val from the Others, her dying words the words of her ancestral house: "Here we stand".house.]]
-->[[spoiler:''"Here we stand."'']]
* The death of [[spoiler: Meera,as she dies in order to make an HeroicSacrifice for Bran.Bran by giving him her life energy, just like Jojen did. Complete with Bran giving her an AnguishedDeclarationOfLove.]] Also, in her final moments she kisses Bran so he wouldn't see her die.]]
-->[[spoiler:''"Meera...I love you"'']]
-->[[spoiler:''"Here we stand."'']]
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* Chapter 108 [[spoiler: Stannis requests that Davos take up the Baratheon cause of find whatever of Robert's blood is left to succeed him as heir before blowing the Horn of Dawn, giving up his life to give Jon a chance at ending the Others' invasion.]]
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* Chapter 108 [[spoiler: Stannis requests that Davos take up the Baratheon cause of find whatever of Robert's blood is left to succeed him as heir before blowing the Horn of Dawn, giving up his life to give Jon a chance at ending the Others' invasion.]]]]
--> ''"[[spoiler: I will die.]] Lord Snow will return to Castle Black, and do what he must. If we are strong enough, if we face it and do not fail, the Long Night will be over. So we must pray, at least. And so, you are released. Your charge to me is ended. My Hand and heir, Lord Davos, may choose to take up my claim to the throne, and in such case, I expect you to fight as long and loyally for him as you ever did for me. But if not...Serve no usurpers or madmen. Do justice and live rightly. Burn a nightfire for me. [[ItHasBeenAnHonor And remember. Remember always]]."''
--> ''"[[spoiler: I will die.]] Lord Snow will return to Castle Black, and do what he must. If we are strong enough, if we face it and do not fail, the Long Night will be over. So we must pray, at least. And so, you are released. Your charge to me is ended. My Hand and heir, Lord Davos, may choose to take up my claim to the throne, and in such case, I expect you to fight as long and loyally for him as you ever did for me. But if not...Serve no usurpers or madmen. Do justice and live rightly. Burn a nightfire for me. [[ItHasBeenAnHonor And remember. Remember always]]."''
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* Chapter 106 [[spoiler: Jaime finally succumbs to his wounds during the Others' assault on King's Landing while in Tyrion and Brienne's presence, but not before finally making peace with Tyrion, and Brienne's assurances that he will be remembered as a hero in the annals of the White Book.]]
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* Chapter 106 [[spoiler: Jaime finally succumbs to his wounds during the Others' assault on King's Landing while in Tyrion and Brienne's presence, but not before finally making peace with Tyrion, and Brienne's assurances that he will be remembered as a hero in the annals of the White Book.]]
* Chapter 108 [[spoiler: Stannis requests that Davos take up the Baratheon cause of find whatever of Robert's blood is left to succeed him as heir before blowing the Horn of Dawn, giving up his life to give Jon a chance at ending the Others' invasion.]]
* Chapter 108 [[spoiler: Stannis requests that Davos take up the Baratheon cause of find whatever of Robert's blood is left to succeed him as heir before blowing the Horn of Dawn, giving up his life to give Jon a chance at ending the Others' invasion.]]
