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[[AC: Chapter 29 A Second Chance]]
* The girls are going to test if one of them can talk to Lincoln in person. The only two candidates are Lynn and Luan due to prior contact with him, but even then, Lincoln would still have reason to fear them and there's a high chance the meeting could fail.
* The girls are going to test if one of them can talk to Lincoln in person. The only two candidates are Lynn and Luan due to prior contact with him, but even then, Lincoln would still have reason to fear them and there's a high chance the meeting could fail.
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* The girls are depress and pretty much accept there actions destroy there social lives, only caring about Lincoln recovering.
* Lincoln considers actual calling his sisters, but is nearly prevented from doing so after imagining them reaching through the phone to forcefully being him home.
* Lincoln considers actual calling his sisters, but is nearly prevented from doing so after imagining them reaching through the phone to forcefully being him home.
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* The girls are depress depressed and pretty much accept there their actions destroy there destroyed their social lives, only caring about Lincoln recovering.
* Lincoln considers actual calling his sisters, but is nearly prevented from doing so after imagining them reaching through the phone to forcefullybeing bringing him home.
* Lincoln considers actual calling his sisters, but is nearly prevented from doing so after imagining them reaching through the phone to forcefully
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* Even those Lincoln reaching out to his sisters it clear that all the love he has for them is gone, even thinking of Lori as a monster in his head.
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* Both parents are depressed about how life at home is, with Lincoln living in fear of his siblings and the girls in no better shape. They also grow fearful the restrictions their daughters have might be doing more harm than good, seeing as Lucy was a complete mess without her journal to write with.
* In spite of their attempt to lighten the girls' mood by lifting some of their punishments, the sisters are apathetic about being given some freedom. Not only that, the parents discover the girls' social lives are almost nonexistent, with a few of them refusing to continue their passions.
* Lincoln considers actual calling his sisters, but is nearly prevented from doing so after imagining them reaching through the phone to forcefully being him home.
* In spite of their attempt to lighten the girls' mood by lifting some of their punishments, the sisters are apathetic about being given some freedom. Not only that, the parents discover the girls' social lives are almost nonexistent, with a few of them refusing to continue their passions.
* Lincoln considers actual calling his sisters, but is nearly prevented from doing so after imagining them reaching through the phone to forcefully being him home.
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* The ''very'' real possibility that [[BrainyBaby Lily]], [[WhatTheHellHero who is]] ''pissed'' with her sisters, might grow up resenting her sisters, especially if Lincoln [[DrivenToSuicide attempts suicide]]. Averted as of Chapter 22 as while she's still upset, she's also realized how broken up the other girls are and wants to help them reconcile with Lincoln, which unfortunately isn't going to be easy.
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* The ''very'' real possibility that [[BrainyBaby Lily]], [[WhatTheHellHero who is]] ''pissed'' with her sisters, might grow up resenting her sisters, especially if Lincoln [[DrivenToSuicide attempts suicide]]. Averted [[AvertedTrope Averted]] as of Chapter 22 as while she's still upset, she's also realized how broken up the other girls are and wants to help them reconcile with Lincoln, which unfortunately isn't going to be easy.
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[[AC: Chapter 1 An Angry House]]
[[AC: Chapter 2 Stages of Grief]]
[[AC: Chapter 3 A Living Nightmare]]
[[AC: Chapter 1 An Angry House]]
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[[AC: Chapter 4 Spreading Like Wildfire]]
[[AC: Chapter 5 Depression's Vice-Like Grip]]
[[AC: Chapter 6 The Fear Is Real]]
* Chapter 6, when Lynn tries to apologize to Lincoln, the boy panics and hits her with a food tray. What makes it worse is that Lynn mistakes Lincoln's fear for anger, and thinks he ''hates'' her now, so she storms out of the room
[[AC: Chapter 7 A Flicker of Hope]]
[[AC: Chapter 8 Worse Than Expected]]
[[AC: Chapter 9 In A Medical Opinion]]
[[AC: Chapter 10 Getting Down To Business]]
[[AC: Chapter 11 Parental Advice]]
[[AC: Chapter 12 The Thoughts of an Adolescent]]
[[AC: Chapter 13 From a Genius' Perspective]]
[[AC: Chapter 14 Not As Dumb As She Looks]]
[[AC: Chapter 15 Memoirs From The Joker]]
[[AC: Chapter 16 A Musician's Shortcomings]]
[[AC: Chapter 17 No More Secrets]]
[[AC: Chapter 18 Phone Aid]]
[[AC: Chapter 19 Bad Reputation]]
[[AC: Chapter 20 Twinsanity]]
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[[AC: Chapter 22 A Long Road Ahead]]
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** Chapter 22 also implies that Luna and Lana, the "normal" ones of the sisters (a title gained from not having any form of mental issue other than guilt over what they helped do to Lincoln), are guilty that they couldn't identify or fix their sisters' issues and the parents aren't feeling any better about it given that they completely missed how screwed up their daughters ended up.
* Chapter 25 continues to see the Loud girls miserable about the situation with Lincoln, with Lucy being driven to open tears repeatedly.
** Also heartbreaking is Lincoln's Ace Savvy themed nightmare which features the Royal Flush Gang, the avatars Lincoln created for his sisters, [[TheStarscream pulling a mutiny on Ace for his recent incompetence as leader and trying to beat him to death.]] This is horrible on several levels: A) the characters Lincoln created out of love and trust have been turned into heartless monsters, B) Lincoln-as-Ace tries to end the whole mess by saying that his ''real'' team would never hurt or betray him, meaning on at least a subconscious level, Lincoln remains aware that his sisters still love him but his own fear keeps that truth from ever entering his conscious mind, as demonstrated when the Royal Flush girls all sneer at his "stupidity" and mock his hope before moving in to kill it and him and C) Deuce/Lily starts having a break down at the end of the dream because she got there too late to save Ace from the beating, which is all but stated to have been fatal in the nightmare (unsurprising considering that the Royal Flush versions of the girls have ''superpowers'').
* A revisit of the Ace Savvy dream world in Chapter 26 reveals that Ace/Lincoln survived and will recover but Deuce/Lily hates their sisters' guts, which is even worse in the dream world because ''Lynn Sr. and Rita are dead''.
* The ''very'' real possibility that [[BrainyBaby Lily]], [[WhatTheHellHero who is]] ''pissed'' with her sisters, might grow up resenting her sisters, especially if Lincoln [[DrivenToSuicide attempts suicide]]. Averted as of Chapter 22 as while she's still upset, she's also realized how broken up the other girls are and wants to help them reconcile with Lincoln, which unfortunately isn't going to be easy.
* Chapter 25 continues to see the Loud girls miserable about the situation with Lincoln, with Lucy being driven to open tears repeatedly.
** Also heartbreaking is Lincoln's Ace Savvy themed nightmare which features the Royal Flush Gang, the avatars Lincoln created for his sisters, [[TheStarscream pulling a mutiny on Ace for his recent incompetence as leader and trying to beat him to death.]] This is horrible on several levels: A) the characters Lincoln created out of love and trust have been turned into heartless monsters, B) Lincoln-as-Ace tries to end the whole mess by saying that his ''real'' team would never hurt or betray him, meaning on at least a subconscious level, Lincoln remains aware that his sisters still love him but his own fear keeps that truth from ever entering his conscious mind, as demonstrated when the Royal Flush girls all sneer at his "stupidity" and mock his hope before moving in to kill it and him and C) Deuce/Lily starts having a break down at the end of the dream because she got there too late to save Ace from the beating, which is all but stated to have been fatal in the nightmare (unsurprising considering that the Royal Flush versions of the girls have ''superpowers'').
* A revisit of the Ace Savvy dream world in Chapter 26 reveals that Ace/Lincoln survived and will recover but Deuce/Lily hates their sisters' guts, which is even worse in the dream world because ''Lynn Sr. and Rita are dead''.
* The ''very'' real possibility that [[BrainyBaby Lily]], [[WhatTheHellHero who is]] ''pissed'' with her sisters, might grow up resenting her sisters, especially if Lincoln [[DrivenToSuicide attempts suicide]]. Averted as of Chapter 22 as while she's still upset, she's also realized how broken up the other girls are and wants to help them reconcile with Lincoln, which unfortunately isn't going to be easy.
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[[AC: Chapter 23 School Daze]]
[[AC: Chapter 24 The Athlete and The Pain Queen]]
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* Also heartbreaking is Lincoln's Ace Savvy themed nightmare which features the Royal Flush Gang, the avatars Lincoln created for his sisters, [[TheStarscream pulling a mutiny on Ace for his recent incompetence as leader and trying to beat him to death.]] This is horrible on several levels: A) the characters Lincoln created out of love and trust have been turned into heartless monsters, B) Lincoln-as-Ace tries to end the whole mess by saying that his ''real'' team would never hurt or betray him, meaning on at least a subconscious level, Lincoln remains aware that his sisters still love him but his own fear keeps that truth from ever entering his conscious mind, as demonstrated when the Royal Flush girls all sneer at his "stupidity" and mock his hope before moving in to kill it and him and C) Deuce/Lily starts having a break down at the end of the dream because she got there too late to save Ace from the beating, which is all but stated to have been fatal in the nightmare (unsurprising considering that the Royal Flush versions of the girls have ''superpowers'').
[[AC: Chapter 26 The Middle Child]]
* A revisit of the Ace Savvy dream world in Chapter 26 reveals that Ace/Lincoln survived and will recover but Deuce/Lily hates their sisters' guts, which is even worse in the dream world because ''Lynn Sr. and Rita are
* The ''very'' real possibility that [[BrainyBaby Lily]], [[WhatTheHellHero who is]] ''pissed'' with her sisters, might grow up resenting her sisters, especially if Lincoln [[DrivenToSuicide attempts suicide]]. Averted as of Chapter 22 as while she's still upset, she's also realized how broken up the other girls are and wants to help them reconcile with Lincoln, which unfortunately isn't going to be easy.
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[[AC: Chapter 27 Attempting To Move On]]
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* Chapter 3, after 3 A Living Nightmare: After a horrible nightmare in which demonic versions of his sisters kill him for being at fault for every dispute, Lincoln wakes up in the hospital, just as visitor hours are over. Afraid to be left alone, he begs his mother to stay with him.
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* Chapter 28 sees Lana breaking down because after Lucy [[TemptingFate tempts fate]] by implying her pets are likely dead, to the younger girl's clear dismay, she finds out that most of her pets were given away and ''El Diablo was put down''. Lana screams at her father that she hates him but she's well-aware it's her own fault. Lucy is also ashamed of herself for making the comments and heartbroken over what her little sister is going through.
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* Chapter 28 sees Lana breaking down because because, after Lucy [[TemptingFate tempts fate]] by implying her pets are likely dead, to the younger girl's clear dismay, she finds out that most of her pets were given away and ''El Diablo was put down''. Lana screams at her father that she hates him but she's well-aware it's her own fault.fault her pets ended up in the animal shelter to begin with. Lucy is also ashamed of herself for making the comments and heartbroken over what her little sister is going through.
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* Chapter 26 revealed why Lincoln kept trying to help his sisters despite them telling him to stay out of it. The boy feels like being of use to his sisters is the only thing he's good at, and felt like they were trying to replace him with their protocol, leaving him with nobody to need him. The boy even outright admits he feels like him being born was a mistake since he has none of the accomplishments his sisters do.
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* A revisit of the Ace Savvy dream world in Chapter 26 reveals that Ace/Lincoln survived and will recover but Deuce/Lily hates their sisters' guts, which is even worse in the dream world because ''Lynn Sr. and Rita are dead''.
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** Also at the end of Chapter 20, the twins tell Dr. Lopez that they believe Lucy to be clinically depressed. Let me repeat that; an ''8-year-old'' might be so thoroughly depressed that ''6-year-olds'' have picked up on it but the Loud parents apparently never considered the possibility.
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** Also heartbreaking is Lincoln's Ace Savvy themed nightmare which features the Royal Flush Gang, the avatars Lincoln created for his sisters, [[Main/TheStarscream pulling a mutiny on Ace for his recent incompetence as leader and trying to beat him to death.]] This is horrible on several levels: A) the characters Lincoln created out of love and trust have been turned into heartless monsters, B) Lincoln-as-Ace tries to end the whole mess by saying that his ''real'' team would never hurt or betray him, meaning on at least a subconscious level, Lincoln remains aware that his sisters still love him but his own fear keeps that truth from ever entering his conscious mind, as demonstrated when the Royal Flush girls all sneer at his "stupidity" and mock his hope before moving in to kill it and him and C) Deuce/Lily starts having a break down at the end of the dream because she got there too late to save Ace from the beating, which is all but stated to have been fatal in the nightmare (unsurprising considering that the Royal Flush versions of the girls have ''superpowers'').
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** Also heartbreaking is Lincoln's Ace Savvy themed nightmare which features the Royal Flush Gang, the avatars Lincoln created for his sisters, [[Main/TheStarscream [[TheStarscream pulling a mutiny on Ace for his recent incompetence as leader and trying to beat him to death.]] This is horrible on several levels: A) the characters Lincoln created out of love and trust have been turned into heartless monsters, B) Lincoln-as-Ace tries to end the whole mess by saying that his ''real'' team would never hurt or betray him, meaning on at least a subconscious level, Lincoln remains aware that his sisters still love him but his own fear keeps that truth from ever entering his conscious mind, as demonstrated when the Royal Flush girls all sneer at his "stupidity" and mock his hope before moving in to kill it and him and C) Deuce/Lily starts having a break down at the end of the dream because she got there too late to save Ace from the beating, which is all but stated to have been fatal in the nightmare (unsurprising considering that the Royal Flush versions of the girls have ''superpowers'').
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** Also heartbreaking is Lincoln's Ace Savvy themed nightmare which features the Royal Flush Gang, the avatars Lincoln created for his sisters, [[Main/TheStarscream pulling a mutiny on Ace for his recent incompetence as leader and trying to beat him to death.]] This is horrible on several levels: A) the characters Lincoln created out of love and trust have been turned into heartless monsters, B) Lincoln-as-Ace tries to end the whole mess by saying that his ''real'' team would never hurt or betray him, meaning on at least a subconscious level, Lincoln remains aware that his sisters still love him but his own fear keeps that truth from ever entering his conscious mind and C) Deuce/Lily starts having a break down at the end of the dream because she got there too late to save Ace from the beating, which is all but stated to have been fatal in the nightmare (unsurprising considering that the Royal Flush versions of the girls have ''superpowers'').
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** Also heartbreaking is Lincoln's Ace Savvy themed nightmare which features the Royal Flush Gang, the avatars Lincoln created for his sisters, [[Main/TheStarscream pulling a mutiny on Ace for his recent incompetence as leader and trying to beat him to death.]] This is horrible on several levels: A) the characters Lincoln created out of love and trust have been turned into heartless monsters, B) Lincoln-as-Ace tries to end the whole mess by saying that his ''real'' team would never hurt or betray him, meaning on at least a subconscious level, Lincoln remains aware that his sisters still love him but his own fear keeps that truth from ever entering his conscious mind mind, as demonstrated when the Royal Flush girls all sneer at his "stupidity" and mock his hope before moving in to kill it and him and C) Deuce/Lily starts having a break down at the end of the dream because she got there too late to save Ace from the beating, which is all but stated to have been fatal in the nightmare (unsurprising considering that the Royal Flush versions of the girls have ''superpowers'').
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** Also heartbreaking is Lincoln's Ace Savvy themed nightmare which features the Royal Flush Gang, the avatars Lincoln created for his sisters, pulling a mutiny on Ace and trying to beat him to death. This is horrible on several levels: A) the characters Lincoln created out of love and trust have been turned into heartless monsters, B) Lincoln-as-Ace tries to end the whole mess by saying that his ''real'' team would never hurt or betray him, meaning on at least a subconscious level, Lincoln remains aware that his sisters still love him but his own fear keeps that truth from ever entering his conscious mind and C) Deuce/Lily starts having a break down at the end of the dream because she got there too late to save Ace from the beating, which is all but stated to have been fatal in the nightmare (unsurprising considering that the Royal Flush versions of the girls have ''superpowers'').
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** Also heartbreaking is Lincoln's Ace Savvy themed nightmare which features the Royal Flush Gang, the avatars Lincoln created for his sisters, [[Main/TheStarscream pulling a mutiny on Ace for his recent incompetence as leader and trying to beat him to death. death.]] This is horrible on several levels: A) the characters Lincoln created out of love and trust have been turned into heartless monsters, B) Lincoln-as-Ace tries to end the whole mess by saying that his ''real'' team would never hurt or betray him, meaning on at least a subconscious level, Lincoln remains aware that his sisters still love him but his own fear keeps that truth from ever entering his conscious mind and C) Deuce/Lily starts having a break down at the end of the dream because she got there too late to save Ace from the beating, which is all but stated to have been fatal in the nightmare (unsurprising considering that the Royal Flush versions of the girls have ''superpowers'').
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* Chapter 22 has the outright statement that Lily was so furious with her sisters that she didn't want them to touch her. And even though Lincoln's out of the hospital, the nightmares show no signs of stopping and in fact, are getting worse.
*** Chapter 22 also implies that Luna and Lana, the "normal" ones of the sisters (a title gained from not having any form of mental issue other than guilt over what they helped do to Lincoln), are guilty that they couldn't identify or fix their sisters' issues and the parents aren't feeling any better about it given that they completely missed how screwed up their daughters ended up.
* The ''very'' real possibility that BrainyBaby Lily, [[WhatTheHellHero who is]] ''pissed'' with her sisters, might grow up resenting her sisters, especially if Lincoln [[DrivenToSuicide attempts suicide]]. Averted as of Chapter 22 as while she's still upset, she's also realized how broken up the other girls are and wants to help them reconcile with Lincoln, which unfortunately isn't going to be easy.
*** Chapter 22 also implies that Luna and Lana, the "normal" ones of the sisters (a title gained from not having any form of mental issue other than guilt over what they helped do to Lincoln), are guilty that they couldn't identify or fix their sisters' issues and the parents aren't feeling any better about it given that they completely missed how screwed up their daughters ended up.
* The ''very'' real possibility that BrainyBaby Lily, [[WhatTheHellHero who is]] ''pissed'' with her sisters, might grow up resenting her sisters, especially if Lincoln [[DrivenToSuicide attempts suicide]]. Averted as of Chapter 22 as while she's still upset, she's also realized how broken up the other girls are and wants to help them reconcile with Lincoln, which unfortunately isn't going to be easy.
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* Chapter 20 has TheReveal that Lola knows she's a total bitch but that she ''has'' to be that way to get ahead in pageants, something she discovered in her first pageant where [[BitchInSheepsClothing Lindsey deliberately set Lola up to fail while putting on a nice face]]. Lana is horrified to find out her twin has resigned herself to being hated and alone for the rest of her life.
** Also at the end of Chapter 20, the twins tell Dr. Lopez that they believe Lucy to be clinically depressed. Let me repeat that; an ''8-year-old'' might be so thoroughly depressed that ''6-year-olds'' have picked up on it but the Loud parents apparently never considered the possibility.
** Also at the end of Chapter 20, the twins tell Dr. Lopez that they believe Lucy to be clinically depressed. Let me repeat that; an ''8-year-old'' might be so thoroughly depressed that ''6-year-olds'' have picked up on it but the Loud parents apparently never considered the possibility.
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* Chapter 19: Lynn turns out to be devastated that she's driven her brother, who [[BigSisterInstinct she's always prided herself on protecting]], is now terrified of her and additionally misses how close she and Lincoln were as kids, with her attempts at rough play being her way of trying to rekindle it and her being extremely hurt whenever he rebuffed her.
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