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* Undine's big no in response to seeing Kokoro plumet towards the ground, and although she (HP) lands alright, her partner is clearly stressed, and it's clear why, remember, falling to their doom is how Undine lost Gwen Sally and Sylvia.
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* Page 9: a magical girl memorabilia store's reaction to the deaths of three magical girls is to put all their merch at half price.
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* Page 9: a magical girl memorabilia store's reaction to the deaths of three magical girls is to put all their merch at half price. Which is very bleak when you think about it: the minute a team becomes unprofitable, their merchandise is discounted heavily to make room for more profitable teams.
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* During the above conversation, Undine recalls how quickly everyone else seemed to move on from the deaths of Sally, Gwen and Sylvia, and she flashes back to when she looked on in horror at the poster advertising Team Alchemical merch at half price.
-->"When it happened, everyone seemed shocked...for a few days. But then everyone moved on, and there was that sense of... 'well, these things are bound to happen'. I guess it's natural, but...I would be lying if I said it didn't get to me."
-->"When it happened, everyone seemed shocked...for a few days. But then everyone moved on, and there was that sense of... 'well, these things are bound to happen'. I guess it's natural, but...I would be lying if I said it didn't get to me."
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** She ''has'' thought about moving back in with her father, but things are still so awkward that she's hesitant to even bring up the idea, and figures it will be moot when she ages out of being a magical girl anyway.
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[[AC: Chapter 22]]
* Kokoro talks about her falling out with her father, how scared he was about her becoming a magical girl (especially since he knew it'd be inevitable, given the circumstances of her conception), how she chafed under his constant concern and questions when she just wanted to do her job, and how eventually it got to be too much for her and she moved to the dorm.
-->"But every night when I'd go out, he'd look at me like I was going to die. Maybe he always looked at me like that."
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* Chapter 20's Interstitial focuses on how Kokoro got Kicks, which all starts when Kicks's mother was killed by a monster when she was a tiny kitten. Kokoro clarifies that although monsters are not known to attack animals stuck out at night deliberately, strays can end up at the wrong place at the wrong time, or (as was implicitly the case here) a mother might attack a nearby monster to protect her young ones. This gives another level to the connection she has with Kicks, a fellow orphan whose mother died protecting her. What's more, the Catfe lady concludes Kicks can't be very old, given she can't open her eyes fully yet, so maturity wise she's about the same age as Kokoro, who lost her mother when she was a ''baby''.
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* Chapter 20's Interstitial focuses on how Kokoro got Kicks, which all starts when Kicks's mother was killed by a monster when she was a tiny kitten. Kokoro clarifies that although monsters are not known to attack animals stuck out at night deliberately, strays can end up at the wrong place at the wrong time, or (as was implicitly the case here) a mother might attack a nearby monster to protect her young ones. This gives another level to the connection she has with Kicks, a fellow orphan whose mother died protecting her. What's more, the Catfe lady concludes Kicks can't be very old, given she can't open her eyes fully yet, so maturity wise she's about the same age as Kokoro, who Kokoro was when she lost her mother when she was a ''baby''.mother.
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* Chapter 20's Interstitial focuses on how Kokoro got Kicks, which all starts when Kicks's mother was killed by a monster when she was a tiny kitten. Kokoro clarifies that although monsters are not known to attack animals stuck out at night deliberately, strays can end up at the wrong place at the wrong time, or (as was implicitly the case here) a mother might attack a nearby monster to protect her young ones. This gives another level to the connection she has with Kicks, a fellow orphan whose mother died protecting her. What's more, the Catfe lady concludes Kicks can't be very old, given she can't open her eyes fully yet, so maturity wise she's about the same age as Kokoro, who lost her mother when she was a ''baby''.
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* Chapter 20's Interstitial focuses on how Kokoro got Kicks, which all starts when Kicks's mother was killed by a monster when she was a tiny kitten. Kokoro clarifies that although monsters are not known to attack animals stuck out at night deliberately, strays can end up at the wrong place at the wrong time, or (as was implicitly the case here) a mother might attack a nearby monster to protect her young ones. This gives another level to the connection she has with Kicks, a fellow orphan whose mother died protecting her.
