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* Rick's reaction to Gwen's wight attacking the group. He freezes up, shaking in fear and apparently having a flashback to his possession. You can even see part of his eye through the glasses, just to emphasize how scared he is.
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* Rick's Richard's reaction to Gwen's wight attacking the group. He freezes up, shaking in fear and apparently having a flashback to his possession. You can even see part of his eye through the glasses, just to emphasize how scared he is.is.
* Richard and Penny's strained relationship with their family and each other. Richard is trying to distance himself from a father who couldn't care less about what he wants and a mother with a bad habit for guilt-tripping, and Penny resents all three of them for it; her parents for treating her as their backup son, and Richard for constantly bailing on her.
* Richard and Penny's strained relationship with their family and each other. Richard is trying to distance himself from a father who couldn't care less about what he wants and a mother with a bad habit for guilt-tripping, and Penny resents all three of them for it; her parents for treating her as their backup son, and Richard for constantly bailing on her.
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* Dr. Gwen Burger getting to briefly reunite with her son after being missing for three years... and not only does toddler Ed not recognize her current form, he's outright afraid of her. Then to make it worse, she admits that he wouldn't recognize her real form anyways.
* Rick's reaction to Gwen's wight attacking the group. He freezes up, shaking in fear and apparently having a flashback to his possession. You can even see part of his eye through the glasses, just to emphasize how scared he is.
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* Dr. Gwen Burger getting to briefly reunite with her son after being missing for three years... and not only does toddler Ed not recognize her current form, he's outright afraid of her. Then to make it worse, she admits that he wouldn't recognize her real form anyways.
* Rick's reaction to Gwen's wight attacking the group. He freezes up, shaking in fear and apparently having a flashback to his possession. You can even see part of his eye through the glasses, just to emphasize how scared he is.
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* Hijack's [[http://www.paranatural.net/comic/chapter-5-page-285 apparent death]], as he did everything that day to live up to the standard he saw in his "mother", Mina.
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->'''Eightfold:''' First thing you do when yer outta [spirit trance] is help Max out, 'kay?\\
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* We get introduced to Max's family, with the implication that the mother's not in the picture anymore: [[http://www.paranatural.net/comic/chapter-1-page-7 "There. Now the whole family's here."]]
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* We get introduced to Max's family, with the implication that [[MissingMom the mother's not in the picture anymore: anymore]]: [[http://www.paranatural.net/comic/chapter-1-page-7 "There. Now the whole family's here."]]
