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* Richard and Penny's strained relationship with their family and each other. Richard is trying to distance himself from a father who couldn't care less about what he wants and a mother with a bad habit for guilt-tripping, and Penny resents all three of them for it; her parents for treating her as their backup son, and Richard for constantly bailing on her.
* Richard and Penny's strained relationship with their family and each other. Richard is trying to distance himself from a father who couldn't care less about what he wants and a mother with a bad habit for guilt-tripping, and Penny resents all three of them for it; her parents for treating her as their backup son, and Richard for constantly bailing on her.
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* Dr. Gwen Burger getting to briefly reunite with her son after being missing for three years... and not only does toddler Ed not recognize her current form, he's outright afraid of her. Then to make it worse, she admits that he wouldn't recognize her real form anyways.
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* Dr. Gwen Burger getting to briefly reunite with her son after being missing for three years... and not only does toddler Ed not recognize her current form, he's outright afraid of her. Then to make it worse, she admits that he wouldn't recognize her real form anyways.
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'''Isabel:''' ...What about you?\\
'''Eightfold:''' Heehee. [[WhamLine Sorry,]] [[HeroicSacrifice Isabel.]]
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->'''Isabel:''' No one- You never asked...you never cared how I felt!! We all got hurt! We're all dealing with it, so just let me...! Just! Stop picking at the scab!!
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->'''Isabel:''' No one- You never asked...you never cared how I felt!! We all got hurt! We're all dealing with it, so just let me...! Just! Stop picking at the scab!!
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* We get introduced to Max's family, with the implication that the mother's not in the picture anymore: [[http://www.paranatural.net/comic/chapter-1-page-7
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* PJ gets introduced, and it's clear he has a bit of baggage. He barely has any self-confidence (exemplified as he can barely interact with the world, as ghosts need to feel like they should be able to in order to do so) and died when he was a child, and his response to Max's question of how long he's been dead is "Too long". Due to his nature as a ghost, he's also doomed to forget who he is after a while and fade away.
* Max [[http://www.paranatural.net/comic/chapter-2-page-9 confirms that his mother has been dead for five years.]] He reluctantly describes her death as "sudden and grisly" and clearly isn't over it.
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* [[http://www.paranatural.net/index.php?id=338 While the conversation keeps the usual quirky humor,]] [[http://www.paranatural.net/index.php?id=339 the potential gap created between Isaac and Max is almost painful to watch]], especially since we know from earlier that Isaac is a bit on the paranoid side and sees this as a betrayal of sorts, while Max only lashes out at what he perceives as unwarranted hostiliy towards both him and Isabel as he doesn't know the whole story.
* Cody's expression about being hit by a possessed Jeff in hitball counts. Cody had been standing up for Jeff the entire series as his best friend, especially during the hitball game; seeing him slowly realize he's been hit and walk off with a depressed look on his face is almost too much to watch. What's even worse is that Cody doesn't know about specters or Jeff being possessed, so Jeff likely isn't going to know what he did when Hijack leaves, and Cody won't know about what made Jeff hit him.
* Cody's expression about being hit by a possessed Jeff in hitball counts. Cody had been standing up for Jeff the entire series as his best friend, especially during the hitball game; seeing him slowly realize he's been hit and walk off with a depressed look on his face is almost too much to watch. What's even worse is that Cody doesn't know about specters or Jeff being possessed, so Jeff likely isn't going to know what he did when Hijack leaves, and Cody won't know about what made Jeff hit him.
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* [[http://www.paranatural.net/index.php?id=338 While the conversation keeps the usual quirky humor,]] [[http://www.paranatural.net/index.php?id=339 the potential gap created between Isaac and Max is almost painful to watch]], especially since we know from earlier that Isaac is a bit on the paranoid side and sees this as a betrayal of sorts, while Max only lashes out at what he perceives as unwarranted hostiliy hostility towards both him and Isabel as he doesn't know the whole story.
* Cody's expression about being hit by a possessed Jeff in hitball counts. Cody had been standing up for Jeff the entire series as his best friend, especially during the hitball game; seeing him slowly realize he's been hit and walk off with a depressed look on his face is almost too much to watch. What's even worse is that Cody doesn't know about specters or Jeff being possessed, so Jeff likely isn't going to know what he did when Hijack leaves, and Cody won't know about what made Jeff hit him.
* Cody's expression about being hit by a possessed Jeff in hitball counts. Cody had been standing up for Jeff the entire series as his best friend, especially during the hitball game; seeing him slowly realize he's been hit and walk off with a depressed look on his face is almost too much to watch.
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* [[http://www.paranatural.net/comic/chapter-5-page-289 Isabel's grandfather gave Flipflop to her as a test to make her strong enough to not rely on spirits, saying that Flipflop was "useless".]] Given that Flipflop has self-esteem and implied abuse issues and Isabel lost a fairly close spirit friend/partner the day before, this comes off as incredibly callous on Grandfather Guerra's end.
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* [[http://www.paranatural.net/index.php?id=179 From Chapter 4, page 22]], PJ suggests if it was him he'd probably just told Max's father about the juvenile burglars, then kind of loses his train of thought when he realizes it would have been his father. If he was Max. Which suggests that he has probably witnessed his father grow old and die or move away, and also that he envies Max for still having a family.
* [[http://www.paranatural.net/index.php?id=210 From Chapter 4, page 53]], which starts out feeling different from the other pages right off the bat, with PJ saying "You must think I'm pretty boring, huh?" Then it gets gradually more depressing until the last few lines of the page.
* [[http://www.paranatural.net/index.php?id=179 From Chapter 4, page 22]], PJ suggests if it was him he'd probably just told Max's father about the juvenile burglars, then kind of loses his train of thought when he realizes it would have been his father. If he was Max. Which suggests that he has probably witnessed his father grow old and die or move away, and also that he envies Max for still having a family.
* [[http://www.paranatural.net/index.php?id=210 From Chapter 4, page 53]], which starts out feeling different from the other pages right off the bat, with PJ saying "You must think I'm pretty boring, huh?" Then it gets gradually more depressing until the last few lines of the page.
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* [[http://www.paranatural.net/index.php?id=179 net/comic/chapter-4-page-22 From Chapter 4, page 22]], PJ suggests if it was him he'd probably just told Max's father about the juvenile burglars, then kind of loses his train of thought when he realizes it would have been his father. If he was Max. Which suggests that he has probably witnessed his father grow old and die or move away, and also that he envies Max for still having a family.
* [[http://www.paranatural.net/index.php?id=210 net/comic/chapter-4-page-53 From Chapter 4, page 53]], which starts out feeling different from the other pages right off the bat, with PJ saying "You must think I'm pretty boring, huh?" Then it gets gradually more depressing until the last few lines of the page.page:
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* [[http://www.paranatural.net/index.php?id=179 From Chapter 4, page 22]], PJ suggests if it was him he'd probably just told Max's fathers father about the juvenile burglars, then kind of loses his train of thought when he realizes it would have been his father. If he was Max. Which suggests that he has probably witnessed his father grow old and die or move away, and also that he envies Max for still having a family.
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