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* Upon learning that everybody assumed Mallow was worried for Gladion was because ''she had a crush on him'', she questions the DoubleStandard and asks what would they think if ''she'' got onto the Train. While Kiawe and Sophocles have good answers (and Sophocles worries if the incident with Abe might have caused ''another'' Train pickup if Mallow didn't meet Oruguru), Lana makes a joke about elopement. Unlike most times, Mallow is '''not''' in the mood for a joke. And when Lillie points out this is Mallow's fault for not being clear about what's going on...well, Mallow snapping is an understatement.
-->'''Mallow:''' You ''refused'' to listen to me, Lillie! You immediately went, 'Well now my brother knows how it feels to be in a bad place so I don't have to feel a single ounce of pity on him'! At least Gladion showed ''concern'' for you and did all he could to try and protect you even if he made very bad communication errors! But you. DID. NOT. CARE. THAT HE COULD HAVE BEEN '''''GONE FOREVER'''''! [[UnwittingInstigatorOfDoom AND ALL BECAUSE OF A STUPID BOUQUET]]!\\

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* Upon learning that everybody assumed Mallow was worried for Gladion was because ''she had a crush on him'', she questions the DoubleStandard and asks what would they think if ''she'' got onto the Train. While Kiawe and Sophocles have some good answers (and Sophocles worries if the incident with Abe might have caused ''another'' Train pickup if Mallow didn't meet Oruguru), Lana makes a joke about elopement.Mallow going to elope. Unlike most times, Mallow is '''not''' in the mood for a joke. And when Lillie points out this is Mallow's fault for not being clear about what's going on...well, Mallow snapping [[RageBreakingPoint snapping]] is an understatement.
-->'''Mallow:''' You ''refused'' to listen to me, Lillie! You immediately went, 'Well now my brother knows how it feels to be in a bad place so I don't have to feel a single ounce of pity on him'! At least Gladion showed ''concern'' for you and did all he could to try and protect you even if he made very bad communication errors! But you. [[PunctuatedForEmphasis DID. NOT. CARE. ]] THAT HE COULD HAVE BEEN '''''GONE FOREVER'''''! [[UnwittingInstigatorOfDoom AND ALL BECAUSE OF A STUPID BOUQUET]]!\\



** Lana comes to comfort Mallow and point out that Mallow could've just been honest about it all and they'd believe her, but Mallow herself wanted to doubt it since it was just too ridiculous to believe. What's more, Mallow is in tears and fear for Tuba's safety...while unaware that Tuba is with the leaders of the Apex at this moment.

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** Lana comes to comfort Mallow and point out that Mallow could've just been honest about it all and they'd believe her, but Mallow herself wanted to doubt it since it was just too ridiculous to believe. And no matter what happened, there was nothing they could've done to save Gladion. What's more, Mallow is in tears and fear for Tuba's safety...while unaware that Tuba is with the leaders of the Apex at this moment.



** The flashback reveals Paul realizing just what he did when he heard Sean cry for someone to save him. Even worse, it's implied that the paralysis came ''from Electivire's Thunder Punch''. Paul only has time to extend his hand out before he sees Sean drown. Even Electivire is horrified, especially since Paul is afraid that ''Electivire will be put down'' for causing this.

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** The flashback reveals Paul realizing just what he did when he heard Sean cry for someone to save him.him, originally assuming it was just a ploy from Sean to drop his defenses. Even worse, it's implied that the paralysis came ''from Electivire's Thunder Punch''. Paul only has time to extend his hand out before he sees Sean drown.drown and his number rising exponentially. Even Electivire is horrified, especially since Paul is afraid that ''Electivire will be put down'' for causing this.



** Before looking into his memories, Chloe shows NoSympathy towards Paul, calling him out for mistreating Chimchar and so many other Pokémon, ''to the point Saint Ash calls her out on it''. The reason this is said is because of what it implies: that despite all the progress she made, Chloe's still spiteful enough to lambast someone she's not only supposed to ''help'', but who has been ''broken beyond belief''.
*** The memory of a younger Paul having at his parents' funeral is heartbreaking as Reggie vows to be strong to protect them. Fans of the anime remember that Reggie stopped battling after his loss to Brandon...
*** How big is Paul's number? '''420007''', meaning that he'll never see his brother again ''for years'' compared to Alain at 131 and Chloe, who's just a few numbers short returning.

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** Before looking into his memories, Chloe shows absolutely NoSympathy towards Paul, calling him out for mistreating Chimchar and so many other Pokémon, ''to being completely apathetic to others and kicking them while they are down, and deserving to have ''no one'' love him. ''To the point Saint Ash calls her out on it''. The reason this is said is because of what it implies: that despite all the progress she made, Chloe's still spiteful enough to lambast someone she's not only supposed to ''help'', but who has been ''broken beyond belief''.
*** The memory of a younger Paul having at his parents' funeral is heartbreaking as Reggie vows to be strong to protect them. Fans of the anime remember that Reggie stopped battling after his single loss to Brandon...
*** How big is Paul's number? '''420007''', '''42007''', meaning that he'll never see his brother again ''for years'' compared to Alain at 131 and Chloe, who's just a few numbers short returning.



** When Goh revisits the day he dropped off that book for Chloe's birthday, it's revealed he never went inside to give it to her and went on the assumption that she was with her friends. She ''wasn't'' because no one wanted to be friends with a "Monster Lover" and he was so obsessed with Mew to not even enter the house to see for himself. Goh breaks down and states that he would've gone celebrate it 100% if he had known. And Zeno believes him.

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** When Goh revisits the day he dropped off that book for Chloe's birthday, it's revealed he never went inside to give it to her and went on the assumption that she was with her friends. She ''wasn't'' because no one wanted to be friends with a "Monster Lover" and he was so obsessed with Mew to not even enter ''enter'' the house to see for himself. Goh breaks down and states that he would've gone and celebrate it 100% if he had known. And Zeno believes him.

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* This chapter completes Grace's TraumaCongaLine by having her reveal to the children of the Apex how she was wrong, and how they're now stuck on the Train for another year at the very least thanks to said lies. Watching the children breakdown afterwards is ''heartbreaking''.

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* Sean explaining how he is going to be reincarnated and forget about his mother, and that the only reason he got on the Train was because he couldn't perform a high-dive. He goes and forgives Paul because Paul at least ''tried'' to save him and that this was all Sean's fault for trying to attack Electivire. But for Grace? He can't forgive her, even though she did plenty good it doesn't erase how much damage she did corrupting him and the Apex.
* This chapter completes Grace's TraumaCongaLine by having her reveal to the children of the Apex how she was wrong, and how they're now stuck on the Train for another year at the very least ''least'' thanks to said lies.lies and how they have harmed innocent deniznes for "glow-in-the dark" tattoos. Watching the children breakdown afterwards is ''heartbreaking''.



-->'''Alex:''' Goodbye Hop...''(as a tear hits is flashlight)''...Thank you.\\
'''Hop:''' No....ALEX, NO!!!\\
'''Alex:''' (drags himself and Henry into Toluca Lake, and all that floats up is his flashlight.)''\\

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-->'''Alex:''' Goodbye Hop...''(as ''(smiles as a tear hits is flashlight)''...Thank you.\\
'''Hop:''' No....[[BigNo ALEX, NO!!!\\
NO!!!]]\\
'''Alex:''' (drags ''(drags himself and Henry into Toluca Lake, and all that floats up is his flashlight.)''\\



* Hop waves farwell to Alex and Josh's ghosts as he leaves while Paul breaks down in tears after finally leaving that hellhole.

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* Hop waves farwell farewell to Alex and Josh's ghosts as he leaves while Paul breaks down in tears after finally leaving that hellhole.



* Samantha gets confirmation of Simon's death by Grace, resulting in a brief argument about who was more responsible for how he turned out before they both run out of steam.
* Goh is rescued from the Psy-cage and informed that Chloe's returned home. Great news, right? Except running through Goh's head is every condemnation he's heard about how everything goes his way without him even trying...and he can still hear the train whistle fast approaching.

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* Samantha gets confirmation of Simon's death by Grace, resulting in a brief argument about who was more responsible for how he turned out before they both run out of steam.
steam and realize they're ''both'' at fault.
** It's heavily implied that Samantha had to survive on her own and just wanted love most of all when she saw all the other cats have fulfilling lives with passengers.
* Goh is rescued from the Psy-cage and informed that Chloe's returned home. Great news, right? Except running through Goh's head is every condemnation he's heard about how everything goes his way without him even trying...and he can still hear the train whistle fast approaching. The worst part is that none of this is from Zeno; this is all Goh's thoughts.
** Goh getting a hug from his parents and notes that he can't remember a time that they actually hugged him so tight.



** When Gard gives her a new softball bat, as Silver Night got destroyed in Arc 2, she finally breaks down. All she wanted was ''friends'' and to have parties and all of Class 5-E did was hate her just for being so different. Even they admit that they never ''hated'' her as it was them foolishly going along with Sara's manipulations.
** Akemi still blames herself for everything and thinks that it's her fault that the school is closing, a class is traumatized and ''Vermillion City is a ghost town''.
* Mr. Bradbury and Miss April glumly talk about how the school is completely ruined now and how unfair the DoubleStandard hit them for their mistakes. The only hope is that Mr. Bradbury realized his mistakes over Professor Cerise's parenting and is going to help Miss April get into college.
* In comparison to Chloe, Yeardley only has his sister and mother showing concern for him. And his father gave him ''orange lilies'' as a middle finger.



* Tuba's funeral is just as tearjerking as in canon.

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* Tuba's funeral is just as tearjerking as in canon.canon with the main difference is that Amelia (Hazel's true mother) being there.
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* Samantha gets confirmation of Simon's death by Grace, resulting in a brief argument about who was more responsible for how he turned out before they both run out of steam.
* Goh is rescued from the Psy-cage and informed that Chloe's returned home. Great news, right? Except running through Goh's head is every condemnation he's heard about how everything goes his way without him even trying...and he can still hear the train whistle fast approaching.
* Chloe has, for all intents and purposes, everything she always wanted: her family's attention, classmates trying to be her friend...and it came at such a high cost to everyone that it feels like a hollow victory to her.
* Paul and Hop have brief conversations with pictures of their loved ones, with Paul confessing to his role in Sean's death and Hop trying to figure out how he feels about Alex, neither of them feeling like they can talk to their real brothers just yet.
* Tuba's funeral is just as tearjerking as in canon.
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*** How big is Paul's number? '''420007''', meaning that he'll never see his brother again ''for years'' compared to Alain at 131 and Chloe about an epiphany short of returning.

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*** How big is Paul's number? '''420007''', meaning that he'll never see his brother again ''for years'' compared to Alain at 131 and Chloe about an epiphany Chloe, who's just a few numbers short of returning.



* Akemi still blames herself for Chloe's disappearance; all she had to do was ''not'' talk about Ash and talk about Chloe and this story may never have happened.
* Yeardley is broken; he lost respect, a future, his friends and now his parents are divorcing.

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* Akemi still blames herself for Chloe's disappearance; all she had to do was ''not'' talk about Ash and talk about focus on Chloe and this story may never have happened.
* Yeardley is broken; he he's lost respect, a future, his friends and now his parents are divorcing.



* Despite everything Chloe did on the Train, her self-loathing and hatred of herself manifests as she realizes that she ''did'' have love and support but rejected it because it was both too late and not the kind she wanted. She admits that when Paul, Hop and Alain arrive home, they'll be praised. But she? After everything that happened, she'll be just like where she started: ignored, hated, spat upon and with the added bonus of what Parker did causing even more problems. And why all of this? ''Because she wasn't a Pokémon trainer and didn't love Pokémon like others did.'' It even gets to the point where she [[ItsAllMyFault blames herself for Parker's rampage back home]], believing that [[CouldveAvoidedThisPlot if she had just opened up about her issues or simply become a Pokémon trainer, none of this would ever happened.]]

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* Despite everything Chloe did on the Train, her self-loathing and hatred of herself manifests as she realizes that she ''did'' have love and support but rejected it because it was both too late and not the kind she wanted. She admits that when Paul, Hop and Alain arrive home, they'll be praised. But she? After everything that happened, she'll be just like where she started: ignored, hated, spat upon and with the added bonus of what Parker did causing even more problems. And why all of this? ''Because she wasn't a Pokémon trainer and didn't love Pokémon like others did.'' It even gets to the point where she [[ItsAllMyFault blames herself for Parker's rampage back home]], believing that [[CouldveAvoidedThisPlot [[CouldHaveAvoidedThisPlot if she had just opened up about her issues or simply become a Pokémon trainer, none of this would ever happened.]]
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* Despite everything Chloe did on the Train, her self-loathing and hatred of herself manifests as she realizes that she ''did'' have love and support but rejected it because it was both too late and not the kind she wanted. She admits that when Paul, Hop and Alain arrive home, they'll be praised. But she? After everything that happened, she'll be just like where she started: ignored, hated, spat upon and with the added bonus of what Parker did causing even more problems. And why all of this? ''Because she wasn't a Pokémon trainer and didn't love Pokémon like others did.''

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* Despite everything Chloe did on the Train, her self-loathing and hatred of herself manifests as she realizes that she ''did'' have love and support but rejected it because it was both too late and not the kind she wanted. She admits that when Paul, Hop and Alain arrive home, they'll be praised. But she? After everything that happened, she'll be just like where she started: ignored, hated, spat upon and with the added bonus of what Parker did causing even more problems. And why all of this? ''Because she wasn't a Pokémon trainer and didn't love Pokémon like others did.'''' It even gets to the point where she [[ItsAllMyFault blames herself for Parker's rampage back home]], believing that [[CouldveAvoidedThisPlot if she had just opened up about her issues or simply become a Pokémon trainer, none of this would ever happened.]]



* Yeardley notes that while no one will be evil enough to enjoy kids being shot, he and all of Class 5-E are loathed by all of Vermillion City. Yeardley himself does not think anyone would mourn him; not his father, who is implied to be abusive to him, nor his older sister in college who made her anger towards him known at the trial, whom he thinks will continue being ‘Miss Perfect’ in their father’s eyes. The only ones who will likely mourn him would be his mother and younger sister.

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* Yeardley notes that while no one will be evil enough to enjoy kids being shot, he and all of Class 5-E are loathed hated by all of Vermillion City. Yeardley himself does not think anyone thinks nobody would mourn him; not his father, who is implied to be abusive to him, nor his older sister in college who made her anger towards him known at the trial, and whom he thinks will continue being ‘Miss Perfect’ in their father’s eyes. The only ones who will would likely mourn still give a damn about him would be are his mother and younger sister.

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*** How big is Paul's number? '''420007''', meaning that he'll never see his brother again ''for years'' compared to Alain at 131 and Chloe about an epiphany short of returning.



-->'''Parker:''' Goodbye, Zeno...
** When Goh revisits the day he dropped off that book for Chloe's birthday, it's revealed he never went inside to give it to her and went on the assumption that she was with her friends. She ''wasn't'' because no one wanted to be friends with a "Monster Lover" and he was so obsessed with Mew. Goh breaks down and states that he would've gone celebrate it 100% if he had known. And Zeno believes him.

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-->'''Parker:''' ''(waving goodbye)'' Goodbye, Zeno...
** When Goh revisits the day he dropped off that book for Chloe's birthday, it's revealed he never went inside to give it to her and went on the assumption that she was with her friends. She ''wasn't'' because no one wanted to be friends with a "Monster Lover" and he was so obsessed with Mew.Mew to not even enter the house to see for himself. Goh breaks down and states that he would've gone celebrate it 100% if he had known. And Zeno believes him.



* Chloe finally saying goodbye to the train and everyone on it.

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* Alex stabs Henry with a spear and envelops him in a hug, planning on drowning the two of them in Toluca Lake. Before he does the deed, he says a farewell to Hop, seeing Josh in the boy.
-->'''Alex:''' Goodbye Hop...''(as a tear hits is flashlight)''...Thank you.\\
'''Hop:''' No....ALEX, NO!!!\\
'''Alex:''' (drags himself and Henry into Toluca Lake, and all that floats up is his flashlight.)''\\
'''Hop:''' ''(takes the flashlight into his hands and screams into Dubwool)''
* Grace tells all of the Apex that they must leave because there's nothing they can do to stop Walter and they can't risk their only chance to finally leave the train. As they leave, Lucy just says goodbye.
** The aftermath; Grace admits that she did horrible and that Chloe shouldn't be killing Walter -- before Chloe gives a look to remind Grace of her sins -- before Grace backpedals. She then questions if ''anyone'' will ever forgive her and that she'll probably head to Maccadams to get drunk after everything that happened.
* Hop waves farwell to Alex and Josh's ghosts as he leaves while Paul breaks down in tears after finally leaving that hellhole.
* Chloe finally saying goodbye to the train and everyone on it. She thanks Atticus for being with her since the beginning, thanks Lexi for carrying her, makes Hazel an honorary member of the Red Lotus Quarto and Amelia ''hugs the girl'' and tells Chloe to never come back to the Train because there's so much waiting for her.
** Before Chloe initially leaves for home, Sad-One, like he did in Book 1, asks for a hug. Chloe rushes back to everyone -- Red Lotus members, Hazel, One-One and the Pokémon Trainers -- with tears in her eyes as she hugs them all.
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* Yeardley notes that while no one will be evil enough to enjoy kids be shot, he and all of Class 5-E are loathed by all of Vermillion City. Yeardley himself does not think anyone would mourn him; not his father, who is implied to be abusive to him, nor his older sister in college who made her anger towards him known at the trial, whom he thinks will continue being ‘Miss Perfect’ in their father’s eyes. The only ones who will likely mourn him would be his mother and younger sister.

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* Yeardley notes that while no one will be evil enough to enjoy kids be being shot, he and all of Class 5-E are loathed by all of Vermillion City. Yeardley himself does not think anyone would mourn him; not his father, who is implied to be abusive to him, nor his older sister in college who made her anger towards him known at the trial, whom he thinks will continue being ‘Miss Perfect’ in their father’s eyes. The only ones who will likely mourn him would be his mother and younger sister.
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* Yeardley Lobelia notes that while no one will be evil enough to enjoy kids be shoot, he and the whole Class 5-B were loathed by all of Vermillion City. Yeardley himself does not think anyone would mourn him, not his father, who implied to be abusive to him, not his older sister in college who made her anger towards him know at the trail, who he thinks will move on being the apple in there father eyes. The only ones who will likely mourn him would be his mother and younger sister.

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* Yeardley Lobelia notes that while no one will be evil enough to enjoy kids be shoot, shot, he and the whole all of Class 5-B were 5-E are loathed by all of Vermillion City. Yeardley himself does not think anyone would mourn him, him; not his father, who is implied to be abusive to him, not nor his older sister in college who made her anger towards him know known at the trail, who trial, whom he thinks will move on continue being the apple ‘Miss Perfect’ in there father their father’s eyes. The only ones who will likely mourn him would be his mother and younger sister.
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* Yeardley Lobelia notes that while no one will be evil enough to enjoy kids be shoot, he and the whole Class 5-B were loathed by all of Vermillion City. Yeardley himself does not think anyone would mourn him, not his father, who implied to be abusive to him, not his older sister in college who made her anger towards him know at the trail, who he thinks will move on being the apple in there father eyes. The only ones who will likely mourn him would be his mother and younger sister.
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!!Cradle of Forest / The Fog Car Pt 9 (Your Promise is Broken)
* Chloe finally saying goodbye to the train and everyone on it.
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!! True / The Fog Car Pt 8 (This Pain Will Last Forever)
* This chapter completes Grace's TraumaCongaLine by having her reveal to the children of the Apex how she was wrong, and how they're now stuck on the Train for another year at the very least thanks to said lies. Watching the children breakdown afterwards is ''heartbreaking''.
* Hazel can't help but [[MeaningfulLook look at Grace with sympathy]] after the woman is left with nothing.
* After apologizing to the three Trainers for being InnocentlyInsensitive, Chloe decides to speak with Grace. The two talk about how [[NotSoDifferent their inability to talk things out brought them to ruin]], and the ObliviousGuiltSlinging Grace throws at Chloe is rather disheartening too.

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** Simon ''murders Chloe and Tuba by making them plummet to their deaths''. When Atticus reveals that he has the Pendent of Life, Tuba tells him to save Chloe, have her give a message to Mallow, and says goodbye to Hazel, giving her her satchel and singing her lullaby one last time.

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** * When Paul reunites with his Pokémon, he apologizes for being such a prick. However he is quickly hugged by everyone and he just ''bursts into tears'' at the reaction.
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Simon ''murders Chloe and Tuba by making them plummet to their deaths''. When Atticus reveals that he has the Pendent of Life, Tuba tells him to save Chloe, have her give a message to Mallow, and says goodbye to Hazel, giving her her satchel and singing her lullaby one last time.


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** In return, it takes the Trainers to help her break out of that toxic mindset and bias. When it finally sinks in, she's crying on why no one told her this lesson ''sooner'' and that she could've been fine as she was if everyone just left her alone and stopped pressing her into something she hated.
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** The Apex shows ''zero empathy'' on the deaths that happened. Toby says that Hazel will have better friends that aren't a Null and Tiffany said that Chloe '''deserved to die''' for ruining their fun. Amelia is so in the right to knock that child and Grace in the head with her shotgun and tell them that this is their fault and they have no hearts.


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* Simon dies after being plunged into Toluca Lake by Sean and only Grace is the one crying and mourning his death.
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** Simon ''murders Chloe and Tuba by making them plummet to their deaths''. When Atticus reveals that he has the Pendent of Life, Tuba tells him to save Chloe, have her give a message to Mallow, and says goodbye to Hazel, giving her her satchel and singing her lullaby one last time.
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* Despite everything Chloe did on the Train, her self-loathing and hatred of herself manifests as she realizes that she ''did'' have love and support but rejected it because it was both too late and not the kind she wanted. She admits that when Paul, Hop and Alain arrive home, they'll be praised. But she? After everything that happened, she'll be just like where she started: ignored, hated, spat upon and with the added bonus of what Parker did causing even more problems. And why all of this? ''Because she wasn't a Pokémon trainer and didn't love Pokémon like others did.''
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!!Overdose Delusion / The Fog Car Pt 7 (Your Power is Over)
* "Tonight, someone dies". This chapter wasn't kidding.
** Simon ''murders Chloe and Tuba by making them plummet to their deaths''.

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*** The memory of a younger Paul having at his parents' funeral is heartbreaking as Reggie vows to be strong to protect them. Fans of the anime remember that Reggie stopped battling after his loss to Brandon...



* As if Goh's problems can get any worse, he's kidnapped in exchange for his parents to make a new Mew tracker since the kidnapper is trying to use it to get a Shiny Mew...'' and she's already critically injured Mew themselves'' for it.

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** When Goh revisits the day he dropped off that book for Chloe's birthday, it's revealed he never went inside to give it to her and went on the assumption that she was with her friends. She ''wasn't'' because no one wanted to be friends with a "Monster Lover" and he was so obsessed with Mew. Goh breaks down and states that he would've gone celebrate it 100% if he had known. And Zeno believes him.
** Zeno's ultimate piece of advice: both Goh and Chloe had problems communicating and it hurt them in the end. Now they both have to work on themselves if they want any progress to be made.
* Akemi still blames herself for Chloe's disappearance; all she had to do was ''not'' talk about Ash and talk about Chloe and this story may never have happened.
* Yeardley is broken; he lost respect, a future, his friends and now his parents are divorcing.


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* Without Chloe gone on the Train, Goh never searched for her, and thus no Trip and no one knows about the Infinity Train until Chloe Prime returns, meaning that her work to have Paul, Hop and Alain's loved ones know about what's going on is for ''nothing''.
* Chloe Prime is all alone, in a world that doesn't remember her and feeling angry and hurt when Renji calls out his frustration over Chloe Alter's whining and bitching.

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* As if Goh's problems can get any worse, he's kidnapped in exchange for his parents to make a new Mew tracker since the kidnapper is trying to use it to get a Shiny Mew...''and she's already critically injured Mew themselves'' for it.
* After Zeno arrives to help Parker make a detailed image of Goh's kidnapper, Parker knows that his wish for "Good things to last" has ended, meaning that Zeno is about to disappear for good.

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* As if Goh's problems can get any worse, he's kidnapped in exchange for his parents to make a new Mew tracker since the kidnapper is trying to use it to get a Shiny Mew...''and '' and she's already critically injured Mew themselves'' for it.
* After Zeno arrives to help Parker make a detailed image of Goh's kidnapper, Parker knows that his wish for "Good things to last" has ended, meaning that Zeno is about to disappear for good. Despite what he put both of them through, neither Parker nor Goh is that happy to see him go.



* Yes even an ''April Fool's Joke'' manages to wring out some tears.

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* Yes even an ''April Fool's Joke'' manages to wring out some tears. The biggest one is when Chloe gets to relive Goh's worst moment, watching him give up all hope and boarding the train while she begs him to stop and tries to tell him it'll be okay...
* Goh on the train is all but dead inside. The bartender of the car he walks into notes that he is way too young to have such an empty look in his eyes.
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* Yes even an ''April Fool's Joke'' manages to wring out some tears.
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!!Merciless / The Fog Car Pt 6
* As if Goh's problems can get any worse, he's kidnapped in exchange for his parents to make a new Mew tracker since the kidnapper is trying to use it to get a Shiny Mew...''and she's already critically injured Mew themselves'' for it.
* After Zeno arrives to help Parker make a detailed image of Goh's kidnapper, Parker knows that his wish for "Good things to last" has ended, meaning that Zeno is about to disappear for good.
-->'''Parker:''' Goodbye, Zeno...
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** Back in the Pokémon World, Goh is still as miserable as ever: Zeno keep egging him for his previous mistakes, and the person he seeing about his medical leave turns out to be less well-intentioned than expected...

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** Back in the Pokémon World, Goh is still as miserable as ever: Zeno keep egging him for his previous mistakes, and the person he he's seeing about his medical leave turns out to be less well-intentioned than expected...
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** Hazel just keeps drawing the short end of the stick: not only does she become terrified as the apartment goes haywire, but she finds out she's a Denizen and not a Passenger, not only from the last person she should hear from, but during practically ''the worst time possible''.
** Back in the Pokémon World, Goh is still as miserable as ever: not only does Zeno keep egging him for his previous mistakes, but the person he sees to see about his medical leave turns out to be less well intentioned than expected...

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** Hazel just keeps drawing the short end of the stick: not only does she become becomes terrified as the apartment goes haywire, but and then she finds out she's a Denizen and not a Passenger, not only from the last person she should hear from, but during practically ''the worst time possible''.
** Back in the Pokémon World, Goh is still as miserable as ever: not only does Zeno keep egging him for his previous mistakes, but and the person he sees to see seeing about his medical leave turns out to be less well intentioned well-intentioned than expected...

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* The focus on this chapter are on Dream and Despair, ''especially'' Despair, and how the two hve suffered because of their actions.

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* The focus on this chapter are on Dream and Despair, ''especially'' Despair, and how the two hve have suffered because of their actions.actions.
** Chloe's reaction to seeing Saint Ash. After spending ''so much time'' learning to not see Trainers, especially Ash, as grandiose perfect beings, Saint Ash comes into view and brings back those long repressed memories, ''causing Chloe's number to rise and for her to nearly become Lady Destiny''.
** Before looking into his memories, Chloe shows NoSympathy towards Paul, calling him out for mistreating Chimchar and so many other Pokémon, ''to the point Saint Ash calls her out on it''. The reason this is said is because of what it implies: that despite all the progress she made, Chloe's still spiteful enough to lambast someone she's not only supposed to ''help'', but who has been ''broken beyond belief''.
** Hazel just keeps drawing the short end of the stick: not only does she become terrified as the apartment goes haywire, but she finds out she's a Denizen and not a Passenger, not only from the last person she should hear from, but during practically ''the worst time possible''.
** Back in the Pokémon World, Goh is still as miserable as ever: not only does Zeno keep egging him for his previous mistakes, but the person he sees to see about his medical leave turns out to be less well intentioned than expected...
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!!Behind the Walls of Sleep / The Fog Car Pt 5 (I Walk Inside Your Circle)
* The focus on this chapter are on Dream and Despair, ''especially'' Despair, and how the two hve suffered because of their actions.
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* Amelia boasts that with how low Chloe's number is, all she has to do is get it to 0 and the Flauros is delayed for a while. But Chloe refuses to go home, not when she promised to get Hop, Paul and Alain out. Amelia and Lexi ''beg'' the girl to just admit that she has to leave in the hopes of saving the Apex from a horrible fate.
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* Even after it's been cleared that Paul killed Sean in self-defense, he honestly doesn't deserve redemption.

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** Grace then has an even worse epiphany; she has to reveal this to the Apex and ''none of them'' are going to be happy at how they gleefully became a bunch of serial killers. Amelia rightfully chews her out for everything that's happening, up to and including trying to get Hazel involved.


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* Alain is muttering how cold he is, begging for someone to hold him and looking so ''pitiful''.
* Even after it's been cleared that Paul killed Sean in self-defense, he honestly doesn't deserve redemption.
-->'''Paul:''' I...am...Despair. I belong here.
** The flashback reveals Paul realizing just what he did when he heard Sean cry for someone to save him. Even worse, it's implied that the paralysis came ''from Electivire's Thunder Punch''. Paul only has time to extend his hand out before he sees Sean drown. Even Electivire is horrified, especially since Paul is afraid that ''Electivire will be put down'' for causing this.
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!!Shot Down in Flames / The Fog Car Pt 4 (Don't Fight Me, Ignite Me)
* Grace learns that all of the 'Nulls' she killed were once human. She [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone feels her entire existence and mentality crash down in utter horror from it]].
* Hop's number has gone up to ''1080'' because of everything in Silent Hill. To his horror he's informed it will now probably take a year ''at minimum'' to get it down and off the Train and to see Leon again.
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!!Mr. JOY / The Fog Car Pt 3 (Things That I Can't Remember)
* Chloe's time in the haunted house is both terrifying and sad as it's a reminder of all the pain she put everyone through because her inability to tell everyone what was going on with her, all while Hop is oblivious and thinks that she should only think of herself instead of others.
* As Ash and Trip are staring at the stars, Ash's phone is beeping with notifications.
** Leon talks to Sonia about how he's been worried sick for months.
** Mairin finally learns about what happened to Alain from Professor Sycamore and shouts that she'll go save him. Professor Sycamore replies that it's not possible for her to do so. Mairin just bursts into tears, blaming herself that it's because Chespie got hurt that it spiraled into this madness.
** Reggie is holding onto Paul's Gastrodon for comfort -- the Pokémon that ''could've prevented so much tragedy on Paul's end if it was on him'' -- and begs for his little brother to return safe and sound. Which leads to...
* Simon attacking Paul and using the electrical properties of his shoes to torture the once proud Sinnoh Trainer.
* Lexi and Amelia are horrified to learn what the Cage of Flauros will cause and will do ''anything'' they can to protect Chloe up to and including Amelia ''killing Hop'' to deprive the Cage one of its components.
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* Paul is begging to himself that trusting Hop to help deliver his Pokémon to Ash or Reggie will work. Then Walter drags him away and he reverts back into Despair, uttering a mantra that will wipe out anything that's left of him.
-->“I am Despair. I serve Death. I am ''Despair''. I serve Death. ''I'' am Despair. I serve Death. I ''am'' Despair. I serve Death.”
* Wooloo is terrified and all but begging Chloe to save Hop. Looking into Wooloo's soul reveals how he's ''seen'' Hop go mad and that there's nothing he can do to stop it.

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