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* Goh does not take learning of Chloe in Silent Hill well, blaming himself, wanting to find Celebi to go back in time to put some Poké balls into her backpack or just preventing him from saying the phrase that tipped her over the edge. But Ash replies that none of these would work and that all they can do is just ''wait'' for her to arrive...all while knowing that Goh is going to enter the Train sooner or later.
* Grace and Simon arguing with the Quarto, particularly when Simon mocks Chloe for not being loved by her parents nor having any friends. In their apartment, Chloe is tugging at her hair and dropping to the floor, admitting that everything in Vermillion City can be traced back to two people: Sarah for being a bitch and Chloe for not speaking up for herself.
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!!Ordinary Vanity / The Fog Car Pt 2 (The Power, Believing)

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* Mallow learning about Tuba's situation from Chloe before she starts calling Ash in a panic, afraid for Tuba's life and unsure what to do.
* Parker hates himself for how he unleashed the Unown as he sees multiple futures where Goh would've gotten the hint without [=UnChloe=] getting in the way. He feels so out of place in the juvenile facility since not only is everyone older, their crimes mostly are related to shoplifting, and not terrorizing an entire ''town' with an entity with his older sister's face. His self-confidence has depleted as he feels like, since he's only 5, he feels like no one will believe him or that he can do anything.
** He saw one possible future where Goh decided to tell Deliah about Ash being in a relationship with Trip and [[MamaBear Delia chews him out]] and sets a series of events that gets Goh on the Train...and one week later when Chloe returns, she finds his corpse. Even worse, Parker doesn't find a future where Goh ''doesn't'' get on the Train despite the encouragement from everyone, even from Chloe.
* Chloe sends farewell emails to everyone in case she never returns home alive. She also asks Ash that Goh keep three promises for her, telling him that she'll make it.
* Ash gets the email just after after he and Goh have a successful trip to the Safari Zone. Goh is concerned for Chloe's safety and feels ashamed upon stating that she was weak and helpless.
-->'''Goh:''' I...I thought she’d be helpless...I was so ''wrong'' about her, and now...Now she’s so much better than I could... ever be…what could she think of me now...and she...cooked curry...”

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* Mallow learning [[InternalReveal finally learns]] about Tuba's situation from Chloe before Chloe. But there's nothing she starts can do about it, other than calling Ash in a panic, afraid for Tuba's life her panic.
* Before boarding the Fog Car, Chloe sends some final messages out [[GenreSavvy in case she won't be able to once she enters]]...
and unsure what to do.
* Parker hates himself for how he unleashed the Unown as he sees multiple futures where Goh would've gotten the hint without [=UnChloe=] getting
in the way. He feels so out of place in the juvenile facility since not only is case she doesn't make it out. Her primary concern? Telling everyone older, their not to blame themselves for whatever happens to her, and begging them not to try and avenge her.
--->'''Chloe:''' ''I don't want you barreling onto the train to try and save me or... avenge me. I want you to have good lives at home, the kind of lives you all deserve. I lashed out at everyone, afraid to face myself, and I got myself and others hurt in the process. And for that, I am absolutely sorry.''
* Parker's the youngest resident at the Calla Rehab faculty, surrounded by older kids whose
crimes mostly are related hardly compare to shoplifting, and not terrorizing an entire ''town' with an entity with his older sister's face. His self-confidence has depleted what he unleashed. He's worried that, if any of them turn out to be as he feels like, since he's only 5, he feels like no one cruel as Sara or Yeardley, [[CassandraTruth nobody will believe him him]]... or care enough to intervene, feeling that he can do anything.
''deserves'' to suffer.
** He saw His visions of other futures have shown him that without his intervention, Goh would ''usually'' sort himself out on his own, driving home how [[AllForNothing unnecessary]] his attempt at nightmare therapy was.
** The sole exception? In [[BadFuture
one possible future where reality]], Goh decided to tell Deliah about Ash being in a relationship went through with Trip and his plan to [[ForcedOutOfTheCloset forcibly out Ash to Delia]] with a ''vicious'' hour-long message, expecting her to turn on her son. Delia [[MamaBear Delia chews chewed him out]] out instead]], and sets a series of events that gets Goh he loses everything, ending up on the Train...Train... and returning as a corpse one week later when Chloe returns, she finds his corpse. later.
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Even worse, worse? Parker doesn't find a hasn't found any future where Goh ''doesn't'' get on the Train despite the encouragement from everyone, everyone's efforts to support and encourage him. Not even from Chloe.
* Chloe sends farewell emails to everyone in case she never returns home alive. She also asks Ash that Goh keep three promises for her, telling him that she'll make it.
Chloe's help makes any difference.
* Ash gets the email Chloe's last message just after after he and Goh have a successful trip to the Safari Zone. Goh is concerned for Chloe's safety and feels ashamed upon stating that she was weak and helpless.
-->'''Goh:''' I...I thought she’d be helpless...I was so ''wrong'' about her, and now...Now she’s so much better than I could... ever be…what could she think of me now...and she...cooked curry...
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* Parker hates himself for how he unleashed the Unown as he sees multiple futures where Goh would've gotten the hint without [=UnChloe=] getting in the way. He feels so out of place in the juvenile facility since not only is everyone older, their crimes mostly are related to shoplifting, and not terrorizing an entire ''town' with an entity with his older sister's face. His self-confidence has depleted as he feels like, since he's only 5, he feels like no one will believe him or that he can do anything.
** He saw one possible future where Goh decided to tell Deliah about Ash being in a relationship with Trip and [[MamaBear Delia chews him out]] and sets a series of events that gets Goh on the Train...and one week later when Chloe returns, she finds his corpse. Even worse, Parker doesn't find a future where Goh ''doesn't'' get on the Train despite the encouragement from everyone, even from Chloe.


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* Ash gets the email just after after he and Goh have a successful trip to the Safari Zone. Goh is concerned for Chloe's safety and feels ashamed upon stating that she was weak and helpless.
-->'''Goh:''' I...I thought she’d be helpless...I was so ''wrong'' about her, and now...Now she’s so much better than I could... ever be…what could she think of me now...and she...cooked curry...”

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* Mallow learning about Tuba's situation from Chloe before she starts calling Ash in a panic, afraid for Tuba's life and unsure what to do.
* Chloe sends farewell emails to everyone in case she never returns home alive. She also asks Ash that Goh keep three promises for her, telling him that she'll make it.
* Paul is so pitiful at this point; when he arrives for dinner with the Quarto and Grace and Simon's group, he acts more like a zombie and Walter has to force his chin up to look at everyone.
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* After the confession from The Cat as to her abandoning Simon, Chloe has some reflection on herself: she's no better than the Cat for running away from her problems and Goh. But Atticus, Lexi and Amelia bring up she's done more and is ''doing'' more than Samantha ever chose to do for the past eight years.

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* After the confession from The Cat as to her abandoning Simon, Chloe has some reflection on herself: she's no better than the Cat for running away from her problems and Goh. But Atticus, Lexi and Amelia bring up she's done more and is ''doing'' more than Samantha ever chose to do for the past eight years.years.

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!! Different Persons / The Fog Car (The Answer Is Drowning)

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** Lana comes to comfort Mallow and point out that Mallow could've just been honest about it all and they'd believe her, but Mallow herself wanted to doubt it since it was just too ridiculous to believe. What's more, Mallow is in tears and fear for Tuba's safety...while unaware that Tuba is with the leaders of the Apex at this moment.

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** Lana comes to comfort Mallow and point out that Mallow could've just been honest about it all and they'd believe her, but Mallow herself wanted to doubt it since it was just too ridiculous to believe. What's more, Mallow is in tears and fear for Tuba's safety...while unaware that Tuba is with the leaders of the Apex at this moment.moment.
* After the confession from The Cat as to her abandoning Simon, Chloe has some reflection on herself: she's no better than the Cat for running away from her problems and Goh. But Atticus, Lexi and Amelia bring up she's done more and is ''doing'' more than Samantha ever chose to do for the past eight years.
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'''Mallow:''' And as for the rest of you! I thought I could trust you with my secret, but nooo, you just think that it's all crushes and bad jokes about marriage and getting drunk! ''This isn't funny!'' I was on that train for three months and at that time my father and brother were worried sick about me ''and'' had to deal with my mother's funeral service! I was ''5'' and alone with only Bounsweet as my guide, and I had no idea what to do or how I could get home and I nearly ''died''! And I was so scared that the same was going to happen to ''Gladion'' and you would all just... just... WHAT WOULD YOUR FAMILIES THINK IF IT WAS '''YOU''' ON THAT TRAIN?! Because I certainly would not be making jokes if you got caught in that place for months without help or an instruction manual!

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'''Mallow:''' And as for the rest of you! I thought I could trust you with my secret, but nooo, you just think that it's all crushes and bad jokes about marriage and getting drunk! ''This isn't funny!'' I was on that train for three months and at that time my father and brother were worried sick about me ''and'' had to deal with my mother's funeral service! I was ''5'' and alone with only Bounsweet as my guide, and I had no idea what to do or how I could get home and I nearly ''died''! And I was so scared that the same was going to happen to ''Gladion'' and you would all just... just... WHAT WOULD YOUR FAMILIES THINK IF IT WAS '''YOU''' ON THAT TRAIN?! Because I certainly would not be making jokes if you got caught in that place for months without help or an instruction manual!manual!
** Lana comes to comfort Mallow and point out that Mallow could've just been honest about it all and they'd believe her, but Mallow herself wanted to doubt it since it was just too ridiculous to believe. What's more, Mallow is in tears and fear for Tuba's safety...while unaware that Tuba is with the leaders of the Apex at this moment.
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** It's made worse in the following chapter that clarifies why Delia was avoiding saying anything: she ''hasn't'' forgiven him for how he acted and does think there are better people for Ash. She just doesn't think that Trip is a ''bad'' choice, just that there are better people for her son. All those people are implied to be ''girls'' though, so she avoided saying an exact that would make the fight worse than it already was.
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--> '''Parker Cerise:''' If he [Goh] just apologized... if everyone else apologized... if her class didn’t laugh at my sister but treated her like a friend ...maybe went to sit with her at lunch or gave her a compliment or invite her to slumber parties and birthday parties and actually come to her birthday parties and not rip up invitations from her...if the teachers did more to help her...What did she do to deserve all of this? Someone tell me! '''''[[ArmorPiercingQuestion Why did you all hate my sister?!]]'''''

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--> '''Parker Cerise:''' If he [Goh] just apologized... if everyone else apologized... if her class didn’t laugh at my sister but treated her like a friend ...friend... maybe went to sit with her at lunch or gave her a compliment or invite her to slumber parties and birthday parties and actually come to her birthday parties and not rip up invitations from her...her... if the teachers did more to help her...her... What did she do to deserve all of this? Someone tell me! '''''[[ArmorPiercingQuestion Why did you all hate my sister?!]]'''''
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* The confirmation that was indeed Tuba that took care of Mallow while she was on the Train, and how fondly Mallow remembers and honors her[[note]]: Mallow wears the flowers in her hair in memory of Tuba and her close bond with Oranguru is due to the bond she had with the denizen [[/note]], considering that the story takes place during Book Three, where the gorilla is cruelly betrayed and killed by Simon.
* As the author puts it for Mallow: she lost one mother due to terminal illness and lost another due to ''an asshole''. And even worse, if she learns about Tuba’s death, she is NOT going to take it well.

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* The confirmation that was indeed Tuba that took care of Mallow while she was on the Train, and how fondly Mallow remembers and honors her[[note]]: Mallow her[[note]]Mallow wears the flowers in her hair in memory of Tuba and her close bond with Oranguru is due to the bond she had with the denizen [[/note]], denizen[[/note]], considering that the story takes place during Book Three, where the gorilla is cruelly betrayed and killed by Simon.
* As the author puts it for Mallow: she lost one mother due to terminal illness and lost another due to ''an asshole''. And even worse, if she learns about Tuba’s death, she is NOT going to take it well.



* Upon learning that everybody assumed Mallow was worried for Gladion was because ''she had a crush on him'', she questions the DoubleStandard and asks what would they think if ''she'' got onto the Train. While Kiawe and Sophocles have good answers (and Sophocles worries if the incident with Abe might have caused ''another'' Train pickup if Mallow didn't meet Oruguru), Lana makes a joke about elopment. Unlike most times, Mallow is '''not''' in the mood for a joke. And when Lillie points out this is Mallow's fault for not being clear about what's going on...well, Mallow snapping is an understatement.
-->'''Mallow:''' You ''refused'' to listen to me, Lillie! You immediately went, ‘Well now my brother knows how it feels to be in a bad place so I don’t have to feel a single ounce of pity on him’! At least Gladion showed ''concern'' for you and did all he could to try and protect you even if he made very bad communication errors! But you. DID. NOT. CARE. THAT HE COULD HAVE BEEN '''''GONE FOREVER'''''! [[ForWantOfANail AND ALL BECAUSE OF]] [[UnwittingInstigatorOfDoom A STUPID BOUQUET!]]\\

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* Upon learning that everybody assumed Mallow was worried for Gladion was because ''she had a crush on him'', she questions the DoubleStandard and asks what would they think if ''she'' got onto the Train. While Kiawe and Sophocles have good answers (and Sophocles worries if the incident with Abe might have caused ''another'' Train pickup if Mallow didn't meet Oruguru), Lana makes a joke about elopment.elopement. Unlike most times, Mallow is '''not''' in the mood for a joke. And when Lillie points out this is Mallow's fault for not being clear about what's going on...well, Mallow snapping is an understatement.
-->'''Mallow:''' You ''refused'' to listen to me, Lillie! You immediately went, ‘Well 'Well now my brother knows how it feels to be in a bad place so I don’t don't have to feel a single ounce of pity on him’! him'! At least Gladion showed ''concern'' for you and did all he could to try and protect you even if he made very bad communication errors! But you. DID. NOT. CARE. THAT HE COULD HAVE BEEN '''''GONE FOREVER'''''! [[ForWantOfANail AND ALL BECAUSE OF]] [[UnwittingInstigatorOfDoom AND ALL BECAUSE OF A STUPID BOUQUET!]]\\BOUQUET]]!\\



'''Mallow:''' And as for the rest of you! I thought I could trust you with my secret, but nooo, you just think that it’s all crushes and bad jokes about marriage and getting drunk! ''This isn’t funny!'' I was on that train for three months and at that time my father and brother were worried sick about me ''and'' had to deal with my mother’s funeral service! I was ''5'' and alone with only Bounsweet as my guide, and I had no idea what to do or how I could get home and I nearly ''died''! And I was so scared that the same was going to happen to ''Gladion'' and you would all just...just…WHAT WOULD YOUR FAMILIES THINK IF IT WAS '''YOU''' ON THAT TRAIN?! Because I certainly would not be making jokes if you got caught in that place for months without help or an instruction manual!

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'''Mallow:''' And as for the rest of you! I thought I could trust you with my secret, but nooo, you just think that it’s it's all crushes and bad jokes about marriage and getting drunk! ''This isn’t isn't funny!'' I was on that train for three months and at that time my father and brother were worried sick about me ''and'' had to deal with my mother’s mother's funeral service! I was ''5'' and alone with only Bounsweet as my guide, and I had no idea what to do or how I could get home and I nearly ''died''! And I was so scared that the same was going to happen to ''Gladion'' and you would all just...just…WHAT just... just... WHAT WOULD YOUR FAMILIES THINK IF IT WAS '''YOU''' ON THAT TRAIN?! Because I certainly would not be making jokes if you got caught in that place for months without help or an instruction manual!
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** The attending jury's reaction to Parker's upset outburst is just as heartbreaking, especially [[KidsAreCruel Class 5-E]]. The kids all know that they condoned and participated in Chloe's bullying, whether out of jealousy, stupidity, and/or sadism, and they lied to their parents and teachers about it until the problem boiled over. The parents and teachers only stood by until it got worse because they were either lied to, were prevented by circumstances from stepping in, or were too apathetic to act. No one has the courage to answer Parker's question because ''all of them'' are [[ShamingTheMob too ashamed of their role in Chloe's misery.]] And judging by the journalists and cameras outside the courtroom, they'll be forever reminded of their mistakes and Vermillion International School's reputation has completely been tarnished for good.

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** The attending jury's reaction to Parker's upset outburst is just as heartbreaking, especially [[KidsAreCruel Class 5-E]]. The kids all know that they condoned and participated in Chloe's bullying, whether out of jealousy, stupidity, and/or sadism, and they lied to their parents and teachers about it until the problem boiled over. The parents and teachers only stood by until it got worse because they were either lied to, were prevented by circumstances from stepping in, or were just too apathetic to act.care. No one has the courage to answer Parker's question because ''all of them'' are [[ShamingTheMob too ashamed of their role in Chloe's misery.]] And judging by the journalists and cameras outside the courtroom, they'll be forever reminded of their mistakes and Vermillion International School's reputation has completely been tarnished for good.



** Yeardley's little sister is afraid of her big brother now, afraid that he'll start attacking her because she's a girl. As they leave, she refuses to hold his hand. His older sister don't think highly of him either due to his mysoginistic bullying, with her slapping him upside the head for good measure and claling him a "dumbass" after the trial.

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** Yeardley's little sister is afraid of her big brother now, afraid that he'll start attacking her because she's a girl. As they leave, she refuses to hold his hand. His older sister don't doesn’t think highly of him either due to his mysoginistic bullying, with her slapping him upside the head for good measure and claling calling him a "dumbass" after the trial.



** She also realizes that she's just as Goh: abandoned by someone they thought as a friend, they became obsessed over something and stopped trying to talk to one another. The fact that she realizes that the reason Goh is going to end up on the train is because of ''her'' is the ultimate realization that Goh truly '''was''' her friend and never meant to leave her behind whereas she did so ''on purpose.''

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** She also realizes that she's just as like Goh: abandoned by someone they thought as a friend, they became obsessed over something and stopped trying to talk to one another. The fact that she realizes that the reason Goh is going to end up on the train is because of ''her'' is the ultimate realization that Goh he truly '''was''' her friend and never meant to leave her behind whereas she did so ''on purpose.''
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* Chloe writes some emails to Serena and her father. For Serena's, she asks her to find Akemi and tell her that all of this was never her fault and to deliver a message for Ash's mom when she's ready to hear it. And for her dad, she tells him about how she heard them argue on the night of the paint-can incident and blaming each other when all she wished for was them to reassure their love for her. She also tells him that even though fighting the Apex is dangerous, ''someone'' has to do it. And if Goh is going to get on there soon, she wants to ensure his trip will be a much safer one. She ends it with a message that she loves him, unsure if she'll be able to tell it to his face if she happens to die by the hands of either the ritual or the cult.
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* Chloe finally realizes what her biggest flaw was: Fear. Fear of not being good enough, pushed aside, unable to heard or loved or paid attention to. Her resentment, judgment, foolishness and anger stemmed from this and this alone.
** She also realizes that she's just as Goh: abandoned by someone they thought as a friend, they became obsessed over something and stopped trying to talk to one another. The fact that she realizes that the reason Goh is going to end up on the train is because of ''her'' is the ultimate realization that Goh truly '''was''' her friend and never meant to leave her behind whereas she did so ''on purpose.''

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--> '''Parker Cerise:''' If he just apologized... if everyone else apologized... if her class didn’t laugh at my sister but treated her like a friend ...maybe went to sit with her at lunch or gave her a compliment or invite her to slumber parties and birthday parties and actually come to her birthday parties and not rip up invitations from her...if the teachers did more to help her...What did she do to deserve all of this? Someone tell me! '''''[[ArmorPiercingQuestion Why did you all hate my sister?!]]'''''
** The attending jury's reaction to Parker's upset outburst is just as heartbreaking, especially [[KidsAreCruel Class 5-E]]. The kids all know that they condoned and participated in Chloe's bullying, whether out of jealousy, stupidity, and/or sadism, and they lied to their parents and teachers about it until the problem boiled over. The parents and teachers only stood by until it got worse because they were either lied to, were prevented by circumstances from stepping in, or were too apathetic to act. No one has the courage to answer Parker's question because all of them are too ashamed of their role in Chloe's misery.

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--> '''Parker Cerise:''' If he [Goh] just apologized... if everyone else apologized... if her class didn’t laugh at my sister but treated her like a friend ...maybe went to sit with her at lunch or gave her a compliment or invite her to slumber parties and birthday parties and actually come to her birthday parties and not rip up invitations from her...if the teachers did more to help her...What did she do to deserve all of this? Someone tell me! '''''[[ArmorPiercingQuestion Why did you all hate my sister?!]]'''''
** The attending jury's reaction to Parker's upset outburst is just as heartbreaking, especially [[KidsAreCruel Class 5-E]]. The kids all know that they condoned and participated in Chloe's bullying, whether out of jealousy, stupidity, and/or sadism, and they lied to their parents and teachers about it until the problem boiled over. The parents and teachers only stood by until it got worse because they were either lied to, were prevented by circumstances from stepping in, or were too apathetic to act. No one has the courage to answer Parker's question because all ''all of them them'' are [[ShamingTheMob too ashamed of their role in Chloe's misery.]] And judging by the journalists and cameras outside the courtroom, they'll be forever reminded of their mistakes and Vermillion International School's reputation has completely been tarnished for good.



** Yeardley's little sister is afraid of her big brother now, afraid that he'll start attacking her because she's a girl. As they leave, she refuses to hold his hand. His older sisters don't think highly of him either due to his mysoginistic bullying, with one of them slapping him upside the head for good measure after the trial.
** Class 5-E also realize how they were insensitive jerks when they replay the security footage of the paint-can incident.

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** Yeardley's little sister is afraid of her big brother now, afraid that he'll start attacking her because she's a girl. As they leave, she refuses to hold his hand. His older sisters sister don't think highly of him either due to his mysoginistic bullying, with one of them her slapping him upside the head for good measure and claling him a "dumbass" after the trial.
** Class 5-E also realize how they were insensitive jerks when they replay the security footage of the paint-can incident.incident and that they just ruined a family's life, eroding Chloe's self-esteem, indirectly made Parker unleash the Unown and have made themselves targets online.



* Upon learning that everybody assumed Mallow was worried for Gladion was because ''she had a crush on him'', she questions the DoubleStandard and asks what would they think if ''she'' got onto the Train. While Kiawe and Sophocles have good answers (and Sophocles worries if the incident with Abe might have caused ''another'' Train pickup if Mallow didn't meet Oruguru), Lana makes a joke about elopment. Unlike most times, Mallow is '''not''' in the mood for a joke. And when Lillie points out this is Mallow's fault for not being clear about what's going on...well, Mallow snapping is an understatement.

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* Upon learning that everybody assumed Mallow was worried for Gladion was because ''she had a crush on him'', she questions the DoubleStandard and asks what would they think if ''she'' got onto the Train. While Kiawe and Sophocles have good answers (and Sophocles worries if the incident with Abe might have caused ''another'' Train pickup if Mallow didn't meet Oruguru), Lana makes a joke about elopment. Unlike most times, Mallow is '''not''' in the mood for a joke. And when Lillie points out this is Mallow's fault for not being clear about what's going on...well, Mallow snapping is an understatement.understatement.
-->'''Mallow:''' You ''refused'' to listen to me, Lillie! You immediately went, ‘Well now my brother knows how it feels to be in a bad place so I don’t have to feel a single ounce of pity on him’! At least Gladion showed ''concern'' for you and did all he could to try and protect you even if he made very bad communication errors! But you. DID. NOT. CARE. THAT HE COULD HAVE BEEN '''''GONE FOREVER'''''! [[ForWantOfANail AND ALL BECAUSE OF]] [[UnwittingInstigatorOfDoom A STUPID BOUQUET!]]\\
''(Lillie is in tears but Mallow does not care)''\\
'''Mallow:''' And as for the rest of you! I thought I could trust you with my secret, but nooo, you just think that it’s all crushes and bad jokes about marriage and getting drunk! ''This isn’t funny!'' I was on that train for three months and at that time my father and brother were worried sick about me ''and'' had to deal with my mother’s funeral service! I was ''5'' and alone with only Bounsweet as my guide, and I had no idea what to do or how I could get home and I nearly ''died''! And I was so scared that the same was going to happen to ''Gladion'' and you would all just...just…WHAT WOULD YOUR FAMILIES THINK IF IT WAS '''YOU''' ON THAT TRAIN?! Because I certainly would not be making jokes if you got caught in that place for months without help or an instruction manual!
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** Soma then requests for Chloe to dump Agni's ashes into the river and to bury his remains separately. Chloe refuses and gathers both their ashes [[TogetherInDeath because she can't think of them not together]].



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!!Always On My Mind / Le Chat Chalet Car (Come Forward, I've Seen It)
* Upon learning that everybody assumed Mallow was worried for Gladion was because ''she had a crush on him'', she questions the DoubleStandard and asks what would they think if ''she'' got onto the Train. While Kiawe and Sophocles have good answers (and Sophocles worries if the incident with Abe might have caused ''another'' Train pickup if Mallow didn't meet Oruguru), Lana makes a joke about elopment. Unlike most times, Mallow is '''not''' in the mood for a joke. And when Lillie points out this is Mallow's fault for not being clear about what's going on...well, Mallow snapping is an understatement.
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** Yeardley's little sister is afraid of her big brother now, afraid that he'll start attacking her because she's a girl. As they leave, she refuses to hold his hand. His older sisters don't think highly of him either due to his mysoginistic bullying, with one of them slapping him upside the head for his behavior after the trial.

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** Yeardley's little sister is afraid of her big brother now, afraid that he'll start attacking her because she's a girl. As they leave, she refuses to hold his hand. His older sisters don't think highly of him either due to his mysoginistic bullying, with one of them slapping him upside the head for his behavior good measure after the trial.

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''So do what makes you happy, Goh. You have your happiness, and I have mine.\\

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''So do what makes you happy, Goh. You have your happiness, and I have mine.\\''\\



* Parker's trial concludes with him breaking down crying, begging to know why everybody hated his sister so much to not help her and wishing he could just have her back. The judge privately reflects that, despite the severity of his crimes, he's still a five-year-old child who has already learned how cruel life can be, and that his isn't going to get any easier any time soon.

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* Parker's trial concludes with him breaking down crying, begging to know why everybody hated his sister so much to not help her and wishing he could just have her back. The judge privately reflects that, despite the severity of his crimes, he's still a five-year-old child boy who has already learned how cruel life can be, and that his life isn't going to get any easier any time soon.anytime soon.
--> '''Parker Cerise:''' If he just apologized... if everyone else apologized... if her class didn’t laugh at my sister but treated her like a friend ...maybe went to sit with her at lunch or gave her a compliment or invite her to slumber parties and birthday parties and actually come to her birthday parties and not rip up invitations from her...if the teachers did more to help her...What did she do to deserve all of this? Someone tell me! '''''[[ArmorPiercingQuestion Why did you all hate my sister?!]]'''''
** The attending jury's reaction to Parker's upset outburst is just as heartbreaking, especially [[KidsAreCruel Class 5-E]]. The kids all know that they condoned and participated in Chloe's bullying, whether out of jealousy, stupidity, and/or sadism, and they lied to their parents and teachers about it until the problem boiled over. The parents and teachers only stood by until it got worse because they were either lied to, were prevented by circumstances from stepping in, or were too apathetic to act. No one has the courage to answer Parker's question because all of them are too ashamed of their role in Chloe's misery.



** Yeardley's little sister is afraid of her big brother now, afraid that he'll start attacking her because she's a girl. As they leave, she refuses to hold his hand.

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** Yeardley's little sister is afraid of her big brother now, afraid that he'll start attacking her because she's a girl. As they leave, she refuses to hold his hand. His older sisters don't think highly of him either due to his mysoginistic bullying, with one of them slapping him upside the head for his behavior after the trial.



* When Chloe uses the power of her cloak to look into the memories of the Curry Prince, she learns the truth: he was once Soma from ''Black Butler'' who ended up on the Train when he was trying to return to India after Agni's cremation. He never left the Train as he found himself falling into despair, dying while holding onto Agni's urn. Then he woke up, forgetting his old life and became the mechanical Curry Prince. The memories are so overwhelming that even ''she'' ends up crying.

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* When Chloe uses the power of her cloak to look into the memories of the Curry Prince, she learns the truth: he was once Soma from ''Black Butler'' ''Manga/BlackButler'' who ended up on the Train when he was trying to return to India after Agni's cremation. He never left the Train as he found himself falling into despair, dying while holding onto Agni's urn. Then he woke up, forgetting his old life and became the mechanical Curry Prince. The memories are so overwhelming that even ''she'' ends up crying.



* Trip argues with Delia over how the boy has been atoning for all that he did...which in fact, Trip ''hasn't''. Trip states that not ''once'' has he done anything to repay for making Ash build a GuiltComplex and yet Delia forgives him. But when Chloe is ''willing'' to do everything she can to make it up to the Ketchums even after she is returning from dismantling a cult and everything she'll face when she returns home, what does Delia do? Refuse to accept it. Trip ends up in tears, his faith in Delia broken since she's giving him what she doesn't want Chloe to obtain: ''a slap on the wrist''.

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* Trip argues with Delia over how the boy Parker has been atoning for all that he did...which in fact, did, while Trip himself ''hasn't''. Trip states that not ''once'' has he done anything to repay make amends with Ash for making Ash him build up a GuiltComplex because of his own BrutalHonesty... and yet Delia forgives him. But when Chloe is ''willing'' to do everything she can to make it up to the Ketchums even after she is returning from dismantling a cult and everything she'll face when she returns home, what does Delia do? [[{{Hypocrite}} Refuse to accept it. it]]. Trip ends up in tears, [[BrokenPedestal his faith in Delia broken broken]] since she's giving him what she doesn't want Chloe to obtain: ''a slap on the wrist''.
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!!Lives Wasted Away / The Curry Car Pt 3 (Reflection, Conception)
* Soma reuniting with Agni after a hundred years with him requesting Agni to always stay by his side. Agni's response?
-->'''Agni:''' Joh Agyaa (translation: As you wish).
* Trip argues with Delia over how the boy has been atoning for all that he did...which in fact, Trip ''hasn't''. Trip states that not ''once'' has he done anything to repay for making Ash build a GuiltComplex and yet Delia forgives him. But when Chloe is ''willing'' to do everything she can to make it up to the Ketchums even after she is returning from dismantling a cult and everything she'll face when she returns home, what does Delia do? Refuse to accept it. Trip ends up in tears, his faith in Delia broken since she's giving him what she doesn't want Chloe to obtain: ''a slap on the wrist''.

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* Parker's trial concludes with him breaking down crying, begging to know why everybody hated his sister so much and wishing he could just have her back. The judge privately reflects that, despite the severity of his crimes, he's still a five-year-old child who has already learned how cruel life can be, and that his isn't going to get any easier any time soon.

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* As Mr. Bradbury (again) brings up his multiple warnings to the Professor, Professor Cerise begs said teacher to ''stop'' rubbing it in as it's not helping in the slightest. If he could, he'd do '''anything''' to have Chloe back and encourage her to try again and tell her how much he loved her.
** It's brief but when Professor Cerise says that Mr. Bradbury was "a better parent", Mr. Bradbury glumly admits he never ''got'' to be a parent.
** Mr. Bradbury also states that he's getting a recommendation letter ready for a prestigious Galar academy for Chloe to attend. Professor Cerise wants to object to this, the last thing he needs is to be separated from his daughter, but admits that he can't just push her around and force her to be something she doesn't like anymore. All he asks is what he can do to ''ensure'' Chloe knows he loves her.
* Parker's trial concludes with him breaking down crying, begging to know why everybody hated his sister so much to not help her and wishing he could just have her back. The judge privately reflects that, despite the severity of his crimes, he's still a five-year-old child who has already learned how cruel life can be, and that his isn't going to get any easier any time soon.


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** Yeardley's little sister is afraid of her big brother now, afraid that he'll start attacking her because she's a girl. As they leave, she refuses to hold his hand.
** Class 5-E also realize how they were insensitive jerks when they replay the security footage of the paint-can incident.
* Sara spends most of the trial apologizing, screaming into a pillow and looking so ''pitiful'' as the weight of her actions presses down on her. The only saving grace she gets is that a kind family adopted her, but even then she has to see her mother looking like a total wreck and wanting to just say how much she loved her. Marianna Diktalyis says nothing and walks off.

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** Speaking of, when Zeno pauses time in the ice crema parlor, Goh is ''begging'' not to go through another WhatIf scenario.
* Chloe reveals why curry is a sore spot: Goh forgot their promise and abandoned her for Mew, making her feel that she wasn't good enough for him and that she would never belong: doesn't fit with the girls and the boys hated her for being into boy stuff. She was once alone when the girls and boys broke into clubs and didn't allow her in, and it only proved to her that she never belonged anywhere.

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** Speaking of, when Zeno pauses time in the ice crema cream parlor, Goh is ''begging'' not to go through another WhatIf scenario.
* Chloe reveals why curry is a sore spot: Goh forgot their promise and abandoned her for Mew, making her feel that she wasn't good enough for him and that she would never belong: doesn't fit with the girls and the boys hated her be accepted for being into boy stuff. who she was. She was once alone recounts how, when the girls and boys broke into clubs and gender-divided clubs, neither side let her join, seemingly 'proving' that she didn't allow her in, and it only proved to her that she never belonged fit in anywhere.


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* Parker's trial concludes with him breaking down crying, begging to know why everybody hated his sister so much and wishing he could just have her back. The judge privately reflects that, despite the severity of his crimes, he's still a five-year-old child who has already learned how cruel life can be, and that his isn't going to get any easier any time soon.
** Parker is ultimately sentenced to a juvenile offenders' treatment facility near Pallet, and is banned from ever entering Vermillion City or contacting anyone connected to the suit. After hearing this (and having Zeno explain some of it to him), Parker notes that he's going to miss Jinny.
* Kurune and Ikuo realize just how little they knew about their son's activities online, and discover that he's being harassed by at least one stalker who's interested in his Mew Tracker... and when Kurune tells them to stop trying to contact him before deleting his profile, [[NiceJobBreakingItHero it just confirms to the stalker that he's in Vermillion]].
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!!Memory of the Waters / The Curry Car Pt 2 (Who Are You? I Know You)
* When Chloe uses the power of her cloak to look into the memories of the Curry Prince, she learns the truth: he was once Soma from ''Black Butler'' who ended up on the Train when he was trying to return to India after Agni's cremation. He never left the Train as he found himself falling into despair, dying while holding onto Agni's urn. Then he woke up, forgetting his old life and became the mechanical Curry Prince. The memories are so overwhelming that even ''she'' ends up crying.
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* Chloe mentioning that ''Gladion'' has been on the Train, to Ash's horror -- if you're following the prequel to this story, ''Knight of the Orange Lily'', you know Ash was right here when Gladion and his sister got into a fight. And now, he's informed it probably led to disaster.

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* Chloe mentioning that ''Gladion'' has been on the Train, to Ash's horror -- if you're following the prequel to this story, ''Knight of the Orange Lily'', you know Ash was right here there when Gladion and his sister got into a fight. And now, he's informed it probably led to disaster.
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** Ash suggests that Goh try fighting someone to get his confidence back. Unfortunately, he's fighting off Bede who doesn't even have to lift a finger with his newly captured Abra completely beating Raboot. This setback causes Goh to feel even more of a failure...kind of what Chloe was feeling when she fought Ash.

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** Ash suggests that Goh try fighting someone to get his confidence back. Unfortunately, he's fighting off Bede who doesn't even have to lift a finger with his newly captured Abra completely beating Raboot. This setback causes Goh to feel even more of a failure...kind of what Chloe was feeling when she fought Ash.Ash as he realizes that he didn't even try to comfort Chloe over her loss compared to how Ash gave her a compliment.



* Hop has regressed mentally to six years old as he continues his 'transformation' into Delight. Walter exploits his uncanny insight into the minds of his fellow sacrifices to try and ferret out any potential chinks in his plans, with Hop blissfully unaware of his status as a pawn.
* Talia vents out her frustrations on learning how Chloe was ignored, belittled and neglected in her world and now she is at risk of ''dying'' on a Train, blaming herself for not doing more or ignoring any signs that she could've been in trouble. She feels angry and jealous of Delia because ''her'' son goes through these adventures completely unscathed.

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* Oh sure Goh, Hop has is "having fun" on the train as he's regressed mentally to six years old as he continues his 'transformation' into Delight. Walter exploits his uncanny insight into the minds of his fellow sacrifices to try and ferret out any potential chinks in his plans, with Hop blissfully unaware of his status as a pawn.
* Talia vents out her frustrations on learning how Chloe was ignored, belittled and neglected in her world and now she is at risk of ''dying'' on a Train, Train by a cult that's probably even '''worse''' than the GangOfBullies Chloe dealt with on a daily basis, blaming herself for not doing more or ignoring any signs that she could've been in trouble. She feels angry and jealous of Delia because ''her'' son goes through these adventures completely unscathed.



** Talia admits that Parker should've said something sooner about Chloe, insisting that they would have accepted her no matter what. Parker counters this by revealing he heard them arguing over what happened at the talent show; their own words convinced him that he couldn't tell them anything for fear that they'd hate her.

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** Talia admits that Parker should've said something sooner about Chloe, insisting that they would have accepted her no matter what. Parker counters this by revealing he heard them arguing over what happened at the talent show; their own words convinced him that he couldn't tell them anything for fear that they'd hate her. Talia is shocked that she never considered that possibility with her own son and has to reassure him that no matter what, they love Chloe as she is.



** One of the few things Chloe was able to take comfort in while gradually breaking down under the weight of her ParentalNeglect and bullying has been tainted by association. For ages, she feared that her interests wouldn't be accepted, and now that's come to pass in the worst possible way. And she feels like she can't even argue against any of it or defend herself.

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** One of the few things Chloe was able to take comfort in while gradually breaking down under the weight of her ParentalNeglect and bullying has been tainted by association. For ages, she feared that her interests wouldn't be accepted, and now that's come to pass in the worst possible way. And she feels like she can't even argue against any of it or defend herself. Thankfully she bounces back thanks to Amelia stating that she can still try something new without sacrificing all her progress.


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* While Goh's reaction to comforting Ash over his tie with Bea is hilarious, remember that this ''is'' also while he's recovering from his nightmare therapy and how he realized that he wasn't there for Chloe when ''she'' needed comfort. He's afraid of pushing Ash away if he doesn't comfort the Pallet Town Trainer, showcasing once and for all that he doesn't ''want'' people to leave him because of his mistakes. Even Zeno mentions that Goh has a long way to go.
** Speaking of, when Zeno pauses time in the ice crema parlor, Goh is ''begging'' not to go through another WhatIf scenario.
* Chloe reveals why curry is a sore spot: Goh forgot their promise and abandoned her for Mew, making her feel that she wasn't good enough for him and that she would never belong: doesn't fit with the girls and the boys hated her for being into boy stuff. She was once alone when the girls and boys broke into clubs and didn't allow her in, and it only proved to her that she never belonged anywhere.
* Romin is on the Train because her attempt to give Luke her curry backfired. She chickened out at the last second and ran on the Train and she's not willing to cook another curry because she believes she ''doesn't'' deserve forgiveness. To compare, Chloe has a 93. Romin has a ''7''.
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** Talia admits that Parker should've said something sooner about Chloe and tells him that they would accept Chloe no matter what even if she was different. Parker points out that he never said anything because he heard their parents argue over what happened at the talent show and it convinced him that "If I say anything about Chloe, they will get fight and hate her" which prevented them from actually knowing what went wrong until it was too late.

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** Talia admits that Parker should've said something sooner about Chloe and tells him Chloe, insisting that they would accept Chloe have accepted her no matter what even if she was different. what. Parker points out that he never said anything because counters this by revealing he heard their parents argue them arguing over what happened at the talent show and it show; their own words convinced him that "If I say he couldn't tell them anything about Chloe, they will get fight and for fear that they'd hate her" which prevented them from actually knowing what went wrong until it was too late.her.
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* Talia's last e-mail with her daughter has her putting her foot down, berating Chloe about how she needs to accept her share of responsibility for everything that happened. She also blames her for the existence of Zeno, officially forbidding her from horror -- even twisting her title of 'Chloe of the Vermillion' into a mockery of what it once stood for. Chloe's reaction is to just scream her heart out.

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* Talia's last e-mail with her daughter has her putting her foot down, berating Chloe about how she needs to accept her share of responsibility for everything that happened. She also blames her for the existence of Zeno, officially forbidding her from horror (or at least forcing her to take a sabbatical from it for a while) -- even twisting her title of 'Chloe of the Vermillion' into a mockery of what it once stood for. Chloe's reaction is to just scream her heart out.
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* Delia makes clear that she has NoSympathy for either Parker or Chloe, writing the Cerise siblings off as a pair of [[UngratefulBastard ungrateful brats]] who've needlessly and cruely hurt everyone around them. Though she's willing to take the family in when they move to Pallet, she also spells out that she's perfectly willing to make them camp outside rather than permitting either of them into her guesthouse, unless and until they prove themselves sufficiently humbled and chastised.

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* Delia makes clear that she has NoSympathy for either Parker or Chloe, writing the Cerise siblings off as a pair of [[UngratefulBastard ungrateful brats]] who've needlessly and cruely hurt everyone around them. Though she's willing to take the family Cerise parents in when they move to Pallet, she also spells out that she's perfectly willing to make them the children camp outside rather than permitting either of them into her guesthouse, unless and until they prove themselves sufficiently humbled and chastised.

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** The same conversation makes it clear that Delia's son doesn't go through things entirely unscathed: He'd have the occasional nightmare about the things he's experienced before but the [=UnChloe=] and Parker situation has made his nightmares more active and worse. Delia even got to witness one via the Rotom Phone, and one so bad that it looked like Ash was going to have a ''seizure''. There are reasons Delia is not happy with Chloe or Parker.



* Delia makes clear that she has NoSympathy for either Parker or Chloe, writing the Cerise siblings off as a pair of [[UngratefulBastard ungrateful brats]]. Though she's willing to take the family in when they move to Pallet, she also spells out that she's perfectly willing to make them camp outside rather than permitting either of them into her home, unless and until they prove themselves sufficiently humbled and chastised.

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* Delia makes clear that she has NoSympathy for either Parker or Chloe, writing the Cerise siblings off as a pair of [[UngratefulBastard ungrateful brats]]. brats]] who've needlessly and cruely hurt everyone around them. Though she's willing to take the family in when they move to Pallet, she also spells out that she's perfectly willing to make them camp outside rather than permitting either of them into her home, guesthouse, unless and until they prove themselves sufficiently humbled and chastised.

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