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* When [[spoiler: Smoke finally manages to digivolve into a Champion]], Sakura displays a brief but poignant moment of sadness at being left behind by both her friend and twin, outright asking her father if there's any reason she hasn't [[spoiler: digivolved yet.]] Despite quickly recieving an answer and cheering up, it was rather disheartening to see the usually up-beat Biyomon so down in the dumps as she was.
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* When [[spoiler: Smoke finally manages to digivolve into a Champion]], Sakura displays a brief but poignant moment of sadness at being left behind by both her friend and twin, outright asking her father if there's any reason she hasn't [[spoiler: digivolved yet.]] Despite quickly recieving receiving an answer and cheering up, it was rather disheartening to see the usually up-beat Biyomon so down in the dumps as she was.
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* During their visit to Factorial Town, Rain and Coal end up conversing with Andromon and are told about his origins: He was initially a [[TunnelKing Drimogemon]] who ended up traveling to Factorial Town and becoming its leader after Machinedramon killed his lover, [[TheLostLenore a fellow Drimogemon.]] The fact that he would later go on to [[AdultFear lose his only daughter, Hagurumon]], only makes [[TheWoobie Andromon's]] story all the sadder.
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* During their visit to Factorial Town, Rain and Coal end up conversing with Andromon and are told about his origins: He was initially a [[TunnelKing Drimogemon]] who ended up traveling to Factorial Town and becoming its leader after Machinedramon killed his lover, [[TheLostLenore a fellow Drimogemon.]] The fact that he would later go on to [[AdultFear lose his only daughter, Hagurumon]], Hagurumon, only makes [[TheWoobie Andromon's]] story all the sadder.
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* Whenever the thought of one of his kids coming to harm pops up, such as when Smoke was fighting against [[spoiler: the combined forces of [[Anime/DigimonSavers Marcus and Agumon]]]] or when [[spoiler: he, Char and Lloyd were blown off the edge of Freeze Ravine]], Coal immediately feels emotionally numb. It's clear to see that, while he absolutely loves his children, the thought of losing one of them is easily enough to shake Coal to his foundations.
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* Whenever the thought of one of his kids coming to harm pops up, such as when Smoke was fighting against [[spoiler: the combined forces of [[Anime/DigimonSavers [[Anime/DigimonDataSquad Marcus and Agumon]]]] or when [[spoiler: he, Char and Lloyd were blown off the edge of Freeze Ravine]], Coal immediately feels emotionally numb. It's clear to see that, while he absolutely loves his children, the thought of losing one of them is easily enough to shake Coal to his foundations.
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* When we're given a look through the world from Einstein's point of view and his personal thoughts, it's shown that Einstein can [[HeroicSelfDeprecation be rather critical of himself when it comes to his own shortcomings, either real or perceived.]] The [[spoiler: death of his mentor, Hail, and the fact that said mentor was really the only person who ever treated him nicely before Smoke came along also [[{{Understatement}} hasn't left a positive effect on his psyche.]]]] Despite the fact that Einstein can be rather hard on himself at times and has [[spoiler: recently lost a loved one]], his thoughts and overall mood [[TrueCompanions seem to improve around Smoke]] and he even seems rather [[TheDeterminator determined]] to improve himself and one day fight alongside Smoke, along with [[CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming eventually living up to the sheer faith and trust Smoke seems to have in him.]]
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* When we're given a look through the world from Einstein's point of view and his personal thoughts, it's shown that Einstein can [[HeroicSelfDeprecation be rather critical of himself when it comes to his own shortcomings, either real or perceived.]] The [[spoiler: death of his mentor, Hail, and the fact that said mentor was really the only person who ever treated him nicely before Smoke came along also [[{{Understatement}} hasn't left a positive effect on his psyche.]]]] Despite the fact that Einstein can be rather hard on himself at times and has [[spoiler: recently lost a loved one]], his thoughts and overall mood [[TrueCompanions seem to improve around Smoke]] and he even seems rather [[TheDeterminator determined]] to improve himself and one day fight alongside Smoke, along with [[CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming [[SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments eventually living up to the sheer faith and trust Smoke seems to have in him.]]
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* Whenever the thought of one of his kids coming to harm pops up, such as when Smoke was fighting against [[spoiler: the combined forces of [[DigimonSavers Marcus and Agumon]]]] or when [[spoiler: he, Char and Lloyd were blown off the edge of Freeze Ravine]], Coal immediately feels emotionally numb. It's clear to see that, while he absolutely loves his children, the thought of losing one of them is easily enough to shake Coal to his foundations.
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* Whenever the thought of one of his kids coming to harm pops up, such as when Smoke was fighting against [[spoiler: the combined forces of [[DigimonSavers [[Anime/DigimonSavers Marcus and Agumon]]]] or when [[spoiler: he, Char and Lloyd were blown off the edge of Freeze Ravine]], Coal immediately feels emotionally numb. It's clear to see that, while he absolutely loves his children, the thought of losing one of them is easily enough to shake Coal to his foundations.
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* The death of [[spoiler: Hail]]. Despite the fact that he approached the humans currently aligned with [[spoiler: Cherubimon]] with only peaceful intentions in mind, it didn't stop the meeting from quickly getting out of control and ended up with [[spoiler: Jeri's partner dying right in front of her just like in DigimonTamers, leaving both her and Gabumon emotionally devastated with the latter quickly growing a grudge with the Cherubimon-aligned humans for killing his leader and caretaker.]]
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* The death of [[spoiler: Hail]]. Despite the fact that he approached the humans currently aligned with [[spoiler: Cherubimon]] with only peaceful intentions in mind, it didn't stop the meeting from quickly getting out of control and ended up with [[spoiler: Jeri's partner dying right in front of her just like in DigimonTamers, Anime/DigimonTamers, leaving both her and Gabumon emotionally devastated with the latter quickly growing a grudge with the Cherubimon-aligned humans for killing his leader and caretaker.]]
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* The entire moment when [[spoiler: Rika]] is singing. Even the fact that it's the same song from [[spoiler: DigimonTamers]] doesn't stop it from being a real tug on the heartstrings, hearing them lament in song form about her [[spoiler: father, who she very clearly loved, suddenly disappearing on her.]] Even when Curran and Ursula try to alleviate [[spoiler: Rika]] of their somber mood, it still leaves off with Curran and Ursula all cuddling together with them in the hopes of calming them down.
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* The entire moment when [[spoiler: Rika]] is singing. Even the fact that it's the same song from [[spoiler: DigimonTamers]] Anime/DigimonTamers]] doesn't stop it from being a real tug on the heartstrings, hearing them lament in song form about her [[spoiler: father, who she very clearly loved, suddenly disappearing on her.]] Even when Curran and Ursula try to alleviate [[spoiler: Rika]] of their somber mood, it still leaves off with Curran and Ursula all cuddling together with them in the hopes of calming them down.
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* Relemon's death was this to such an extent that even Arukenimon was affected. She was an innocent, happy newborn who died in 10 minutes because of flaws in the data fusion program.
* Despite the fact that she was still a Rookie, and didn't even mention that she wanted the Code Key of Greed in the first place, Inari and Sovrano' daughter Curran was forced out of her home to take a potentially deadly trial to prove her worthy of the Code Key of Greed because she happened to be born with the potential to one day become the Demon Lord of Greed.
* Despite the fact that he was manipulating Strings, [[spoiler: Cherrymon]]'s death was still sad for Strings as it forced him to confront the fact that while [[spoiler: Cherrymon]] had Arbormon's memories, [[spoiler: Cherrymon]] and Arbormon were definitely two different people.
* Kenshin's death is most definitely this, as Coal and Kenshin had becomes friends. Really, being blamed for causing Kenshin's death in the first place was just adding insult to injury.
* Despite the fact that she was still a Rookie, and didn't even mention that she wanted the Code Key of Greed in the first place, Inari and Sovrano' daughter Curran was forced out of her home to take a potentially deadly trial to prove her worthy of the Code Key of Greed because she happened to be born with the potential to one day become the Demon Lord of Greed.
* Despite the fact that he was manipulating Strings, [[spoiler: Cherrymon]]'s death was still sad for Strings as it forced him to confront the fact that while [[spoiler: Cherrymon]] had Arbormon's memories, [[spoiler: Cherrymon]] and Arbormon were definitely two different people.
* Kenshin's death is most definitely this, as Coal and Kenshin had becomes friends. Really, being blamed for causing Kenshin's death in the first place was just adding insult to injury.
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*In retaliation for Ion's death Sovrano arrives for revenge, he beats Coal down for a while only for Inari to interrupt and reveal Coal's true identity. It takes some more convincing as Coal is still regaining his memories but from there on Sovrano and Coal both lament over the tragedy that was Ion's death.
*Coal's reunion with Rain is this after the fact, Rain had been physically and mentally abused by Lucemon and then Leviamon for months on end but the moment she realizes Coal is real and he's saved her she goes right back to just wanting to be with him.
*Coal's reunion with Rain is this after the fact, Rain had been physically and mentally abused by Lucemon and then Leviamon for months on end but the moment she realizes Coal is real and he's saved her she goes right back to just wanting to be with him.
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* Lobomon as it turned out was actually Ion from part 1, something which the players only find out around the time Coal kills him. This also managed to trigger a rush of memories from Coal regarding his interactions with him during his first life. Lobomon also had several momentos on his desk including a picture of the gang from part 1 with himself, Coal and Sovrano all standing together.
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* The Death of Blizzard in part 2 is extremely heartbreaking. Lobomon mercilessly carved up the already defeated mon in front of the crowd just to prove a point, with his light powers even acting to nullify Blizzards ability to cheat death. After crying out to his mother (not present at the time) that he didn't want to die, Blizzards final words were an apology to Coal (who was trying to push his way to the scene) for not being strong enough.
