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* "By the Silver Water of Lake Champlain" is a ''significantly'' darker episode compared to the rest of the series. There's no comedy, no {{Bathos}}, protagonist Rose has recites her dialogue listlessly and on the verge of tears, Leigh and her daughter are growing apart, and not to mention Chet and his abuse. Thankfully, there's a happy ending.
* "Twittering from the Circus of the Dead"; Despite spending almost the entire story complaining about her, Blake's last line is [[IWantMyMommy screaming for her mother]] while being dragged to her doom.

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* "By the Silver Water of Lake Champlain" is a ''significantly'' darker dark episode compared to the rest of the series. There's no comedy, no {{Bathos}}, protagonist Rose has recites her dialogue listlessly and on the verge of tears, Leigh and her daughter are growing apart, and not to mention Chet and his abuse. Thankfully, there's a happy ending.
* The ending of "Survivor Type", where Richard gives up on self-preservation and eats his hands while succumbing to madness. Flashbacks to his rough and rocky life help the audience to sympathize with him in spite of his criminal lifestyle, and they do the job well.
* "Twittering from the Circus of the Dead"; Despite spending almost the entire story complaining about her, Blake's last final line is [[IWantMyMommy screaming a gut-wrenching cry for her mother]] while being dragged the staff drag her to her doom.doom. The ticket-taker then uses her Twitter account to promote her as the Circus' next ringmistress, forced to avoid the same zombies that killed and infected her family for her captors' amusement.
* In "Model Kid", there's the abuse Joe gets from both his bully and his uncle. After getting smacked bt Kevin when he loses his job, Joe sits in bed wearing a skull mask to hide the potential bruise and looking at an old photo of him and his mom.
--> '''Joe:''' I miss you...
* Norm, the kindly artist/veteran/TV host from "Public Television of the Dead", uses his painting to supress his trauma from 'Nam, as evidenced when he stares at a blank canvas while the sounds of war echo in his head. Both Claudia and George are sorry for him when his show ends up canned, but are still charmed by how gently he takes the news.
** In the same episode, the possessed Henrietta channels the spirit of Mrs. Bookberry's abusive father, causing her to cower and promise that she'll make him proud. Though she spends all her screentime not on-camera acting like a bigoted bitch, this little moment shows that she wasn't always who she is now.
* In "Pesticide", even though he's an obnoxious, grandstanding jerk at first, Harlan is tormented nonstop by waking nightmares of being mauled to death by giant bugs and rats, making the viewers feel for him. He's unfortunately crushed to death by Brenda, who (possibly) mistakes him for a cockroach.
* The ending to "The Right Snuff" is gut-wrenching, as Alex kills Ted to become the first person to make contact with alien life and become just as famous as his abusive father, if not moreso. When he meets the Gorangi, they let him know that Ted was an ambassador to their race, and his overusing the gravity wave they created to kill him has hurdled the moon out of its orbit and set it on a collision course with Earth. Just before the planet is destroyed, the Gorangi proceed to kick Alex when he's down by broadcasting his killing of Ted across the globe, letting people everywhere boo and jeer him. When he's left alone in his makeshift tomb in the stars, Alex breaks down weeping as his father rebukes that he'll "never be the one" a final time.
* Near the end of "Sibling Rivalry", Andrew becomes torn with either letting Lola stay alive so he won't be the last living member of their family, or killing her to stop her from feeding on innocent people. Thankfully, the siblings decide to TakeAThirdOption.
* Zeller from "Within the Walls of Madness" just can't catch a break, as his lover is slaughtered by a cosmic horror that he goes mad upon seeing, the head of security is inches from blowing his head off, his deranged superior orchestrated the phony containment breach to frame him for the killings as a plot to summon the horror and its breatheren to destroy the world, and his appointed attorney clearly couldn't give two shits about what happens to him, only interested in taking his case for the ancillary rights.
* Poor Renee in "Night of the Living Late Show" foolishly married an obnoxious, self-centered, and adulterous gold digger against her father's wishes, causing the man to disown her. The phone call she has with him, which occurs right before she discovers Simon's infidelity and ends with her breathing heavily and almost breaking down in her car, shows that he still hasn't forgiven her, nor will he ever.
--> '''Renee:''' Hi, Dad. I hope I'm not disturbing you. I know we haven't spoken in such a long time.\\
'''Renee's father:''' (''patronizingly'') How's your husband?\\
'''Renee:''' He's... he's fine. He's fine, we're good. He's actually, um... he's working on a new invention right now, believe it or not.\\
'''Renee's father:''' Mhmm. '''Who paid for it?'''\\
'''Renee:''' Well, the money's not really the point, Dad.\\
'''Renee's father:''' '''''You sure about that?''''' (''hangs up'')



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-->'''Jordy:''' "Please, God, let my luck be in! Just this once. Please, God, just this-" ''(BLAM!)''

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-->'''Jordy:''' "Please, God, let my luck be in! Just this once. Please, God, just this-" this once." ''(BLAM!)''



-->'''Aunt Bedelia:''' ''(quietly)'' Happy Father's Day. ''(sits down)'' I didn't know l had it in me! I'm your daughter, right? You bootlegger! Killer! Murderer! UngratefulBastard. You shouldn't have killed Yarbro! He was a man, a ''real'' man! Everything I wanted, he wanted for me! You stupid bastard! [[BigScrewedUpFamily You screwed it all up. You screwed up my mother, you screwed me up.]] You got me so mad, you drove me crazy. "I want my cake, Bedelia, you bitch!" ''(near sobbing)'' You called me a bitch! ''(calm)'' Sylvia fixed it all. Ashtray back in place. Chair overturned. A fall, Daddy, a bad fall. Nobody could catch us! Nobody! You taught me, you taught Sylvia! [[ALessonLearnedTooWell You taught us all]]!

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-->'''Aunt Bedelia:''' ''(quietly)'' Happy Father's Day. ''(sits down)'' I didn't know l had it in me! I'm your daughter, right? You bootlegger! Killer! Murderer! ''Murderer!'' UngratefulBastard. You shouldn't have killed Yarbro! Peter! He was a man, see, a ''real'' man! Everything I wanted, he wanted for me! ''for me!'' You stupid bastard! [[BigScrewedUpFamily You screwed it all up. You screwed up my mother, you screwed me up.]] You got me so mad, you drove me crazy. "I want my cake, Bedelia, you bitch!" ''(near sobbing)'' You called me a bitch! ''(calm)'' Sylvia fixed it all. all! Ashtray back in place. place! Chair overturned. A overturned! ''(calm)''A fall, Daddy, a bad fall. Nobody could catch us! us. Nobody! You taught me, you taught Sylvia! [[ALessonLearnedTooWell You taught us all]]!all]].



* Though Harry and Becky clearly deserve ''some'' kind of punishment (to those that sympathize with Richard), it's hard not to cry over the terrible thing they go through. Buried up to your necks in sand, watching each other suffer and die a slow and painful death from the tide, struggling to stay alive in the process....
** Thankfully (?) for them, DeathIsNotPermanent.

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* Though Harry and Becky clearly deserve ''some'' kind of punishment (to those that sympathize with Richard), it's It's hard not to cry over the terrible thing they Harry and Becky from "Something to Tide You Over" go through. Buried up to your their necks in sand, watching each other suffer and die a slow and painful death from the tide, struggling to stay alive in the process....
** Thankfully (?) for them, DeathIsNotPermanent.



* Lenora Castonmeyer's tearful breakdown over the phone. Made ''much'' worse by how Upson shamelessly mocks her grief -- and even [[LiteralMetaphor plays a violin for her]].

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* In "Gray Matter", Timmy's entire situation. A few years prior, his mother passed away in an accident. His father, Richie, [[TheAlcoholic tried to drown his sorrows]], which resulted in him losing his job. Then, after one contaminated beer, Richie slowly mutates into a BlobMonster that develops a taste for flesh, leading to Timmy having to feed him not only the neighborhood pets, but the twin girls who were shown to have gone missing. His new monstrous body then self-duplicates at a rate that could bring about the end of the world in six days. And despite how much his dad changes, and how afraid he is, Timmy refused to give up on him to the very end.
-->'''Timmy:''' He promised me he was gonna quit [drinking]. He's my Daddy. I love him.
* You ''will'' feel sorry for the poor ghost-menaced Smithsmiths: never mind that they're only dolls.
* "All Hallow's Eve", as Pete and Jill are obviously at the cusp of their first relationship. Which will never progress because their lives were ended.
** Also, Pete [[GutPunch bidding his little brother goodbye,]] as their mission of revenge is over and they are moving on.

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* Lenora Lenore Castonmeyer's tearful breakdown over the phone. Made ''much'' worse by how Upson shamelessly mocks her grief -- and even [[LiteralMetaphor plays a violin for her]].

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* In "Gray Matter", Timmy's entire situation. situation in "Gray Matter". A few years prior, his mother passed away in an accident. His father, accident right after a horrible fight with his father Richie, who [[TheAlcoholic tried to drown his sorrows]], which resulted in him losing sorrows]] to the point where he lost his job. Then, after one contaminated beer, Richie slowly mutates into a BlobMonster that develops a taste for flesh, leading to Timmy having to feed him not only the neighborhood pets, but the twin girls who were shown to have gone missing. His new monstrous body then self-duplicates at a rate that could will bring about the end of the world in only six days. And despite how much his dad changes, changed, and how afraid he is, Timmy refused to give up on him to the very end.
-->'''Timmy:''' --> '''Timmy:''' He promised me he was gonna quit [drinking]. He's my Daddy. I love him.
* You ''will'' feel sorry for Evie and the poor ghost-menaced Smithsmiths: Smithsmiths from "The House of the Head", never mind that they're only the latter are dolls.
* "All Hallow's Eve", as whose protagonists are a group of ghostly children avenging themselves against the teenagers who burned them alive. What's even more bitter is that Pete and Jill are were obviously at the cusp of their first relationship. Which a relationship, which will now never progress because their lives were ended.
progress.
** Also, There's also the scene where Pete [[GutPunch bidding tells his little brother goodbye,]] as Skeeter]] that their mission of revenge vengeance is over and they can finally rest.
--> '''Pete:''' I wish we had known each other longer, Skeet. (''giving the boy a hug'') I love you, little brother.
* The entirety of Brenner's tragic backstory from "The Companion".
* "Night of the Paw" has Whitey's story of how his beloved wife died and how he turned her into a zombie via his wish, tearfully proclaiming his love for her as he returns her to the grave.
* "Skincrawlers"; Henry's struggle with body image and self-esteem can easily hit a nerve for those who suffer from the same thing.
* "By the Silver Water of Lake Champlain" is a ''significantly'' darker episode compared to the rest of the series. There's no comedy, no {{Bathos}}, protagonist Rose has recites her dialogue listlessly and on the verge of tears, Leigh and her daughter
are moving on.growing apart, and not to mention Chet and his abuse. Thankfully, there's a happy ending.
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* "Twitterings from the Circus of the Dead"; Despite spending almost the entire story complaining about her, Blake's last line is [[IWantMyMommy screaming for her mother]] while being dragged to her doom.

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* "Twitterings "Twittering from the Circus of the Dead"; Despite spending almost the entire story complaining about her, Blake's last line is [[IWantMyMommy screaming for her mother]] while being dragged to her doom.
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* "Time Out"; While some may have seen it coming a mile away, it's still sad to see Tim banging on the doors while inside of the armoire as he ages into dust with his son on the outside trying to catch on. It's largely because unlike many horror victims, the audience grows to sympathize with Tim. Apart from his ambitious legal career, he seems to be a good guy who loves his wife and son. It only took one hole in the pocket of his sweater to ruin it all. And worse yet, his son walks straight into the armoire once his dad crumbles away, dropping the key outside and thus readying him for the same fate that befell his father.

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* "Time Out"; While some may have seen it coming a mile away, it's still sad to see Tim banging on the doors while inside of the armoire as he ages into dust with his son on the outside trying to catch on. It's largely because unlike many horror victims, the audience grows to sympathize with Tim. Apart from his ambitious legal career, he seems to be a good guy who loves his wife and son. It only took one hole in the pocket of his sweater to ruin it all. And worse yet, his son walks straight into the armoire once his dad crumbles away, dropping the key outside and thus readying him for the same fate that befell his father.father.
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* In "Gray Matter", Timmy’s entire situation. A few years prior, his mother passed away in an accident. His father, Richie, [[TheAlcoholic tried to drown his sorrows]], which resulted in him losing his job. Then, after one contaminated beer, Richie slowly mutates into a BlobMonster that develops a taste for flesh, leading to Timmy having to feed him not only the neighborhood pets, but the twin girls who were shown to have gone missing. His new monstrous body then self-duplicates at a rate that could bring about the end of the world in six days. And despite how much his dad changes, and how afraid he is, Timmy refused to give up on him to the very end.
-->'''Timmy:''' He promised me he was gonna quit [drinking]. He’s my Daddy. I love him.

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* In "Gray Matter", Timmy’s Timmy's entire situation. A few years prior, his mother passed away in an accident. His father, Richie, [[TheAlcoholic tried to drown his sorrows]], which resulted in him losing his job. Then, after one contaminated beer, Richie slowly mutates into a BlobMonster that develops a taste for flesh, leading to Timmy having to feed him not only the neighborhood pets, but the twin girls who were shown to have gone missing. His new monstrous body then self-duplicates at a rate that could bring about the end of the world in six days. And despite how much his dad changes, and how afraid he is, Timmy refused to give up on him to the very end.
-->'''Timmy:''' He promised me he was gonna quit [drinking]. He’s He's my Daddy. I love him.



* "All Hallow's Eve," as Pete and Jill are obviously at the cusp of their first relationship. Which will never progress because their lives were ended.

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* "All Hallow's Eve," Eve", as Pete and Jill are obviously at the cusp of their first relationship. Which will never progress because their lives were ended.



* “Twitterings from the Circus of the Dead”; Despite spending almost the entire story complaining about her, Blake's last line is [[IWantMyMommy screaming for her mother]] while being dragged to her doom.
* “Time Out”; While some may have seen it coming a mile away, it’s still sad to see Tim banging on the doors while inside of the armoire as he ages into dust with his son on the outside trying to catch on. It’s largely because unlike many horror victims, the audience grows to sympathize with Tim. Apart from his ambitious legal career, he seems to be a good guy who loves his wife and son. It only took one hole in the pocket of his sweater to ruin it all. And worse yet, his son walks straight into the armoire once his dad crumbles away, dropping the key outside and thus readying him for the same fate that befell his father.

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* “Twitterings "Twitterings from the Circus of the Dead”; Dead"; Despite spending almost the entire story complaining about her, Blake's last line is [[IWantMyMommy screaming for her mother]] while being dragged to her doom.
* “Time Out”; "Time Out"; While some may have seen it coming a mile away, it’s it's still sad to see Tim banging on the doors while inside of the armoire as he ages into dust with his son on the outside trying to catch on. It’s It's largely because unlike many horror victims, the audience grows to sympathize with Tim. Apart from his ambitious legal career, he seems to be a good guy who loves his wife and son. It only took one hole in the pocket of his sweater to ruin it all. And worse yet, his son walks straight into the armoire once his dad crumbles away, dropping the key outside and thus readying him for the same fate that befell his father.

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* “Twitterings from the Circus of the Dead”; Despite spending almost the entire story complaining about her, Blake's last line is [[IWantMyMommy screaming for her mother]] while being dragged to her doom.

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* “Twitterings from the Circus of the Dead”; Despite spending almost the entire story complaining about her, Blake's last line is [[IWantMyMommy screaming for her mother]] while being dragged to her doom.doom.
* “Time Out”; While some may have seen it coming a mile away, it’s still sad to see Tim banging on the doors while inside of the armoire as he ages into dust with his son on the outside trying to catch on. It’s largely because unlike many horror victims, the audience grows to sympathize with Tim. Apart from his ambitious legal career, he seems to be a good guy who loves his wife and son. It only took one hole in the pocket of his sweater to ruin it all. And worse yet, his son walks straight into the armoire once his dad crumbles away, dropping the key outside and thus readying him for the same fate that befell his father.
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* In "Gray Matter", Timmy’s entire situation. A few years prior, his mother passed away in an accident, which resulted in this father, Richie, [[TheAlcoholic trying to drown his sorrows]]. Then, after one contaminated beer, Richie slowly mutates into a BlobMonster that develops a taste for flesh, leading to Timmy having to feed him not only the neighborhood pets, but the twin girls who were shown to have gone missing. His new monstrous body then self-duplicates at a rate that could bring about the end of the world in six days. And despite how much his dad changes, and how afraid he is, Timmy refused to give up on him to the very end.

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* In "Gray Matter", Timmy’s entire situation. A few years prior, his mother passed away in an accident, which resulted in this accident. His father, Richie, [[TheAlcoholic trying tried to drown his sorrows]].sorrows]], which resulted in him losing his job. Then, after one contaminated beer, Richie slowly mutates into a BlobMonster that develops a taste for flesh, leading to Timmy having to feed him not only the neighborhood pets, but the twin girls who were shown to have gone missing. His new monstrous body then self-duplicates at a rate that could bring about the end of the world in six days. And despite how much his dad changes, and how afraid he is, Timmy refused to give up on him to the very end.
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* In "Gray Matter", Timmy’s entire situation. His mother died a few years prior, which lead to his father, Richie, [[TheAlcoholic trying to drown his sorrows]]. Then, after one contaminated beer, Richie slowly mutates into a BlobMonster that develops a taste for flesh, leading to Timmy having to feed him not only the neighborhood pets, but the twin girls who were shown to have gone missing. His new monstrous body then self-duplicates at a rate that could bring about the end of the world in six days. And despite how much his dad changes, and how afraid he is, Timmy refused to give up on him to the very end.

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* In "Gray Matter", Timmy’s entire situation. His mother died a A few years prior, his mother passed away in an accident, which lead to his resulted in this father, Richie, [[TheAlcoholic trying to drown his sorrows]]. Then, after one contaminated beer, Richie slowly mutates into a BlobMonster that develops a taste for flesh, leading to Timmy having to feed him not only the neighborhood pets, but the twin girls who were shown to have gone missing. His new monstrous body then self-duplicates at a rate that could bring about the end of the world in six days. And despite how much his dad changes, and how afraid he is, Timmy refused to give up on him to the very end.
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* In "Gray Matter", Timmy’s entire situation. His mother died a few years prior, which lead to his father [[TheAlcoholic trying to drown his sorrows]]. Then, after one contaminated beer, his father slowly mutates into a BlobMonster that develops a taste for flesh, leading to Timmy having to feed him not only the neighborhood pets, but the twin girls who were shown to have gone missing. His new monstrous body then self-duplicates at a rate that could bring about the end of the world in six days. And despite how much his dad changes, and how afraid he is, Timmy refused to give up on him to the very end.

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* In "Gray Matter", Timmy’s entire situation. His mother died a few years prior, which lead to his father father, Richie, [[TheAlcoholic trying to drown his sorrows]]. Then, after one contaminated beer, his father Richie slowly mutates into a BlobMonster that develops a taste for flesh, leading to Timmy having to feed him not only the neighborhood pets, but the twin girls who were shown to have gone missing. His new monstrous body then self-duplicates at a rate that could bring about the end of the world in six days. And despite how much his dad changes, and how afraid he is, Timmy refused to give up on him to the very end.
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* In "Gray Matter", Timmy’s entire situation. His mother dies in a car accident, which leads to his father becoming TheAlcoholic. Then, after one contaminated beer, his father slowly mutates into a BlobMonster that develops a taste for flesh, leading to Timmy having to feed him not only the neighborhood pets, but the twin girls who were shown to have gone missing. His new monstrous body then self-duplicates at a rate that could bring about the end of the world in six days. And despite how much his dad changes, and how afraid he is, Timmy refused to give up on him to the very end.

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* In "Gray Matter", Timmy’s entire situation. His mother dies in died a car accident, few years prior, which leads lead to his father becoming TheAlcoholic.[[TheAlcoholic trying to drown his sorrows]]. Then, after one contaminated beer, his father slowly mutates into a BlobMonster that develops a taste for flesh, leading to Timmy having to feed him not only the neighborhood pets, but the twin girls who were shown to have gone missing. His new monstrous body then self-duplicates at a rate that could bring about the end of the world in six days. And despite how much his dad changes, and how afraid he is, Timmy refused to give up on him to the very end.
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* In "Gray Matter", Timmy’s entire situation. His mother dies a year prior, which leads to his father becoming TheAlcoholic. Then, after one contaminated beer, his father slowly mutates into a BlobMonster that develops a taste for flesh, leading to Timmy having to feed him not only the neighborhood pets, but the twin girls who were shown to have gone missing. His new monstrous body then self-duplicates at a rate that could bring about the end of the world in six days. And despite how much his dad changes, and how afraid he is, Timmy refused to give up on him to the very end.

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* In "Gray Matter", Timmy’s entire situation. His mother dies in a year prior, car accident, which leads to his father becoming TheAlcoholic. Then, after one contaminated beer, his father slowly mutates into a BlobMonster that develops a taste for flesh, leading to Timmy having to feed him not only the neighborhood pets, but the twin girls who were shown to have gone missing. His new monstrous body then self-duplicates at a rate that could bring about the end of the world in six days. And despite how much his dad changes, and how afraid he is, Timmy refused to give up on him to the very end.
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* In "Gray Matter", Timmy’s entire situation. His mother dies a year prior, which leads to his father becoming TheAlcoholic. Then, after one contaminated beer, his father slowly mutates into a BlobMonster that develops a taste for flesh, leading to Timmy having to feed him not only the neighborhood pets, but the twin girls who were shown to have gone missing. His new monstrous body then self-duplicates at a rate that could bring about the end of the world in six days. And despite how much his dad changes, and how afraid he is, Timmy refused to give up on him to the very end.
-->'''Timmy:''' He promised me he was gonna quit [drinking]. He’s my Daddy. I love him.
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**The comic adaptation makes it even sadder. Instead of her cathartically ranting at his tombstone, its her sadly remarking that he should've let her marry her fiance and that she would've still taken care of him. Even after everything he put her through, she can't even bring herself to hate him, even admitting that she misses him moments before he rises up. The comic turned her from a spiteful old woman who gleefully rubbed the act in his face to one who just can't catch a break.
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* Lenora Castonmeyer's tearful breakdown over the phone. Made ''much'' worse by how Upson shamelessly mocks her grief.

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* Lenora Castonmeyer's tearful breakdown over the phone. Made ''much'' worse by how Upson shamelessly mocks her grief.
grief -- and even [[LiteralMetaphor plays a violin for her]].
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* "All Hallow's Eve," as Pete and Jill are obviously at the cusp of their first relationship. [[spoiler:Which will never progress because their lives were ended.]]
** Also, Pete [[spoiler:bidding his little brother goodbye, as their mission of revenge is over and they are moving on.]]

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* "All Hallow's Eve," as Pete and Jill are obviously at the cusp of their first relationship. [[spoiler:Which Which will never progress because their lives were ended.]]
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** Also, Pete [[spoiler:bidding [[GutPunch bidding his little brother goodbye, goodbye,]] as their mission of revenge is over and they are moving on.]]
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* Despite spending almost the entire story complaining about her, Blake's last line is [[IWantMyMommy screaming for her mother]] while being dragged to her doom.

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* “Twitterings from the Circus of the Dead”; Despite spending almost the entire story complaining about her, Blake's last line is [[IWantMyMommy screaming for her mother]] while being dragged to her doom.
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-->'''Aunt Bedelia:''' ''(quietly)'' Happy Father's Day. ''(sits down)'' I didn't know l had it in me! I'm your daughter, right? You bootlegger! Killer! Murderer! UngratefulBastard. You shouldn't have killed Yarbro! He was a man, a ''real'' man! Everything I wanted, he wanted for me! You stupid bastard! [[BigScrewedUpFamily You screwed it all up. You screwed up my mother, you screwed me up.]] You got me so mad, you drove me crazy. "I want my cake, Bedelia, you bitch!" ''(near sobbing)'' You called me a bitch! ''(calm)'' Sylvia fixed it all. Ashtray back in place. Chair overturned. A fall, Daddy, a bad fall. Nobody could catch us! Nobody! You taught me, you taught Sylvia! You taught us all!

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-->'''Aunt Bedelia:''' ''(quietly)'' Happy Father's Day. ''(sits down)'' I didn't know l had it in me! I'm your daughter, right? You bootlegger! Killer! Murderer! UngratefulBastard. You shouldn't have killed Yarbro! He was a man, a ''real'' man! Everything I wanted, he wanted for me! You stupid bastard! [[BigScrewedUpFamily You screwed it all up. You screwed up my mother, you screwed me up.]] You got me so mad, you drove me crazy. "I want my cake, Bedelia, you bitch!" ''(near sobbing)'' You called me a bitch! ''(calm)'' Sylvia fixed it all. Ashtray back in place. Chair overturned. A fall, Daddy, a bad fall. Nobody could catch us! Nobody! You taught me, you taught Sylvia! [[ALessonLearnedTooWell You taught us all!all]]!
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** Also, Pete [[spoiler:bidding his little brother goodbye, as their mission of revenge is over and they are moving on.]]

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** Also, Pete [[spoiler:bidding his little brother goodbye, as their mission of revenge is over and they are moving on.]]]]
* Despite spending almost the entire story complaining about her, Blake's last line is [[IWantMyMommy screaming for her mother]] while being dragged to her doom.
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* You ''will'' feel sorry for the poor ghost-menaced Smithsmiths: never mind that they're only dolls.

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* You ''will'' feel sorry for the poor ghost-menaced Smithsmiths: never mind that they're only dolls.dolls.
* "All Hallow's Eve," as Pete and Jill are obviously at the cusp of their first relationship. [[spoiler:Which will never progress because their lives were ended.]]
** Also, Pete [[spoiler:bidding his little brother goodbye, as their mission of revenge is over and they are moving on.]]
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* You ''will'' feel sorry for the poor ghost-menaced Smithsmiths, even though they're only dolls.

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* You ''will'' feel sorry for the poor ghost-menaced Smithsmiths, even though Smithsmiths: never mind that they're only dolls.
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* Lenora Castonmeyer's tearful breakdown over the phone. Made ''much'' worse by how Upson shamelessly mocks her grief.

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* Lenora Castonmeyer's tearful breakdown over the phone. Made ''much'' worse by how Upson shamelessly mocks her grief.grief.

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* Aunt Bedelia's touching diatribe at her father's grave and anguishing over the death of her lover.

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* Aunt Bedelia's touching diatribe at her father's grave and anguishing over the death of her lover. She's also wracked with guilt for killing her father in the first place.
-->'''Aunt Bedelia:''' ''(quietly)'' Happy Father's Day. ''(sits down)'' I didn't know l had it in me! I'm your daughter, right? You bootlegger! Killer! Murderer! UngratefulBastard. You shouldn't have killed Yarbro! He was a man, a ''real'' man! Everything I wanted, he wanted for me! You stupid bastard! [[BigScrewedUpFamily You screwed it all up. You screwed up my mother, you screwed me up.]] You got me so mad, you drove me crazy. "I want my cake, Bedelia, you bitch!" ''(near sobbing)'' You called me a bitch! ''(calm)'' Sylvia fixed it all. Ashtray back in place. Chair overturned. A fall, Daddy, a bad fall. Nobody could catch us! Nobody! You taught me, you taught Sylvia! You taught us all!
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-->'''Jordy:''' Please... God.... let my luck be ''good'' just this once.... just... this... once... ''(BLAM!)''

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-->'''Jordy:''' Please... God.... "Please, God, let my luck be ''good'' in! Just this once. Please, God, just this once.... just... this... once... this-" ''(BLAM!)''
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* Jordy's last lines when being DrivenToSuicide.

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* Jordy's last lines when being DrivenToSuicide.DrivenToSuicide - though with a title like "[[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin The Lonesome Death of Jordy Verrill]]", what did you expect?
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** Not to mention the music forces the sympathy of them down our throats.

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** Not to mention the music forces the sympathy of them down our throats.throats.
* Lenora Castonmeyer's tearful breakdown over the phone. Made ''much'' worse by how Upson shamelessly mocks her grief.
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* Though Harry and Becky clearly deserve it (to those that sympathize with Richard), it's hard not to cry over the terrible thing they go through. Buried up to your necks in sand, watching each other suffer and die a slow and painful death from the tide, struggling to stay alive in the process....

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* Though Harry and Becky clearly deserve it ''some'' kind of punishment (to those that sympathize with Richard), it's hard not to cry over the terrible thing they go through. Buried up to your necks in sand, watching each other suffer and die a slow and painful death from the tide, struggling to stay alive in the process....
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** Not to mention his brief imaginary (or is it?) conversation with his father's spirit. As the plants continue to grow over him they start making him itch terribly, so Jordy attempts to get in a bathtub full of water to ease it. His dad warns him not to do it, since water makes the plants grow faster and getting in a tub with that much would cause him to be covered entirely. But Jordy grimly realizes that not getting in would just delay the inevitable. The way he voices this helps add to the depressing ending of an otherwise darkly comic story.
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** Thankfully (?) for them, DeathIsNotPermanent.

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** Thankfully (?) for them, DeathIsNotPermanent.DeathIsNotPermanent.
** Not to mention the music forces the sympathy of them down our throats.
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* Though Harry and Becky clearly deserve it (to those that sympathize with Richard), it's hard not to cry over the terrible thing they go through. Buried up to your necks in sand, watching each other suffer and die a slow and painful death from the tide, struggling to stay alive in the process....

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* Though Harry and Becky clearly deserve it (to those that sympathize with Richard), it's hard not to cry over the terrible thing they go through. Buried up to your necks in sand, watching each other suffer and die a slow and painful death from the tide, struggling to stay alive in the process....process....
** Thankfully (?) for them, DeathIsNotPermanent.

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