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** It thus becomes cathartic when the NonActionBigBad responsible for said wolf-culling gets killed by... a pack of wolves, in the climax.
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** It thus becomes cathartic [[KarmicDeath cathartic]] when the NonActionBigBad responsible for said wolf-culling gets killed by... a pack of wolves, in the climax.
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* It really looks like Marianne died after her brother's brutal rape on her, and Fronsac has the appropriate reaction when he finds her unconscious. Fortunately, [[DisneyDeath she's not dead]].
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* It really looks like Marianne died after being brutally raped by her brother's brutal rape on her, brother, and Fronsac has the appropriate reaction when he finds her unconscious. Fortunately, [[DisneyDeath she's not dead]].
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* It really looks like Marianne died after her brother's brutal rape on her and Fronsac has the appropriate reaction. Fortunately, [[DisneyDeath she's not dead]].
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* It really looks like Marianne died after her brother's brutal rape on her her, and Fronsac has the appropriate reaction.reaction when he finds her unconscious. Fortunately, [[DisneyDeath she's not dead]].
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* It really looks like Marianne died after her brother's brutal assault on her and Fronsac has the appropriate reaction. Fortunately, [[DisneyDeath she's not dead]].
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* It really looks like Marianne died after her brother's brutal assault rape on her and Fronsac has the appropriate reaction. Fortunately, [[DisneyDeath she's not dead]].
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* It really looks like Marianne died after her brother's brutal assault on her and Fronsac has the appropriate reaction. Fortunately, [[DisneyDeath she's not dead]].
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** It thus becomes cathartic when the NonActionBigBad responsible for said wolf-culling gets killed by a pack of wolves in the climax.
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** It thus becomes cathartic when the NonActionBigBad responsible for said wolf-culling gets killed by by... a pack of wolves wolves, in the climax.
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** It thus becomes cathartic when the NonActionBigBad responsible for said wolf-culling gets killed by a pack of wolves.
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** It thus becomes cathartic when the NonActionBigBad responsible for said wolf-culling gets killed by a pack of wolves.wolves in the climax.
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* For animal lovers, seeing so many wolves being hunted and slaughtered for sport under the pretense of hunting down the Beast (which is believed to be a big wolf). Especially for someone like Mani, who's a NatureHero and actually bonds with the wildlife in a way.
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* For animal lovers, seeing so many wolves being hunted and slaughtered for sport under the pretense of hunting down the Beast (which is believed to be a big wolf). Especially for someone like Mani, [[MagicalNativeAmerican Mani]], who's a NatureHero and actually bonds with the wildlife in a way.
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* For animal lovers, seeing so many wolves being hunted and slaughtered for sport under the pretense of hunting down the Beast (which is believed to be a big wolf). Especially for someone like Mani, who's a NatureHero.
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* For animal lovers, seeing so many wolves being hunted and slaughtered for sport under the pretense of hunting down the Beast (which is believed to be a big wolf). Especially for someone like Mani, who's a NatureHero.NatureHero and actually bonds with the wildlife in a way.
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* Mani is outnumbered, shot, tortured and killed. Fronsac has to perform the autopsy of his OnlyFriend and {{Blood Brother|s}} himself, and a RoaringRampageOfRevenge ensues later on.
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* Mani is getting outnumbered, shot, tortured and killed. Fronsac has to perform the autopsy of his OnlyFriend and {{Blood Brother|s}} brother in everything but blood himself, and a RoaringRampageOfRevenge ensues later on.
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* For animal lovers, seeing so much wolves being hunted and slaughtered for sport under the pretense of hunting down the Beast (which is believed to be a big wolf). Especially for someone like Mani, who's a NatureHero.
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* For animal lovers, seeing so much many wolves being hunted and slaughtered for sport under the pretense of hunting down the Beast (which is believed to be a big wolf). Especially for someone like Mani, who's a NatureHero.
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* For animal lovers, seeing so much wolves being hunted and slaughtered for sport under the pretense of hunting down the Beast (which is believed to be a big wolf). Especially for someone like Mani, who's InHarmonyWithNature.
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* For animal lovers, seeing so much wolves being hunted and slaughtered for sport under the pretense of hunting down the Beast (which is believed to be a big wolf). Especially for someone like Mani, who's InHarmonyWithNature.a NatureHero.
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* Mani is outnumbered, shot, tortured and killed. Fronsac later has to perform the autopsy of his OnlyFriend and {{Blood Brother|s}} himself, and a RoaringRampageOfRevenge ensues later on.
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* Mani is outnumbered, shot, tortured and killed. Fronsac later has to perform the autopsy of his OnlyFriend and {{Blood Brother|s}} himself, and a RoaringRampageOfRevenge ensues later on.
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* Mani is outnumbered, shot, tortured and killed. Fronsac later has to perform the autopsy of his OnlyFriend and {{Blood Brother|s}} himself, and a RoaringRampageOfRevenge ensues later ensues.on.
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** It thus becomes cathartic when the NonActionBigBad responsible for said wolf-culling gets killed by a pack of wolves.
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* Mani is outnumbered, shot, tortured and killed. Fronsac later has to perform the autopsy of his OnlyFriend and {{Blood Brother|s}} himself.himself, and a RoaringRampageOfRevenge later ensues.
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* Mani is outnumbered, shot, tortured and killed. Fronsac later has to perform the autopsy of his OnlyFriend himself.
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* Mani is outnumbered, shot, tortured and killed. Fronsac later has to perform the autopsy of his OnlyFriend and {{Blood Brother|s}} himself.
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* Mani is outnumbered, shot, tortured and killed. Fronsac later has to perform the autopsy himself.
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* Mani is outnumbered, shot, tortured and killed. Fronsac later has to perform the autopsy of his OnlyFriend himself.
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* For animal lovers, seeing so much wolves being slaughtered under the pretense of hunting down the Beast (which is believed to be a big wolf). Especially for someone like Mani, who's InHarmonyWithNature.
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* For animal lovers, seeing so much wolves being hunted and slaughtered for sport under the pretense of hunting down the Beast (which is believed to be a big wolf). Especially for someone like Mani, who's InHarmonyWithNature.
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* For animal lovers, seeing so much wolves being slaughtered under the pretense of hunting down the Beast (which is believed to be a big wolf). Especially for someone like Mani, who's InHarmonyWithNature.
* Mani is outnumbered, shot, tortured and killed. Fronsac later has to perform the autopsy himself.
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* Mani is outnumbered, shot, tortured and killed. Fronsac later has to perform the autopsy himself.
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