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--->[[spoiler: Artemis: "I was a broken boy and you fixed me. Thank you."]]
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--->[[spoiler: Artemis: "I was a broken boy and you fixed me. Thank you."]]"]]
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* On the whole, the weakly-developed characterizations can make it hard to feel anything for the characters. However, the scene where Domovoi Butler [[spoiler:is on the verge of death and Artemis recites the Irish Blessing to him is definitely something of a tearjerker.]]
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* On the whole, the weakly-developed characterizations can make it hard to feel anything for the characters. However, the scene where Domovoi Butler [[spoiler:is on the verge of death and Artemis recites the Irish Blessing to him is definitely something of a tearjerker.]]
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-->[[spoiler: Holly: "Please don't hate me forever, Artie. I couldn't bear that."]]
-->[[spoiler: Artemis: "I was a broken boy and you fixed me. Thank you."]]
-->[[spoiler: Artemis: "I was a broken boy and you fixed me. Thank you."]]
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-->''"Please... call me [[spoiler:Domovoi]]."''
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** Likewise, Holly's reaction when she believes [[spoiler: Artemis and Butler have been bio-bombed]].
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** Likewise, Holly's reaction when she believes [[spoiler: Artemis and Butler have been bio-bombed]].bio-bombed]] This is the first time that we see her cry, and it shows, especially in the graphic novel.
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* Butler's death in ''The Eternity Code''. His instinct is to throw himself between Artemis and the threat. The heartbreaking part is Artemis is so much more than just a job to him - as Butler dies, he tells Artemis his first name. The scene only gets sadder when you look at Artemis, who's crying and thinking about how they were supposed to die together.
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* Butler's death [[spoiler:temporary death]] in ''The Eternity Code''. His instinct is to throw himself between Artemis and the threat. The heartbreaking part is Artemis is so much more than just a job to him - as [[spoiler:as Butler dies, dies,]] he tells Artemis his first name. The scene only gets sadder when you look at Artemis, who's crying and thinking about how [[spoiler:how they were supposed to die together.]]
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* Artemis's situation in the first book is quite distressing from an objective point of view - his mother is locked in an attic, his father is missing presumed dead and he's alone in a house with no one but a bodyguard for company.
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* Artemis's situation in the first book is quite distressing from an objective point of view - his mother is locked in an attic, mentally addled from grief and refuses to leave her attic room, his father is missing and presumed dead dead, and he's virtually alone in a house with no one but a bodyguard his bodyguards for company.
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* Butler's death in ''The Eternity Code''. His instinct is to throw himself between Artemis and the threat. The heartbreaking part is Artemis is so much more than just a job to him - as Butler dies, he tells Artemis his first name. The scene only gets sadder when you look at Artemis, who's crying and thinking about how they were supposed to die together.
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* Artemis's situation in the first book is quite distressing from an objective point of view - his mother is locked in an attic, his father is missing presumed dead and he's alone in a house with no one but a bodyguard for company.
** The part where he goes into his (insane) mother's bedroom and she doesn't recognize him only gets sadder as you age.
* [[spoiler: Commander Root's death]] in ''The Opal Deception''. Simply everything in that chapter.
** Likewise, Holly's reaction when she believes [[spoiler: Artemis and Butler have been bio-bombed]].
* Holly [[spoiler: saying goodbye to Commander Root in ''The Time Paradox'' because she never got a chance to during ''The Opal Deception''.]]
** The part where he goes into his (insane) mother's bedroom and she doesn't recognize him only gets sadder as you age.
* [[spoiler: Commander Root's death]] in ''The Opal Deception''. Simply everything in that chapter.
** Likewise, Holly's reaction when she believes [[spoiler: Artemis and Butler have been bio-bombed]].
* Holly [[spoiler: saying goodbye to Commander Root in ''The Time Paradox'' because she never got a chance to during ''The Opal Deception''.]]
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-->[[spoiler: Artemis: "I was a broken boy and you fixed me. Thank you."]]
* Artemis's situation in the first book is quite distressing from an objective point of view - his mother is locked in an attic, his father is missing presumed dead and he's alone in a house with no one but a bodyguard for company.
** The part where he goes into his (insane) mother's bedroom and she doesn't recognize him only gets sadder as you age.
* Holly [[spoiler: saying goodbye to Commander Root in The Time Paradox because she never got a chance to during the Opal Deception.]]
* Artemis's situation in the first book is quite distressing from an objective point of view - his mother is locked in an attic, his father is missing presumed dead and he's alone in a house with no one but a bodyguard for company.
** The part where he goes into his (insane) mother's bedroom and she doesn't recognize him only gets sadder as you age.
* Holly [[spoiler: saying goodbye to Commander Root in The Time Paradox because she never got a chance to during the Opal Deception.]]
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-->[[spoiler: Artemis: "I was a broken boy and you fixed me. Thank you."]]
* Artemis's situation in the first book is quite distressing from an objective point of view - his mother is locked in an attic, his father is missing presumed dead and he's alone in a house with no one but a bodyguard for company.
** The part where he goes into his (insane) mother's bedroom and she doesn't recognize him only gets sadder as you age.
* Holly [[spoiler: saying goodbye to Commander Root in The Time Paradox because she never got a chance to during the Opal Deception.]]"]]
* Artemis's situation in the first book is quite distressing from an objective point of view - his mother is locked in an attic, his father is missing presumed dead and he's alone in a house with no one but a bodyguard for company.
** The part where he goes into his (insane) mother's bedroom and she doesn't recognize him only gets sadder as you age.
* Holly [[spoiler: saying goodbye to Commander Root in The Time Paradox because she never got a chance to during the Opal Deception.]]
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-->[[spoiler: Holly: "Please don't hate me forever, Artie. I couldn't bear that."]]
-->[[spoiler: Holly: "Please don't hate me forever, Artie. I couldn't bear that."]]
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** The part where he goes into his (insane) mother's bedroom and she doesn't recognize him only gets sadder as you age.
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** This line from the same book:
-->[[spoiler: Artemis: "I was a broken boy and you fixed me. Thank you."]]
-->[[spoiler: Artemis: "I was a broken boy and you fixed me. Thank you."]]
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** [[spoiler: Most particularly, when Butler catches Artemis (who, need I remind you, has been his sole purpose for god-knows-how-long and who he cares for very much and would do anything to protect) and Artemis is already dead.]]
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* The entire chapter of ''The Last Guardian'' [[spoiler:where Artemis is about to sacrifice himself to stop Opal opening the second lock, and he reflects on how he has matured and how 11-year-old Artemis would never have dreamt of risking his life like this. Then Holly tries to sedate him to go in his place...]]
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* The entire chapter of ''The Last Guardian'' [[spoiler:where Artemis is about to sacrifice himself to stop Opal opening the second lock, and he reflects on how he has matured and how 11-year-old Artemis would never have dreamt of risking his life like this. Then Holly tries to sedate him to go in his place...]]
* Artemis's situation in the first book is quite distressing from an objective point of view - his mother is locked in an attic, his father is missing presumed dead and he's alone in a house with no one but a bodyguard for company.
* Holly [[spoiler: saying goodbye to Commander Root in The Time Paradox because she never got a chance to during the Opal Deception.]]
* Artemis's situation in the first book is quite distressing from an objective point of view - his mother is locked in an attic, his father is missing presumed dead and he's alone in a house with no one but a bodyguard for company.
* Holly [[spoiler: saying goodbye to Commander Root in The Time Paradox because she never got a chance to during the Opal Deception.]]
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* The entire chapter of ''The Last Guardian'' [[spoiler:where Artemis is about to sacrifice himself to stop Opal opening the second lock, and he reflects on how he has matured and how 11-year-old Artemis would never have dreamt of risking his life like this. Then Holly tries to sedate him to go in his place...]]
