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* When Laura tries to offer to help Adam, he's so far past the ability to trust anyone that he flat out refuses to listen. All he can see is the possibility of exchanging one master for another and his opinion of magic is WithGreatPowerComesGreatInsanity .
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* When Laura tries to offer to help Adam, he's so far past the ability to trust anyone that he flat out refuses to listen. All he can see is the possibility of exchanging one master for another and his opinion of magic is WithGreatPowerComesGreatInsanity .WithGreatPowerComesGreatInsanity .
* Lidia realizing her friend and mentor not only knew where her son was all along, but is friends with his captor.
* Lidia realizing her friend and mentor not only knew where her son was all along, but is friends with his captor.
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* Stasya opening Patrick's gift. They were so close to having a real future for each other.
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* Stasya opening Patrick's gift. They were so close to having a real future for each other.together. It's made worse when you realize Stasya had already lost a family, and now she's lost her ReplacementGoldfish as well.
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* Poor Adam. He really did love Wren.
* When Adam notes that Patrick didn't even try to defend himself
* Ash wanting to be fixed
* Stasya opening Patrick's gift
* Poor Adam. He really did love Wren.
* When Adam notes that Patrick didn't even try to defend himself
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* Ash crossing the DespairEventHorizon after begging for his father's life. He's just screaming for his daddy.
daddy, and Sima's telling him it's his fault his father is being killed.
* Ash's breakdown after he sees the people he loves and trusts be willing to torture someone for information. It takes Gabriel somehow reciting Ash's own SurvivalMantra and understanding why Ash has to keep telling himself 'it was mercy' before Ash is even able to speak again.
* Ash wanting to befixed
fixed, and Daniel sadly realizing that SanitySlippage isn't something that can be healed by physical means.
* Stasya opening Patrick'sgift
gift. They were so close to having a real future for each other.
*Poor Adam. He really did love Wren.
* WhenEven after Wren crosses the MoralEventHorizon the first time it's clear Adam notes still loves her and wants to get her away from the Cabal in the hopes of saving her.
* Adam is made to kill his best friend. It's made worse by the fact his best friend realizes thatPatrick didn't Adam has no choice, and doesn't even try to defend himselfhimself so as not to hurt Adam any further.
* When Laura tries to offer to help Adam, he's so far past the ability to trust anyone that he flat out refuses to listen. All he can see is the possibility of exchanging one master for another and his opinion of magic is WithGreatPowerComesGreatInsanity .
* Ash's breakdown after he sees the people he loves and trusts be willing to torture someone for information. It takes Gabriel somehow reciting Ash's own SurvivalMantra and understanding why Ash has to keep telling himself 'it was mercy' before Ash is even able to speak again.
* Ash wanting to be
* Stasya opening Patrick's
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* Adam is made to kill his best friend. It's made worse by the fact his best friend realizes that
* When Laura tries to offer to help Adam, he's so far past the ability to trust anyone that he flat out refuses to listen. All he can see is the possibility of exchanging one master for another and his opinion of magic is WithGreatPowerComesGreatInsanity .
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* Poor Adam. He really did love Wren.
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* Poor Adam. He really did love Wren.Wren.
* When Adam notes that Patrick didn't even try to defend himself
* When Adam notes that Patrick didn't even try to defend himself
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* Stasya opening Patrick's gift
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* Poor Adam. He really did love Wren.
* Poor Adam. He really did love Wren.
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