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* When Twilight initially chooses to stay in Canterlot instead of returning to Ponyville, her friends are naturally dismayed by this, believing that their poor treatment drove her away. Fortunately, she reverses this decision.decision.
** Although this was changed when the writer added ''two'' endings: The first one being the original ending, where Twilight decides to go back with them to Ponyville despite her condition, or the newer ending where she ''does'' stay in Canterlot, but is determined to keep contact with the Mane Six always.
** The only bittersweet nature of it all is Twilight reunites with Minuette, Lyra, Lemon Hearts, and Moondancer, her old group of friends from before the events of the series.
** Although this was changed when the writer added ''two'' endings: The first one being the original ending, where Twilight decides to go back with them to Ponyville despite her condition, or the newer ending where she ''does'' stay in Canterlot, but is determined to keep contact with the Mane Six always.
** The only bittersweet nature of it all is Twilight reunites with Minuette, Lyra, Lemon Hearts, and Moondancer, her old group of friends from before the events of the series.
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