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* BastardUnderstudy: Fiers.
* CameBackWrong: Electro.
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* CameBackWrong: Electro.
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-->'''Spidey:''' Well, [[spoiler: Doc Ock]], I had the night off. Thought I’d come out and put a stop to your little '''arms''' race!\\
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* HeroicFatigue
* ItsAllMyFault: [[spoiler: Peter says this to Harry in Rykers.]]
* ManipulativeBastard: Fiers/[[spoiler:Otto Octavius]].
* OhCrap: Connors has this reaction in Rykers, upon realizing who Fiers really is.
* ItsAllMyFault: [[spoiler: Peter says this to Harry in Rykers.]]
* ManipulativeBastard: Fiers/[[spoiler:Otto Octavius]].
* OhCrap: Connors has this reaction in Rykers, upon realizing who Fiers really is.
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* VillainousBreakdown: [[spoiler: Doctor Octopus.]]
* WelcomeToTheBigCity: MJ.
* WhatHaveIDone: Harry Osborn after [[spoiler: killing Connors.]]
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'''Peter:''' Save it. You’re a bad guy. I stop bad guys.
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'''Peter:''' Save it. You’re a bad guy. I stop bad guys.guys.
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-->'''Spidey:''' Well, [[spoiler: Doc Ock]], I had the night off. Thought I’d come out a stop to your little '''arms''' race!\\
'''[[spoiler: Doctor Octopus]]''' You’re going to die tonight-do you really want your last words to be a bad joke?\\
'''[[spoiler: Doctor Octopus]]''' You’re going to die tonight-do you really want your last words to be a bad joke?\\
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-->'''Spidey:''' Well, [[spoiler: Doc Ock]], I had the night off. Thought I’d come out and put a stop to your little '''arms''' race!\\
'''[[spoiler: DoctorOctopus]]''' Octopus]]:''' You’re going to die tonight-do you really want your last words to be a bad joke?\\
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'''Vulture:''' I'M A FREAKING EAGLE!
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'''Vulture:''' I'M A FREAKING EAGLE!
'''EAGLE'''!
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-->'''[[spoiler: Doctor Octopus]]:''' How trite. You know, I was the one who arranged for your parents to-\\
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-->'''[[spoiler: Doctor Octopus]]:''' How trite. You know, I '''I''' was the one who arranged for your parents to-\\
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-->'''Spidey:''' Well, [[spoiler: Doc Ock]], I had the night off. Thought I’d come out a stop to your little '''arms''' race!\\
'''[[spoiler: Doctor Octopus]]''' You’re going to die tonight-do you really want your last words to be a bad joke?\\
'''Spidey:''' Would you prefer a good joke?
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-->'''Harry:''' Why are you doing this, Felicia? You don’t owe me anything.\\
'''Felicia:''' Because… I saw the good person you were, hard as it may be for you to believe. I saw you struggling as your disease stole that good person away. So… I want to help steal him back.
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* YouTalkTooMuch: [[spoiler: Otto begins to tell Peter that he was the one who killed Peter's parents, only to be interrupted by Peter.]]
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* YouTalkTooMuch: [[spoiler: Otto begins to tell Peter that he was the one who killed Peter's parents, only to be interrupted by Peter.]]]]
-->'''[[spoiler: Doctor Octopus]]:''' How trite. You know, I was the one who arranged for your parents to-\\
'''Peter:''' Save it. You’re a bad guy. I stop bad guys.
-->'''[[spoiler: Doctor Octopus]]:''' How trite. You know, I was the one who arranged for your parents to-\\
'''Peter:''' Save it. You’re a bad guy. I stop bad guys.
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-->'''Peter:''' VULTURE GUY! VULTURE GUY!\\
'''Vulture:''' I'M A FREAKING EAGLE!
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* ResurrectionSickness: Electro states his new state is painful.
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* ResurrectionSickness: Electro states his new state form is painful.
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-->'''Electro:''' I feel like I’m being torn to pieces.
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-->'''Fiers:''' After your encounter with a certain spider, you were scattered across Oscorp’s power grid. But you know better than anyone that energy doesn’t simply… disappear - it gets reformed.
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'''[[spoiler: Doctor Octopus]]:''' Money.\\
'''Vulture:''' Say no more.
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* YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre: Felicia believes this about Harry.
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* LineOfSightName: Toomes insists on going by "Eagle" at first.
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* LineOfSightName: Toomes insists on going by '''Eagle''' "Eagle" at first.
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*ClassifiedInformation: Despite the fact that Harry wants revenge, he’s still willing to keep Spidey's identity a secret.
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Made by Max Kay, or [=brakken=][[https://brakken.tumblr.com/]] on tumblr. A [=fan-made script=][[https://drive.google.com/file/d/1gm6mu-y8Tve7Bnja_1Q-fHDHyiR1jl45/view?usp=drivesdk]] following the hypothetical events of a third Amazing Spider-Man movie in 2016. It deals with the themes of legacy between Character/HarryOsborn, Character/PeterParker & Character/GustavFiers. This is not to be confused with the [=2017 fan-made script=][[https://thenichedotblog.files.wordpress.com/2017/09/the-amazing-spider-man-3-complete-screenplay-1.pdf]] where Creator/MichaelBJordan plays MJ Watson.
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Made by Max Kay, or [=brakken=][[https://brakken.tumblr.com/]] on tumblr. A [=fan-made script=][[https://drive.google.com/file/d/1gm6mu-y8Tve7Bnja_1Q-fHDHyiR1jl45/view?usp=drivesdk]] following the hypothetical events of a third Amazing Spider-Man movie in 2016. It deals with the themes of legacy between Character/HarryOsborn, Character/PeterParker Harry Osborn, Peter Parker & Character/GustavFiers.Gustav Fiers. This is not to be confused with the [=2017 fan-made script=][[https://thenichedotblog.files.wordpress.com/2017/09/the-amazing-spider-man-3-complete-screenplay-1.pdf]] where Creator/MichaelBJordan plays MJ Watson.
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Made by Max Kay, or [=brakken=][[https://brakken.tumblr.com/]] on tumblr. A [=fan-made script=][[https://drive.google.com/file/d/1gm6mu-y8Tve7Bnja_1Q-fHDHyiR1jl45/view?usp=drivesdk]] following the hypothetical events of a third Amazing Spider-Man movie in 2016. It deals with the themes of legacy between Harry, Peter & Fiers. Not to be confused with the [=2017 fan-made script=][[https://thenichedotblog.files.wordpress.com/2017/09/the-amazing-spider-man-3-complete-screenplay-1.pdf]] where Creator/MichaelBJordan plays MJ Watson.
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Made by Max Kay, or [=brakken=][[https://brakken.tumblr.com/]] on tumblr. A [=fan-made script=][[https://drive.google.com/file/d/1gm6mu-y8Tve7Bnja_1Q-fHDHyiR1jl45/view?usp=drivesdk]] following the hypothetical events of a third Amazing Spider-Man movie in 2016. It deals with the themes of legacy between Harry, Peter Character/HarryOsborn, Character/PeterParker & Fiers. Not Character/GustavFiers. This is not to be confused with the [=2017 fan-made script=][[https://thenichedotblog.files.wordpress.com/2017/09/the-amazing-spider-man-3-complete-screenplay-1.pdf]] where Creator/MichaelBJordan plays MJ Watson.
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* RoguesGallery: The fic features the Sinister Six, including Felicia Hardy/Black Cat, Harry Osborn/Green Goblin, Adrian Toomes/Vulture, Electro, Rhino, Fiers/[[spoiler:Otto Octavius]].
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* RoguesGallery: The fic features the Sinister Six, including Felicia including:
**Felicia Hardy/BlackCat, Harry Cat
**Harry Osborn/GreenGoblin, Adrian Toomes/Vulture, Electro, Rhino, Goblin
**Adrian Toomes/Vulture
**Electro
**Rhino
**Gustav Fiers/[[spoiler:OttoOctavius]].Octavius]]
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**Harry Osborn/Green
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**Rhino
**Gustav Fiers/[[spoiler:Otto