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* BiggerBad: [[spoiler:The Mandate was this all along: the Eclipse forces who were the main villains of the first two arcs were actually a splinter faction. The Mandate even secretly supported the Crew and allowed them to go after the Eclipse just to tie up the loose end. Bigger Bads, indeed.]]
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* BigGood: Jen Thelay.
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* GreaterScopeVillain: [[spoiler:The Mandate was this all along: the Eclipse forces who were the main villains of the first two arcs were actually a splinter faction. The Mandate even secretly supported the Crew and allowed them to go after the Eclipse just to tie up the loose end. Bigger Bads, indeed.]]
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* YouHaveFailedMe: Rahvid did not approve of Ka'Trina selling him out.out.
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* AGodAmI: Altus Sapiens, [[spoiler:as a consequence of [[CameBackWrong ComingBackWrong]].]]
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* AGodAmI: Altus Sapiens, [[spoiler:as a consequence of [[CameBackWrong ComingBackWrong]].Coming Back Wrong]].]]
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The story is a Mass Effect fanfiction set fifty years after the end of Mass Effect 3, with the official retcon being that the [[spoiler:Destroy ending was chosen, but didn't damage the Geth and relays as badly as expected, and they have now been rebuilt.]] Five decades later, many other races have been inducted into the Spectres, and the galaxy seems to be at complete peace... though forces are moving in the shadows, and dark secrets are starting to come to light.
The story (which has come be known for a dark and morbid tone, with occasional comedy and frequent action) proper begins with a Quarian Spectre named Sera'Zarda vas Citadel being called in to investigate an attempted bombing on the Council, and gathering a mismatched team of alien badasses to help. Shenanigans ensue.
The story (which has come be known for a dark and morbid tone, with occasional comedy and frequent action) proper begins with a Quarian Spectre named Sera'Zarda vas Citadel being called in to investigate an attempted bombing on the Council, and gathering a mismatched team of alien badasses to help. Shenanigans ensue.
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The story is a Mass Effect fanfiction set fifty years after the end of Mass Effect 3, with the official retcon being that the [[spoiler:Destroy ending was chosen, but didn't damage the Geth geth and relays as badly as expected, and they have now been rebuilt.]] Five decades later, many other races have been inducted into the Spectres, and the galaxy seems to be at complete peace... though forces are moving in the shadows, and dark secrets are starting to come to light.
The story (which has come be known for a dark and morbid tone, with occasional comedy and frequent action) proper begins with aQuarian quarian Spectre named Sera'Zarda vas Citadel being called in to investigate an attempted bombing on the Council, and gathering a mismatched team of alien badasses to help. Shenanigans ensue.
The story (which has come be known for a dark and morbid tone, with occasional comedy and frequent action) proper begins with a
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* ArcWord: [[spoiler:"Mandate."]]
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* ArcWord: ArcWords: [[spoiler:"Mandate."]]
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* GenreSavvy: Victairn at times. "NO MORE FUCKING WAREHOUSES!"
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Being cut per TRS.
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* GenreSavvy: Victairn at times. "NO MORE FUCKING WAREHOUSES!"
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** The Crew's first encounter with The Manipulator. [[spoiler:Turns out he's not actually a WellIntentionedExtremist, but is actually just insanely fucking evil, not to mention taking DangerouslyGenreSavvy UpToEleven. Oh, and he nukes Celan's hometown just to try and kill the Crew.]]
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** The Crew's first encounter with The Manipulator. [[spoiler:Turns out he's not actually a WellIntentionedExtremist, but is actually just insanely fucking evil, not to mention taking DangerouslyGenreSavvy UpToEleven.evil. Oh, and he nukes Celan's hometown just to try and kill the Crew.]]
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The RP is still going as of June 30th, 2014, and entering it's final chapters. The story will continue with a yet-unnamed spinoff led by bigfatcarp93, due to launch shortly after RIP ends. The site can be found here: http://w11.zetaboards.com/Rest_In_Pieces/index/
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The RP is still going as of June 30th, 2014, May 2016, and entering it's final chapters. The story will continue with a yet-unnamed spinoff led by bigfatcarp93, due to launch shortly after RIP ends. The site can be found here: http://w11.zetaboards.com/Rest_In_Pieces/index/
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* ICallItVera: Valentin's heavily customised sniper rifle, named for his LostLenore, Kostya. [[spoiler:Destroyed at the end of [=RiP3=].]]
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* ICallItVera: Valentin's heavily customised sniper rifle, named for his LostLenore, TheLostLenore, Kostya. [[spoiler:Destroyed at the end of [=RiP3=].]]
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** Later, Valentin's [[spoiler: "Cyclops"]] for Victairn.
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* CrapsackWorld: Unbelievably so; the Mass Effect Universe has basically fallen apart fifty years after the Reaper War. [[spoiler: Turns out to be the result of the Mandate's baleful influence.]]
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* VillainWorld: [[spoiler: Turns out the entire Mass Effect Galaxy has pretty much been this ever since the end of the Reaper War, with the Mandate having taken over in secret.]]
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** The Crew's first encounter with The Manipulator. [[spoilers:Turns out he's not actually a WellIntentionedExtremist, but is actually just insanely fucking evil, not to mention taking DangerouslyGenreSavvy UpToEleven. Oh, and he nukes Celan's hometown just to try and kill the Crew.]]
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** The Crew's first encounter with The Manipulator. [[spoilers:Turns [[spoiler:Turns out he's not actually a WellIntentionedExtremist, but is actually just insanely fucking evil, not to mention taking DangerouslyGenreSavvy UpToEleven. Oh, and he nukes Celan's hometown just to try and kill the Crew.]]
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** [[spoiler:Arthana]]: "So, what did you think of my performance? Personally, I think I do and even better [[spoiler:Martha]] then you. This is going to be ''fun.''
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** The Crew's first encounter with The Manipulator. [[spoilers:Turns out he's not actually a WellIntentionedExtremist, but is actually just insanely fucking evil, not to mention taking DangerouslyGenreSavvy UpToEleven. Oh, and he nukes Celan's hometown just to try and kill the Crew.]]
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** The finale of RIP3: [[spoiler:L'Enfer is dead, Altus Sapiens is dead, Sera and Garjen are leaving, the Crew have been framed for assassinating a Councilor, and, what else, oh yeah, THE ENTIRE GALAXY IS UNDER THE CONTROL OF A HUGE, EVIL CONSPIRACY.]]
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* WhamEpisode:
** Firstly, the finale of RIP1: [[spoiler:Digit and Baxter are dead, and Sera has been captured and taken away by Master. Also, turns out the Eclipse is pretty much more of an evil empire then a mercenary company these days, and the end result of their experiments with Reaper Tech was an attempt to indoctrinate the entire Terminus Systems.]]
** A relatively minor one halfway through RIP2, where Valentin's backstory is revealed. Of particular note is the little detail that [[spoiler:the mobster who killed Kostya and burned Val's face, L'Enfer, is back and after him again.]]
** Everything on and immediately following Casses: Victairn's old mentor is back ([[spoiler:And kind of an evil jerkass]]), what appears to be a Reaper is massacring millions, and [[spoiler:the Crew are now fugitives from the Heirarchy.]] Gets even crazier [[spoiler:when Altus Sapiens shows up, captures the whole Crew, ''appears to know them'', brings them aboard, and reveals himself as the resurrected and now-insane Digit.]]
** Firstly, the finale of RIP1: [[spoiler:Digit and Baxter are dead, and Sera has been captured and taken away by Master. Also, turns out the Eclipse is pretty much more of an evil empire then a mercenary company these days, and the end result of their experiments with Reaper Tech was an attempt to indoctrinate the entire Terminus Systems.]]
** A relatively minor one halfway through RIP2, where Valentin's backstory is revealed. Of particular note is the little detail that [[spoiler:the mobster who killed Kostya and burned Val's face, L'Enfer, is back and after him again.]]
** Everything on and immediately following Casses: Victairn's old mentor is back ([[spoiler:And kind of an evil jerkass]]), what appears to be a Reaper is massacring millions, and [[spoiler:the Crew are now fugitives from the Heirarchy.]] Gets even crazier [[spoiler:when Altus Sapiens shows up, captures the whole Crew, ''appears to know them'', brings them aboard, and reveals himself as the resurrected and now-insane Digit.]]
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* LegionofDoom: The Knights, consisting of Rahvid, Ilani, Stralos, Cryic, Omicron Red, and Celan.
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* AnyoneCanDie: Are they a PC? Were they in a previous part? Are they a good guy? [[spoiler: Are they an eight year old kid]]? Doesn't mean anything, they have just as much chance of dying as anyone.
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* InsaneTrollLogic: Word of God (carp) describes this as the core tenet of the Mandate's yet-undisclosed motivations.
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* InsaneTrollLogic: Word of God (carp) describes this as As it turns out, the core tenet of the Mandate's yet-undisclosed motivations.Mandate pretty much runs on this. According to them, change is bad, because... Reapers?
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* TheAlcatraz: Contract Penitentiary.
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* BadassBoast: Valai gives one to Rahvid shortly before being captured, complete with PrecisionFStrike.
-->Valai: ...Once again, I am Valai'Cala vas Telarun. Get off of my fucking ship.
-->Valai: ...Once again, I am Valai'Cala vas Telarun. Get off of my fucking ship.
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* WhatTheHellHero: Letanya gives Victairn a verbal lashing after his interrogation techniques caused the victim to call security, resulting ultimately in a shoot-out and blimp crash.
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* WhatTheHellHero: Letanya gives Victairn a verbal lashing after his interrogation techniques caused the victim to call security, resulting ultimately in a shoot-out and blimp crash.crash.
* YouHaveFailedMe: Rahvid did not approve of Ka'Trina selling him out.
* YouHaveFailedMe: Rahvid did not approve of Ka'Trina selling him out.
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** A further example: had the Crew not decided to give Altus Sapiens [[spoiler:the red code, killing him painfully, but instead given him the blue code, Sapiens, as a final act of desperate spite, would have released all of his databanks onto the extranet, outing the Crew as being largely responsible for his creation and worsening the manhunt in RIP4.]]
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* AnIcePerson: Cryic.
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* BadassAndChildDuo: Subverted by Omicron Red and Fatima, since their 'duo' is more akin to a hostage situation.
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* CloudCuckoolander: Martha.
** CloudCuckoolandersMinder: Shiv, though occasionally this gets reversed.
* DeathSeeker: Sera, throughout RIP 3. She got better, partially, after [[spoiler: putting down Altus Sapiens, although she quit the team after feeling that she was responsible for too many deaths.]] Often manifests itself through TakeMeInstead moments.
* DepravedBisexual: Ilani, in some seriously twisted ways.
** CloudCuckoolandersMinder: Shiv, though occasionally this gets reversed.
* DeathSeeker: Sera, throughout RIP 3. She got better, partially, after [[spoiler: putting down Altus Sapiens, although she quit the team after feeling that she was responsible for too many deaths.]] Often manifests itself through TakeMeInstead moments.
* DepravedBisexual: Ilani, in some seriously twisted ways.
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* EyepatchOfPower: Acquired by [[spoiler: Victairn]] by the start of [=RiP3=], as a result of [[spoiler: a stray shard of bone from Master's exploding skeleton.]]
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* GadgeteerGenius: Over the course of the role play, Garjen acquires a JumpJetPack suit, InvisibilityCloak equipment, a BladeBelowTheShoulder omni-tool, TrickBomb neural shock grenades, remote DisarmDisassembleDestroy device, an XRayVision monocle that doubles as half a pair of NightVisionGoggles, and an EnergyBow that can fire AbnormalAmmo bolts of electricity. The crossbow and blade have been treated with a HotPaintJob of blue and orange, while the monocle adds a bit of HighClassGlass. Garjen often proudly claims that all his equipment is completely AceCustom as well.
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* OddFriendship: Martha and Shiv. A human and a vorcha is a strange enough pairing at the best of times.
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* SkilledButNaive: Martha and Shiv, at times. Also Jinxy.
* StraightGay: Valentin - not that his squadmates noticed without it being pointed out.
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* SkilledButNaive: Martha and Shiv, at times. Also Jinxy.
* StraightGay: Valentin - not that his squadmates noticed without it being pointed out.Jinxy.
* StraightGay: Valentin - not that his squadmates noticed without it being pointed out.
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* TokenEvilTeammate: Yesana played this role for a while, [[spoiler: before deciding that [[ScrewThisImOuttaHere she'd had enough of the team]].]]
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* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: All the characters abandoned by their users. Namely, Robin, Gnos, Spade, Alia, Darren, and Jinxy. Baxter is not an example - though his author left, he was killed off, rather than disappearing.
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* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: All the characters abandoned by their users. Namely, Robin, Gnos, Spade, Alia, Darren, and Jinxy. Baxter is not an example - though his author left, he was killed off, rather than disappearing.disappearing.
* WhatTheHellHero: Letanya gives Victairn a verbal lashing after his interrogation techniques caused the victim to call security, resulting ultimately in a shoot-out and blimp crash.
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* WhatCouldHaveBeen: Garjel_blah had planned a storyline in which Garjen would be unknowingly indoctrinated after his encounter with Tir'Sha.
** In addition, bigfatcarp93 originally wanted to introduce Rahvid much earlier, as an associate of Master. Instead, he created Victairn.
** In addition, bigfatcarp93 originally wanted to introduce Rahvid much earlier, as an associate of Master. Instead, he created Victairn.