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Yue is a talented young artist who humbly receives praise from her classmates as they inform her that another poster she made is being featured around the school. But on the inside, she is incredibly arrogant; she's loved to draw since youth and she did so much of it that it would make sense that by now she's very talented. Takao's praise flusters Yue and he brings up the upcoming traffic safety art contest. He asks if she will be entering and Yue admits that she's been putting thought into an entry. She wants to win, considering the winning entry will be displayed nation wide.
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Yue is a talented young artist who humbly receives praise from her classmates as they inform her that another poster she made is being featured around the school. But on the inside, she is incredibly arrogant; she's loved to draw since youth and she did so much of it that it would make sense that by now she's very talented. Takao's praise flusters Yue and he brings up the upcoming traffic safety art contest. He asks if she will be entering and Yue admits that she's been putting thought into an entry. She wants to win, considering the winning entry will be displayed nation wide.
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Upon day of submitting, everyone is amazed with Yue's bold statement with her artwork. She's convinced that she will win, having expected them to react strongly with her addition to the picture, a girl laying on the ground in front of the truck. It brought more impact, but some teachers are concerned over it. Yue tries to explain that the girl is a focal point, and there isn't anything graphic either. Her teacher remains unsure but the art teacher doesn't share their opinion, seeing it for its realistic approach that makes it different from the others. Yue is glad that someone understands, but her swelled ego convinces her that the judging panel will be overwhelmed with her masterpiece. In fact, she wants to make it look even better. She can't leave it at that, controversy is how one obtains fame.
Yue upgrades her picture, and while it gets more attention she's still unsatisfied. She keeps working on it until it can no longer be touched.
One night, as they eat dinner her dad asks to know how her entry is going. Yue is fairly quiet, not wanting to tell him the truth. She attempts to convince herself that by now the drawing has become her own creation.
Tomorrow is the day of competition, and Yue rushes straight to school to overlook her poster again. She's shocked after noticing that something has changed on it, something she didn't do. There is now blood beneath the girl. She is frustrated someone would do this, but she thinks it looks even better, so she decides to leave it go. But the next day, the picture changed again. This time it looks scary and its disturbing everyone. The girl has a face now, and she didn't draw that.
During class, Yue comes to the decision to hurry up and fix her entry, but by the time she rushes back afterwards, she sees it's changed again. Now the image looks like it is moving. She drops her supplies in disbelief as her friends approach, concerned by her inability to be satisfied yet. They know she likes drawing but worry she might be getting too out of control in her strive to perfection. It's then one girl recognizes the location, a traffic signal near their school. Yue confirms she is correct after checking for herself, and she is perplexed because she didn't notice that until now.
She heads to the girls restroom and calls her dad at work to ask him about his old drawing. He explains that he witnessed a girl being hit by a truck at that very spot when he was younger, and he hurriedly jotted it down in his notebook to use for his own entry for the traffic safety program. He didn't think anything was wrong with it at the time, but after redrawing it he decided not to submit it, because it was based on a real accident and would be distasteful.
Yue ends the call and wonders what happened to the girl as she returns back to her poster. She wonders if the girl she drew was somehow the same one from the accident, and when she attempts to rip her poster down, she becomes alarmed seeing the girl move; reaching out for her. She runs down the hall in a panic and outside of school.
Yue upgrades her picture, and while it gets more attention she's still unsatisfied. She keeps working on it until it can no longer be touched.
One night, as they eat dinner her dad asks to know how her entry is going. Yue is fairly quiet, not wanting to tell him the truth. She attempts to convince herself that by now the drawing has become her own creation.
Tomorrow is the day of competition, and Yue rushes straight to school to overlook her poster again. She's shocked after noticing that something has changed on it, something she didn't do. There is now blood beneath the girl. She is frustrated someone would do this, but she thinks it looks even better, so she decides to leave it go. But the next day, the picture changed again. This time it looks scary and its disturbing everyone. The girl has a face now, and she didn't draw that.
During class, Yue comes to the decision to hurry up and fix her entry, but by the time she rushes back afterwards, she sees it's changed again. Now the image looks like it is moving. She drops her supplies in disbelief as her friends approach, concerned by her inability to be satisfied yet. They know she likes drawing but worry she might be getting too out of control in her strive to perfection. It's then one girl recognizes the location, a traffic signal near their school. Yue confirms she is correct after checking for herself, and she is perplexed because she didn't notice that until now.
She heads to the girls restroom and calls her dad at work to ask him about his old drawing. He explains that he witnessed a girl being hit by a truck at that very spot when he was younger, and he hurriedly jotted it down in his notebook to use for his own entry for the traffic safety program. He didn't think anything was wrong with it at the time, but after redrawing it he decided not to submit it, because it was based on a real accident and would be distasteful.
Yue ends the call and wonders what happened to the girl as she returns back to her poster. She wonders if the girl she drew was somehow the same one from the accident, and when she attempts to rip her poster down, she becomes alarmed seeing the girl move; reaching out for her. She runs down the hall in a panic and outside of school.
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Upon day of submitting, everyone is amazed with Yue's bold statement with her artwork. She's convinced that she will win, having expected them to react strongly with her addition to the picture, a girl laying on the ground in front of the truck. It brought more impact, but some teachers are concerned over it. Yue tries to explain that the girl is a focal point, and there isn't anything graphic either. being depicted. Her teacher remains unsure but the art teacher doesn't share their opinion, seeing it for its realistic approach that makes it different from the others. Yue is glad that someone understands, but her swelled ego convinces her that the judging panel will be overwhelmed with her masterpiece. In fact, she wants to make it look even better. She can't leave it at that, controversy is how one obtains fame.
Yueupgrades remains unsatisfied as she continuously touches up her picture, and while it gets more picture over the next couple of days. It continues to get attention she's still unsatisfied. She keeps working on it until it and eventually there's nothing more she can no longer be touched.do to it.
One night, as they eat dinner her dad asks about her entry. Yue is fairly quiet because she doesn't want to tell him that she used his picture for inspiration. By now, the drawing has become her own creation.
One night, as they eat dinner her dad asks to know how her entry is going. Yue is fairly quiet, not wanting to tell him the truth. She attempts to convince herself that by now the drawing has become her own creation.
Tomorrow is the day of competition, and Yue rushes straight to school to overlook her poster again. She's shocked after noticing that something has changed on it, But to her shock she discovers blood beneath the girl, something she didn't do. There is now blood beneath the girl. She is frustrated to think someone would do this, tampered with her poster, but she thinks it looks even better, better so she decides to leave leaves it go.alone. But the next day, the picture changed again. This time it looks scary and its disturbing everyone. The disturbs those who look at it; the girl has a face now, and she didn't draw that.now.
During class, Yue comes to the decision to hurry up and fix her entry, but by the time sherushes gets back afterwards, she sees it's changed again. Now the image looks like it is moving. She drops her supplies in disbelief as her friends approach, concerned by her inability to be satisfied yet. They know she likes drawing but worry she might be that she's getting too out of control in her strive to perfection.control. It's then one girl recognizes the location, a traffic signal near their school. Yue confirms she is correct after checking for herself, and she is perplexed because she didn't notice that until now.
She heads to the girls restroomand calls to call her dad at work to and ask him about his old drawing. He explains that he witnessed a girl being hit by a truck at that very spot when he was younger, and he hurriedly jotted it down in his notebook to use for his own entry for the traffic safety program. He didn't think anything was wrong with it at the time, but after redrawing it he decided not to submit it, it because it was based on a real accident and would be distasteful.
distasteful. Yue ends the call and wonders what happened to the girl as she returns back to her poster. She wonders girl, wondering if the girl one she drew was somehow is the same one from the accident, and when she attempts incident. She decides to rip her poster down, down when she becomes alarmed seeing realizes the girl move; is moving, reaching out for to her. She Yue panics and runs down the hall in a panic and away, outside of school.
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One night, as they eat dinner her dad asks about her entry. Yue is fairly quiet because she doesn't want to tell him that she used his picture for inspiration. By now, the drawing has become her own creation.
During class, Yue comes to the decision to hurry up and fix her entry, but by the time she
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In her blind panic, Yue fails to see an oncoming truck and gets hit. She is surrounded by her frightened classmates, friends and Takao. She can barely access the damage done to herself as she tries to ask them for help, and as everyone screams and tries to get an ambulance, she realizes she's at the very same location in the picture. This dons on everyone as they think about her entry; the victim in it has changed to resemble her. Yue begins to cry as the ghost of the original victim is visible behind her in her picture, smiling.
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In her blind panic, Yue fails to see an oncoming truck and gets hit. She is surrounded by her frightened classmates, friends and Takao. She can barely access the damage done to herself as she tries to ask them for help, They scream and as everyone screams and tries cry, trying to get an ambulance, she help. Yue realizes she's she is at the very same location in that the picture. picture took place. This dons on everyone as they think about her entry; the victim in it has changed to resemble her. resembles her now. Yue begins to cry cries as the ghost of the original victim is visible behind her in her picture, smiling.
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* {{Pride}}: Goes hand-in-hand with Yue's {{Perfectionist}} personality and desire to get attention.
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!! Summary
Yue is a talented young artist who humbly receives praise from her classmates as they inform her that another poster she made is being featured around the school. But on the inside, she is incredibly arrogant; she's loved to draw since youth and she did so much of it that it would make sense that by now she's very talented. Takao's praise flusters Yue and he brings up the upcoming traffic safety art contest. He asks if she will be entering and Yue admits that she's been putting thought into an entry. She wants to win, considering the winning entry will be displayed nation wide.
Unfortunately, Yue is unable to properly come up with a real concept. She lacks inspiration and can't re-use her old artwork. Her dad comes by to ask Yue how she is doing and he offers to show her some of his old work and asks for her opinion. She isn't very impressed, until one image in particular happens to stand out to her: one depicting a truck that ran into a pole with alarmed onlookers. A picture like this would make a strong impact, so she decides to base her entry around it.
Upon day of submitting, everyone is amazed with Yue's bold statement with her artwork. She's convinced that she will win, having expected them to react strongly with her addition to the picture, a girl laying on the ground in front of the truck. It brought more impact, but some teachers are concerned over it. Yue tries to explain that the girl is a focal point, and there isn't anything graphic either. Her teacher remains unsure but the art teacher doesn't share their opinion, seeing it for its realistic approach that makes it different from the others. Yue is glad that someone understands, but her swelled ego convinces her that the judging panel will be overwhelmed with her masterpiece. In fact, she wants to make it look even better. She can't leave it at that, controversy is how one obtains fame.
Yue upgrades her picture, and while it gets more attention she's still unsatisfied. She keeps working on it until it can no longer be touched.
One night, as they eat dinner her dad asks to know how her entry is going. Yue is fairly quiet, not wanting to tell him the truth. She attempts to convince herself that by now the drawing has become her own creation.
Tomorrow is the day of competition, and Yue rushes straight to school to overlook her poster again. She's shocked after noticing that something has changed on it, something she didn't do. There is now blood beneath the girl. She is frustrated someone would do this, but she thinks it looks even better, so she decides to leave it go. But the next day, the picture changed again. This time it looks scary and its disturbing everyone. The girl has a face now, and she didn't draw that.
During class, Yue comes to the decision to hurry up and fix her entry, but by the time she rushes back afterwards, she sees it's changed again. Now the image looks like it is moving. She drops her supplies in disbelief as her friends approach, concerned by her inability to be satisfied yet. They know she likes drawing but worry she might be getting too out of control in her strive to perfection. It's then one girl recognizes the location, a traffic signal near their school. Yue confirms she is correct after checking for herself, and she is perplexed because she didn't notice that until now.
She heads to the girls restroom and calls her dad at work to ask him about his old drawing. He explains that he witnessed a girl being hit by a truck at that very spot when he was younger, and he hurriedly jotted it down in his notebook to use for his own entry for the traffic safety program. He didn't think anything was wrong with it at the time, but after redrawing it he decided not to submit it, because it was based on a real accident and would be distasteful.
Yue ends the call and wonders what happened to the girl as she returns back to her poster. She wonders if the girl she drew was somehow the same one from the accident, and when she attempts to rip her poster down, she becomes alarmed seeing the girl move; reaching out for her. She runs down the hall in a panic and outside of school.
She doesn't care about this girl.
All that matters is saving her entry.
She can die.
In her blind panic, Yue fails to see an oncoming truck and gets hit. She is surrounded by her frightened classmates, friends and Takao. She can barely access the damage done to herself as she tries to ask them for help, and as everyone screams and tries to get an ambulance, she realizes she's at the very same location in the picture. This dons on everyone as they think about her entry; the victim in it has changed to resemble her. Yue begins to cry as the ghost of the original victim is visible behind her in her picture, smiling.
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!!Tropes:
* CrowdPleaser: Yue's main motivation is to receive praise from others.
** Yomi remarks in the epilogue that this was her problem, and that if she wasn't so focused on getting it, things would have ended differently.
* DeathOfAChild: two of them in fact.
* DownerEnding
* LackOfEmpathy: Yue didn't care that a girl lost her life. She just didn't want other people to think poorly of her if they connected her entry to the incident from years ago.
* {{Pride}}: Goes hand-in-hand with Yue's {{Perfectionist}} personality and desire to get attention.
Yue is a talented young artist who humbly receives praise from her classmates as they inform her that another poster she made is being featured around the school. But on the inside, she is incredibly arrogant; she's loved to draw since youth and she did so much of it that it would make sense that by now she's very talented. Takao's praise flusters Yue and he brings up the upcoming traffic safety art contest. He asks if she will be entering and Yue admits that she's been putting thought into an entry. She wants to win, considering the winning entry will be displayed nation wide.
Unfortunately, Yue is unable to properly come up with a real concept. She lacks inspiration and can't re-use her old artwork. Her dad comes by to ask Yue how she is doing and he offers to show her some of his old work and asks for her opinion. She isn't very impressed, until one image in particular happens to stand out to her: one depicting a truck that ran into a pole with alarmed onlookers. A picture like this would make a strong impact, so she decides to base her entry around it.
Upon day of submitting, everyone is amazed with Yue's bold statement with her artwork. She's convinced that she will win, having expected them to react strongly with her addition to the picture, a girl laying on the ground in front of the truck. It brought more impact, but some teachers are concerned over it. Yue tries to explain that the girl is a focal point, and there isn't anything graphic either. Her teacher remains unsure but the art teacher doesn't share their opinion, seeing it for its realistic approach that makes it different from the others. Yue is glad that someone understands, but her swelled ego convinces her that the judging panel will be overwhelmed with her masterpiece. In fact, she wants to make it look even better. She can't leave it at that, controversy is how one obtains fame.
Yue upgrades her picture, and while it gets more attention she's still unsatisfied. She keeps working on it until it can no longer be touched.
One night, as they eat dinner her dad asks to know how her entry is going. Yue is fairly quiet, not wanting to tell him the truth. She attempts to convince herself that by now the drawing has become her own creation.
Tomorrow is the day of competition, and Yue rushes straight to school to overlook her poster again. She's shocked after noticing that something has changed on it, something she didn't do. There is now blood beneath the girl. She is frustrated someone would do this, but she thinks it looks even better, so she decides to leave it go. But the next day, the picture changed again. This time it looks scary and its disturbing everyone. The girl has a face now, and she didn't draw that.
During class, Yue comes to the decision to hurry up and fix her entry, but by the time she rushes back afterwards, she sees it's changed again. Now the image looks like it is moving. She drops her supplies in disbelief as her friends approach, concerned by her inability to be satisfied yet. They know she likes drawing but worry she might be getting too out of control in her strive to perfection. It's then one girl recognizes the location, a traffic signal near their school. Yue confirms she is correct after checking for herself, and she is perplexed because she didn't notice that until now.
She heads to the girls restroom and calls her dad at work to ask him about his old drawing. He explains that he witnessed a girl being hit by a truck at that very spot when he was younger, and he hurriedly jotted it down in his notebook to use for his own entry for the traffic safety program. He didn't think anything was wrong with it at the time, but after redrawing it he decided not to submit it, because it was based on a real accident and would be distasteful.
Yue ends the call and wonders what happened to the girl as she returns back to her poster. She wonders if the girl she drew was somehow the same one from the accident, and when she attempts to rip her poster down, she becomes alarmed seeing the girl move; reaching out for her. She runs down the hall in a panic and outside of school.
She doesn't care about this girl.
All that matters is saving her entry.
She can die.
In her blind panic, Yue fails to see an oncoming truck and gets hit. She is surrounded by her frightened classmates, friends and Takao. She can barely access the damage done to herself as she tries to ask them for help, and as everyone screams and tries to get an ambulance, she realizes she's at the very same location in the picture. This dons on everyone as they think about her entry; the victim in it has changed to resemble her. Yue begins to cry as the ghost of the original victim is visible behind her in her picture, smiling.
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!!Tropes:
* CrowdPleaser: Yue's main motivation is to receive praise from others.
** Yomi remarks in the epilogue that this was her problem, and that if she wasn't so focused on getting it, things would have ended differently.
* DeathOfAChild: two of them in fact.
* DownerEnding
* LackOfEmpathy: Yue didn't care that a girl lost her life. She just didn't want other people to think poorly of her if they connected her entry to the incident from years ago.
* {{Pride}}: Goes hand-in-hand with Yue's {{Perfectionist}} personality and desire to get attention.
