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** We also find out why Nabu doesn’t like his father Vandal Savage/Marduk. Vandal/Marduk didn’t listen to Nabu when he vouched against his plan to use Starro to attack their own people. As a result, Starro killed him and nearly destroyed the empire.
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** We also find out why Nabu doesn’t like his father Vandal Savage/Marduk. Vandal/Marduk didn’t listen to when Nabu when he vouched argued against his plan to use Starro to attack their own people. As a result, Starro killed him and nearly destroyed the empire.
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** While ruling Babylonia with his son Nabu, Savage/Marduk was frustrated at the citizens' independence. Klarion arrived and offered a way to control them by summoning Starro. Against his son's wishes, Marduk took the offer, but learned too late that it was never promised that Starro would listen to either of them.
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** While ruling Babylonia with his son Nabu, Savage/Marduk was frustrated at the citizens' his generals' independence. Klarion arrived and offered a way to control them by summoning Starro. Against his son's wishes, Marduk took the offer, but learned too late that it was never promised that Starro would listen to either of them.