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* ItMustBeMine: Wyngarde's motivation is get Jean, but Emma and the rest of the Inner Circle figure that power like the Phoenix's must belong to them.
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* ItMustBeMine: Wyngarde's motivation is to get Jean, but Emma and the rest of the Inner Circle figure that power like the Phoenix's must belong to them.
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* CompressedAdaptation: While the other three episodes of the story are pretty faithful to the original ''Dark Phoenix Saga'', this one covers much of the events of issues #129 to #131, and a few details get left out.
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* CompressedAdaptation: While the other three episodes of the story are pretty faithful to the original ''Dark Phoenix Saga'', this one episode covers much of the events of issues #129 to #131, and a few details get left out.
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** Due to the compression, a plot point about the increased dangers of Jean going dark (brainwashing the Prydes into compliance, murdering some Hellfire goons, engaging in some DirtyMindReading) are left out, as is a scene of Jean's powers having grown so much she can hold Scott's eye beams back.
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** Due to the compression, a plot point about the increased dangers of Jean going dark (brainwashing the Prydes into compliance, murdering some Hellfire goons, engaging in some DirtyMindReading) are left out, as is a scene of Jean's powers having grown so much much, she can hold Scott's eye beams back.
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* TheNoseKnows: Wolverine tracks Jean across New York via scent, and gets pretty defensive when called on it.
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* TheNoseKnows: Wolverine tracks Jean across New York via scent, scent and gets pretty defensive when called on it.
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* UnusuallyUninterestingSight: Cyclops doesn't comment on Pierce being a cyborg, which is understandable given he's an X-Man, but Dazzler doesn't make any remark either. Apparently the New York nightclub circuit holds some weird sights.
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* UnusuallyUninterestingSight: Cyclops doesn't comment on Pierce being a cyborg, which is understandable given that he's an X-Man, but Dazzler doesn't make any remark either. Apparently Apparently, the New York nightclub circuit holds some weird sights.
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* AdaptationalMundanity: In the comics, the Hellfire Club know about the Phoenix in part because they sent the supervillain Warhawk to hack the X-Mansion. Here, Emma manages it herself simply by taking advantage of Charles's fatigue and distraction through "The Phoenix Saga".
* CallBack: A good chunk of the episode is Emma Frost recounting the events of "The Phoenix Saga" to the rest of the Inner Circle, for anyone who came in late.
* ChuckCunninghamSyndrome: After Wyngarde drives off with Jean, Dazzler just vanishes from the story.
* CallBack: A good chunk of the episode is Emma Frost recounting the events of "The Phoenix Saga" to the rest of the Inner Circle, for anyone who came in late.
* ChuckCunninghamSyndrome: After Wyngarde drives off with Jean, Dazzler just vanishes from the story.
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** The small role Angel and his love interest Candy Southern play, helping the X-Men recuperate after their capture and getting them an invite to the Hellfire Club, is excised. Instead, the X-Men just force entry.
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** The small role Angel and his love interest Candy Southern play, helping the X-Men recuperate after their capture and getting them an invite to the Hellfire Club, is excised. Instead, the X-Men just have Logan track Jean and then force entry.
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** Mastermind's futzing with Jean in the comics is a process that goes on for months, but here he only gets into her mind three times, all in the space of a single night.
* ClingyJealousGirl: The Phoenix force causes Jean to be this, lashing out angrily when Scott mentions going to check on Dazzler at the club.
* ClingyJealousGirl: The Phoenix force causes Jean to be this, lashing out angrily when Scott mentions going to check on Dazzler at the club.
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* ClingyJealousGirl: The Phoenix force causes Jean to be this, lashing out angrily when Scott mentions going to check on Dazzler at the club.
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* ClingyJealousGirl: The EtTuBrute: When Phoenix force causes attacks the X-Men, Storm can only ask Jean to be this, lashing out angrily when Scott mentions going to check on Dazzler at the club.why, but as Phoenix tells her, Jean's gone.
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* SuperpoweredEvilSide: The Phoenix Force to Jean.
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* ExplosiveInstrumentation: Moira trying to get a scan on Jean doesn't work; the Phoenix's sheer power causes all the computers to bust.
* {{Foreshadowing}}: When Jean travels to New York to find Scott, her Phoenix outfit has already changed from the prior green and gold to the blood red of Dark Phoenix.
* ItMustBeMine: Wyngarde's motivation is get Jean, but Emma and the rest of the Inner Circle figure that power like the Phoenix's must belong to them.
* TheNoseKnows: Wolverine tracks Jean across New York via scent, and gets pretty defensive when called on it.
-->'''Wolverine:''' The nose ''knows''. I don't make any mistakes about Jean.
* RoboticReveal: Scott's eye beams just bounce off Pierce with some loud clanks, before a shot hits his arm, tearing off the sleeves and the flesh beneath, revealing an entirely robotic arm.
* SuperpoweredEvilSide: The Phoenix Force toJean.Jean.
* UnusuallyUninterestingSight: Cyclops doesn't comment on Pierce being a cyborg, which is understandable given he's an X-Man, but Dazzler doesn't make any remark either. Apparently the New York nightclub circuit holds some weird sights.
* {{Foreshadowing}}: When Jean travels to New York to find Scott, her Phoenix outfit has already changed from the prior green and gold to the blood red of Dark Phoenix.
* ItMustBeMine: Wyngarde's motivation is get Jean, but Emma and the rest of the Inner Circle figure that power like the Phoenix's must belong to them.
* TheNoseKnows: Wolverine tracks Jean across New York via scent, and gets pretty defensive when called on it.
-->'''Wolverine:''' The nose ''knows''. I don't make any mistakes about Jean.
* RoboticReveal: Scott's eye beams just bounce off Pierce with some loud clanks, before a shot hits his arm, tearing off the sleeves and the flesh beneath, revealing an entirely robotic arm.
* SuperpoweredEvilSide: The Phoenix Force to
* UnusuallyUninterestingSight: Cyclops doesn't comment on Pierce being a cyborg, which is understandable given he's an X-Man, but Dazzler doesn't make any remark either. Apparently the New York nightclub circuit holds some weird sights.
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* CompressedAdaptation: While the other three episodes of the story are pretty faithful to the original ''Dark Phoenix Saga'', this one covers much of the events of issues #129 to #131, and a few details get left out.
** Issue #129, which follows on immediately from the Proteus storyline, has Professor X having one of his JerkassBall moments, treating the X-Men like kids rather than competent adults for a prolonged period.
** Emma Frost does not attack the X-Men at any point, nor does she capture them, and her fight with the Phoenix which supposedly ends with her death is removed, allowing Emma to take part in the next episode as well.
** The small role Angel and his love interest Candy Southern play, helping the X-Men recuperate after their capture and getting them an invite to the Hellfire Club, is excised. Instead, the X-Men just force entry.
** Due to the compression, a plot point about the increased dangers of Jean going dark (brainwashing the Prydes into compliance, murdering some Hellfire goons, engaging in some DirtyMindReading) are left out, as is a scene of Jean's powers having grown so much she can hold Scott's eye beams back.
** Issue #129, which follows on immediately from the Proteus storyline, has Professor X having one of his JerkassBall moments, treating the X-Men like kids rather than competent adults for a prolonged period.
** Emma Frost does not attack the X-Men at any point, nor does she capture them, and her fight with the Phoenix which supposedly ends with her death is removed, allowing Emma to take part in the next episode as well.
** The small role Angel and his love interest Candy Southern play, helping the X-Men recuperate after their capture and getting them an invite to the Hellfire Club, is excised. Instead, the X-Men just force entry.
** Due to the compression, a plot point about the increased dangers of Jean going dark (brainwashing the Prydes into compliance, murdering some Hellfire goons, engaging in some DirtyMindReading) are left out, as is a scene of Jean's powers having grown so much she can hold Scott's eye beams back.
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* EvilLaugh: Dark Phoenix lets out a demented cackle when Moira tries asking Jean what happened inside the sun.
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* ClingyJealousGirl: The Phoenix force causes Jean to be this.
* SuperpoweredEvilSide: The Phoenix Force
* SuperpoweredEvilSide: The Phoenix Force
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* ClingyJealousGirl: The Phoenix force causes Jean to be this.
this, lashing out angrily when Scott mentions going to check on Dazzler at the club.
* SuperpoweredEvilSide: The PhoenixForceForce to Jean.
* SuperpoweredEvilSide: The Phoenix
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* AdaptationDistillation: Dazzler appears with her 1980's, short-hair look rather than her original [[FadSuper Disco-inspired]] outfit.
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* CrazyJealousGirl: The Phoenix force causes Jean to be this.
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* CrazyJealousGirl: ClingyJealousGirl: The Phoenix force causes Jean to be this.
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* TheCorrupter: The Inner Circle want to be this for Jean Grey as she is possessed by the Phoenix Force.
* CrazyJealousGirl: The Phoenix force causes Jean to be this.
* SuperpoweredEvilSide: The Phoenix Force
* CrazyJealousGirl: The Phoenix force causes Jean to be this.
* SuperpoweredEvilSide: The Phoenix Force
