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* WelcomeBackTraitor: Ivypaw has been lured into joining the Dark Forest, and even helped guide the Clan into an unnecessary battle that results in a [=ShadowClan=] death and Firestar losing [[CatsHaveNineLives one of his nine leader's lives]]. However, once she realizes that they're actually plotting to destroy the Clans and repents, she is welcomed back to the side of the heroes.
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* WelcomeBackTraitor: Ivypaw has been lured into joining the Dark Forest, and even helped guide the Clan into an unnecessary battle that results in a [=ShadowClan=] death and Firestar losing [[CatsHaveNineLives one of his nine leader's lives]]. However, once she realizes that they're actually plotting to destroy the Clans and repents, she is welcomed back to the side of the heroes.heroes.
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''Night Whispers'' is the third book in the fourth ''Warriors'' series, ''Omen of the Stars''.
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''Night Whispers'' is the third book in the fourth
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Ivypaw wakes up in the middle of the night to see that Dovepaw is not in her nest. Her sister is really visiting Tigerheart, but she thinks that Dovepaw snuck out for extra practice because everyone's been praising Ivypaw's skills recently. Satisfied, she falls back asleep and "wakes" to the Dark Forest. She recieves some scratches from Thistleclaw, and then they do water training. She wakes up only long enough to see that Dovepaw's back, and wakes again to see Whitewing frantically wondering where all the blood came from - her wounds from Thistleclaw had been bleeding in real life. Dovepaw covers for her, pretending to find a large thorn in her bedding. Cinderheart looks at Ivypaw's wounds, noticing things she probably remembers from being a medicine cat. She tells Ivypaw she's worried. Cinderheart comes to the conclusion that Ivypaw was training alone outside the camp, and says that they can train more during the day. She makes Ivypaw promise that she won't leave the camp at night again. Ivypaw guiltily promises. Lionblaze, Jayfeather, and Dovepaw discuss this - Lionblaze and Dovepaw agree that it's time to tell Ivypaw to stop going to the Dark Forest, while Jayfeather, remembering his Moonpool visit, thinks that Ivypaw could be useful as a spy. Dovepaw angrily runs off, meeting up with her sister, and Ivypaw confronts her about meeting with Tigerheart; she could smell his scent on Dovepaw. She tells Dovepaw that she meets Tigerheart every night in the Dark Forest. Dovepaw doesn't believe her. She later feels upset that they argued, and she worries that she's driven her sister closer to the Dark Forest.
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Ivypaw wakes up in the middle of the night to see that Dovepaw is not in her nest. Her sister is really visiting Tigerheart, but she thinks that Dovepaw snuck out for extra practice because everyone's been praising Ivypaw's skills recently. Satisfied, she falls back asleep and "wakes" to the Dark Forest. She recieves receives some scratches from Thistleclaw, and then they do water training. She wakes up only long enough to see that Dovepaw's back, and wakes again to see Whitewing frantically wondering where all the blood came from - her wounds from Thistleclaw had been bleeding in real life. Dovepaw covers for her, pretending to find a large thorn in her bedding. Cinderheart looks at Ivypaw's wounds, noticing things she probably remembers from being a medicine cat. She tells Ivypaw she's worried. Cinderheart comes to the conclusion that Ivypaw was training alone outside the camp, and says that they can train more during the day. She makes Ivypaw promise that she won't leave the camp at night again. Ivypaw guiltily promises. Lionblaze, Jayfeather, and Dovepaw discuss this - Lionblaze and Dovepaw agree that it's time to tell Ivypaw to stop going to the Dark Forest, while Jayfeather, remembering his Moonpool visit, thinks that Ivypaw could be useful as a spy. Dovepaw angrily runs off, meeting up with her sister, and Ivypaw confronts her about meeting with Tigerheart; she could smell his scent on Dovepaw. She tells Dovepaw that she meets Tigerheart every night in the Dark Forest. Dovepaw doesn't believe her. She later feels upset that they argued, and she worries that she's driven her sister closer to the Dark Forest.
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* FamousLastWords: Flametail: "Keep up with me!"
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* AttackTheTail: While fighting a fox, Brightheart bites its tail. The fox slams her against a branch in return, but it's not enough to make her let go.
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* ReroutedFromHeaven: When Flametail dies and goes to [=StarClan=], he ends up lost and winds up in the Dark Forest. The Dark Forest cats are planning war on the Clans, so Brokenstar orders [[ReverseMole Ivypool]] to [[IfYoureSoEvilEatThisKitten prove her loyalty by]] [[CessationOfExistence killing Flametail's spirit]].
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* ReroutedFromHeaven: When Flametail dies and goes to [=StarClan=], he ends up lost and winds up in the Dark Forest. The Dark Forest cats are planning war on the Clans, so Brokenstar orders [[ReverseMole Ivypool]] Ivypool to [[IfYoureSoEvilEatThisKitten prove her loyalty by]] [[CessationOfExistence killing Flametail's spirit]].
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* IJustWantToBeNormal: Said by Lionblaze at one point.
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* SlasherSmile: Mapleshade. She can make Ivypaw feel like [[TastesLikeDiabetes Daisy]] is with her, right before trying to drown her.
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* SlasherSmile: Mapleshade. She can make Ivypaw feel like [[TastesLikeDiabetes Daisy]] Daisy is with her, right before trying to drown her.
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* NotHisBlood: Cinderheart freaks out after Lionblaze fights a fox, because he's covered in blood and she thinks he's badly wounded and dying. Due to his power, he's not even injured; it was all the fox's blood.
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* SlasherSmile: Mapleshade. She can make Ivypool feel like [[TastesLikeDiabetes Daisy]] is with her, right before trying to drown her.
* SuspiciouslySpecificDenial: Tigerheart asks Dovepaw how she always manages to get to their meeting place first. Dovepaw mutters back that she [[BlatantLies totally doesn't listen for when he leaves his nest]].
* SuspiciouslySpecificDenial: Tigerheart asks Dovepaw how she always manages to get to their meeting place first. Dovepaw mutters back that she [[BlatantLies totally doesn't listen for when he leaves his nest]].
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* SlasherSmile: Mapleshade. She can make Ivypool Ivypaw feel like [[TastesLikeDiabetes Daisy]] is with her, right before trying to drown her.
* SuspiciouslySpecificDenial: Tigerheart asks Dovepaw how she always manages to get to their meeting place first. Dovepaw mutters back that she [[BlatantLies totally doesn't listen for when he leaves hisnest]].nest]].
* WelcomeBackTraitor: Ivypaw has been lured into joining the Dark Forest, and even helped guide the Clan into an unnecessary battle that results in a [=ShadowClan=] death and Firestar losing [[CatsHaveNineLives one of his nine leader's lives]]. However, once she realizes that they're actually plotting to destroy the Clans and repents, she is welcomed back to the side of the heroes.
* SuspiciouslySpecificDenial: Tigerheart asks Dovepaw how she always manages to get to their meeting place first. Dovepaw mutters back that she [[BlatantLies totally doesn't listen for when he leaves his
* WelcomeBackTraitor: Ivypaw has been lured into joining the Dark Forest, and even helped guide the Clan into an unnecessary battle that results in a [=ShadowClan=] death and Firestar losing [[CatsHaveNineLives one of his nine leader's lives]]. However, once she realizes that they're actually plotting to destroy the Clans and repents, she is welcomed back to the side of the heroes.
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* MundaneUtility: Dovepaw has SuperSenses that allow her to see pretty much the entirety of the lake territories. She often uses them so that she knows when her crush is leaving for their meetings and can beat him there. Just to mess with him.
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* SlasherSmile: Mapleshade. She can make Ivypool feel like [[TastesLikeDiabetes Daisy]] is with her, right before trying to drown her.
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* SlasherSmile: Mapleshade. She can make Ivypool feel like [[TastesLikeDiabetes Daisy]] is with her, right before trying to drown her.her.
* SuspiciouslySpecificDenial: Tigerheart asks Dovepaw how she always manages to get to their meeting place first. Dovepaw mutters back that she [[BlatantLies totally doesn't listen for when he leaves his nest]].
* SuspiciouslySpecificDenial: Tigerheart asks Dovepaw how she always manages to get to their meeting place first. Dovepaw mutters back that she [[BlatantLies totally doesn't listen for when he leaves his nest]].
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* ShootYourMate: When Ivypaw is acting as a spy for the Clans in the Dark Forest, the Dark Forest cats, suspicious of her loyalty, order her to "kill" Flametail, a [=StarClan=] spirit that got lost and found his way to the Dark Forest. She attacks him, but is stopped by the cat's brother. Even though she didn't actually wipe out his spirit, this still secures the Dark Forest's trust in her.
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* ShootYourMate: When Ivypaw is acting as a spy for the Clans in the Dark Forest, the Dark Forest cats, suspicious of her loyalty, order her to "kill" Flametail, a [=StarClan=] spirit that got lost and found his way to the Dark Forest. She attacks him, but is stopped by the cat's brother. Even though she didn't actually wipe out his spirit, this still secures the Dark Forest's trust in her.
* SlasherSmile: Mapleshade. She can make Ivypool feel like [[TastesLikeDiabetes Daisy]] is with her, right before trying to drown her.
* SlasherSmile: Mapleshade. She can make Ivypool feel like [[TastesLikeDiabetes Daisy]] is with her, right before trying to drown her.
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** There's a moment where it claims that Berrynose brushed his tail along Dovepaw's flank. Since he lost his tail in ''Sunset'', he would not be able to do this they way they meant with just a stump left.
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** There's a moment where it claims that Berrynose brushed his tail along Dovepaw's flank. Since he lost his tail in ''Sunset'', he would not be able to do this they way they meant with just a stump left.left.
* ShootYourMate: When Ivypaw is acting as a spy for the Clans in the Dark Forest, the Dark Forest cats, suspicious of her loyalty, order her to "kill" Flametail, a [=StarClan=] spirit that got lost and found his way to the Dark Forest. She attacks him, but is stopped by the cat's brother. Even though she didn't actually wipe out his spirit, this still secures the Dark Forest's trust in her.
* ShootYourMate: When Ivypaw is acting as a spy for the Clans in the Dark Forest, the Dark Forest cats, suspicious of her loyalty, order her to "kill" Flametail, a [=StarClan=] spirit that got lost and found his way to the Dark Forest. She attacks him, but is stopped by the cat's brother. Even though she didn't actually wipe out his spirit, this still secures the Dark Forest's trust in her.
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* SeeWater: Flametail is able to see clearly underwater as he drowns.