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After Betstengai shows up, he mocks the group then immediately leaves, along with the rest of the Genkishu. The group then arrives at the Demon Spine Mountains, and rest a night before heading in. Tan Hi is up practicing, when Ken shows up and gives her a few pointers, though angering her in the process. She storms off and the group enters the mountains the next day, encountering the Valley of the Dead, the first trial. Kei Gai is called upon to put the dead to sleep, but fails a few times; Tan Hi protects the group with her Seal Guardian skills, except for Sho who has to fight the dead. Kei Gai finally succeeds in singing the correct tune and the group moves on, arriving at the second trial, the Valley of the Doll. A golem guardian stands there motionless, and Sho activates it, allowing Unshou to fire at its weak point. Unshou misses twice, though, so Sho takes matters into his own hands and climbs the golem, stabbing the charm himself and deactivating the golem. He then falls off, but is saved by Unshou's arrow, which pierces through his clothing and nails him to the arm of the now-deactivated golem. The group then moves onto the final trial, the Labyrinth of Darkness. Sho, however, declares his departure before they can continue.
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After Betstengai Betsu Ten Gai shows up, he mocks the group then immediately leaves, along with the rest of the Genkishu.Onyx Demons. The group then arrives at the Demon Spine Mountains, and rest a night before heading in. Tan Hi is up practicing, when Ken San Un shows up and gives her a few pointers, though angering her in the process. She storms off and the group enters the mountains the next day, encountering the Valley of the Dead, the first trial. Kei Gai is called upon to put the dead to sleep, but fails a few times; Tan Hi protects the group with her Seal Guardian skills, except for Sho Syou Fu Kan who has to fight the dead. Kei Gai finally succeeds in singing the correct tune and the group moves on, arriving at the second trial, the Valley of the Doll. A golem guardian stands there motionless, and Sho Syou Fu Kan activates it, allowing Unshou Syu Un Syou to fire at its weak point. Unshou Syu Un Syou misses twice, though, so Sho Syou Fu Kan takes matters into his own hands and climbs the golem, stabbing the charm himself and deactivating the golem. He then falls off, but is saved by Unshou's Syu Un Syou's arrow, which pierces through his clothing and nails him to the arm of the now-deactivated golem. The group then moves onto the final trial, the Labyrinth of Darkness. Sho, Syou Fu Kan, however, declares his departure before they can continue.
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* CliffHanger: Sho declares to the group that he's leaving.
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* CliffHanger: Sho Syou Fu Kan declares to the group that he's leaving.
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* IncompletelyTrained: In a rather interesting variation, Ken Sanun points out her family's swordsmanship was specifically developed for men. If she adjusted the fighting stance and movements for someone with shorter arm reach and less body weight, she'd significantly improve. Case in point: the kata he observed her perform would not have hit the opponent unless she took a few steps forward, but adding more steps to the technique would disrupt its flow.
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* IncompletelyTrained: In a rather interesting variation, Ken Sanun San Un points out her Tan Hi's family's swordsmanship was specifically developed for men. If she adjusted the fighting stance and movements for someone with shorter arm reach and less body weight, she'd significantly improve. Case in point: the kata he observed her perform would not have hit the opponent unless she took a few steps forward, but adding more steps to the technique would disrupt its flow.
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* LivingMotionDetector: The doll will only activate when it senses the motion of intruders. It only attacked Sho Fukan because he was the only one moving towards it.
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* LivingMotionDetector: The doll will only activate when it senses the motion of intruders. It only attacked Sho Fukan Syou Fu Kan because he was the only one moving towards it.
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* Cliffhanger: CliffHanger: Sho declares to the group that he's leaving.
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After Betstengai shows up, he mocks the group then immediately leaves, along with the rest of the Genkishu. The group then arrives at the Demon Spine Mountains, and rest a night before heading in. Tan Hi is up practicing, when Ken shows up and gives her a few pointers, though angering her in the process. She storms off and the group enters the mountains the next day, encountering the Valley of the Dead, the first trial. Kei Gai is called upon to put the dead to sleep, but fails a few times; Tan Hi protects the group with her Seal Guardian skills, except for Sho who has to fight the dead. Kei Gai finally succeeds in singing the correct tune and the group moves on, arriving at the second trial, the Valley of the Doll. A golem guardian stands there motionless, and Sho activates it, allowing Unshou to fire at its weak point. Unshou misses twice, though, so Sho takes matters into his own hands and climbs the golem, stabbing the charm himself and deactivating the golem. He then falls off, but is saved by Unshou's arrow, which pierces through his clothing and nails him to the arm of the now-deactivated golem. The group then moves onto the final trial, the Labyrinth of Darkness. Sho, however, declares his departure before they can continue.
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*Cliffhanger: Sho declares to the group that he's leaving.
*ChivalrousPervert: Holding a conversation about having babies in your first attempt in courtship is definitely ''not'' the best impression for a conservative girl like Tan Hi.
*IncompletelyTrained: In a rather interesting variation, Ken Sanun points out her family's swordsmanship was specifically developed for men. If she adjusted the fighting stance and movements for someone with shorter arm reach and less body weight, she'd significantly improve. Case in point: the kata he observed her perform would not have hit the opponent unless she took a few steps forward, but adding more steps to the technique would disrupt its flow.
*AttackItsWeakPoint: The magic that controls the Stone Doll collects at a point in its neck. Attacking here would disrupt the connection and render the Doll inert, which is the job of the One-Eyed Impailer.
*LivingMotionDetector: The doll will only activate when it senses the motion of intruders. It only attacked Sho Fukan because he was the only one moving towards it.
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!!Tropes:
*Cliffhanger: Sho declares to the group that he's leaving.
*ChivalrousPervert: Holding a conversation about having babies in your first attempt in courtship is definitely ''not'' the best impression for a conservative girl like Tan Hi.
*IncompletelyTrained: In a rather interesting variation, Ken Sanun points out her family's swordsmanship was specifically developed for men. If she adjusted the fighting stance and movements for someone with shorter arm reach and less body weight, she'd significantly improve. Case in point: the kata he observed her perform would not have hit the opponent unless she took a few steps forward, but adding more steps to the technique would disrupt its flow.
*AttackItsWeakPoint: The magic that controls the Stone Doll collects at a point in its neck. Attacking here would disrupt the connection and render the Doll inert, which is the job of the One-Eyed Impailer.
*LivingMotionDetector: The doll will only activate when it senses the motion of intruders. It only attacked Sho Fukan because he was the only one moving towards it.
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