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* {{Exposition}}: One of Storck's students ask about changing her research topic, leading to an exchange about Animism and Anthropomorphism.
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* {{Exposition}}: One of Storck's students ask asks about changing her research topic, leading to an exchange about Animism and Anthropomorphism.
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* AdultFear: The two boys playing with the gun at the lake.
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* RecklessGunUsage: The two boys [[AdultFear playing with the gun]] at the end.
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* RecklessGunUsage: The two boys [[AdultFear playing with the gun]] gun at the end.
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* ArcNumber: The Blue Scorpion's serial number is 1015-59.
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* ArcNumber: The Blue Scorpion's serial number is 1015-59. Also the Lawyer-Jeff’s address is 1015 Oak.
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-->'''Storck:'' "Oh, man, I'm so fucking high... Yeah, okay. You're not really here. You're not, you're not there. You're a hallucination. That name I heard that name from the gun dealer guy."
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* TheEndOrIsIt: After Jeffery is free from the gun's influence, he throws it in the lake hoping no one can use it again. Unbeknownst to him, two boys who are just fishing soon find it washed ashore.
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* TheEndOrIsIt: After Jeffery is free from the gun's influence, he throws it in the lake hoping no one can use it again. Unbeknownst to him, two boys who are just fishing soon find it washed ashore.
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** It is unlikely the shooting range would allow Jeff to use their facilities after he starts showboating. It is questionable if they would even let him in after his incoherent talk at the counter.
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** It is unlikely the shooting range would allow Jeff to use their facilities after he starts showboating. It is questionable if they would even let him in after his incoherent talk at the counter.counter, especially since "I only need to fire it once" sounds a lot like someone planning suicide.
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* OneSteveLimit: Averted. Once professor Storck discovers the MarkedBullet with "Jeff" on it, nearly ''everyone'' he meets is named Jeff.
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* PlanetOfSteves: Once professor Storck discovers the MarkedBullet with "Jeff" on it, nearly ''everyone'' he meets is named Jeff.
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* BlingBlingBang: The Blue Scorpion is a gold-plated gun with intricate carvings and a pearl-white handle decorated with a blue scorpion silhouette.
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* GrailInTheGarbage: The Blue Scorpion -- a near-mythical handgun sought after by Che Guevara -- is in the belongings of an anonymous old hippie in a small upstate New York town.
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* GrailInTheGarbage: The Blue Scorpion -- a near-mythical (and ''very'' valuable) handgun sought after by Che Guevara -- is in the belongings of an anonymous old hippie in a small upstate New York town.
