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** When Amy breaks up with Rex, the whole thing appears rather over-dramatic and forced.
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** When Amy breaks Amy's break up with Rex, the whole thing appears Rex seems rather over-dramatic and forced.forced, hinting at it being an act.
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* EnlightenedSelfInterest: Lincoln and Clyde's desire to win Flip's contest leads them to draw in customers to increase the tally, which inadvertently gives him his most successful day of business.
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* EnlightenedSelfInterest: Lincoln and Clyde's desire to win Flip's contest leads them to draw in customers to increase the tally, which inadvertently gives him Flip his most successful day of business.
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* EnlightenedSelfInterest: Lincoln and Clyde's desire to win Flip's contest inadvertently gives Flip his most financially-successful day of business.
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* EnlightenedSelfInterest: Lincoln and Clyde's desire to win Flip's contest leads them to draw in customers to increase the tally, which inadvertently gives Flip him his most financially-successful successful day of business.
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* EnlightenedSelfIntrest: Lincoln and Clyde's desire to win Flip's contest inadvertently gives Flip his most financially-successful day of business.
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* EnlightenedSelfIntrest: EnlightenedSelfInterest: Lincoln and Clyde's desire to win Flip's contest inadvertently gives Flip his most financially-successful day of business.
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* BittersweetEnding: Lincoln and Clyde do not become Flip's millionth customer. However, they still get to snag as much of Flip's merchandise as they can.
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* BittersweetEnding: Lincoln and Clyde do not become Flip's millionth customer. However, they still get they're allowed to snag as much of Flip's merchandise as they can.can as thanks from Flip.
* EnlightenedSelfIntrest: Lincoln and Clyde's desire to win Flip's contest inadvertently gives Flip his most financially-successful day of business.
* EnlightenedSelfIntrest: Lincoln and Clyde's desire to win Flip's contest inadvertently gives Flip his most financially-successful day of business.
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* MayItNeverHappenAgain: At the end of the episode, Flip decides to scrap the whole millionth customer promotion because of all the trouble it caused, and has Nacho destroy the customer counter.
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* PetTheDog: Flip shows his gratitude toward Lincoln and Clyde for providing him with customers by allowing them 10 seconds to buy all the merch they want.
* WeAreNotGoingThroughThatAgain: At the end of the episode, Flip decides to scrap the whole millionth customer promotion because of all the trouble it caused, and has Nacho destroy the customer counter.
* WeAreNotGoingThroughThatAgain: At the end of the episode, Flip decides to scrap the whole millionth customer promotion because of all the trouble it caused, and has Nacho destroy the customer counter.
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* PetTheDog: Flip shows his gratitude toward Lincoln and Clyde for providing him with customers by allowing them 10 seconds to buy all the merch they want.
* WeAreNotGoingThroughThatAgain: At the end of the episode, Flip decides to scrap the whole millionth customer promotion because of all the trouble it caused, and has Nacho destroy the customer counter.want.
* WeAreNotGoingThroughThatAgain: At the end of the episode, Flip decides to scrap the whole millionth customer promotion because of all the trouble it caused, and has Nacho destroy the customer counter.
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** During the investigation, Amy is always the first one to suggest any potential suspects.
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** During the investigation, Amy is always the first one to suggest point out any potential suspects.
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* PlayingATree: Shannon is cast as a random shrub.
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* PlayingATree: Shannon is bemoans being cast as a random shrub.the mulberry bush.
--> '''Mrs. Bernardo''': ''[attempting to cheer Shannon up]'' Not just any Mulberry bush. The ''lead'' Mulberry bush!
** Then at the end, Amy is punished by being re-cast in the role of the bush.
--> '''Mrs. Bernardo''': ''[attempting to cheer Shannon up]'' Not just any Mulberry bush. The ''lead'' Mulberry bush!
** Then at the end, Amy is punished by being re-cast in the role of the bush.
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* SherlockHomage: Luan and Amy both don a detective costume similar to Holmes' IconicOutfit .
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* SherlockHomage: Luan and Amy both don a detective costume similar to Holmes' IconicOutfit .IconicOutfit.
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* SherlockHomage:Luan and Benny.
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* SherlockHomage:Luan SherlockHomage: Luan and Benny.Amy both don a detective costume similar to Holmes' IconicOutfit .
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** During the investigation, Amy is the first one to suggest any potential suspects.
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** During the investigation, Amy is always the first one to suggest any potential suspects.
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* {{Foreshadowing}}:There were several hints that Amy was the one cut the rope.
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* {{Foreshadowing}}:There were several hints that Amy was the one cut the rope.rope:
** Amy was the most eager to know who would land the role of Agatha Mystery.
** During the investigation, Amy is the first one to suggest any potential suspects.
** When Amy breaks up with Rex, the whole thing appears rather over-dramatic and forced.
**Amy is all too willing to accept when Luan forfeits the role of Agatha to her, showing a complete disregard for Luan’s feelings.
** Amy was the most eager to know who would land the role of Agatha Mystery.
** During the investigation, Amy is the first one to suggest any potential suspects.
** When Amy breaks up with Rex, the whole thing appears rather over-dramatic and forced.
**Amy is all too willing to accept when Luan forfeits the role of Agatha to her, showing a complete disregard for Luan’s feelings.
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* MysteryEpisode:Well it's right there in the plot.
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* MysteryEpisode:Well MysteryEpisode: Well, it's right there in the plot.plot description.
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* DisappointedInYou: Mrs. Bernardo says this verbatim to Amy when she finds out the latter is the culprit.
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* DisappointedInYou: Mrs. Bernardo says this verbatim to Amy when she finds out the latter is confesses to being the culprit.
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* DisappointedInYou: Mrs. Bernardo says this of Amy when she finds out the latter is the culprit.
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* DisappointedInYou: Mrs. Bernardo says this of verbatim to Amy when she finds out the latter is the culprit.
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--> "Mrs. Bernardo'': I'm disappointed in you, Amy. The bruises I just got don't hurt nearly as much as your deception.
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--> "Mrs. Bernardo'': '''Mrs. Bernardo:''' I'm disappointed in you, Amy. The bruises I just got don't hurt nearly as much as your deception.
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* DisappointedInYou: Mrs. Bernardo is disappointed when she finds out Amy is the culprit.
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* DisappointedInYou: Mrs. Bernardo is disappointed says this of Amy when she finds out Amy the latter is the culprit.culprit.
--> "Mrs. Bernardo'': I'm disappointed in you, Amy. The bruises I just got don't hurt nearly as much as your deception.
--> "Mrs. Bernardo'': I'm disappointed in you, Amy. The bruises I just got don't hurt nearly as much as your deception.
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* TomboyAndGirlyGirl: Luan and Amy switch these roles frequently in a visual sense in this episode, with one always wearing a detective outfit and the other wearing a frilly blue dress. Though otherwise, Luan is a relatively tomboyish prankster kid while Amy seems more romantic and girly out of the two.
