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* RawEggsMakeYouStronger: Lynn prepares some raw eggs for herself and Lincoln during their training montage, but [[RealityEnsues Lincoln gets sick from eating them instead]].
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* RawEggsMakeYouStronger: Lynn prepares some raw eggs for herself and Lincoln during their training montage, but [[RealityEnsues Lincoln gets sick from eating drinking them instead]].
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* GettingCrapPastTheRadar: Before it's revealed Lincoln was reading a comic, it looked like he was staring at [[IncestSubtext something else]]. His facial expression and the way he was speaking didn't help.
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* GettingCrapPastTheRadar: Before it's revealed Lincoln was reading a comic, it looked like he was staring at [[IncestSubtext something else]]. His facial expression and the way he was speaking didn't help.help:
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* HiddenDepths: It is revealed that Mr. Loud was a breakdancer once, and actually made the headlines of the local newspaper with it.
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* HiddenDepths: It is revealed that Mr. Loud was once a breakdancer once, breakdancer, and actually made the headlines of the local newspaper with it.
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* TrainingMontage: We get one when Lynn tries to train Lincoln for football.
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* TrainingMontage: We get one One is shown when Lynn tries to train Lincoln for football.
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* ExactWords: Much like with Flip's 'booming' prediction in "Come Sale Away", Lucy's predictions are more literal than her siblings interpret; Lori "takes a long trip" on a big oil slick, Luan accidentally gets "blown away" by Lynn Sr. with the air hose, and "doors are opened" for Lola by a ''Mr.'' "Universe", and so on.
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* ExactWords: Much like with Flip's 'booming' "booming" prediction in "Come Sale Away", Lucy's predictions are more literal than her siblings interpret; Lori "takes a long trip" on a big oil slick, Luan accidentally gets "blown away" by Lynn Sr. with the air hose, and "doors are opened" for Lola by a ''Mr.'' "Universe", and so on.
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* HairTriggerAvalanche: Referenced and averted; Lincoln fears that Lynn shouting his name will cause an avalanche, but it doesn't actually happen.
* INeedToGoIronMyDog: the park ranger hastily excuses himself from the press conference by stating he left the iron on in the ranger station, after the Dowl turns out to be a fake.
* LeaningOnTheFourthWall: At the end, Lucy predicts that TheEndIsNigh; Lisa brushes it off as preposterous, only for the the scene to cut to a "TheEnd" card.
* INeedToGoIronMyDog: the park ranger hastily excuses himself from the press conference by stating he left the iron on in the ranger station, after the Dowl turns out to be a fake.
* LeaningOnTheFourthWall: At the end, Lucy predicts that TheEndIsNigh; Lisa brushes it off as preposterous, only for the the scene to cut to a "TheEnd" card.
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* HairTriggerAvalanche: Referenced and averted; averted. Lincoln fears that Lynn shouting his name will cause an avalanche, but it doesn't actually happen.
* INeedToGoIronMyDog:the The park ranger hastily excuses himself from the press conference by stating he left the iron on in the ranger station, after the Dowl turns out to be a fake.
* LeaningOnTheFourthWall: At the end, Lucy predicts that TheEndIsNigh; Lisa brushes it off as preposterous, only for the the scene to cut to a "TheEnd"card.card:
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* LeaningOnTheFourthWall: At the end, Lucy predicts that TheEndIsNigh; Lisa brushes it off as preposterous, only for the the scene to cut to a "TheEnd"
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* LeftTheBackgroundMusicOn: the ominous music that plays twice (first when Lucy predicts Lincoln’s day will end in tragedy, and again when Lisa’s fortune comes true) turns out to be from a local radio station.
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* LeftTheBackgroundMusicOn: the The ominous music that plays twice (first when Lucy predicts Lincoln’s day will end in tragedy, and again when Lisa’s fortune comes true) turns out to be from a local radio station.
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* OldFaithful: the geyser at the park used to be one of these, but it stopped erupting some time ago, robbing the park of it's main tourist attraction. Henche the reason why the park ranger created the Dowl. It finally erupts again at the end of the episode, and only Lincoln gets to see it.
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* OldFaithful: the The geyser at the park used to be one of these, but it stopped erupting some time ago, robbing the park of it's its main tourist attraction. Henche Hence the reason why the park ranger created the Dowl. It finally erupts again at the end of the episode, and only Lincoln gets to see it.
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* SelfFulfillingProphecy: Lincoln’s attempts to avoid the tragedy Lucy predicted end up CAUSING the tragedy; namely, him missing out on all the fun.
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* SelfFulfillingProphecy: Lincoln’s attempts to avoid the tragedy Lucy predicted end up CAUSING ''causing'' the tragedy; namely, him missing out on all the fun.
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* VerySpecialEpisode: About fortune-telling, which is for entertainment purposes only and can't be taken seriously.
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* VerySpecialEpisode: About fortune-telling, fortune telling, which is for entertainment purposes only and can't be taken seriously.
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'''The Loudest Yard:''' Lincoln's mom signs him up for junior football so he can get some exercise. Not wanting to play, Lincoln has Lynn pretend to be him while playing.
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'''The Loudest Yard:''' Lincoln's mom signs him up for junior football so he can get some exercise. Not wanting to play, Lincoln has Lynn pretend to be him while playing.
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* CreatorCameo: A caricature of Chris Savino is among the spectators at the final game.
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* CreatorCameo: A caricature of Chris Savino Creator/ChrisSavino is among the spectators at the final game.
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* EpicFail: Lincoln managed to outrun the opposing team, keep the ball and score a goal, but accidentally ran to the wrong endzone.
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* EpicFail: Lincoln managed manages to outrun the opposing team, keep team into the ball and score a goal, but accidentally end zone. Unfortunately, he ran to into the wrong endzone.end zone, scoring a safety for the other team.
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* HiddenDepths: We learn that Mr. Loud was a break dancer once, and actually made the headlines of the local newspaper with it.
* OhCrap: Lincoln when Dad tells him that the whole family will be there to see him at the final game, and again at the end when he realizes that he scored the winning touchdown for the opposite team.
* OhCrap: Lincoln when Dad tells him that the whole family will be there to see him at the final game, and again at the end when he realizes that he scored the winning touchdown for the opposite team.
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* HiddenDepths: We learn It is revealed that Mr. Loud was a break dancer breakdancer once, and actually made the headlines of the local newspaper with it.
* OhCrap: Lincoln when Dad tells him that the whole family will be there to see him at the final game, and again at the end when he realizes that he accidently scored the winningtouchdown safety for the opposite team.
* OhCrap: Lincoln when Dad tells him that the whole family will be there to see him at the final game, and again at the end when he realizes that he accidently scored the winning
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: [[spoiler: The dowl almost topples over from the weight of its antlers when Lisa shows it to the ranger, hinting that the antlers were fake. A creature that was meant to have those antlers would have evolved to support their weight.]]
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* ADayInTheLimelight: Lynn has a big role compared to Lincoln's.
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* VerySpecialEpisode: About fortune-telling, which is for entertainment purposes only and can't be taken seriously.
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* ExactWords: Much like with Flip's 'booming' prediction in "Come Sale Away, Lucy's predictions are more literal than her siblings interpret; Lori "takes a long trip" on a big oil slick, Luan accidentally gets "blown away" by Lynn Sr. with the air hose, and "doors are opened" for Lola by a ''Mr.'' "Universe", and so on.
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* ExactWords: Much like with Flip's 'booming' prediction in "Come Sale Away, Away", Lucy's predictions are more literal than her siblings interpret; Lori "takes a long trip" on a big oil slick, Luan accidentally gets "blown away" by Lynn Sr. with the air hose, and "doors are opened" for Lola by a ''Mr.'' "Universe", and so on.
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* HairTriggerAvalanche: Referenced and averted; Lincoln fears that Lynn shouting his name will cause an avalance, but it doesn't actually happen.
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* ExactWords: Much like with Flip's 'booming' prediction in "Come Sale Away, Lucy's predictions are more literal than her siblings interpret; Lori "takes a long trip" on a big oil slick, Luan accidentally gets "blown away" by Lynn Sr. with the air hose, and "doors are opened" for Lola by a ''Mr.'' "Universe", and so on.
* HairTriggerAvalanche: Referenced and averted; Lincoln fears that Lynn shouting his name will cause anavalance, avalanche, but it doesn't actually happen.
* HairTriggerAvalanche: Referenced and averted; Lincoln fears that Lynn shouting his name will cause an
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* OldFaithful: the geyser at the park used to be one of these, but it stopped erupting some time ago, robbing the park of it's main tourist attraction. Henche the reason why the park ranger created the Dowl. It finally erupts again at the end of the episode, and only Lincoln gets to see it.
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* HairTriggerAvalanche: referenced and averted; Lincoln fears that Lynn shouting his name will cause an avalance, but it doesn't actually happen.
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* HairTriggerAvalanche: referenced Referenced and averted; Lincoln fears that Lynn shouting his name will cause an avalance, but it doesn't actually happen.
* PottyEmergency: Lynn's fortune of having her patience being tested is her having to wait in line to use the gas station restroom.
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* ThrowTheDogABone: after all he went through, Lincoln finally gets lucky at the end of the day when he gets to see the park’s geyser erupt for the first time in a long while. It’s beautiful enough for him to declare the day a great success after all.
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* ThrowTheDogABone: after After all he went through, Lincoln finally gets lucky at the end of the day when he gets to see the park’s geyser erupt for the first time in a long while. It’s beautiful enough for him to declare the day a great success after all.
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* SelfFulfillingProphecy: Lincoln’s attempts to avoid the tragedy Lucy predicted, end up CAUSING the tragedy; namely him missing out on all the fun.
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* SelfFulfillingProphecy: Lincoln’s attempts to avoid the tragedy Lucy predicted, predicted end up CAUSING the tragedy; namely namely, him missing out on all the fun.
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* HairTriggerAvalanche: referenced and averted; Lincoln fears that Lynn shouting his name will cause an avalance, but it doesn't actually happen.
* INeedToGoIronMyDog: the park ranger hastily excuses himself from the press conference by stating he left the iron on in the ranger station, after the Dowl turns out to be a fake.
* INeedToGoIronMyDog: the park ranger hastily excuses himself from the press conference by stating he left the iron on in the ranger station, after the Dowl turns out to be a fake.
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* LeftTheBackgroundMusicOn: the ominous music that plays twice (first when Lucy predicts Lincoln’s day will end in tragedy, and again when Lisa’s fortune comes true) turns out to be from a local radio station.
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* NotSoStoic: Lucy is clearly terrified by Lincoln’s tarot card, and first tries to cover it up by ''[[OOCIsSeriousBusiness smiling]]''.
* SelfFulfillingProphecy: Lincoln’s attempts to avoid the tragedy Lucy predicted, end up CAUSING the tragedy; namely him missing out on all the fun.
* SelfFulfillingProphecy: Lincoln’s attempts to avoid the tragedy Lucy predicted, end up CAUSING the tragedy; namely him missing out on all the fun.
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* ThrowTheDogABone: after all he went through, Lincoln finally gets lucky at the end of the day when he gets to see the park’s geyser erupt for the first time in a long while. It’s beautiful enough for him to declare the day a great success after all.
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* LeaningOnTheFourthWall: At the end, Lucy predicts that TheEndIsNigh; Lisa brushes it off as preposterous, only for the the scene to cut to a "TheEnd" card.
-->'''Lucy:''' What can I say? The cards don't lie.
-->'''Lucy:''' What can I say? The cards don't lie.
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'''Raw Deal:''' Lucy reads Lincoln's fortune and says that his day will "end in disaster", causing him to become a hypochondriac. His problem gets even worse when he the family drags him on a trip to a national park.
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'''Raw Deal:''' Lucy reads Lincoln's fortune and says that his day will "end in disaster", tragedy", causing him to become a hypochondriac. His problem gets even worse when he the family drags him hypochondriac, which puts a damper on a trip to his day at a national park.
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* AnAesop: Don't live your life in fear, or else you'll miss out on it.
* BittersweetEnding: Lincoln ends up missing out on the park's exciting views and having fun with his family because of his paranoia. [[spoiler: But he ''does'' get the chance to see the long-inactive geyser finally erupt before he leaves.]]
* ContinuityNod: Lucy'sfortune telling fortune-telling is brought up again.again.
* MetaphoricallyTrue: When Lincoln is told that his day will "end in tragedy", he believes that something terrible will happen to him and spends the entire trip fearing the worst. Nothing ended up happening to him, but his day still ended in tragedy because his fears made him miss out on a fun time.
* MixAndMatchCritters: The dowl, an owl with deer antlers. [[spoiler: However, it turns out to be a publicity stunt.]]
* MyGodYouAreSerious: Lincoln believes his father's threat of leaving behind whoever doesn't get into the van as an empty threat. It's not, and Dad almost drives off without him.
* BittersweetEnding: Lincoln ends up missing out on the park's exciting views and having fun with his family because of his paranoia. [[spoiler: But he ''does'' get the chance to see the long-inactive geyser finally erupt before he leaves.]]
* ContinuityNod: Lucy's
* MetaphoricallyTrue: When Lincoln is told that his day will "end in tragedy", he believes that something terrible will happen to him and spends the entire trip fearing the worst. Nothing ended up happening to him, but his day still ended in tragedy because his fears made him miss out on a fun time.
* MixAndMatchCritters: The dowl, an owl with deer antlers. [[spoiler: However, it turns out to be a publicity stunt.]]
* MyGodYouAreSerious: Lincoln believes his father's threat of leaving behind whoever doesn't get into the van as an empty threat. It's not, and Dad almost drives off without him.
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* ContinuityNod: Lucy's fortune telling is brought up again.
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'''Raw Deal:''' Lucy reads Lincoln's fortune and says that his day will "end in disaster", causing him to become a reclusive hypochondriac.
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'''Raw Deal:''' Lucy reads Lincoln's fortune and says that his day will "end in disaster", causing him to become a reclusive hypochondriac.
hypochondriac. His problem gets even worse when he the family drags him on a trip to a national park.
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* ShoutOut: The park ranger looks suspiciously like [[WesternAnimation/YogiBear Ranger Smith]].
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!!Raw Deal
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!!Raw DealDeal
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* TrainingMontage: we get one when Lynn tries to train Lincoln for football.
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* TrainingMontage: we We get one when Lynn tries to train Lincoln for football.
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* CreatorCameo: A caricature of Chris Savino is among the spectators at the final game
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* CreatorCameo: A caricature of Chris Savino is among the spectators at the final gamegame.
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* RawEggsMakeYouStronger: Lynn prepares some raw eggs for herself and Lincoln during their training montage, but [[RealityEnsues Lincoln gets sick from eating them]].
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* RawEggsMakeYouStronger: Lynn prepares some raw eggs for herself and Lincoln during their training montage, but [[RealityEnsues Lincoln gets sick from eating them]].them instead]].
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* HiddenDepths: We learn that Mr. Loud was a break dancer once, and actually made the headlines of the local newspaper with it.
* RawEggsMakeYouStronger: Lynn prepares some raw eggs for herself and Lincoln during their training montage, but [[RealityEnsues Lincoln gets sick from eating them]].
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* TrainingMontage: we get one when Lynn tries to train Lincoln for football.
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* EpicFail: Lincoln managed to outrun the opposing team, keep the ball and score a goal, but accidentally ran to the wrong endzone.
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* GettingCrapPastTheRadar: Before it's revealed Lincoln was reading a comic, it looked like he was staring at [[IncestSubtext something else]]. His facial expression and the way he was speaking didn't help.
-->'''Rita:''' See? Exercise can be fun!
-->'''Lincoln:''' I read ya loud and clear, Mom...
-->'''Rita:''' See? Exercise can be fun!
-->'''Lincoln:''' I read ya loud and clear, Mom...
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* BookAndSwitch: Done without a book when Lincoln reads a comic he taped to his mom's butt instead of paying attention to the workout show.
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* BookAndSwitch: Done without a book when Lincoln reads a comic he taped to his mom's butt instead of paying attention to watching the workout show.
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* DeliberateInjuryGambit: Lincoln tries to have Lola run over his leg, but he chickens out at the last second.
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'''The Loudest Yard:''' Lincoln's mom signs him up for junior football so he can get some exercise. Not wanting to play, Lincoln has Lynn pretend to be him while playing.
'''Raw Deal:''' Lucy reads Lincoln's fortune and says that his day will "end in disaster", causing him to become a reclusive hypochondriac.
!!The Loudest Yard
* CreatorCameo: A caricature of Chris Savino is among the spectators at the final game
* DeliberateInjuryGambit: Lincoln tries to have Lola run over his leg, but he chickens out at the last second.
* IHaveToGoIronMyDog: At the final game, Lincoln and Lynn give the excuse of going to the bathroom so they can switch places.
* OhCrap: Lincoln when Dad tells him that the whole family will be there to see him at the final game, and again at the end when he realizes that he scored the winning touchdown for the opposite team.
* RunningGag: Lincoln suffering from a charley-horse while trying to exercise.
* ShoutOut
** The title is a parody of ''Film/TheLongestYard''.
** While Lynn helps Lincoln train, he suffers [[ComicStrip/{{Peanuts}} Charlie Brown]]'s "football gag". It helps that ''Lucy'' pulled the ball away.
!!Raw Deal
'''Raw Deal:''' Lucy reads Lincoln's fortune and says that his day will "end in disaster", causing him to become a reclusive hypochondriac.
!!The Loudest Yard
* CreatorCameo: A caricature of Chris Savino is among the spectators at the final game
* DeliberateInjuryGambit: Lincoln tries to have Lola run over his leg, but he chickens out at the last second.
* IHaveToGoIronMyDog: At the final game, Lincoln and Lynn give the excuse of going to the bathroom so they can switch places.
* OhCrap: Lincoln when Dad tells him that the whole family will be there to see him at the final game, and again at the end when he realizes that he scored the winning touchdown for the opposite team.
* RunningGag: Lincoln suffering from a charley-horse while trying to exercise.
* ShoutOut
** The title is a parody of ''Film/TheLongestYard''.
** While Lynn helps Lincoln train, he suffers [[ComicStrip/{{Peanuts}} Charlie Brown]]'s "football gag". It helps that ''Lucy'' pulled the ball away.
!!Raw Deal
