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** Rok-Tahk was part of an act where she played a monster defeated by a hero. When she grew tired of being perceived as a monster, she flipped the script but was shipped off to Tars Lemora in response.
** Zero was part of a group of exploring Medusans who had left their world long ago, and was captured by Kazon during one of their stops.
** Jankom was sent out in a SleeperStarship with 29 other orphans as part of Tellar's pre-Federation deep space exploration program. A malfunction caused his pod to be opened so he could perform maintenance, and when he was finally finished, he had used so much oxygen that he had to leave in an escape pod so there'd be enough left for the remaining 29 occupants. The Kazon picked him up shortly thereafter.
** Zero was part of a group of exploring Medusans who had left their world long ago, and was captured by Kazon during one of their stops.
** Jankom was sent out in a SleeperStarship with 29 other orphans as part of Tellar's pre-Federation deep space exploration program. A malfunction caused his pod to be opened so he could perform maintenance, and when he was finally finished, he had used so much oxygen that he had to leave in an escape pod so there'd be enough left for the remaining 29 occupants. The Kazon picked him up shortly thereafter.
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** Finally, the reason the Vau N'Akat have such grandiose names is because they deliberately cast aside their old identities as part of their mission.
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** Jankom's SleeperStarship is the same design as the Tellarite cruisers from ''Series/StarTrekEnterprise''.
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** The episode ends with Holo-Janeway telling the kids about Mollie, the real Janeway's Irish setter,the mentioned in several ''Voyager'' episodes.
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** The episode ends with Holo-Janeway telling the kids about Mollie, the real Janeway's Irish setter,the setter, mentioned in several ''Voyager'' episodes.
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* HeroicSacrifice: The non-lethal kind. Jankom takes off in an escape pod so that the rest of his ship's crew has enough oxygen to survive.
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* HeroicSacrifice: The non-lethal kind. Jankom takes off in an escape pod so that the rest of his ship's crew has enough oxygen to survive. survive, being picked up by Kazon shortly after that.
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* AmbiguousSituation: It ''looks'' like "the hero" was happy to play along with Rok's clowning when he realised what she was doing, and was sad to see her go even though the new version of the show was less popular. It ''also'' looks like he became less interested in looking after her when the show stopped doing well. Since they didn't share a language, we never learn what he actually ''thought''.
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* ContinuityNod:
** The Kazon hunt Medusans with visors identical to the one worn by Spock in "[[Recap/StarTrekS3E5IsThereInTruthNoBeauty Is There in Truth No Beauty?]]"
** The episode ends with Holo-Janeway telling the kids about Mollie, the real Janeway's Irish setter,the mentioned in several ''Voyager'' episodes.
** The Kazon hunt Medusans with visors identical to the one worn by Spock in "[[Recap/StarTrekS3E5IsThereInTruthNoBeauty Is There in Truth No Beauty?]]"
** The episode ends with Holo-Janeway telling the kids about Mollie, the real Janeway's Irish setter,the mentioned in several ''Voyager'' episodes.
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* HeroicSacrifice: The non-lethal kind. Jankom takes off in an escape pod so that the rest of his ship's crew has enough oxygen to survive.
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* AlienNonInterferenceClause: Part of the hatred of the Order is motivated by Solum being left alone by the Federation until they sorted out their internal dispute on joining them. This in spite of the fact that the conflict was motivated by a belief that Starfleet had nothing of value to offer their people.
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* AlienNonInterferenceClause: Part of the hatred of the Order is motivated by Solum being left alone by the Federation until they sorted out their internal dispute civil war on joining them. This in spite of the fact that the conflict was motivated by a belief that Starfleet had nothing of value to offer their people.
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* BrokenPedestal: According to Asencia/The Vindicator, The Diviner was once one of the people that wanted to Solum to join the Federation. That they refused to take a side in the civil war over this choice that devastated their world completely flipped that opinion.
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* BrokenPedestal: According to Asencia/The Vindicator, The Diviner was once one of the people that wanted to Solum to join the Federation. That they refused to take a side in the civil war over this choice that devastated their world completely flipped that opinion.
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* BreatherEpisode: Most of this episode is meant for the ''Protostar'' crew to share their backstories. The rest is for "Ascencia" (aka the Vindicator) to bring the Diviner up to speed on their plan.
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* BreatherEpisode: Most of this episode is meant for the ''Protostar'' crew to share their backstories. The rest is for "Ascencia" "Asencia" (aka the Vindicator) to bring the Diviner up to speed on their plan.
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* TapOnTheHead: Janeway is knocked out by the Diviner with a simple heck chop.
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* TapOnTheHead: Janeway is knocked out by the Diviner with a simple heck neck chop.
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* BrokenPedestal: According to Ascencia/The Vindicator, The Diviner was once one of the people that wanted to Solum to join the Federation. That they refused to take a side in the civil war over this choice that devastated their world completely flipped that opinion.
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* BrokenPedestal: According to Ascencia/The Asencia/The Vindicator, The Diviner was once one of the people that wanted to Solum to join the Federation. That they refused to take a side in the civil war over this choice that devastated their world completely flipped that opinion.
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** The Order formed by vengeful the Vau N'Akat placed sole blame on Starfleet for a civil war their own people started that devastated their world, simply because they couldn't reconcile whether or not they should join the Federation and the Federation refused to aid either side.
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** The Order formed by the vengeful the Vau N'Akat placed sole blame on Starfleet for a civil war their own people started that devastated their world, simply because they couldn't reconcile whether or not they should join the Federation and the Federation refused to aid either side.
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* ShaggyDogStory: Jankom goes through hell and back fixing every system on the SleeperStarship so he can return to stasis, only to be told all that effort has made it impossible for him to be put back in without compromising life support for the others, forcing him to leave in an escape pod for their continued survival.
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* TapOnTheHead: Janeway is knocked out by the Diviner with a simple heck chop.
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* BrokenPedestal: According to Ascencia/The Vindicator, The Diviner was once one of the people that wanted to Solum to join the Federation. That they refused to take a side in the civil war over this choice that devastated their world completely flipped that opinion.
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* CynicismCatalyst: According to Ascencia/The Vindicator, The Diviner was once one of the people that wanted to Solum to join the Federation. The civil war that devastated their world completely flipped that opinion.
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* CynicismCatalyst: According to Ascencia/The Vidnicator, The Diviner was once one of the people that wanted to Solum to join the Federation. The civil war that devastated their world completely flipped that opinion.
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* CynicismCatalyst: According to Ascencia/The Vidnicator, Vindicator, The Diviner was once one of the people that wanted to Solum to join the Federation. The civil war that devastated their world completely flipped that opinion.
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* AlienNonInterferenceClause: Part of the hatred of the Order is motivated by Solum being left alone by the Federation until they sorted out their internal dispute on joining them. This in spite of the fact that the conflict was motivated by a belief that Starfleet had nothing of value to offer their people.
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* FigureItOutYourself: Part of the hatred of the Order is motivated by Solum being left alone by the Federation until they sort out their internal dispute on joining them. This in spite of the fact that the conflict was motivated by a belief that Starfleet had nothing of value to offer their people.
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** The Order formed by vengeful Vau N'Akat place sole blame on Starfleet for a civil war their own people started that devastated their world, simply because they couldn't reconcile whether or not they should join the Federation.
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** The Order formed by vengeful the Vau N'Akat place placed sole blame on Starfleet for a civil war their own people started that devastated their world, simply because they couldn't reconcile whether or not they should join the Federation. Federation and the Federation refused to aid either side.
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* CynicismCatalyst: According to Ascencia/The Vidnicator, The Diviner was once one of the people that wanted to Solum to join the Federation. The civil war that devastated their world completely flipped that opinion.
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* TheAllegedCar: The SleeperStarship Jankom Pog was sent away on had numerous flaws that Jankom developed his engineering skills repairing singlehandedly.
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* FigureItOutYourself: Part of the hatred of the Order is motivated by Solum being left alone by the Federation until they sort out their internal dispute on joining them. This in spite of the fact that the conflict was motivated by a belief that Starfleet had nothing of value to offer their people.
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* NeverMyFault: The Diviner blames Gwyn's betrayal on the fact that "she met a boy". Charitably, Dal at best cemented a betrayal the Diviner himself inspired by callously leaving Gwyn to die in favor of securing the ''Protostar'', and the Diviner is clearly mentally stable enough at this point that he probably remembers what he did.
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* NeverMyFault: NeverMyFault:
** The Diviner blames Gwyn's betrayal on the fact that "she met a boy". Charitably, Dal at best cemented a betrayal the Diviner himself inspired by callously leaving Gwyn to die in favor of securing the ''Protostar'', and the Diviner is clearly mentally stable enough at this point that he probably remembers what hedid.did.
** The Order formed by vengeful Vau N'Akat place sole blame on Starfleet for a civil war their own people started that devastated their world, simply because they couldn't reconcile whether or not they should join the Federation.
** The Diviner blames Gwyn's betrayal on the fact that "she met a boy". Charitably, Dal at best cemented a betrayal the Diviner himself inspired by callously leaving Gwyn to die in favor of securing the ''Protostar'', and the Diviner is clearly mentally stable enough at this point that he probably remembers what he
** The Order formed by vengeful Vau N'Akat place sole blame on Starfleet for a civil war their own people started that devastated their world, simply because they couldn't reconcile whether or not they should join the Federation.
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** Rok-Tahk was part of an act where a hero defeated the monster (her), until she flipped the script and was shipped off to Tars Lemora in response.
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** Rok-Tahk was part of an act where she played a hero monster defeated the monster (her), until by a hero. When she grew tired of being perceived as a monster, she flipped the script and but was shipped off to Tars Lemora in response.
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* ContrivedCoincidence: Of all the places the ''Protostar'' could have wound up, it happened to be right on Solum's doorstep after they had reason tl hate the Federation.
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* ContrivedCoincidence: Of all the places the ''Protostar'' could have wound up, it happened to be right on Solum's doorstep after they had reason tl to hate the Federation.
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* ContrivedCoincidence: Of all the places the ''Protostar'' could have wound up, it happened to be right on Solum's doorstep after they had reason tl hate the Federation.
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* ShipTease: According to the Diviner, the reason Gwyn betrayed him is because "she met a boy".
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* ShipTease: According to NeverMyFault: The Diviner blames Gwyn's betrayal on the Diviner, the reason Gwyn betrayed him is because fact that "she met a boy".boy". Charitably, Dal at best cemented a betrayal the Diviner himself inspired by callously leaving Gwyn to die in favor of securing the ''Protostar'', and the Diviner is clearly mentally stable enough at this point that he probably remembers what he did.
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* WholeEpisodeFlashback: Most of the episode is flashbacks explaining how several Alpha Quadrant aliens wound up halfway across the galaxy in the same place, and the particulars of how the Diviner traveled back in time and how the ''Protostar'' factors into that.
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* ShipTease: According to the Diviner, the reason Gwyn betrayed him is because "she met a boy". Dal's failed rescue in the mid-season finale evidently left an impression.
* ThirdPersonPerson: The helper robot on the SleeperStarship only answers queries if the person gives their full name first, hence why Jankom reflexively does so almost all the time.
* WholeEpisodeFlashback: Most of the episode is flashbacks explaining how several Alpha Quadrant aliens wound up halfway across the galaxy in the same place, and the particulars of how the Diviner traveled back in time and how the ''Protostar'' factors intothat.that.
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* ThirdPersonPerson: The helper robot on the SleeperStarship only answers queries if the person gives their full name first, hence why Jankom reflexively does so almost all the time.
* WholeEpisodeFlashback: Most of the episode is flashbacks explaining how several Alpha Quadrant aliens wound up halfway across the galaxy in the same place, and the particulars of how the Diviner traveled back in time and how the ''Protostar'' factors into
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* ShipTease: According to the Diviner, the reason Gwyn betrayed him is because "she met a boy".
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* BreatherEpisode: Most of this episode is meant for the ''Protostar'' crew to share their backstories. The rest is for "Ascencia" (aka the Vindicator) to bring the Diviner up to speed on their plan.
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** The Diviner and Asencia, known as the Vindicator, are part of a group known as the Order, dedicated to destroying the Federation. After Chakotay through a wrench into their plans, 100 ships, each containing one Vau N'Akat and one Drednok, were launched into the temporal anomaly. Most were destroyed, and those that weren't were spat out in random places and times. The Vindicator arrived a mere three years ago and infiltrated Starfleet, joining Janeway's crew, while the Diviner has been searching for two decades.
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** The Diviner and Asencia, known as the Vindicator, are part of a group known as the Order, dedicated to destroying the Federation. After Chakotay through threw a wrench into their plans, 100 ships, each containing one Vau N'Akat and one Drednok, were launched into the temporal anomaly. Most were destroyed, and those that weren't were spat out in random places and times. The Vindicator arrived a mere three years ago and infiltrated Starfleet, joining Janeway's crew, while the Diviner has been searching for two decades.
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** Finally, the reason the Vau N'Akat have such grandiose names is because they deliberately cast aside their old identities as part of their mission.
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** Finally, the reason the Vau N'Akat have such grandiose names is because they deliberately cast aside their old identities as part of their mission.mission.
* WholeEpisodeFlashback: Most of the episode is flashbacks explaining how several Alpha Quadrant aliens wound up halfway across the galaxy in the same place, and the particulars of how the Diviner traveled back in time and how the ''Protostar'' factors into that.
* WholeEpisodeFlashback: Most of the episode is flashbacks explaining how several Alpha Quadrant aliens wound up halfway across the galaxy in the same place, and the particulars of how the Diviner traveled back in time and how the ''Protostar'' factors into that.
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** The Diviner and Asencia, known as the Vindicator, are part of a group known as the Order, dedicated to destroying the Federation. After Chakotay through a wrench into their plans, 100 ships, each containing one Vau N'Akat and one Drednok, were launched into the temporal anomaly. Most were destroyed, and those that weren't were spat out in random places and times. The Vindicator arrived a mere three years ago and infiltrated Starfleet, joining Janeway's crew, while the Diviner has been searching for two decades.
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** The Diviner and Asencia, known as the Vindicator, are part of a group known as the Order, dedicated to destroying the Federation. After Chakotay through a wrench into their plans, 100 ships, each containing one Vau N'Akat and one Drednok, were launched into the temporal anomaly. Most were destroyed, and those that weren't were spat out in random places and times. The Vindicator arrived a mere three years ago and infiltrated Starfleet, joining Janeway's crew, while the Diviner has been searching for two decades.decades.
** Finally, the reason the Vau N'Akat have such grandiose names is because they deliberately cast aside their old identities as part of their mission.
** Finally, the reason the Vau N'Akat have such grandiose names is because they deliberately cast aside their old identities as part of their mission.
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The crew discuss how they came to Tars Lemora while repairing the proto-drive, and the Diviner and Asencia discuss how they came to the past.
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* InternalReveal: Janeway walks in on the Vindicator in her natural state, only to be knocked out by the Diviner.
* TheReveal: Grab a notepad, because this is gonna be a long one.
** Rok-Tahk was part of an act where a hero defeated the monster (her), until she flipped the script and was shipped off to Tars Lemora in response.
** Zero was part of a group of exploring Medusans who had left their world long ago, and was captured by Kazon during one of their stops.
** Jankom was sent out in a SleeperStarship with 29 other orphans as part of Tellar's pre-Federation deep space exploration program. A malfunction caused his pod to be opened so he could perform maintenance, and when he was finally finished, he had used so much oxygen that he had to leave in an escape pod so there'd be enough left for the remaining 29 occupants. The Kazon picked him up shortly thereafter.
** The ''Protostar'' encountered a temporal anomaly, being flung into the future after Solum had already been decimated by their civil war. It was captured and outfitted with the Living Construct, but before they could launch it, Chakotay set the auto-pilot and remotely piloted it back into the temporal anomaly, leading to it eventually landing on Tars Lemora. Chakotay's fate from that point isn't revealed.
** The Diviner and Asencia, known as the Vindicator, are part of a group known as the Order, dedicated to destroying the Federation. After Chakotay through a wrench into their plans, 100 ships, each containing one Vau N'Akat and one Drednok, were launched into the temporal anomaly. Most were destroyed, and those that weren't were spat out in random places and times. The Vindicator arrived a mere three years ago and infiltrated Starfleet, joining Janeway's crew, while the Diviner has been searching for two decades.
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!!Tropes:
* InternalReveal: Janeway walks in on the Vindicator in her natural state, only to be knocked out by the Diviner.
* TheReveal: Grab a notepad, because this is gonna be a long one.
** Rok-Tahk was part of an act where a hero defeated the monster (her), until she flipped the script and was shipped off to Tars Lemora in response.
** Zero was part of a group of exploring Medusans who had left their world long ago, and was captured by Kazon during one of their stops.
** Jankom was sent out in a SleeperStarship with 29 other orphans as part of Tellar's pre-Federation deep space exploration program. A malfunction caused his pod to be opened so he could perform maintenance, and when he was finally finished, he had used so much oxygen that he had to leave in an escape pod so there'd be enough left for the remaining 29 occupants. The Kazon picked him up shortly thereafter.
** The ''Protostar'' encountered a temporal anomaly, being flung into the future after Solum had already been decimated by their civil war. It was captured and outfitted with the Living Construct, but before they could launch it, Chakotay set the auto-pilot and remotely piloted it back into the temporal anomaly, leading to it eventually landing on Tars Lemora. Chakotay's fate from that point isn't revealed.
** The Diviner and Asencia, known as the Vindicator, are part of a group known as the Order, dedicated to destroying the Federation. After Chakotay through a wrench into their plans, 100 ships, each containing one Vau N'Akat and one Drednok, were launched into the temporal anomaly. Most were destroyed, and those that weren't were spat out in random places and times. The Vindicator arrived a mere three years ago and infiltrated Starfleet, joining Janeway's crew, while the Diviner has been searching for two decades.