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* ArmorPiercingResponse: After Rei makes fun of Usagi's reading habits, Usagi gets a pretty good shot back by stating Rei probably didn't read Tomoko's book herself. Cue OhCrap expression from Rei which only worsens as she learns Minako and Ami read it too.
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* OhCrap: Rei's reaction realizing all her friends read a popular bestselling novel before she did. Yes, even [[BookDumb Usagi]].
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* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: One look from BullyHunter Makoto is enough to send the trio bullies picking on Tomoko running for the hills.
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* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: One look from BullyHunter Makoto is enough to send the trio bullies of dumb wimp-heads who were picking on Tomoko running to run for the hills.
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A new novel about a human girl falling in ''romantic'' love with an animal catches the attention of the Inner Girls, especially as they find out that the author was a former friend to Makoto. At their insistence, the Thunder Guardian decides to visit her but learns that she's having trouble writing a second bestseller.
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A new novel about a human girl falling in ''romantic'' love with an animal a pegasus catches the attention of the Inner Girls, girls, especially as they find out that the author was a former friend to Makoto. At their insistence, the Thunder Guardian Makoto decides to visit her but learns that she's having trouble writing a second bestseller.
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* AllGirlsLikePonies: ''The Moonknight Pegasus'' revolves around a human girl falling in love with a winged pony. Apparently all the girls plus Unazuki fell in love with the premise.
* AllLoveIsUnrequited: Apparently the reason Tomoko fell into a writer's slump is because the soccer boy she admired fell in love with a random girl.
* AllLoveIsUnrequited: Apparently the reason Tomoko fell into a writer's slump is because the soccer boy she admired fell in love with a random girl.
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* AllGirlsLikePonies: ''The Moonknight Moon Night Pegasus'' revolves around a human girl falling in love with a winged pony. Apparently all pegasus. All the girls plus Unazuki fell in love with the premise.
* AllLoveIsUnrequited: Apparently the reason Tomoko fell into a writer's slump is because thesoccer boy she admired fell in love with a random another girl.
* AllLoveIsUnrequited: Apparently the reason Tomoko fell into a writer's slump is because the
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* BigBallOfViolence: The Striped Predator gets into one with a mob of angry publishers just outside of Tomoko's house.
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* BigBallOfViolence: The Striped Predator Tiger's Eye gets into one with a mob of angry publishers just outside of Tomoko's house.
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* ComicallyMissingThePoint: After Tiny Kitten points out how Makoto-sama is exceptionally happy to see Tomoko in person, Minako claims that it's because she's going to get her book signed.
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* ComicallyMissingThePoint: After Tiny Kitten Diana points out how Makoto-sama Makoto is exceptionally happy to see Tomoko in person, Minako claims that it's because she's going to get her book signed.
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* DidntThinkThisThrough: Jupiter tries to use ''Supreme Thunder'' without realizing that she, along with Moon and Chibi Moon, would be electrocuted because of their binding chains.
* EscapeArtist: Tenko, the Escapist Lemure, is modeled after escape magicians. But as a twist, she forces her enemies to escape or risk being blown up to smithereens.
* EscapeArtist: Tenko, the Escapist Lemure, is modeled after escape magicians. But as a twist, she forces her enemies to escape or risk being blown up to smithereens.
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* DidntThinkThisThrough: Jupiter tries to use ''Supreme Thunder'' Supreme Thunder without realizing that she, along with Moon and Chibi Moon, would be electrocuted because of their binding chains.
* EscapeArtist: Tenko, the EscapistLemure, Lemures, is modeled after escape magicians. But as a twist, she forces her enemies to escape or risk being blown up to smithereens.
* EscapeArtist: Tenko, the Escapist
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** The first was how Makoto encouraged the nerd to send her story to a publisher which led to her developing her story.
** The second was their first meeting where Makoto scared some bullies who were picking on the nerd girl.
* GrenadeHotPotato: Thanks to Tuxedo Mask freeing the Sailor Guardians from their chains, Jupiter tosses the time bomb back at the Escapist Lemure which blows up on her.
** The second was their first meeting where Makoto scared some bullies who were picking on the nerd girl.
* GrenadeHotPotato: Thanks to Tuxedo Mask freeing the Sailor Guardians from their chains, Jupiter tosses the time bomb back at the Escapist Lemure which blows up on her.
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** The first was how Makoto encouraged the nerd her to send her story to a publisher which led to her developing her story.
** The second was their first meeting where Makoto scared some bullies who were picking onthe nerd girl.Tomoko.
* GrenadeHotPotato: Thanks to Tuxedo Mask freeing the Sailor Guardians from their chains, Jupiter tosses the time bomb back atthe Escapist Lemure Tenko which blows up on her.
** The second was their first meeting where Makoto scared some bullies who were picking on
* GrenadeHotPotato: Thanks to Tuxedo Mask freeing the Sailor Guardians from their chains, Jupiter tosses the time bomb back at
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* InnocentlyInsensitive: A pushy publisher reveals that Tomoko has yet to deliver her second manuscript which leads Minako to blurt out that she ''ran away'' because she couldn't handle the pressure.
* InstantlyProvenWrong: Luna tries to dissuade Usagi's suggestion of visiting Tomoko claiming that not everyone would be interested. And then Chibs' opens her mouth saying she wants to go too.
* TheNeedsOfTheMany: After seeing a white creature with a golden horn, Tomoko is inspired to write stories not only for herself but for everyone with beautiful dreams.
* PlotHole: While alone at the Crown Cafe, Luna points out that Chibi-usa ran away somewhere. And she spoke while Unazuki was right next to her.
* RousingSpeech: Makoto gives one to her OldFriend in order to inspire her to keep writing.
* InstantlyProvenWrong: Luna tries to dissuade Usagi's suggestion of visiting Tomoko claiming that not everyone would be interested. And then Chibs' opens her mouth saying she wants to go too.
* TheNeedsOfTheMany: After seeing a white creature with a golden horn, Tomoko is inspired to write stories not only for herself but for everyone with beautiful dreams.
* PlotHole: While alone at the Crown Cafe, Luna points out that Chibi-usa ran away somewhere. And she spoke while Unazuki was right next to her.
* RousingSpeech: Makoto gives one to her OldFriend in order to inspire her to keep writing.
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* InnocentlyInsensitive: A pushy publisher reveals that Tomoko has yet to deliver her second manuscript which leads Minako to blurt out that she ''ran away'' "ran away" because she couldn't handle the pressure.
* InstantlyProvenWrong: Luna tries to dissuade Usagi's suggestion of visiting Tomoko claiming that not everyone would be interested. And thenChibs' Chibi-usa opens her mouth saying she wants to go too.
* TheNeedsOfTheMany: After seeinga white creature with a golden horn, Pegasus himself, Tomoko is inspired to write stories not only for herself but for everyone with beautiful dreams.
* PlotHole: While alone atthe Crown Cafe, Fruits Parlor Crown, Luna points out that Chibi-usa ran away somewhere. And she spoke while Unazuki was right next to her.
* RousingSpeech: Makoto gives one toher OldFriend Tomoko in order to inspire her to keep writing.
* InstantlyProvenWrong: Luna tries to dissuade Usagi's suggestion of visiting Tomoko claiming that not everyone would be interested. And then
* TheNeedsOfTheMany: After seeing
* PlotHole: While alone at
* RousingSpeech: Makoto gives one to
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* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: One look from BullyHunter Makoto is enough to send the trio of dumb wimp-heads running for the hills.
* SickeninglySweet: Hawks' and Fish Eye found the trending novel to be incredibly sappy and lame.
* SickeninglySweet: Hawks' and Fish Eye found the trending novel to be incredibly sappy and lame.
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* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: One look from BullyHunter Makoto is enough to send the trio of dumb wimp-heads bullies picking on Tomoko running for the hills.
* SickeninglySweet:Hawks' Hawk's Eye and Fish Eye found the trending novel to be incredibly sappy and lame.
* SickeninglySweet:
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** Chibi-usa believes that Tomoko was also haunted by the Pegasus in her dreams given how accurately she describes the beast in her novel.
** Zirconia assigns her Amazon Clowns to target Tomoko next believing that she may know something about the elusive Pegasus given that she wrote a best-selling novel about the creature.
** Zirconia assigns her Amazon Clowns to target Tomoko next believing that she may know something about the elusive Pegasus given that she wrote a best-selling novel about the creature.
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** Chibi-usa believes that Tomoko was also haunted by the Pegasus in her dreams given how accurately she describes the beast him in her novel.
** Zirconia assignsher the Amazon Clowns Trio to target Tomoko next believing that she may know something about the elusive Pegasus given that she wrote a best-selling novel about the creature.
** Zirconia assigns
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->([=CWi=] Episode: '''"A Pegasus Page Turner"''')
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* AllLoveIsUnrequited: Apparently the reason Tomoko fell into a writer's slump is because the soccer player boy she admired fell in love with a random girl.
* {{Bathos}}: Tiger's Eye is shown stalking Tomoko and deciding his next move... while wading in the middle of swamp water.
* {{Bathos}}: Tiger's Eye is shown stalking Tomoko and deciding his next move... while wading in the middle of swamp water.
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* AllLoveIsUnrequited: Apparently the reason Tomoko fell into a writer's slump is because the soccer player boy she admired fell in love with a random girl.
* {{Bathos}}: Tiger's Eye is shown stalking Tomoko anddeciding planning his next move... while wading in the middle of swamp water.
* {{Bathos}}: Tiger's Eye is shown stalking Tomoko and
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* ChainPain: Tenko turns her hair into chains that bind the Sailor Guardians for her upcoming escape trick.
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* DidntThinkThisThrough: Jupiter tries to use ''Supreme Thunder'' without realizing that she, along with Moon and Chibi Moon, would be electrocuted because of their binding chains.
* EscapeArtist: Tenko, the Escapist Lemure, is modeled after escape magicians. But as a twist, she forces her enemies to escape or risk being blown up to smithereens.
* EscapeArtist: Tenko, the Escapist Lemure, is modeled after escape magicians. But as a twist, she forces her enemies to escape or risk being blown up to smithereens.
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* GrenadeHotPotato: Thanks to Tuxedo Mask freeing the Sailor Guardians from their chains, Jupiter tosses the time bomb back at the Escapist Lemure which blows up on her.
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* TheNeedsOfTheMany: After seeing a white creature with a golden horn, Tomoko is inspired to write stories not only for herself but for everyone with beautiful dreams.
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* AllLoveIsUnrequited: Apparently the reason Tomoko fell into a writer's slump is because the soccer player boy she admired fell in love with a random girl.
* PlotHole: While alone at the Crown Cafe, Luna points out that Chibi-usa ran away somewhere. And she spoke while Unazuki was right next to her.
* RousingSpeech: Makoto gives one to her OldFriend in order to inspire her to keep writing.
-->'''Makoto:''' You used to hide your stories inside your desk because you were too embarrassed to let other people read your work. Do you really want to be that coward again? Remember the commitment you made to yourself? You said that even if you had only a single reader, you'd always finish your story for them! The dreams you write about don't belong to just ''you'' anymore!
* RousingSpeech: Makoto gives one to her OldFriend in order to inspire her to keep writing.
-->'''Makoto:''' You used to hide your stories inside your desk because you were too embarrassed to let other people read your work. Do you really want to be that coward again? Remember the commitment you made to yourself? You said that even if you had only a single reader, you'd always finish your story for them! The dreams you write about don't belong to just ''you'' anymore!
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* WrongAssumption: Zirconia assigns her Amazon Clowns to target Tomoko next believing that she may know something about the elusive Pegasus given that she wrote a best-selling novel about the creature.
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* WrongAssumption: WrongAssumption:
** Chibi-usa believes that Tomoko was also haunted by the Pegasus in her dreams given how accurately she describes the beast in her novel.
** Zirconia assigns her Amazon Clowns to target Tomoko next believing that she may know something about the elusive Pegasus given that she wrote a best-selling novel about the creature.
** Chibi-usa believes that Tomoko was also haunted by the Pegasus in her dreams given how accurately she describes the beast in her novel.
** Zirconia assigns her Amazon Clowns to target Tomoko next believing that she may know something about the elusive Pegasus given that she wrote a best-selling novel about the creature.
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[[caption-width-right:666:''[[{{Film/ItsAWonderfulLife}} Strange, isn’t it? Each girl's life touches so many other lives. When she isn’t around she leaves an awful hole, doesn’t she?]]'']]
[[caption-width-right:666:''[[{{Film/ItsAWonderfulLife}} Strange, isn’t it? Each girl's life touches so many other lives. When she isn’t around she leaves an awful hole, doesn’t she?]]'']]
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* AllGirlsLovePonies: ''The Moonknight Pegasus'' revolves around a human girl falling in love with a winged pony. Apparently all the girls plus Unazuki fell in love with the premise.
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* AllGirlsLovePonies: AllGirlsLikePonies: ''The Moonknight Pegasus'' revolves around a human girl falling in love with a winged pony. Apparently all the girls plus Unazuki fell in love with the premise.premise.
* {{Bathos}}: Tiger's Eye is shown stalking Tomoko and deciding his next move... while wading in the middle of swamp water.
* {{Bathos}}: Tiger's Eye is shown stalking Tomoko and deciding his next move... while wading in the middle of swamp water.
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** The second was their first meeting where Makoto scared some bullies who were picking on the nerd girl.
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* InnocentlyInsensitive: A pushy publisher reveals that Tomoko has yet to deliver her second manuscript which leads Minako to blurt out that she ''ran away'' because she couldn't handle the pressure.
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* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: One look from BullyHunter Makoto is enough to send the trio of dumb wimp-heads running for the hills.
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* WritersBlock: Tomoko suffers through this as she can't come up with a new story that will be as good, or better, then her first novel.
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A new novel about a human girl falling in love with an animal catches the attention of the Inner Girls, especially as they find out that the author was a former friend to Makoto. At their insistence, the Thunder Guardian decides to visit her but learns that she's having trouble writing a second bestseller.
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A new novel about a human girl falling in ''romantic'' love with an animal catches the attention of the Inner Girls, especially as they find out that the author was a former friend to Makoto. At their insistence, the Thunder Guardian decides to visit her but learns that she's having trouble writing a second bestseller.
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* AllGirlsLovePonies: ''The Moonknight Pegasus'' revolves around a human girl falling in love with a winged pony. Apparently all the girls plus Unazuki fell in love with the premise.
* BigBallOfViolence: The Striped Predator gets into one with a mob of angry publishers just outside of Tomoko's house.
* ComicallyMissingThePoint: After Tiny Kitten points out how Makoto-sama is exceptionally happy to see Tomoko in person, Minako claims that it's because she's going to get her book signed.
* CrazyPrepared: Out of fear that she's falling behind in recent trends, Rei goes out of her way to buy ''three'' copies of the new novel. One for reading at home, one to keep in mint-condition, and one to show off to other people.
* {{Flashback}}: We get two of them regarding Makoto's friendship with Tomoko.
** The first was how Makoto encouraged the nerd to send her story to a publisher which led to her developing her story.
* HistoryWithCelebrity: Makoto confesses that she used to know the author, Tomoko Takase, in one of her old schools before transferring to Juuban Junior High. Though she tries to be humble about it out of fear of coming off as smug and arrogant.
* InstantlyProvenWrong: Luna tries to dissuade Usagi's suggestion of visiting Tomoko claiming that not everyone would be interested. And then Chibs' opens her mouth saying she wants to go too.
* SickeninglySweet: Hawks' and Fish Eye found the trending novel to be incredibly sappy and lame.
* WrongAssumption: Zirconia assigns her Amazon Clowns to target Tomoko next believing that she may know something about the elusive Pegasus given that she wrote a best-selling novel about the creature.
* BigBallOfViolence: The Striped Predator gets into one with a mob of angry publishers just outside of Tomoko's house.
* ComicallyMissingThePoint: After Tiny Kitten points out how Makoto-sama is exceptionally happy to see Tomoko in person, Minako claims that it's because she's going to get her book signed.
* CrazyPrepared: Out of fear that she's falling behind in recent trends, Rei goes out of her way to buy ''three'' copies of the new novel. One for reading at home, one to keep in mint-condition, and one to show off to other people.
* {{Flashback}}: We get two of them regarding Makoto's friendship with Tomoko.
** The first was how Makoto encouraged the nerd to send her story to a publisher which led to her developing her story.
* HistoryWithCelebrity: Makoto confesses that she used to know the author, Tomoko Takase, in one of her old schools before transferring to Juuban Junior High. Though she tries to be humble about it out of fear of coming off as smug and arrogant.
* InstantlyProvenWrong: Luna tries to dissuade Usagi's suggestion of visiting Tomoko claiming that not everyone would be interested. And then Chibs' opens her mouth saying she wants to go too.
* SickeninglySweet: Hawks' and Fish Eye found the trending novel to be incredibly sappy and lame.
* WrongAssumption: Zirconia assigns her Amazon Clowns to target Tomoko next believing that she may know something about the elusive Pegasus given that she wrote a best-selling novel about the creature.
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->'''Chibi-Usa:''' Wait! The author of the Moon Night Pegasus is-\\
'''Usagi:''' Mako's friend?! Ahh! Let's get her autograph!\\
'''Chibi-Usa:''' Usagi! It's the bad guys again!\\
'''Usagi:''' Ugh! If you're thinking of peaking into that young author's dreams then, InTheNameOfTheMoon\\
'''Both:''' We'll punish you!
A new novel about a human girl falling in love with an animal catches the attention of the Inner Girls, especially as they find out that the author was a former friend to Makoto. At their insistence, the Thunder Guardian decides to visit her but learns that she's having trouble writing a second bestseller.
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'''Usagi:''' Mako's friend?! Ahh! Let's get her autograph!\\
'''Chibi-Usa:''' Usagi! It's the bad guys again!\\
'''Usagi:''' Ugh! If you're thinking of peaking into that young author's dreams then, InTheNameOfTheMoon\\
'''Both:''' We'll punish you!
A new novel about a human girl falling in love with an animal catches the attention of the Inner Girls, especially as they find out that the author was a former friend to Makoto. At their insistence, the Thunder Guardian decides to visit her but learns that she's having trouble writing a second bestseller.
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