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* LovecraftianSuperpower: Salem is able to use Grimm-like abilities to augment her magical abilities. She can stretch her arms, summon Grimm hands from portals to restrain others, and fire webs of black liquid to drag Yang towards her. When she moves at inhuman speeds, it's not by moving her body; she leans at a strange angle before zooming across the ground on a pillow of black smoke. Her regeneration also seems to have become linked to this, as injuries reveal her body contains a mass of black ooze that reforms her body when regenerating.
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* LovecraftianSuperpower: Salem is able to use Grimm-like abilities to augment her magical abilities. She can stretch her arms, summon Grimm hands from portals to restrain others, and fire webs of black liquid to drag Yang towards her. When she moves at inhuman speeds, it's not by moving her body; she leans at a strange angle before zooming across the ground on a pillow plume of black smoke. Her regeneration also seems to have become linked to this, as injuries reveal her body contains a mass of black ooze that reforms her body when regenerating.
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* ChildSoldier: The Academy students are drafted to the military effort, assigned to protect the landing zone of the bomb from the Grimm. Among the recruits are Team FNKI. Marrow is alarmed by this because they're just kids to him.
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* ChildSoldier: ChildSoldiers: The Academy students are drafted to the military effort, assigned to protect the landing zone of the bomb from the Grimm. Among the recruits are Team FNKI. Marrow is alarmed by this because they're just kids to him.
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There's Speculative Troping going on here about when Neo arrived. The trope also requires someone trying to get the drop on a character but failing. Neo wasn't trying to get the drop on Jinn, she was just hiding from Hazel, Emerald and Oscar. Also, tweaking some awkward grammar.
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* TheAnticipator: When Hazel, Emerald and Oscar are ready to leave the room, Jinn prods them by asking them that ''none'' of them have a question. They say no and leave. As they are leaving Jinn looks to the side and the camera pans over to reveal Neo camouflaged by a wall. Given that she would have to already have been there before Jinn was summoned this just adds to Jinn's near all-knowing abilities.
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* HintDropping: Jinn's "So, none of you have a question for me?" was her trying to tell Haze, Emerald and Oscar that they were not alone in the room. However, she is so vague about it that they don't catch on.
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* HintDropping: Jinn's "So, none of you have a question for me?" was her trying an attempt to tell Haze, Hazel, Emerald and Oscar that they were not alone in the room. However, she is so vague about it that they don't catch on.
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* HintDropping: Jinn's "So, none of you have a question for me?" was were trying to tell Haze, Emerald and Oscar that they were not alone in the room. However, she is so vague about it that they don't catch on.
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* HintDropping: Jinn's "So, none of you have a question for me?" was were her trying to tell Haze, Emerald and Oscar that they were not alone in the room. However, she is so vague about it that they don't catch on.
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* HintDropping: Jinn's "So, none of you have a question for me?" was were trying to tell Haze, Emerald and Oscar that they were not alone in the room. However, she is so vague about it that they don't catch on.
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stated in the commentary that Jinn was aware of Neo.
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* TheAnticipator: When Hazel, Emerald and Oscar are ready to leave the room, Jinn prods them by asking them that ''none'' of them have a question. They say no and leave. As they are leaving Jinn looks to the side and the camera pans over to reveal Neo camouflaged by a wall. Given that she would have to already have been there before Jinn was summoned this just adds to Jinn's near all-knowing abilities.
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Both Freudian Excuse and its subversion can only apply if the traumatic experience happened during childhood or adolescence. However all the bad things that happened to Salem happened when she was a fully grown adult, making her inexplicable for this.
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* FreudianExcuseIsNoExcuse: Yang tells Salem to her face that no matter how tragic her past was, it will ''never'' justify her vendetta with Ozma and the gods or all the death and destruction that's resulted from it, essentially likening Salem to a child throwing a tantrum all because something bad happened to her once and she didn't get a happily ever after.
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This description was plagiarised and has been removed. I am replacing it with an original description. For further information, please see this post
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Forgot to mention that I replaced the plagiarized description with an original one as per this post.
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The clock is ticking on Jaune, Ren, and Yang's rescue mission. The Ace-Ops hold the line against Salem's forces.
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-> ''"No more 'Gretchens', boy..."''
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'''Hazel:''' What Gretchen would have done. And that starts with getting you away from here. Both of you.
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Trope misuse; this isn't for characters who aren't afraid, it's for characters whose lack of fear makes them do stupid things.
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* FearlessFool: While Ren can detect Yang's distress, he also can say there's no fear in Jaune.
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* FearlessFool: While Ren can detect Yang's distress, he also can say there's no fear in Jaune.
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Link to episode 12
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This edit is incorrect; it was correct the first time. What he's saying is that he wants Oscar to put a stop to children getting killed before they've graduated or grown up. He doesn't want there to be another Gretchen (as in, her scenario must never happen again).
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-> ''"No more 'Gretchen's boy'...'Gretchens', boy..."''
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I'm sure the subtitles made an error with this line. I know that they mae a similar error with a line from Gravity (instead of "You chose that fat imbecile over me!", they did "rat imbecile" instead).
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-> ''"No more 'Gretchens', boy...'Gretchen's boy'..."''
