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* PteroSoarer: One of the ten thousand monsters resembles a ''Pteranodon''.
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* SadlyMythtaken: Phineas warns Candevere not to look at Ferbalot in gorgon form, but he should have said the same thing when Ferbalot turned into a cockatrice.
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* ChekhovsGun: The transformation potions Phineas and Ferbalot were making at the beginning of the story.
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* ChekhovsGun: The transformation potions that Phineas and Ferbalot were making at the beginning of the story.
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* JumpOffABridgeRebuttal: This exchange between Bufavulous and Baljeetolas:
-->'''Bufavulous:''' Mother always said if all the other kids were jumping off a cliff, I should do it too.\\
'''Baljeetolas:''' Your mother said that?\\
'''Bufavulous:''' She was not a nurturer.
-->'''Bufavulous:''' Mother always said if all the other kids were jumping off a cliff, I should do it too.\\
'''Baljeetolas:''' Your mother said that?\\
'''Bufavulous:''' She was not a nurturer.
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'''Monogram:'''Oh, I see. Very clever.
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'''Carl: [[LampshadeHanging That's kind of the point, sir.]]\\
'''Oh, I see. Very clever.
'''Oh, I see. Very clever.
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Thus comes the tale of how Phineas and Ferb go on a quest to defeat Malifishmertz.
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* TheCavalry: {{Subverted|Trope}}. Carl tries to have [[HerCodeNameWasMarySue his self-insert appear in the story to save everybody]], but Monogram forces him to tell the tale as it's written.
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* TheCavalry: {{Subverted|Trope}}. Carl tries to have [[HerCodeNameWasMarySue his self-insert appear insert himself in the story to save everybody]], but Monogram forces him to tell the tale as it's written.
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* PlanBResolution: With Excaliferb having fallen apart, the heroes must rely on Phineas and Ferbalot's shapeshifting potions.
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* PlanBResolution: With Excaliferb having fallen apart, the heroes must rely on Phineas and Ferbalot's shapeshifting potions.potions and the 10,000 monsters they found in the cave.
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* LettingTheAirOutofTheBand: Happens twice: once when Carl tries to insert himself into the story, and again when Carl tells Major Monogram how the story actually ends.
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* LettingTheAirOutofTheBand: LettingTheAirOutOfTheBand: Happens twice: once when Carl tries to insert himself into the story, and again when Carl tells Major Monogram how the story actually ends.
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* LettingTheAirOutofTheBand: Happens twice: once when Carl tries to insert himself into the story, and again when Carl tells Major Monogram how the story actually ends.
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* {{Dissimile}}: When Baljeetolas tells Bufavulous about a new concept he theorized called "logic", Bufavulous asks if it is anything like hysterical hearsay. Baljeetolas says yes... "In that it is the exact opposite of that".
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* ChekhovsGun: The transformation potions Phineas and Ferb were making at the beginning of the story.
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* ChekhovsGun: The transformation potions Phineas and Ferb Ferbalot were making at the beginning of the story.story.
* {{Cliffhanger}}: The first act ends with the kids falling off an actual cliff, with Carl telling Major Monogram that they need to take a break.
--> '''Monogram:''' Bad time for that. You totally left me hanging in that cliff scene.\\
'''Carl: [[LampshadeHanging That's kind of the point, sir.]]\\
'''Oh, I see. Very clever.
* {{Cliffhanger}}: The first act ends with the kids falling off an actual cliff, with Carl telling Major Monogram that they need to take a break.
--> '''Monogram:''' Bad time for that. You totally left me hanging in that cliff scene.\\
'''Carl: [[LampshadeHanging That's kind of the point, sir.]]\\
'''Oh, I see. Very clever.
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* NoodleImplements: Malifishmertz's story on how he's taking over the Tri-Kingdom Area isn't heard in its entirety because he's [[ItMakesSenseInContext walking down a spiral staircase that mostly surrounded by walls]], but apparently it involves the biggest raspberry that he'd ever seen and an incident where he had a gag over his mouth.
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* {{Irony}}: Malifishmertz seems to be the inventor of the lawn gnomes, one of the that present day Doofenshmirtz hate most. (although this is just a story, so it's probably not real)
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* {{Irony}}: Malifishmertz seems to be the inventor of the lawn gnomes, one of the things that present day Doofenshmirtz hate hates most. (although (Although this is just a story, so it's probably not real) real.)
* ItsTheBestWhateverEver: "And everyone in the village agreed it was the best Midsummer-Woad-Gathering-Harvest-Bonfire's Eve ever".
* ItsTheBestWhateverEver: "And everyone in the village agreed it was the best Midsummer-Woad-Gathering-Harvest-Bonfire's Eve ever".
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* PlanBResolution: With Excaliferb having fallen apart, the heroes must rely on Phineas and Ferb's shapeshifting potions.
* RainOfSomethingUnusual: The episode has the two boys' (in the story) Middle-Age adventures by noticing that the rain is fishy by it raining fish.
* RainOfSomethingUnusual: The episode has the two boys' (in the story) Middle-Age adventures by noticing that the rain is fishy by it raining fish.
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* PlanBResolution: With Excaliferb having fallen apart, the heroes must rely on Phineas and Ferb's Ferbalot's shapeshifting potions.
* RainOfSomethingUnusual:The episode has the two boys' (in the story) Middle-Age adventures by noticing Phineas and Ferbalot notice that there's something fishy about the rain is fishy by it - it's raining fish.actual fish.
* SequelHook: During the bonfire, Malifishmertz mangages to break the [[StockPunishment pillory]] holding him in and escape while no one's looking, "[[LampshadeHanging bent on laying the groundwork for a sequel]]".
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* SequelHook: During the bonfire, Malifishmertz mangages to break the [[StockPunishment pillory]] holding him in and escape while no one's looking, "[[LampshadeHanging bent on laying the groundwork for a sequel]]".
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** The ending -- which involves Major Monogram asking Carl to come back the next and read the story again -- is a parody of the ending of ''Film/ThePrincessBride''.
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** The ending -- which involves Major Monogram asking Carl to come back the next day and read the story again -- is a parody of the ending of ''Film/ThePrincessBride''.
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* SoundtrackDissonance: When the kids begin their quest, banjo music starts playing in the background. The scene then cuts to reveal that [[LeftTheBackgroundMusicOn Carl was the one playing the banjo]]. Monogram calls him out on it, saying, "Where are they traveling to, Alabama?"; he then says that a proper questing song should have lots of minor chords and, to make it sound more medieval, throw in a major chord at the end. [[note]] Or use a Picardy Third at the end, to put it into proper music theory terminology.[[/note]]
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* Irony: Malifishmertz seems to be the inventor of the lawn gnomes, one of the that present day Doofenshmirtz hate most. (although this is just a story, so it's probably not real)
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* Irony: {{Irony}}: Malifishmertz seems to be the inventor of the lawn gnomes, one of the that present day Doofenshmirtz hate most. (although this is just a story, so it's probably not real)
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* Irony: Malifishmertz seems to be the inventor of the lawn gnomes, one of the that present day Doofenshmirtz hate most. (although this is just a story, so it's probably not real)
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** Malifishmertz is somewhat modeled after Maleficent from ''Disney/SleepingBeauty''. Besides the similar names, Malifishmertz also has Maleficent's horns.
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** Malifishmertz is somewhat modeled after Maleficent from ''Disney/SleepingBeauty''.''WesternAnimation/SleepingBeauty''. Besides the similar names, Malifishmertz also has Maleficent's horns.
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* AllForNothing: The quest for the sword Excaliferb is ultimately pointless, as it ends up breaking before it can be used and contributes nothing to resolve the conflict.
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* AllForNothing: The quest for the sword Excaliferb is ultimately pointless, as [[NegatedMomentOfAwesome it ends up breaking before it can be used used]] and contributes nothing to resolve the conflict.
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* AntiClimax: How the final battle with Malifishmertz ends. Monogram is in disbelief that [[NotMakingThisUpDisclaimer it actually happens that way]].
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* ChekhovsGun: The transformation potions Phineas and Ferb were making at the beginning of the story.
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* PlanBResolution: With Excaliferb having fallen apart, the heroes must rely on Phineas and Ferb's shapeshifting potions.
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* AllForNothing: The quest for Excaliferb is ultimately pointless, as it ends up breaking before it can be used.
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* AllForNothing: The quest for the sword Excaliferb is ultimately pointless, as it ends up breaking before it can be used.used and contributes nothing to resolve the conflict.
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* CuttingTheKnot: Instead of answering the Bridge Troll's riddle to gain access to her bridge, Baljeet points out at the river is shallow enough for them to easily wade through.
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* TheCavalry: {{Subverted|Trope}}. Carl tries to have [[HerCodeNameWasMarySue his self-insert appear in the story to save everybody]], but Monogram forces him to tell the tale as it's written.
* CuttingTheKnot: Instead of answering the Bridge Troll's riddle togain access earn the right to cross her bridge, Baljeet points out at Phineas and Ferb's gang just walk through the river is shallow enough for them to easily wade through.river that the bridge runs over.
* CuttingTheKnot: Instead of answering the Bridge Troll's riddle to
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* AllThereInTheScript: Linda's counterpart in this story is named "Linderella", which is only mentioned in the closing credits.
* CuttingTheKnot: Instead of answering the Bridge Troll's riddle to gain access to her bridge, Baljeet points out at the river is shallow enough for them to easily wade through.
* CuttingTheKnot: Instead of answering the Bridge Troll's riddle to gain access to her bridge, Baljeet points out at the river is shallow enough for them to easily wade through.
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* FramingDevice: The story of "Excaliferb" is being told to a sick Major Monogram by Carl. The episode occasionally cuts back to the two for some jokes and commentary.
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* FramingDevice: The story of "Excaliferb" "Excaliferb", the main meat of the episode, is being told by Carl to a sick Major Monogram by Carl.Monogram. The episode occasionally cuts back to the two for some jokes and commentary.
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* {{Ladyella}}[=/=]AllThereInTheScript: Linda's counterpart in this story is named "Linderella", which is only mentioned in the closing credits.
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* {{Ladyella}}[=/=]AllThereInTheScript: {{Ladyella}}: Linda's counterpart in this the story is named "Linderella", which is only mentioned in the closing credits."Linderella".
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* FramingDevice: The story of "Excaliferb" is being told to a sick Major Monogram by Carl.
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* FramingDevice: The story of "Excaliferb" is being told to a sick Major Monogram by Carl. The episode occasionally cuts back to the two for some jokes and commentary.
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* HeroOfAnotherStory: There's a scene with King Arthur receiving Excalibur from the Lady of the Lake, but this story isn't about him.
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* HeroOfAnotherStory: There's a scene with While Phineas and Ferb are talking to the Lady of the Puddle, King Arthur is receiving Excalibur from the Lady of the Lake, but this story isn't about him.Lake.
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** Malifishmertz is named after Maleficent from ''Disney/SleepingBeauty''.
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** Malifishmertz is named somewhat modeled after Maleficent from ''Disney/SleepingBeauty''.''Disney/SleepingBeauty''. Besides the similar names, Malifishmertz also has Maleficent's horns.
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* HerCodeNameWasMarySue: Carl tries to insert himself into the story he's narrating so he can be the hero and save everyone. Major Monogram quickly puts a stop to it.
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* SelfInsert: Carl tries to insert himself into the story he's narrating. Major Monogram quickly puts a stop to it.
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Phineas and Ferb go on a quest to defeat Malifishmertz.
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Major Monogram is home sick, so Carl decides to visit and tell him the story of ''Excaliferb'' from a book.
Thus comes the tale of how Phineas and Ferb go on a quest to defeat Malifishmertz.
Thus comes the tale of how Phineas and Ferb go on a quest to defeat Malifishmertz.
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* DidNotThinkThisThrough: Malifishmertz tries to use a wicker cage to imprison Parable the Dragonpus. Obviously, Parable just burns his way out.
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* DidNotThinkThisThrough: DidntThinkThisThrough: Malifishmertz tries to use a wicker cage to imprison Parable the Dragonpus. Obviously, Parable just burns his way out.
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** The ending -- which involves Major Monogram asking Carl to come back the next and read the story again -- is a parody of the ending of ''Film/ThePrincessBride''
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** The ending -- which involves Major Monogram asking Carl to come back the next and read the story again -- is a parody of the ending of ''Film/ThePrincessBride''''Film/ThePrincessBride''.
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* AllForNothing: The quest for Excaliferb is ultimately pointless, as it ends up breaking before it can be used.
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* HeroOfAnotherStory: There's a scene with King Arthur receiving Excalibur from the Lady of the Lake but this story isn't about him.
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* FramingDevice: The story of "Excaliferb" is being told to a sick Major Monogram by Carl.
* HeroOfAnotherStory: There's a scene with King Arthur receiving Excalibur from the Lady of theLake Lake, but this story isn't about him.
* HeroOfAnotherStory: There's a scene with King Arthur receiving Excalibur from the Lady of the
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* WitchHunt: When Candevere rants to herself about the orders Linderella gives her, one of them is to "accuse the neighbors of witchcraft".
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* SelfInsert: Carl tries to insert himself into the story he's narrating. Major Monogram quickly puts a stop to it.
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** Malifishmertz is named after Maleficent from ''Disney/SleepingBeauty''.
** The ending -- which involves Major Monogram asking Carl to come back the next and read the story again -- is a parody of the ending of ''Film/ThePrincessBride''
* WitchHunt: When Candevere rants to herself about the orders Linderella gives her, one of them is to "accuse the neighbors ofwitchcraft".witchcraft".
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** Malifishmertz is named after Maleficent from ''Disney/SleepingBeauty''.
** The ending -- which involves Major Monogram asking Carl to come back the next and read the story again -- is a parody of the ending of ''Film/ThePrincessBride''
* WitchHunt: When Candevere rants to herself about the orders Linderella gives her, one of them is to "accuse the neighbors of
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* {{Ladyella}}: Linda's counterpart in this story is named "Linderella".
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* RainOfSomethingUnusual: The episode has the two boys' (in the story) Middle-Age adventures by noticing that the rain is fishy by it raining fish.
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Phineas and Ferb go on a quest to defeat Malifishmertz.
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* DidNotThinkThisThrough: Malifishmertz tries to use a wicker cage to imprison Parable the Dragonpus. Obviously, Parable just burns his way out.
* HeroOfAnotherStory: There's a scene with King Arthur receiving Excalibur from the Lady of the Lake but this story isn't about him.
* {{Ladyella}}: Linda's counterpart in this story is named "Linderella".
* WitchHunt: When Candevere rants to herself about the orders Linderella gives her, one of them is to "accuse the neighbors of witchcraft".
!! Tropes:
* DidNotThinkThisThrough: Malifishmertz tries to use a wicker cage to imprison Parable the Dragonpus. Obviously, Parable just burns his way out.
* HeroOfAnotherStory: There's a scene with King Arthur receiving Excalibur from the Lady of the Lake but this story isn't about him.
* {{Ladyella}}: Linda's counterpart in this story is named "Linderella".
* WitchHunt: When Candevere rants to herself about the orders Linderella gives her, one of them is to "accuse the neighbors of witchcraft".