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* BeautifulSingingVoice: Grace tearfully sings "Smile" to an unconscious Benjamin after she apologizes for what she said to him, and is later joined by her two sisters.
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* BeautifulSingingVoice: Grace tearfully sings "Smile" to an unconscious Benjamin after she apologizes for what she said to him, and is later joined backed up by her two sisters.Lisa and Ashley.
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** Benjamin's adultery in "Difficult Conversations" still haunts Grace, something that becomes clear with her clipped reactions to his remembrances of Grace and her two sisters Lisa and Ashley.
* {{Polyamory}}: Discussed
** Benjamin's adultery in "Difficult Conversations" still haunts Grace, something that becomes clear with her clipped reactions to his remembrances of Grace and her two sisters Lisa and Ashley.
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**PlotIncitingInfidelity: Benjamin's adultery in "Difficult Conversations" still haunts Grace, something that becomes clear with her clipped reactions to his remembrances of Grace and her two sisters Lisa and Ashley.
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* ActuallyPrettyFunny: Tommy actually chuckles when she learns about one of the church women gossiping about Trevor "filling her with something other than the Holy Spirit."
-->'''Tommy:''' I gotta hand it to that old biddy-- that's a good one.
-->'''Tommy:''' I gotta hand it to that old biddy-- that's a good one.
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Owen learns a shocking secret about Kendra, while Tommy and Trevor struggle with the decision to make their new relationship known to their church and Grace overcomes a grudge with her father.
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Owen learns a shocking secret about Kendra, while Tommy and Trevor struggle with the decision to make their new relationship known to their church and Grace overcomes a grudge with her father.
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* InternalReveal: At the hospital, Denice tells Grace that Benjamin had indeed confessed his infidelity to her, and they eventually rekindled their relationship. She's only sad at realizing that Grace wrestling with the devastation of her father's adultery was the reason her daughter had been so cold.
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* InternalReveal: At the hospital, Denice tells Grace that Benjamin had indeed confessed his infidelity to her, and they eventually rekindled their relationship. She's only sad briefly saddened at realizing that Grace wrestling with the devastation of her father's adultery was the reason her daughter had been so cold.
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* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Justified with Grace when she takes Denice's 9-1-1 call; when talking to her mother and attempting to walk her through performing CPR on Benjamin, it only works up Denice further into a panic and Grace into desperation. Sara, Grace's supervisor, ends up taking over the call and calmly instructs Denice on what to do, allowing her to focus.
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** Kendra angrily tells Brett that she hopes he freezes to death in his cryogenic chamber before she leaves the house for a run. Guess what happens when he doesn't think to readjust the temperature before she gets back...
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** Kendra angrily tells Brett that she hopes he freezes to death in his cryogenic chamber before as she leaves the house for a run. Guess what happens when he doesn't think to readjust the temperature before she gets back...
** Grace scathingly tells Benjamin that she's glad that he's at home and not out getting in trouble; this takes him aback, but the conversation is cut short when Denice re-enters the living room with Charlie. Two hours after, Benjamin suffers a heart attack and barely survives; naturally, Grace is devastated and scared that her father could die remembering her harsh words.
** Grace scathingly tells Benjamin that she's glad that he's at home and not out getting in trouble; this takes him aback, but the conversation is cut short when Denice re-enters the living room with Charlie. Two hours after, Benjamin suffers a heart attack and barely survives; naturally, Grace is devastated and scared that her father could die remembering her harsh words.
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** Over the course of Tommy's arc, she learns that Trevor and Melody moved from their old congregation in Kansas to Texas to start anew because Trevor's wife had cheated on him; when rumors, and then news of this was confirmed, the church kicked him out. Learning about the church posse's gossip makes Trevor panic and, out of fear of the backlash falling on him, Melody and Tommy again, temporarily break things off with Tommy.
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* UnwittingInstigatorOfDoom: DownplayedDownplayed with Bree, one of Grace' coworkers, who received the initial 9-1-1 call from Denice.
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* PlotIncitingInfidelity: Over the course of Tommy's arc, she learns that Trevor and Melody moved from their old congregation in Kansas to Texas to start anew because Trevor's wife had cheated on him; when rumors, and then news of this was confirmed, the church kicked him out. Learning about the church posse's gossip makes Trevor panic and, out of fear of the backlash falling on him, Melody and Tommy again, temporarily break things off with Tommy.
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* PlotIncitingInfidelity: PlotIncitingInfidelity:
** Over the course of Tommy's arc, she learns that Trevor and Melody moved from their old congregation in Kansas to Texas to start anew because Trevor's wife had cheated on him; when rumors, and then news of this was confirmed, the church kicked him out. Learning about the church posse's gossip makes Trevor panic and, out of fear of the backlash falling on him, Melody and Tommy again, temporarily break things off withTommy.Tommy.
** Benjamin's adultery in "Difficult Conversations" still haunts Grace, something that becomes clear with her clipped reactions to his remembrances of Grace and her two sisters Lisa and Ashley.
** Over the course of Tommy's arc, she learns that Trevor and Melody moved from their old congregation in Kansas to Texas to start anew because Trevor's wife had cheated on him; when rumors, and then news of this was confirmed, the church kicked him out. Learning about the church posse's gossip makes Trevor panic and, out of fear of the backlash falling on him, Melody and Tommy again, temporarily break things off with
** Benjamin's adultery in "Difficult Conversations" still haunts Grace, something that becomes clear with her clipped reactions to his remembrances of Grace and her two sisters Lisa and Ashley.
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* TongueTrauma:TongueTrauma: At the new Tele-Lively office, a woman named Tabitha works through her panic to help one of her coworkers, Addie, when the latter's tongue starts to dangerously swell up due to stress-induced angioedema. After getting Grace on the line, she and another coworker Jason follow her instructions to improvise a breathing tube with a water bottle straw, so that Addie can breathe through her mouth until the 126 paramedics arrive to treat her.
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* UglyGuyHotWife: Downplayed. Brett isn't precisely ugly, but next to Kendra and Owen he looks downright plain and mousy.
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* UglyGuyHotWife: Downplayed. Brett isn't precisely ugly, an ugly man, but next to Kendra and Owen he looks downright plain and mousy.
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* ActuallyPrettyFunny:ActuallyPrettyFunny: Tommy actually chuckles when she learns about one of the church women gossiping about Trevor "filling her with something other than the Holy Spirit."
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-->'''Tommy:''' I gotta hand it to that old biddy-- that's a good one.
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* InternalReveal:InternalReveal: At the hospital, Denice tells Grace that Benjamin had indeed confessed his infidelity to her, and they eventually rekindled their relationship. She's only sad at realizing that Grace wrestling with the devastation of her father's adultery was the reason her daughter had been so cold.
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* PlotIncitingInfidelity: Over the course of Tommy's arc, she learns that Trevor and Melody moved from their old congregation in Kansas to Texas to start anew because Trevor's wife had cheated on him; when rumors, and then news of this was confirmed, the church kicked him out. Learning about the church posse's gossip makes Trevor panic and, out of fear of the backlash falling on him, Melody and Tommy again, temporarily break things off with Tommy.
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* BeautifulSingingVoice: Grace tearfully sings "Smile" to an unconscious Benjamin after she apologizes for what she said to him, and is later joined by her two sisters.
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-->'''TK:''' Why does this keep happening?
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* OhNoNotAgain: TK, who's already witnessed multiple spousal/ infidelity reveals, his share of spousal reveals with Owen and Carlos, does not take Brett's arrival or long-winded assertion of dominance all that well.
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* UglyGuyHotWife: Downplayed. Brett isn't precisely hard to look at, but next to Kendra and Owen he's downright plain and mousy.
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Owen learns a shocking secret about Kendra, while Tommy and Trevor struggle with the decision to make their new relationship known to their church and Grace overcomes a grudge with her father.
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