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Uncomfortable with the way his nose has been ever since he was a child, Private Daniel Baker has been seeking cosmetic surgery to have it altered, but he faces the issue of cosmetic surgery not being allowed to be performed at a United States military hospital. In fact none of the surgeons stationed in Tokyo can either. As one would expect, Hawkeye and Trapper go above and beyond to help a friend in need, calling in an expert, Major Stanley "Stosh" Robbins, to do the job. And of course, Majors Burns and Houlihan seek to stand in the way.
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Uncomfortable with the way his nose has been ever since he was a child, Private Daniel Baker has been seeking cosmetic surgery to have it altered, but he faces the issue of cosmetic surgery not being allowed to be performed at a United States military hospital. In fact none of the surgeons stationed in Tokyo can do it either. As one would expect, Hawkeye and Trapper go above and beyond to help a friend in need, calling in an expert, Major Stanley "Stosh" Robbins, to do the job. And of course, Majors Burns and Houlihan seek to stand in the way.
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Awkward wording is still awkward, but smoother
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Uncomfortable with the way his nose has been ever since he was a child, Private Daniel Baker has been seeking cosmetic surgery to have it altered, but he faces the issues of cosmetic surgery not being allowed to be performed at a United States military hospital and the fact that none of the surgeons stationed in Tokyo either. As one would expect, Hawkeye and Trapper go above and beyond to help a friend in need, calling in an expert, Major Stanley "Stosh" Robbins, to do the job. And of course, Majors Burns and Houlihan seek to stand in the way.
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Uncomfortable with the way his nose has been ever since he was a child, Private Daniel Baker has been seeking cosmetic surgery to have it altered, but he faces the issues issue of cosmetic surgery not being allowed to be performed at a United States military hospital and the hospital. In fact that none of the surgeons stationed in Tokyo can either. As one would expect, Hawkeye and Trapper go above and beyond to help a friend in need, calling in an expert, Major Stanley "Stosh" Robbins, to do the job. And of course, Majors Burns and Houlihan seek to stand in the way.
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Incredibly Lame Pun is a redirect and not a trope by itself. Moments where someone acknowledges how bad the pun is counts as Lame Pun Reaction.
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* IncrediblyLamePun: Hawkeye and Trapper make a pair when Baker is going through Robbins' catalogue of nose shapes and styles.
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* IncrediblyLamePun: LamePunReaction: Hawkeye and Trapper make a pair when Baker is going through Robbins' catalogue of nose shapes and styles.
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* SurgeonsCanDoAutopsiesIfTheyWant: Subverted: Hawkeye calls in his friend Stanley Robbins to do the nosejob because, as he puts it, "It's not a tough job, but it's a specialty."
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* DescriptionCut: Henry instructcs Private Baker to go to Father Mulcahy to talk about his problems, confiding that the chaplain is a good and wise man. The scene moves to Father Mulcahy talking to Baker.
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* DescriptionCut: Henry instructcs instructs Private Baker to go to Father Mulcahy to talk about his problems, confiding that the chaplain is a good and wise man. The scene moves to Father Mulcahy talking to Baker.
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* ComplexityAddiction: Several steps could have been cut from the plan (along with having to explain Baker's new nose when he gets back from R&R) if they had simply had ''him'' get hit with the baseball instead of Radar.
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* ComplexityAddiction: Several steps could have been cut from the plan (along with having to explain Baker's new nose when he gets back from R&R) if they had simply had ''him'' pretend to get hit with the baseball instead of Radar.
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--> '''PA Announcer''': Attention. Major Robbins, report for emergency surgery. Major Burns, report to the CO. Major Houlihan, report to Supply. ''[{{beat}}]'' Those are the major announcements for the day.
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--> '''PA Announcer''': Attention. Major Robbins, report for emergency surgery. Major Burns, report to the CO. Major Houlihan, report to Supply. ''[{{beat}}]'' ''({{beat}})'' Those are the major announcements for the day.
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* IncrediblyLamePun: Hawkeye and Trapper make a pair when Baker is going through Robbin's catalogue of nose shapes and styles.
--> '''Hawkeye''': Gee, I never realised how hard it was to pick a nose.
--> '''Robbins''': [''scowling''] Do me a favour, huh? [''points to a page''] Big winner. Very popular number. This job paid for two Cadillacs.
--> '''Hawkeye''': Gee, I never realised how hard it was to pick a nose.
--> '''Robbins''': [''scowling''] Do me a favour, huh? [''points to a page''] Big winner. Very popular number. This job paid for two Cadillacs.
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* IncrediblyLamePun: Hawkeye and Trapper make a pair when Baker is going through Robbin's Robbins' catalogue of nose shapes and styles.
--> '''Hawkeye''': Gee, I neverrealised realized how hard it was is to pick a nose.
--> '''Robbins''':[''scowling''] ''(scowling)'' Do me a favour, favor, huh? [''points ''(points to a page''] one picture)'' Big winner. Very popular number. This job paid for two Cadillacs.
--> '''Hawkeye''': Gee, I never
--> '''Robbins''':
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* PsychopathicManChild: Henry Blake.
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* PsychopathicManChild: PlayedForLaughs with Henry Blake.
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* SelectiveObliviousness: A habit of Father Mulcahy's; he translates hearing things like sexual subjects into the Latin language.
--> '''Father Mulcahy''': Makes them sound noble.
--> '''Father Mulcahy''': Makes them sound noble.
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* SelectiveObliviousness: A habit of Father Mulcahy's; he translates hearing things like sexual subjects into the Latin language.
--> '''Father Mulcahy''': Makeslanguage, claiming that it "makes them sound noble.noble".
--> '''Father Mulcahy''': Makes
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* IAmSpartacus: To keep Frank and Margaret from finding out who Robbins operated on (since cosmetic surgery on military personnel is against regulations), Trapper and Hawkeye have every one in the compound wearing bandages over their noses.
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* IAmSpartacus: To keep Frank and Margaret from finding out who Robbins operated on (since cosmetic surgery on military personnel is against regulations), Trapper and Hawkeye have every one everyone in the compound wearing bandages over their noses.noses. Including a dog.
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** Given only the initials "S. S.", Henry tries to guess what famous Hollywood people Robbins has performed cosmetic surgery on, tossing out such names as Creator/SylviaSidney, Slim Summerville, and Creator/SidCaesar.
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** Given only the initials "S. S.", Henry tries to guess what famous Hollywood people Robbins has performed cosmetic surgery on, tossing out such names as Creator/SylviaSidney, Slim Summerville, and Creator/SidCaesar.
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** "Hey, Virginia, there ''is'' a Barracuda."[[note]]A reference to the phrase "Yes, Virginia, there is a SantaClaus."[[/note]]
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** "Hey, Virginia, there ''is'' a Barracuda."[[note]]A reference to the phrase "Yes, Virginia, there is a SantaClaus."[[/note]]" [[/note]]
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** Hawkeye refers to [[Film/Frankenstein1931 Frankenstein]], claiming that Stanley built him in his laboratory.
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** Hawkeye refers to [[Film/Frankenstein1931 Frankenstein]], ''[[Film/Frankenstein1931 Frankenstein]]'', claiming that Stanley built him in his laboratory.
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** Henry funnily tries to guess what famous Hollywood people Stanley Robbins has performed cosmetic surgery on, tossing out such names as Creator/SylviaSidney, Slim Summerville, and Creator/SidCaesar.
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** Given only the initials "S. S.", Henry funnily tries to guess what famous Hollywood people Stanley Robbins has performed cosmetic surgery on, tossing out such names as Creator/SylviaSidney, Slim Summerville, and Creator/SidCaesar.