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* AdaptationalEarlyAppearance: Crimson is introduced far earlier, before Moxxie and Millie meet.
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** During one of their past heists, Blitz, Lars, and Harvey tried to rob a house that a kid set traps up in, a nod to the ''Franchise/HomeAlone'' series.
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** During one of their past heists, Blitz, Lars, and Harvey tried to rob a house that a kid set traps up in, a nod to the ''Franchise/HomeAlone'' ''Film/HomeAlone'' series.
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** Crystal sings [[WesternAnimation/{{Disenchantment}} Mora's Song]].
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* ADayInTheLimelight: Moxxie shares the spotlight with Loona in the Triton Resort plot.
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* {{Expy}}: Sonny [=McCaliber=] is an imp version of Kevin [=McCallister=].
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* {{Expy}}: Sonny [=McCaliber=] is an imp version of [[Film/HomeAlone Kevin [=McCallister=].[=McCallister=]]]. And his present day self developed an alterego based on [[Franchise/{{Saw}} Jigsaw]].
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* ShoutOut: During one of their past heists, Blitz, Lars, and Harvey tried to rob a house that a kid set traps up in, a nod to the ''Franchise/HomeAlone'' series.
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* ShoutOut: ShoutOut:
** During one of their past heists, Blitz, Lars, and Harvey tried to rob a house that a kid set traps up in, a nod to the ''Franchise/HomeAlone''series. series.
** Kaa's Sinner form is based on [[Franchise/{{Pokemon}} Onyx]].
** During one of their past heists, Blitz, Lars, and Harvey tried to rob a house that a kid set traps up in, a nod to the ''Franchise/HomeAlone''
** Kaa's Sinner form is based on [[Franchise/{{Pokemon}} Onyx]].
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* AmicableExes: Blitz and Verosika, while still ending thier relationship on a bad note, aren't as aggressive towards each other as they were in canon. On top of that, Blitz won't let their history get in the way of Loona spending time with Verosika again if she wants to.
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* AmicableExes: Blitz and Verosika, while still ending thier their relationship on a bad note, aren't as aggressive towards each other as they were in canon. On top of that, Blitz won't let their history get in the way of Loona spending time with Verosika again if she wants to.
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* ContinuityNod: Sonya is now in Hell, having died in "Brooken Home".
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** Sila brings up Blitz going on a killing spree in the Boiling Isles.
** Sonya is now in Hell, having died in "Brooken Home".
** Sila brings up Blitz going on a killing spree in the Boiling Isles.
** Sonya is now in Hell, having died in "Brooken Home".
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* TheGhost: Lilith is namedropped while Moxxie indirectly mentions Hunter, Boscha, Cross, and Lindsay while explaining why he was escorting them to Verosika.
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* TheGhost: Lilith is namedropped mentioned while Moxxie indirectly mentions Hunter, Boscha, Cross, and Lindsay while explaining why he was escorting them to Verosika.
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** Metropelvis has a mayor, and Sila D. Cider is their secretary.
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** Metropelvis has a mayor, and Sila D. Cider is their secretary.secretary and in the Oracle Coven.
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* UndyingLoyalty: Margaret is said to give hers to Lord Gaap, which is how he knows she isn't the saboteur and traitor.
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* AdaptationRelationshipOverhaul: Loona didn't meet Verosika until long after she and Blitzo broke up. Here, she met Verosika as a child while she and Blitz were still together, and to this day Loona [[ParentalSubstitute sees Verosika as the closest thing she had to a mother]].
* AmicableExes: Blitz and Verosika, while still ending thier relationship on a bad note, aren't as aggressive towards each other as they were in canon. On top of that, Blitz won't let their history get in the way of Loona spending time with Verosika again if she wants to.
* AmicableExes: Blitz and Verosika, while still ending thier relationship on a bad note, aren't as aggressive towards each other as they were in canon. On top of that, Blitz won't let their history get in the way of Loona spending time with Verosika again if she wants to.
* TheCameo: Luz, Amity, Eda, Willow, and Gus are seen in pictures Shere Khan has in his file of Blitzo.
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* TheGhostTheGhost: Lilith is namedropped while Moxxie indirectly mentions Hunter, Boscha, Cross, and Lindsay while explaining why he was escorting them to Verosika.
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* RelationshipRevealRelationshipReveal: Kanya and Crystal are dating and are keeping their relationship a secret because Kanya's afraid of how her father would respond to her liking women.
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** Sonya is working as a doctor for the hellhound shelter Amaroq is staying in.
* SequelHook: Gaap has surveillance footage of Stolas talking with the Clawthornes and plans on using it against him.
* SequelHook: Gaap has surveillance footage of Stolas talking with the Clawthornes and plans on using it against him.
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* CallBack: Verosika recognizes Moxxie as the imp who was guarding that cougar she flirted with (Lilith) back in "Friends in Lower Places". Moxxie notes he was escorting Lilith and her kids through Hell when they ran into Verosika.
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* {{Expy}}EveryoneHasStandards: Even though Verosika has bad blood with Blitz due to their breakup, she does feel bad for him upon learning he's working for Khan Industries now.
* {{Expy}}: Sonny [=McCaliber=] is an imp version of Kevin [=McCallister=].
* TheGhost
* InternalReveal: Loona and Moxxie explain to Verosika and Clara what had happened with Mel and the Clawthornes & their friends traveling through Hell to reach the Underworld.
* RelationshipReveal
* {{Expy}}: Sonny [=McCaliber=] is an imp version of Kevin [=McCallister=].
* TheGhost
* InternalReveal: Loona and Moxxie explain to Verosika and Clara what had happened with Mel and the Clawthornes & their friends traveling through Hell to reach the Underworld.
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* ShoutOut: During one of their past heists, Blitz, Lars, and Harvey tried to rob a house that a kid set traps up in, a nod to the ''Franchise/HomeAlone'' series.
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-->[-Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn: [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/47956195/chapters/127551241 HERE]]-]
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** Sila D. Cider is a secretary for the mayor of Metropelvis.
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** Penzi is a secretary for the mayor of Metropelvis.
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** Penzi Sila D. Cider is a secretary for the mayor of Metropelvis.
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!Chapter 3: Commercial Shoot
The Triton Hotel is about to have a commercial shoot, while Blitz leads an escort mission.
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* CallForward: Blitz has a goal of starting his own business, a nod to I.M.P.
* ContinuityNod: Sonya is now in Hell, having died in "Brooken Home".
* {{Expy}}
* TheReveal:
** Blitz met Lars and Harvey when they coincidentally tried to rob the same place.
** Penzi is a secretary for the mayor of Metropelvis.
** Khan knows that Blitz is involved with Gus and Willow's presence in Hell.
* TheUnReveal: Who sabotaged the Triton Hotel's security footage?
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The Triton Hotel is about to have a commercial shoot, while Blitz leads an escort mission.
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* CallForward: Blitz has a goal of starting his own business, a nod to I.M.P.
* ContinuityNod: Sonya is now in Hell, having died in "Brooken Home".
* {{Expy}}
* TheReveal:
** Blitz met Lars and Harvey when they coincidentally tried to rob the same place.
** Penzi is a secretary for the mayor of Metropelvis.
** Khan knows that Blitz is involved with Gus and Willow's presence in Hell.
* TheUnReveal: Who sabotaged the Triton Hotel's security footage?
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