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* IncrediblyLamePun: The ''Bulletin'' front page headline for Arturo Rey's death is "Theatre/DeathOfASalesman".
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* ShoutOut: The ''Bulletin'' front page headline for Arturo Rey's death is "Theatre/DeathOfASalesman".
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: On walking in on her daughter playing the keyboard, Mariah says, "Those hands are pure Stokes". [[CreepyUncle Not the compliment Tilda probably thinks it is.]]
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** In the end, the fact that his rage boils over and becomes terrifyingly physical means that she was quite a bit more right than he was.
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** In the end, the fact that his rage boils over and becomes terrifyingly physical means that she was quite a bit more right than he was.was... but Luke needs ''therapy'', not to confront his abuser.
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* DomesticAbuse: The argument between Luke and Claire reaches its peak when he loses his temper and pounds a hole in the wall. This is treated [[SomeAnvilsNeedToBeDropped exactly as seriously as it should be]]. Claire is visibly terrified and declares she needs to leave. Luke, who probably witnessed his father doling out violence as a child is visibly deeply ashamed.
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* DomesticAbuse: The argument between Luke and Claire reaches its peak when he loses his temper and pounds a hole in the wall. This is treated [[SomeAnvilsNeedToBeDropped exactly as seriously as it should be]].be. Claire is visibly terrified and declares she needs to leave. Luke, who probably witnessed his father doling out violence as a child is visibly deeply ashamed.
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* AThreesomeIsHot: Bushmaster is introduced waking up after a one-night stand with two women.
-->'''Sheldon:''' You want coffee? Blue Mountain?
-->'''Bushmaster:''' You not see me just get two cups? ''[They both laugh]'' They keep me energized, y'know?
-->'''Sheldon:''' You want coffee? Blue Mountain?
-->'''Bushmaster:''' You not see me just get two cups? ''[They both laugh]'' They keep me energized, y'know?
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* MacheteMayhem: The other female Yardies that attack Luke fights with a pair of machetes.
* MatchCut: As the camera focuses on Bushmaster studying Luke's fight with his men, his face morphs into Mariah's and transitions to Mariah at Harlem's Paradise.
* MatchCut: As the camera focuses on Bushmaster studying Luke's fight with his men, his face morphs into Mariah's and transitions to Mariah at Harlem's Paradise.
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* LetsYouAndHimFight: Bushmaster has each of his henchmen fight Luke one-on-one with different kinds of weapons, while Sheldon films the whole thing. This is all so Bushmaster can study Luke's fighting style before he goes out to attack Luke in public.
* MacheteMayhem: The other femaleYardies Yardie that attack attacks Luke fights with a pair of machetes.
* MatchCut: As the camera focuses on Bushmaster studying Luke's fight with his men, his face morphs into Mariah's and transitions to Mariahat Harlem's Paradise.talking to Piranha in her office.
* MacheteMayhem: The other female
* MatchCut: As the camera focuses on Bushmaster studying Luke's fight with his men, his face morphs into Mariah's and transitions to Mariah
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* CombatPragmatist: Bushmaster at first lets Luke fight his men without getting himself involved while his friend records it, which allows Bushmaster to study Luke's fighting style and prepare countermoves to it. He later opens his fight with Luke by suckerpunching him.
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--> '''Luke:''' Look, you know. You know I would never hurt you. You know that, right?\\
'''Claire:'''\\
'''Claire:''' You need to go.
'''Claire:'''\\
'''Claire:''' You need to go.
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* DomesticAbuse: The argument between Luke and Claire reaches its peak when he loses his temper and pounds a hole in the wall. This is treated [[SomeAnvilsNeedToBeDropped exactly as seriously as it should be]]. Claire is visibly terrified and declares she needs to leave. Luke, who probably witnessed his father doling out violence as a child is visibly deeply ashamed.
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** OhCrap: Luke can tell he's crossed a line. Claire is visibly terrified.
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** OhCrap: Luke can tell he's crossed a line. Claire is visibly terrified. Given his father's behavior in other scenes, it's not unreasonable to conclude that Luke has witnessed domestic violence.
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* BothSidesHaveAPoint: Luke and Claire's argument.
** She's absolutely correct that he needs to deal with his past and that his father isn't quite the abusive shitbag he used to be (we've seen the old man still has a lot to work through, though).
** Luke is also correct that his emotions are valid and black men have a metric fuckton to deal with, where monster and minstrel are just about the only two options available in the public eye.
** In the end, the fact that his rage boils over and becomes terrifyingly physical means that she was quite a bit more right than he was.
** She's absolutely correct that he needs to deal with his past and that his father isn't quite the abusive shitbag he used to be (we've seen the old man still has a lot to work through, though).
** Luke is also correct that his emotions are valid and black men have a metric fuckton to deal with, where monster and minstrel are just about the only two options available in the public eye.
** In the end, the fact that his rage boils over and becomes terrifyingly physical means that she was quite a bit more right than he was.
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* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: Luke's beating of Cockroach to a pulp is enough of a final straw for Claire, that she decides she needs a break from Luke after a heated argument with him.
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* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: Luke's Luke beating of Cockroach to a pulp is enough of a final straw for Claire, pushes Claire to talk to his father, because she's incredibly worried. During the argument that follows, Luke's anger and violence scares her and she decides she needs to take a break from break.
** OhCrap: Lukeafter can tell he's crossed a heated argument with him.line. Claire is visibly terrified.
** OhCrap: Luke
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'''Misty:''' Sorry. I don't look down when I flush.
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'''Misty:''' Sorry. I don't look down when I flush.\\
