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-->'''Casey:''' [[ArmourPiercingQuestion If you felt so bad, then why are you wearing a dead girl's ring?]]
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-->'''Casey:''' [[ArmourPiercingQuestion [[ArmorPiercingQuestion If you felt so bad, bad about what happened, then why are you wearing a dead girl's ring?]]
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* AssholeVictim: It turns out to have nothing to do with her death, but Emily Sullivan was a bully who tormented another classmate. Agnes' father sums it up:
--> '''Mr. Linsky''': We've been trying to get a restraining order against that girl for over '''a year'''... and ''[[AdultsAreUseless nobody cared]]''. Now, someone kills her, and you're acting like it's some kind of ''tragedy?'' [[AlphaBitch She made my daughter's life miserable]]. And God help me, [[LampshadeHanging I'm not sorry she's dead!]]
--> '''Mr. Linsky''': We've been trying to get a restraining order against that girl for over '''a year'''... and ''[[AdultsAreUseless nobody cared]]''. Now, someone kills her, and you're acting like it's some kind of ''tragedy?'' [[AlphaBitch She made my daughter's life miserable]]. And God help me, [[LampshadeHanging I'm not sorry she's dead!]]
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* AssholeVictim: It Mr. Linsky turns out to have nothing to do with her death, but Emily Sullivan was a bully who tormented another classmate. Agnes' father sums it up:
and spread lies about his daughter, Agnes, in school for no reason other than [[ForTheEvulz her own enjoyment]]. He's ''glad'' that Emily is dead.
--> '''Mr. Linsky''': We've been trying to get a restraining order against that girl for over '''a year'''... and ''[[AdultsAreUseless nobody cared]]''. Now, someone kills her, and you're acting like it's some kind of ''tragedy?'' [[AlphaBitch She made my daughter's life miserable]]. And God help me,[[LampshadeHanging I'm '''I'm not sorry she's dead!]]dead!'''
--> '''Mr. Linsky''': We've been trying to get a restraining order against that girl for over '''a year'''... and ''[[AdultsAreUseless nobody cared]]''. Now, someone kills her, and you're acting like it's some kind of ''tragedy?'' [[AlphaBitch She made my daughter's life miserable]]. And God help me,
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* AssholeVictim: It turns out to have nothing to do with her death, but Emily Sullivan was a bully who tormented another classmate.
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* AssholeVictim: It turns out to have nothing to do with her death, but Emily Sullivan was a bully who tormented another classmate. Agnes' father sums it up:
--> '''Mr. Linsky''': We've been trying to get a restraining order against that girl for over '''a year'''... and ''[[AdultsAreUseless nobody cared]]''. Now, someone kills her, and you're acting like it's some kind of ''tragedy?'' [[AlphaBitch She made my daughter's life miserable]]. And God help me, [[LampshadeHanging I'm not sorry she's dead!]]
--> '''Mr. Linsky''': We've been trying to get a restraining order against that girl for over '''a year'''... and ''[[AdultsAreUseless nobody cared]]''. Now, someone kills her, and you're acting like it's some kind of ''tragedy?'' [[AlphaBitch She made my daughter's life miserable]]. And God help me, [[LampshadeHanging I'm not sorry she's dead!]]
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** The defendants' lawyers allow them to be questioned so they can incriminate themselves.
** Andrea wears her victim's ring to court while on the witness stand.
** The defendants' lawyers allow them to be questioned so they can incriminate themselves.
** Andrea wears her victim's ring to court while on the witness stand.
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* PapaWolf: Agnes' father is this, trying desperately for over a year to get a restraining order against Emily Sullivan. And like his daughter, he's happy Emily is dead.
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* PapaWolf: Agnes' Agnes's father is this, trying desperately for over a year to get a restraining order against Emily Sullivan. And And, like his daughter, he's happy Emily is dead.
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-->'''Casey:''' [[ArmourPiercingQuestion If you felt so bad then why are you wearing a dead girl's ring?]]
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-->'''Casey:''' [[ArmourPiercingQuestion If you felt so bad bad, then why are you wearing a dead girl's ring?]]
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* WithFriendsLikeThese: Emily - herself a horrible former friend of Agnes' - was murdered by three psychopathic teenage girls and her old best friends for "stealing" Brittany's boyfriend.
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* WithFriendsLikeThese: Emily - herself a horrible former friend of Agnes' Agnes's - was murdered by three psychopathic teenage girls and her old best friends for "stealing" Brittany's boyfriend.
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** Downplayed with another girl, Terri. She and Emily didn't ''not'' become enemies, but they weren't especially close either since Emily started hanging with the popular crowd, when they had once been practically inseparable.
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** Downplayed with another girl, Terri. She and Emily didn't ''not'' become enemies, ''enemies'', but they weren't especially close either since Emily started hanging with the popular crowd, when they had once been practically inseparable.
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* AdultsAreUseless: You don't say. For the most part, all of the adults connected to Tanner Day Academy do nothing to curtail or stop the bullying Agnes receive: the principal indirectly blames her for her own bullying due to not being popular, the restraining order taken against Emily did nothing and the parents of the mean girls refused to see anything wrong with their daughters' behavior.
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* AdultsAreUseless: You don't say. For the most part, all of the adults connected to Tanner Day Academy do nothing to curtail or stop the bullying Agnes receive: the principal indirectly blames her for her own bullying due to not being popular, the restraining order taken against Emily did nothing nothing, and the parents of the mean girls refused to see anything wrong with their daughters' behavior.
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* BigBrotherInstinct: Troy Linsky, who hates the girls who bully his sister and at one point assaults one of them. (May or may not be an inversion, as it's never stated whether he or Agnes is older.)
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* BigBrotherInstinct: Troy Linsky, who hates the girls who bully his sister and at one point assaults one of them. (May or may not be an inversion, as inversion; it's never stated whether he or Agnes which of the siblings is older.)
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* ChekhovsGunman: Emily's ex-boyfriend, Lukas is questioned relatively early in the episode, but his alibi checks out. His name eventually comes up again, and it turns out that not only was he was actually ''Brittany's'' boyfriend, he was part of Brittany's motivation to murder Emily.
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* ChekhovsGunman: Emily's ex-boyfriend, Lukas Lukas, is questioned relatively early in the episode, but his alibi checks out. His name eventually comes up again, and it turns out that not only was he was actually ''Brittany's'' boyfriend, he was part of Brittany's motivation to murder Emily.
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* EvenEvilHasLovedOnes: All of the mean girls have loving (albeit clueless) parents. Emily's own father is devastated to learn of her death.
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* EvenEvilHasLovedOnes: All of the mean girls have loving (albeit clueless) parents. parents; Emily's own father is devastated to learn of her death.
* IWantMyMommy: At the murder trial, Brittany on the stand [[LackOfEmpathy honestly replies that she found Emily begging for her life and crying out for her mother as she was being killed to be funny.]]
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* IWantMyMommy: At the murder trial, Brittany on the stand [[LackOfEmpathy honestly replies that she found Emily begging for her life and crying out for her mother as she was being killed to be funny.]]
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* StarvingArtist: Lukas is an out of work actor reduced to dressing as a bunch of grapes for a children's TV show.
* SuddenDownerEnding: Emily Sullivan is dead (and no longer a threat to Agnes), and her killers are in prison, so it's ultimately a good ending for Agnes, right? No. She has shot another bully to death, knowing that the bullying won't stop.
* SuddenDownerEnding: Emily Sullivan is dead (and no longer a threat to Agnes), and her killers are in prison, so it's ultimately a good ending for Agnes, right? No. She has shot another bully to death, knowing that the bullying won't stop.
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* StarvingArtist: Lukas is an out of work out-of-work actor reduced to dressing as a bunch of grapes for a children's TV show.
* SuddenDownerEnding: Emily Sullivan is dead (and no longer a threat to Agnes), and her killers are in prison, so it's ultimately a good ending for Agnes, right? No.She has shot After yet another incident in which she was bullied by another student, she snapped and shot the bully to death, knowing that the bullying won't stop.death.
* SuddenDownerEnding: Emily Sullivan is dead (and no longer a threat to Agnes), and her killers are in prison, so it's ultimately a good ending for Agnes, right? No.
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** Downplayed with another girl, Terri. She and Emily didn't ''not'' get along, but they weren't especially close either since Emily started hanging with the popular crowd, when they had once been practically inseparable.
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** Downplayed with another girl, Terri. She and Emily didn't ''not'' get along, become enemies, but they weren't especially close either since Emily started hanging with the popular crowd, when they had once been practically inseparable.
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16-year-old Emily Sullivan's body is found in the trunk of her car, and now Benson and Stabler are investigating. It initially seems that the victim could have been killed by Agnes Linsky (Creator/LindsayHollister), a girl she had bullied. Agnes failed to get a restraining order against Emily and is near-suicidal from the bullying, giving her a motive. But DNA evidence suggests Emily was killed by her friends Brittany O'Malley (Creator/KelliGarner), Andrea Kent (Creator/ArielleKebbel), and Page Summerby (Creator/KimberlyMcConnell); Brittany was angry at what she saw as Emily "stealing" her boyfriend. The girls tied up Emily in the car, and then Brittany tortured her to death.
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16-year-old Emily Sullivan's body is found in the trunk of her car, and now Benson and Stabler are investigating. It initially seems that the victim could have been killed by Agnes Linsky (Creator/LindsayHollister), a girl she had bullied. Agnes failed to get a restraining order against Emily and is near-suicidal from the bullying, giving her a motive. But DNA evidence suggests Emily was killed by her friends Brittany O'Malley (Creator/KelliGarner), Andrea Kent (Creator/ArielleKebbel), and Page Paige Summerby (Creator/KimberlyMcConnell); Brittany was angry at what she saw as Emily "stealing" her boyfriend. The girls tied up Emily in the car, and then Brittany tortured her to death.
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* AdultsAreUseless: You don't say. For the most part, all of the adults connected to Tanner Day do nothing to curtail or stop the bullying Agnes receive: the principal indirectly blames her for her own bullying due to not being popular, the restraining order taken against Emily did nothing and the parents of the mean girls refused to see anything wrong with their daughters' behavior.
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* AdultsAreUseless: You don't say. For the most part, all of the adults connected to Tanner Day Academy do nothing to curtail or stop the bullying Agnes receive: the principal indirectly blames her for her own bullying due to not being popular, the restraining order taken against Emily did nothing and the parents of the mean girls refused to see anything wrong with their daughters' behavior.
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* ChekhovsGunman: Emily's ex-boyfriend Lucas is questioned relatively early in the episode, but his alibi checks out. His name eventually comes up again, and it turns out that not only was he was actually ''Brittany's'' boyfriend, he was part of Brittany's motivation to murder Emily.
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* ChekhovsGunman: Emily's ex-boyfriend Lucas ex-boyfriend, Lukas is questioned relatively early in the episode, but his alibi checks out. His name eventually comes up again, and it turns out that not only was he was actually ''Brittany's'' boyfriend, he was part of Brittany's motivation to murder Emily.
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* DisproportionateRetribution: Brittany and her friends abducted, tortured, and ultimately murdered Emily for "cheating" with Brittany's boyfriend.
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* ChekhovsGunman: Emily's ex-boyfriend Lucas is questioned relatively early in the episode, but his alibi checks out. His name eventually comes up again, and it turns out that not only was he was actually ''Brittany's'' boyfriend, he was part of Brittany's motivation to murder Emily.
* DisproportionateRetribution: Brittany and her friends abducted, tortured, and ultimately murdered Emily for "cheating" with Brittany'sboyfriend.boyfriend...when the reason Emily did it was because Brittany asked her boyfriend to hit on Emily as a "friendship test".
* DisproportionateRetribution: Brittany and her friends abducted, tortured, and ultimately murdered Emily for "cheating" with Brittany's
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-->'''Elliot:''' That's very impressive counselor.
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-->'''Elliot:''' That's very impressive impressive, counselor.
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* AxeCrazy: Brittany is the most notable one, but Andrea and Paige too.
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* AxeCrazy: AxCrazy: Brittany is the most notable one, but Andrea and Paige too.
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-->'''Casey:''' [ArmourPiercingQuestion If you felt so bad then why are you wearing a dead girl's ring?]
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-->'''Casey:''' [ArmourPiercingQuestion [[ArmourPiercingQuestion If you felt so bad then why are you wearing a dead girl's ring?]ring?]]
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-->'''Casey:''' If you felt so bad then why are you wearing a dead girl's ring?
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-->'''Casey:''' [ArmourPiercingQuestion If you felt so bad then why are you wearing a dead girl's ring?ring?]
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* IWantMyMommy: At the murder trial, Brittany on the stand [[LackOfEmpathy honeatly replies that she found Emily begging for her life and crying out for her mother as she was being killed to be funny.]]
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* IWantMyMommy: At the murder trial, Brittany on the stand [[LackOfEmpathy honeatly honestly replies that she found Emily begging for her life and crying out for her mother as she was being killed to be funny.]]
