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[[caption-width-right:350:''[[Manga/OshiNoKo Even that elusive side, part of their controlled area.\\
Complete and perfect. All they say is a bunch of lies!]]'']]
Complete and perfect. All they say is a bunch of lies!]]'']]
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[[caption-width-right:350:''[[Manga/OshiNoKo Even that elusive side, part of their controlled area.Haven't eaten anything.\\
Complete and perfect. All they say is It's a bunch of lies!]]'']]
secret, unknown.\\
Any questions you're facing. Always acting so vaguely.]]'']]
Any questions you're facing. Always acting so vaguely.]]'']]
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[[caption-width-right:350:[[WesternAnimation/{{Megamind}} "Oh, I... I thought you were dead."\\
"My death was... greatly exaggerated."]]]]
"My death was... greatly exaggerated."]]]]
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"My death was... greatly exaggerated."]]]]
Complete and perfect. All they say is a bunch of lies!]]'']]
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Heh heh... who will survive until the end to become the Jyamar God, I wonder...?
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Heh heh... who will survive until the end to become the Jyamar God, Jyamashin, I wonder...?
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-->The Jyamato with the highest score at the end of the game shall be crowned Jyamar God, and granted their world of misery.
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-->The Jyamato with the highest score at the end of the game shall be crowned Jyamar God, Jyamashin, and granted their world of misery.
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Secret Mission was for flipping him like a bull
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* CrackDefeat: Buffa clears a secret mission by lightly slugging Geats.
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* JerkassHasAPoint: Niram points out that if Kouseihad he treated Neon with the genuine love that she wished for she wouldn't have to fight in the DGP to fulfill her wish.
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* JerkassHasAPoint: Niram points out that if Kouseihad he Kousei had treated Neon with the genuine love that she wished for she wouldn't have to fight in the DGP to fulfill her wish.
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Original example doesn't make sense as it doesn't reflect what the character actually said in the episode.
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* JerkassHasAPoint: Niram points out that Kousei wouldn't have to suppress knowledge of the Jyamato or let the world fall to ruin had he treated Neon with the genuine love that she wished for.
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* JerkassHasAPoint: Niram points out that Kousei wouldn't have to suppress knowledge of the Jyamato or let the world fall to ruin had if Kouseihad he treated Neon with the genuine love that she wished for.for she wouldn't have to fight in the DGP to fulfill her wish.
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[[caption-width-right:350:[[WesternAnimation/{{Megamind}} "Oh, I… I thought you were dead."\\
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[[caption-width-right:350:[[WesternAnimation/{{Megamind}} "Oh, I… I... I thought you were dead."\\
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[[caption-width-right:350:New game, new rules... but the more things change, the scarier they are.]]
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"My death was... greatly exaggerated."]]]]
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The first round of the Jyamato Grand Prix has officially begun! The name of the game: Lightning Jyamato Festival, where the players' objective is to successfully erect five lightning generators that can destroy the city, while causing as much havoc and misery as they can.
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The first round of the Jyamato Grand Prix has officially begun! The name of the game: Lightning Jyamato Festival, where the players' objective is to successfully erect five lightning generators that can destroy turrets powerful enough to reduce the city, city to rubble, while causing as much havoc and misery to the humans as they can.
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Despite the DGP being completely turned on its head, Ace, Keiwa, and Neon remain determined to stop Beroba's ambitions and put an end to her twisted game. However, their former ally, Michinaga, is now a participant of the Jyamato Grand Prix. To his shock, the friend he once thought had died, Tohru, appears before him, determined to make his dream a reality...
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Despite the DGP being completely turned on its head, Ace, Keiwa, and Neon remain determined to stop Beroba's ambitions and put an end to her twisted game.schemes. However, their former ally, Michinaga, is now a participant of the Jyamato Grand Prix. To his shock, the friend he once thought had died, Tohru, appears before him, determined to make his dream a reality...
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The first round of the Jyamato Grand Prix begins! Even with the tables having been turned, Ace, Keiwa, and Neon remain determined to stop Beroba's ambitions, and bring this twisted game to an end before it can even begin.
However, their former ally, Michinaga, is now a participant of the Jyamato Grand Prix. To his shock, the friend he once thought had died, Tohru, appears before him, determined to make his dream a reality...
However, their former ally, Michinaga, is now a participant of the Jyamato Grand Prix. To his shock, the friend he once thought had died, Tohru, appears before him, determined to make his dream a reality...
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The first round of the Jyamato Grand Prix begins! Even with has officially begun! The name of the tables having been turned, game: Lightning Jyamato Festival, where the players' objective is to successfully erect five lightning generators that can destroy the city, while causing as much havoc and misery as they can.
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Despite the DGP being completely turned on its head, Ace, Keiwa, and Neon remain determined to stop Beroba'sambitions, ambitions and bring this put an end to her twisted game to an end before it can even begin.
game. However, their former ally, Michinaga, is now a participant of the Jyamato Grand Prix. To his shock, the friend he once thought had died, Tohru, appears before him, determined to make his dream a reality...
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Despite the DGP being completely turned on its head, Ace, Keiwa, and Neon remain determined to stop Beroba's
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** Out of universe, the fact this episode and the first episode of ''Series/OhsamaSentaiKingOhger'' aired immediately afterwards feature references to festivals, the week after ''Series/AvataroSentaiDonbrothers'' ended, seems like quite the coincidence too.
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* ContrivedCoincidence: Beroba distributes to the Jyamato a chain of bells that represent their participation of the JGP. Their first site of attack for the JGP was a festival centered on the tradition of stealing chains of bells from {{oni}} for good luck, leading civilians to initially assume they were the actual oni from the tradition itself.
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* ContrivedCoincidence: Beroba distributes to the Jyamato a chain of bells that represent their participation of the JGP. Their first site of attack for the JGP was a festival centered on the tradition of stealing chains of bells from {{oni}} for good luck, leading civilians to initially assume they were the actual oni from the tradition itself. Although given how Beroba chose the festival as the site for the round, [[SubvertedTrope this might not be a coincidence but intentional on her end]].
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->'''Lightning Turrets Constructed:''' (1/5)
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->'''Lightning Turrets Constructed -''' (1/5)
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->'''Lightning Turrets Constructed -''' Constructed:''' (1/5)
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* EvilCannotComprehendGood: Chirami is baffled when Neon urges the group to help the people who are attacked by the JGP despite having nothing to gain from it, as well as acting like if he's touched with CrocodileTears when Keiwa supports that by insisting they minimize the victims.
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* ContrivedCoincidence: Beroba distributes to the Jyamato a chain of bells that represent their participation of the JGP. Their first site of attack for the JGP was a festival centered on the tradition of stealing chains of bells from {{oni}}s for good luck, leading civilians to initially assume they were the actual oni from the tradition itself.
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* ContrivedCoincidence: Beroba distributes to the Jyamato a chain of bells that represent their participation of the JGP. Their first site of attack for the JGP was a festival centered on the tradition of stealing chains of bells from {{oni}}s {{oni}} for good luck, leading civilians to initially assume they were the actual oni from the tradition itself.
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* ContrivedCoincidence: Beroba distributes to the Jyamato a chain of bells thag represent their participation of the JGP. Their first site of attack for the JGP was a festival centered on the tradition of stealing chains of bells from {{oni}}s for good luck, leading civilians to initially assume they were the actual oni from the tradition itself.
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* ContrivedCoincidence: Beroba distributes to the Jyamato a chain of bells thag that represent their participation of the JGP. Their first site of attack for the JGP was a festival centered on the tradition of stealing chains of bells from {{oni}}s for good luck, leading civilians to initially assume they were the actual oni from the tradition itself.
