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!Chapter 1
After the brief appearance of the past superhero Steel-Heart, the eyeshadow-wearing redhead Ramy tells the {{Exposition}} of what the Heart Mafia has been doing to Micco City for many years.
After she unsurely says that "it can't get worse from there," a brunette threatens to rob her at gunpoint, only for a black-haired superhero wannabe named Frida to bust in to stop her.
Ramy knocks out the robber with a fire extinguisher, only for the former to awkwardly realize that the latter is her boss Ms. Bett playing a prank on her for sleeping on her job. However, a robbery happens at Biscuit Street Bank, and Frida gets there to show her [[HenshinHero powers]] to stop it.
But Ramy, in a superhero suit, shows up to take the robber’s gun as the latter slips and reveals to be four mutant cats in a trenchcoat.
Then both Ramy and Frida are rewarded with a bounty helping the police stop the criminals. Then the chapter ends with them being at Hero Burger and shaking hands as they introduce themselves.
After the brief appearance of the past superhero Steel-Heart, the eyeshadow-wearing redhead Ramy tells the {{Exposition}} of what the Heart Mafia has been doing to Micco City for many years.
After she unsurely says that "it can't get worse from there," a brunette threatens to rob her at gunpoint, only for a black-haired superhero wannabe named Frida to bust in to stop her.
Ramy knocks out the robber with a fire extinguisher, only for the former to awkwardly realize that the latter is her boss Ms. Bett playing a prank on her for sleeping on her job. However, a robbery happens at Biscuit Street Bank, and Frida gets there to show her [[HenshinHero powers]] to stop it.
But Ramy, in a superhero suit, shows up to take the robber’s gun as the latter slips and reveals to be four mutant cats in a trenchcoat.
Then both Ramy and Frida are rewarded with a bounty helping the police stop the criminals. Then the chapter ends with them being at Hero Burger and shaking hands as they introduce themselves.
