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* OneSteveLimit: Averted when Crichton is introduced to the planetary rulers, "Rinic, Rinic and Rinic" (though only due to local naming convention which puts the last name first).
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* OneSteveLimit: Averted when Crichton is introduced to the planetary rulers, "Rinic, Rinic and Rinic" (though only due to local naming convention which puts the last family name first).
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: The Crichton that is gravely injured is the one who ultimately dies later in the season.
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: The Crichton that is gravely injured is [[spoiler:is the one who ultimately dies later in the season.]]
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* PrecrimePunishment: The question that actually kills Tolven is whether he ''intends'' to break his oath to his family (to co-rule with his sister after their father's death).
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* PrecrimePunishment: PrecrimeArrest: The question that actually kills Tolven is whether he ''intends'' to break his oath to his family (to co-rule with his sister after their father's death).
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Cloning Blues renamed to Clone Angst as per TRS
, specifically about angst from a character discovering that they're a clone.
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* CloningBlues: The running theme. The two Crichtons are aghast at having to share the same life all of a sudden.
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* KickTheSonOfABitch: Crichton suggests severing Crais's neural link (killing him in the process) in the hope that it will cure Tayln. Stark gives an evil giggle and says he already tried that (unfortunately Talyn nearly died instead). Then when Crais [[WakeUpFighting wakes up and tries to throttle Jool]] (admittedly he doesn't know her) she responds by jamming a huge frelling syringe into his leg.
-->'''Jool:''' There, I woke him up. ''(yanks out needle, causing Crais to moan in agony)'' Now I hope he drops dead.
-->'''Jool:''' There, I woke him up. ''(yanks out needle, causing Crais to moan in agony)'' Now I hope he drops dead.
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* NoSympathy: Crichton suggests severing Crais's neural link (killing him in the process) in the hope that it will cure Tayln. Stark gives an evil giggle and says he already tried that (unfortunately Talyn nearly died instead). Then when Crais [[WakeUpFighting wakes up and tries to throttle Jool]] (admittedly he doesn't know her) she responds by jamming a huge frelling syringe into his leg.
-->'''Jool:''' There, I woke him up. ''(yanks out needle, causing Crais to moan in agony)'' Now I hope he drops dead.
-->'''Jool:''' There, I woke him up. ''(yanks out needle, causing Crais to moan in agony)'' Now I hope he drops dead.
