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** Relieved that Aeryn wasn't killed in the impact with the Flux, Crichton tells her not to scare him like that. Aeryn takes offense, thinking he's accusing her of trying to harm him (why else would he be scared?)
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** Relieved that Aeryn wasn't killed in the impact with the Flux, Flax, Crichton tells her not to scare him like that. Aeryn takes offense, thinking he's accusing her of trying to harm him (why else would he be scared?)
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* DistressSignal: Aeryn manages to launch a signal buoy to let the others know they're in trouble. However as the Flux absorbs all signals, they can't be sure anyone's coming to their rescue.
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* DistressSignal: Aeryn manages to launch a signal buoy to let the others know they're in trouble. However as the Flux Flax absorbs all signals, they can't be sure anyone's coming to their rescue.
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* FamilyOfChoice: Staanz tells Zhaan and D'Argo that it's a good thing their two crewmates trapped in the Flux aren't family. Later D'Argo abandons a chance of reuniting with his son to save John and Aeryn.
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* FamilyOfChoice: Staanz tells Zhaan and D'Argo that it's a good thing their two crewmates trapped in the Flux Flax aren't family. Later D'Argo abandons a chance of reuniting with his son to save John and Aeryn.
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* TheRadioDiesFirst: Followed by the power, both drained by the Flux. DivertingPower from the auxiliaries gives them enough power to launch a distress beacon, but they've no way of knowing if anyone received it, or if their friends are even capable of coming to their rescue.
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* TheRadioDiesFirst: Followed by the power, both drained by the Flux.Flax. DivertingPower from the auxiliaries gives them enough power to launch a distress beacon, but they've no way of knowing if anyone received it, or if their friends are even capable of coming to their rescue.
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* SomeKindOfForcefield: The Flux is only revealed when a spacecraft runs into it. This makes it very difficult to avoid.
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* SomeKindOfForcefield: The Flux Flax is only revealed when a spacecraft runs into it. This makes it very difficult to avoid.
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* DispenseWithThePleasantries: Zhaan offers refreshments to the space pirates who curtly respond that if they wanted something, they'd have taken it already.
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* DispenseWithThePleasantries: Zhaan offers refreshments to the space pirates pirates, who curtly respond that if they wanted something, they'd have taken it already.
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* KansasCityShuffle: Rygel, of all people, pulls off a brilliant one against Kcrackic. He knew the pirates won't be fobbed off easily, so Rygel deliberately loses the game and, to pay his debt, reveals that Pilot knows the coordinates where Staanz is. Pilot then sends them off in the wrong direction, having earlier entered the wrong coordinates in the ship's data on Rygel's instruction. Rygel then complains that the hardest part was losing the game, as Kcrackic was such an awful playing.
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* KansasCityShuffle: Rygel, of all people, pulls off a brilliant one against Kcrackic. He knew the pirates won't be fobbed off easily, so Rygel deliberately loses the game and, to pay his debt, reveals that Pilot knows the coordinates where Staanz is. Pilot then sends them off in the wrong direction, having earlier entered the wrong coordinates in the ship's data on Rygel's instruction. Rygel then complains that the hardest part was losing the game, as Kcrackic was such an awful playing.player.
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* DistressSignal: Aeryn manages to launch a buoy to let the others know they're in trouble.
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* DistressSignal: Aeryn manages to launch a signal buoy to let the others know they're in trouble.trouble. However as the Flux absorbs all signals, they can't be sure anyone's coming to their rescue.
* TheDreaded
-->'''Zhaan:''' Greetings. I am Pa'u Zotoh Zhaan. You are Kcrackic?\\
'''Kcrackic:''' You know me?\\
'''Zhaan:''' Your reputation is well-known in these parts.\\
'''Kcrackic:''' For what?\\
'''Zhaan:''' Cruelty.
* TheDreaded
-->'''Zhaan:''' Greetings. I am Pa'u Zotoh Zhaan. You are Kcrackic?\\
'''Kcrackic:''' You know me?\\
'''Zhaan:''' Your reputation is well-known in these parts.\\
'''Kcrackic:''' For what?\\
'''Zhaan:''' Cruelty.
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* FriendOrIdolDecision: D'Argo has time to either board a derelict Luxan ship and search for the star charts he needs to get home, or to John and Aeryn's ship to rescue them.
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* FriendOrIdolDecision: D'Argo has time to either board a derelict Luxan ship and search for the star charts he needs to get home, or to John and Aeryn's ship to rescue them. He is on the verge of entering the vessel when he changes his mind, and afterwards feels wretched not only about his willingness to let his friends die, but his failure to commit to one decision or the other.
* TheGlomp: D'Argo isn't happy about being on the receiving end of one from Staanz.
* TheGlomp: D'Argo isn't happy about being on the receiving end of one from Staanz.
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* BelligerentSexualTension: Aeryn starts the episode constantly disparaging Crichton. They end up making out under the stress of a PreClimaxClimax which they claim afterwards could have happened with anyone. Then when Crichton asks to confirm her gender, Aeryn responds with a CrotchGrabSexCheck and a smirk from both of them.
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* UnsettlingGenderReveal: It turns out Staanz's species are differently sexually dimorphic as most other races, and ''she'' has been nursing a crush on D'Argo for most of the episode. With this in mind, Crichton makes sure to ask Aeryn if she is actually female.
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* UnsettlingGenderReveal: It turns out Staanz's species are differently sexually dimorphic as most other races, and ''she'' has been nursing a crush on D'Argo for most of the episode. With this in mind, Crichton makes sure to ask Aeryn if she is actually female. Aeryn responds by [[CrotchGrabSexCheck groping his own crotch]], which he takes as a yes.
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* ColdEquation: Aeryn and Crichton have to purge the oxygen from their spacecraft so they can do welding repairs without starting a fire, but there's only one intact spacesuit. The solution is for one of them to use a killshot (a Peacekeeper injection used for a MercyKill on the battlefield) while the other does the weld, then the conscious person revives them with a nerve shot. Aeryn says she is the logical choice to die as the killshot and nerve shot are designed for Sebaceans, while Crichton knows how to do the weld. But Crichton points out it's his spacesuit helmet that's damaged and he can't fit into hers. In the end, Aeryn takes too long to do the repair and has a choice of finishing the job to save herself and let Crichton die, or abandon the repair and they both die when their oxygen runs out. Aeryn chooses to save Crichton, figuring she's dead either way and she'd rather not DieAlone.
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* ColdEquation: Aeryn and Crichton have to purge the oxygen from their spacecraft so they can do welding repairs without starting a fire, but there's only one intact spacesuit. The solution is for one of them to use a killshot (a Peacekeeper injection used for a MercyKill on the battlefield) while the other does the weld, then the conscious person revives them with a nerve shot. Aeryn says she is the logical choice to die as the killshot and nerve shot are designed for Sebaceans, while Crichton knows how to do the weld. But Crichton points out it's his spacesuit helmet that's damaged and he can't fit into hers. In the end, Aeryn takes too long to do the repair and has a choice of finishing the job to save herself and let Crichton die, or abandon the repair and they both die when their oxygen runs out. Aeryn chooses to save Crichton, figuring she's dead either way and she'd rather not DieAlone.[[DyingAlone die alone]].
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* ColdEquation:
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* ColdEquation: Aeryn and Crichton have to purge the oxygen from their spacecraft so they can do welding repairs without starting a fire, but there's only one intact spacesuit. The solution is for one of them to use a killshot (a Peacekeeper injection used for a MercyKill on the battlefield) while the other does the weld, then the conscious person revives them with a nerve shot. Aeryn says she is the logical choice to die as the killshot and nerve shot are designed for Sebaceans, while Crichton knows how to do the weld. But Crichton points out it's his spacesuit helmet that's damaged and he can't fit into hers. In the end, Aeryn takes too long to do the repair and has a choice of finishing the job to save herself and let Crichton die, or abandon the repair and they both die when their oxygen runs out. Aeryn chooses to save Crichton, figuring she's dead either way and she'd rather not DieAlone.
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** Aeryn doesn't like "tech" work because if her Prowler was damaged, she was taught to find someone else's spacecraft and take it by force.
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** Aeryn doesn't like hasn't been taught "tech" work because if her Prowler was damaged, she was taught to find someone else's spacecraft and take it by force.
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* ExactTimeToFailure: Justified; Crichton can't give her an exact time before lack of oxygen will kill his brain, so Aeryn tells him to give her an exact time when she must start resuscitation and she will stick to it. However an explosion knocks her down for a moment, causing her to go over that time.
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* CPRCleanPrettyReliable: Aeryn revives John, in a [[KissOfLife bit of]] ShipTease.
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* CPRCleanPrettyReliable: Aeryn revives John, in When teaching the technique to Aeryn, John accurately describes CPR as a [[KissOfLife bit of]] ShipTease.means of keeping blood and oxygen circulating through his system, so his brain won't die, but it's still used to revive him as well after the nerve shot fails to do so.
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* HumanoidAliens: Aeryn assumes that Sebacean medicine should work fine on John, since human physiology appears to be similar enough to theirs. John, however, insists that she learn CPR instead, not trusting that her revival shot will work on him.
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* NoBiochemicalBarriers: Aeryn assumes that Sebacean medicine should work fine on John, since [[HumanAliens human physiology appears to be similar enough to theirs]]. John, however, insists that she learn CPR instead, not trusting that her revival shot will work on him. It doesn't.
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* BatmanGambit: Rygel and Pilot know the pirates won't be fobbed off easily, so Rygel loses the game deliberately and blurts out that Pilot knows the coordinates where Staanz is, but Pilot sends them off in the wrong direction, the two of them having planned this in advance.
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* KansasCityShuffle: Rygel, of all people, pulls off a brilliant one against Kcrackic.
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* KansasCityShuffle: Rygel, of all people, pulls off a brilliant one against Kcrackic. He knew the pirates won't be fobbed off easily, so Rygel deliberately loses the game and, to pay his debt, reveals that Pilot knows the coordinates where Staanz is. Pilot then sends them off in the wrong direction, having earlier entered the wrong coordinates in the ship's data on Rygel's instruction. Rygel then complains that the hardest part was losing the game, as Kcrackic was such an awful playing.
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* OutWithABang: The result of Aeryn and John's shared ObiWanMoment. [[MomentKiller And then D'Argo comes to the rescue.]]
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* TheRadioDiesFirst: Followed by the power, both drained by the Flux.
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* PreClimaxClimax: John and Aeryn are adrift in space and AlmostOutOfOxygen, so they start tearing off their spacesuits so they can go OutWithABang. Aeryn sounds almost disappointed [[MomentKiller when D'Argo turns up to rescue them]] before they can get started.
-->'''Aeryn:''' Somebody's ''docking?''
* TheRadioDiesFirst: Followed by the power, both drained by the Flux. DivertingPower from the auxiliaries gives them enough power to launch a distress beacon, but they've no way of knowing if anyone received it, or if their friends are even capable of coming to their rescue.
-->'''Aeryn:''' Somebody's ''docking?''
* TheRadioDiesFirst: Followed by the power, both drained by the Flux. DivertingPower from the auxiliaries gives them enough power to launch a distress beacon, but they've no way of knowing if anyone received it, or if their friends are even capable of coming to their rescue.
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* FamilyOfChoice: Staanz tells Zhaan and D'Argo that it's a good thing their two crewmates trapped in the Flux aren't family. Later D'Argo abandons a chance of reuniting with his son to save John and Aeryn.
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* HowTheMightyHaveFallen: Rygel bemoans that he once had 70,000 servants, and 50,000 more during festivals--[[MaidCorps mostly female]], whose entire job was to keep him entertained. Now he's bored out of his mind. Zhaan has NoSympathy.
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* HowTheMightyHaveFallen: Rygel bemoans that he once had 70,000 servants, and 50,000 more during festivals--[[MaidCorps mostly female]], whose [[IdleRich entire job was to keep him entertained. Now entertained]], whereas now he's bored out of his mind. Zhaan has NoSympathy.
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* DispenseWithThePleasantries: Zhaan offers refreshments to the space pirates who curtly respond that if they wanted something, they'd have taken it already.
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* TrashOfTheTitans: Staanz's spaceship smells so badly from all the junk he's collected he had his smell pods cauterized. D'Argo with his enhanced Luxan sense of smell is not happy.
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* TrashOfTheTitans: Staanz's spaceship smells so badly from all the junk he's collected he had his smell pods buds cauterized. D'Argo with his enhanced Luxan sense of smell is not happy.
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* NoSeatBelts: John and Aeryn are both sent flying when they collide with The Flax.
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* NoSeatBelts: John and Aeryn are both sent flying when they collide with The Flax. Then it happens again when they try to break free, only to be flung back inside.
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* ThisIsGonnaSuck: "This is gonna hurt, isn't it?!"
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* ThisIsGonnaSuck: When they use the remaining power in the transport pod to try and break free, Crichton says, "This is gonna hurt, isn't it?!"it?!" [[NoSeatBelts It does.]]
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* DeliberateValuesDissonance:
** Relieved that Aeryn wasn't killed in the impact with the Flux, Crichton tells her not to scare him like that. Aeryn takes offense, thinking he's accusing her of trying to harm him (why else would he be scared?)
** Aeryn doesn't like "tech" work because if her Prowler was damaged, she was taught to find someone else's spacecraft and take it by force.
** Relieved that Aeryn wasn't killed in the impact with the Flux, Crichton tells her not to scare him like that. Aeryn takes offense, thinking he's accusing her of trying to harm him (why else would he be scared?)
** Aeryn doesn't like "tech" work because if her Prowler was damaged, she was taught to find someone else's spacecraft and take it by force.
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* SeparatedByACommonLanguage:
** Sort of, as after hearing some of John's "colorful Southern expressions", Aeryn says in disbelief that her translator microbes must be screwing up.
** Relieved that Aeryn wasn't killed in the impact with the Flux, Crichton tells her not to scare him like that. Aeryn takes offense, thinking he's accusing her of trying to harm him (why else would he be scared?)
** Sort of, as after hearing some of John's "colorful Southern expressions", Aeryn says in disbelief that her translator microbes must be screwing up.
** Relieved that Aeryn wasn't killed in the impact with the Flux, Crichton tells her not to scare him like that. Aeryn takes offense, thinking he's accusing her of trying to harm him (why else would he be scared?)
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* SeparatedByACommonLanguage:
**SeparatedByACommonLanguage: Sort of, as after hearing some of John's "colorful Southern expressions", Aeryn says in disbelief that her translator microbes must be screwing up.
** Relieved that Aeryn wasn't killed in the impact with the Flux, Crichton tells her not to scare him like that. Aeryn takes offense, thinking he's accusing her of trying to harm him (why else would he be scared?)up.
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** Relieved that Aeryn wasn't killed in the impact with the Flux, Crichton tells her not to scare him like that. Aeryn takes offense, thinking he's accusing her of trying to harm him (why else would he be scared?)
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* TheRadioDiesFirst: Followed by the power, both drained by the Flux.
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: When Staanz drops his pants to reveal his gang mural, Zhaan and D'Argo note that he appears to be missing something. Which is not surprising as he's later revealed to be female.
-->'''Staanz:''' Well, I'm a Yenen by species. We're not exactly, uh, cut from the standard mold?
-->'''Staanz:''' Well, I'm a Yenen by species. We're not exactly, uh, cut from the standard mold?
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* TattooedCrook: Staanz drops his pants (fortunately he's wearing jocks) to reveal the Zenetan gang murals marked with tattoos and scar tissue on his thigh.
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* TattooedCrook: Staanz [[FanDisservice drops his pants (fortunately he's wearing jocks) pants]] to reveal the Zenetan gang murals marked with tattoos and scar tissue on his thigh.
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* TattooedCrook: Staanz drops his pants (fortunately he's wearing jocks) to reveal the Zenetan gang murals tattooed on his thigh.
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* TattooedCrook: Staanz drops his pants (fortunately he's wearing jocks) to reveal the Zenetan gang murals tattooed marked with tattoos and scar tissue on his thigh.
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* TattooedCrook: Staanz drops his pants (fortunately he's wearing jocks) to reveal the Zenetan gang murals tattooed on his thigh.
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* SecondFaceSmoke: Rygel blows smoke from his hookah pipe in Staanz's face after he pulls a clever move on him during their Tadek game.
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* TheLoad: Aeryn regards Crichton as this, so is trying to teach him to fly a spacecraft so he might be marginally useful in a future battle. Or so she says...
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* WhatsTheFunInThat: Crichton wants to enjoy himself flying the transport pod, while Aeryn would rather he concentrate on her piloting lesson.
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* WhatsTheFunInThat: WheresTheFunInThat: Crichton wants to enjoy himself flying the transport pod, while Aeryn would rather he concentrate on her piloting lesson.
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* ShoutOut: Staanz has a leg brace similar to that worn by Max in much of the ''Film/MadMax'' franchise.
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* ShoutOut: ShoutOut:
** Talking about his joy of flying the pod, Crichton mentions ''Film/TopGun'' and says he has a "need for speed."
** Staanz has a leg brace similar to that worn by Max in much of the ''Film/MadMax'' franchise.
** Talking about his joy of flying the pod, Crichton mentions ''Film/TopGun'' and says he has a "need for speed."
** Staanz has a leg brace similar to that worn by Max in much of the ''Film/MadMax'' franchise.
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* ArmorPiercingResponse: D'Argo reads Staanz's criminal record in the Peacekeeper files and goes to throw him off the ship. Zhaan objects, pointing out he's no different from themselves.
-->'''Zhaan:''' Have you ever looked at your own records to see what lies the Peacekeepers have written about you?\\
'''D'Argo:''' Have you? ''(beat)'' [[StealthInsult Not everyone imprisoned by the Peacekeepers was innocent.]]
-->'''Zhaan:''' Have you ever looked at your own records to see what lies the Peacekeepers have written about you?\\
'''D'Argo:''' Have you? ''(beat)'' [[StealthInsult Not everyone imprisoned by the Peacekeepers was innocent.]]
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* InsistentTerminology: Staanz is a professional garbologist, not a scavenger.
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* SpacePirates: Also crossed with SalvagePirates as they loot vessels caught in The Flux. Staanz is a former member, who [[TheStoolPigeon isn't exactly well-liked by his former comrades]]. Unusually for this trope, they're not actually a threat to our heroes, but are instead looking for Staanz.
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* SpacePirates: Also crossed with SalvagePirates as The Zenetan pirates who set up the Flax [[SalvagePirates so they could loot vessels caught in The Flux. Staanz is a former member, who [[TheStoolPigeon isn't exactly well-liked by his former comrades]]. it]]. Unusually for this trope, they're not actually a threat to our heroes, but are instead looking for Staanz.Staanz, a former member of their ranks who turned informant to get out of prison.
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* VariantChess: Rygel passes the time by playing some sort of chess game, and as it turns out, the leader of the SpacePirates and Staanz are both fans.
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* VariantChess: Rygel passes the time wants to kill his boredom by playing some sort of chess game, and as Tadek, but can't get Zhaan to join him in a game. As it turns out, the leader of the SpacePirates and Staanz are both fans.
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* NegativeSpaceWedgie: The Flax, a magna-drift mesh 75 million [[{{Microts}} zachrons]] long that can't be picked up on sensors.
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* BigShutUp: D'Argo when he tires of Zhaan and Rygel squabbling with each other, which doesn't take long.
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* BigShutUp: D'Argo when he tires of Zhaan and Rygel squabbling with each other, which other (which doesn't take long.long). When this doesn't stop them, Pilot 'accidentally' hits the wrong button, sending an ear-piercing screech over the comm.
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* HandsOnApproach: Aeryn teaching Crichton.
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* HandsOnApproach: Aeryn teaching Crichton.HowTheMightyHaveFallen: Rygel bemoans that he once had 70,000 servants, and 50,000 more during festivals--[[MaidCorps mostly female]], whose entire job was to keep him entertained. Now he's bored out of his mind. Zhaan has NoSympathy.
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** Sort of, as after hearing some of John's "colorful Southern expressions", Aeryn says in disbelief that her translator microbes must be screwingup.up.
** After their pod gets damaged, Crichton asks if
** Sort of, as after hearing some of John's "colorful Southern expressions", Aeryn says in disbelief that her translator microbes must be screwing
** After their pod gets damaged, Crichton asks if
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* SomeKindOfForcefield: The Flux is only revealed when a spacecraft runs into it. This makes it very difficult to avoid.
* SpacePirates: Also crossed with SalvagePirates as they loot vessels caught in The Flux. Staanz is a former member, who [[TheStoolPigeon isn't exactly well-liked by his formercomrades.comrades]]. Unusually for this trope, they're not actually a threat to our heroes, but are instead looking for Staanz.
* SpacePirates: Also crossed with SalvagePirates as they loot vessels caught in The Flux. Staanz is a former member, who [[TheStoolPigeon isn't exactly well-liked by his former