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* DisguisedInDrag: Fitz is in a sort of LotusEaterMachine [[WhatDoYouMeanItWasntMadeOnDrugs On Drugs]], whose creators are trying to come up with an interesting adventure scenario for him. He ends up marrying an evil, lecherous version of the Doctor, disguised in a [[PimpedOutDress Pimped Out Wedding Dress]] as Evil!Doctor's unwilling bride, then having a swordfight, rescuing his GirlOfTheWeek, and flying around with a jetpack, still in the dress.
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* DisguisedInDrag: Fitz is in a sort of LotusEaterMachine [[WhatDoYouMeanItWasntMadeOnDrugs On Drugs]], Drugs, whose creators are trying to come up with an interesting adventure scenario for him. He ends up marrying an evil, lecherous version of the Doctor, disguised in a [[PimpedOutDress Pimped Out Wedding Dress]] as Evil!Doctor's unwilling bride, then having a swordfight, rescuing his GirlOfTheWeek, and flying around with a jetpack, still in the dress.
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* LotusEaterMachine: One is created for Fitz to make him fall in love with Carmodi, the woman who's paid for his services for twenty-four hours. Little did he know she'd kidnap him.
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* LotusEaterMachine: One is created for Fitz to make him fall in love with Carmodi, the woman who's paid for his services for twenty-four hours. [[LittleDidIKnow Little did he know know]] she'd kidnap him.
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* LoveConfessor: "I've been engineered to love you, Carmodi. With the Doctor, it's the real thing."
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* LotusEaterMachine: One is created for Fitz to make him fall in love with Carmodi, the woman who's payed for his services for twenty-four hours. Little did he know she'd kidnap him.
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* LotusEaterMachine: One is created for Fitz to make him fall in love with Carmodi, the woman who's payed paid for his services for twenty-four hours. Little did he know she'd kidnap him.
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* SadisticChoice: The Doctor is forced to abandon a planet to be destroyed because he's found evidence that Rhian is going to become a time traveller in her personal future and the potential temporal paradox of her dying on that planet is too great a risk, even if he makes it clear he's not comfortable with it.
* TheSlowPath: Rhian observes that the Doctor's apparent immortality should mean he doesn't technically need a time machine, but the Doctor counters that he tried that when he spent a century on the same planet and now he gets impatient waiting for an egg to boil.
* TheSlowPath: Rhian observes that the Doctor's apparent immortality should mean he doesn't technically need a time machine, but the Doctor counters that he tried that when he spent a century on the same planet and now he gets impatient waiting for an egg to boil.
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* DoomsDayDevice: the world killing bombs, pretty straightforwardly.
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* DoomsDayDevice: the DoomsdayDevice: The world killing bombs, pretty straightforwardly.
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* IdiotBall: Why on earth Fitz would volunteer for a thinly veiled sex slave ring is beyond most readers, though it could just be because he's [[LoveableSexManiac Fitz]].
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* MoodWhiplash: Fitz's ridiculous dream sequence? Hilarious. Fitz finding out that his love for Carmodi was manufactured, his memories are lies, and he has no idea who he was before he met her? [[NightmareFuel Not so funny]].
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* MoodWhiplash: Fitz's ridiculous dream sequence? Hilarious. Fitz finding out that his love for Carmodi was manufactured, his memories are lies, and he has no idea who he was before he met her? [[NightmareFuel Not so funny]].so]].
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* {{McGuffin}}: the titular Book.
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* {{McGuffin}}: the The titular Book. Book.
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* BloodFromTheMouth: This happens to Fitz. He gets better, though.
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* BrideAndSwitch: [[HoYay Between Fitz and the Doctor]]. Well, it never really happened; it's actually a virtual reality world where the Doctor is a CardCarryingVillain trying to [[AndNowYouMustMarryMe force some poor girl into marriage]], but gets a DisguisedInDrag Fitz instead. It's a sort of LotusEaterMachine for Fitz, since he gets to be a swashbuckling hero... wearing a FairytaleWeddingDress and marrying the Doctor isn't actually stated to be part of the appeal for him, but one never knows.
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* DisguisedInDrag: Fitz is in a sort of LotusEaterMachine [[WhatDoYouMeanItWasntMadeOnDrugs On Drugs]], whose creators are trying to come up with an interesting adventure scenario for him. He ends up marrying an evil, lecherous version of the Doctor, disguised in a [[PimpedOutDress Pimped Out Wedding Dress]] as Evil!Doctor's unwilling bride, then having a swordfight, rescuing his GirlOfTheWeek, and flying around with a jetpack, still in the dress.
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* FunetikAksent: Fitz gets a bit self-conscious about how unsophisticated he is, and his third person narration mentions, "you can take the boy out of Norrrrf Laaanden, but you couldn’t take the Norrrrf Laaanden out of the boy", which is pretty clearly a [[SelfDeprecation self-deprecating]] exaggeration.
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* PsychicSurgery: The Doctor is rendered BrainwashedAndCrazy by a device that's been inserted into his brain. Fitz is shortly thereafter rendered conveniently [[IntangibleMan intangible]] ([[NoodlePeople among other things]]), and the Doctor instructs him to remove the device for him. Fitz is then somewhat perturbed to find his hand covered in slime, and the Doctor thanks him "for not taking a bigger handful".
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* RightOnQueue: Anji spends more or less an hour, although it apparently feels more like sixty years, queuing to visit the Doctor in jail. It annoys her that being English has made her so good at queuing that she can't bring herself to complain about it.
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* TheTeaser: Lampshaded; the first chapter is titled "Obligatory Spectacular Opening".
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* ColdBloodedTorture: Eight, natch. Darlow and his henchmen rough him up quite a bit. [[spoiler: And stick a mind bomb in his head compelling him to search for Carmodi and try to kill her]].
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* ColdBloodedTorture: Eight, natch. Darlow and his henchmen rough him up quite a bit. [[spoiler: And stick a mind bomb in his head compelling him to search for Carmodi and try to kill her]].her.
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* BodyHorror: The eventual fate of {{IntroInductions}} Escort Angency. See TimeyWimeyBall below.
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* BodyHorror: The eventual fate of {{IntroInductions}} [[=IntroInductions=]] Escort Angency. See TimeyWimeyBall below.
* StableTimeLoop: Rhian thinks the whole book is one. The Doctor refuses to believe they're trapped in it and tries to TakeAThirdOption, without much success.
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* TimeLoop: Rhian thinks the whole book is one. The Doctor refuses to believe they're trapped in it and tries to TakeAThirdOption, without much success.
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Lebenswelt, planet of endless parties, is home to a museum housing the most valuable object in the universe for a stranded time-traveler: the Book of the Still. Write your name in the book, and someone from the future can come and rescue you. Many people want the Book for less than altruistic reasons, however, and will resort to all manner of distasteful means to get hold of it. The Doctor, Anji, and Fitz only mean to spend a few hours visiting, but a few hours becomes rather longer after the Doctor attempts to steal the Book and is arrested, Anji is derailed by a mob, and Fitz [[Brainwashed meets the woman of his dreams]].
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Lebenswelt, planet of endless parties, is home to a museum housing the most valuable object in the universe for a stranded time-traveler: the Book of the Still. Write your name in the book, and someone from the future can come and rescue you. Many people want the Book for less than altruistic reasons, however, and will resort to all manner of distasteful means to get hold of it. The Doctor, Anji, and Fitz only mean to spend a few hours visiting, but a few hours becomes rather longer after the Doctor attempts to steal the Book and is arrested, Anji is derailed by a mob, and Fitz [[Brainwashed [[{{Brainwashed}} meets the woman of his dreams]].
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* BodyHorror: The eventual fate of [[IntroInductions]] {{IntroInductions}} Escort Angency. See TimeyWimeyBall below.
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sorry guys. this book freaked me out a lot less in highschool when i didn't quite grok the implications
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Lebenswelt, planet of endless parties, is home to a museum housing the most valuable object in the universe for a stranded time-traveler: the Book of the Still. Write your name in the book, and someone from the future can come and rescue you. Many people want the Book for less than altruistic reasons, however, and will resort to all manner of distasteful means to get hold of it. The Doctor, Anji, and Fitz only mean to spend a few hours visiting, but a few hours becomes rather longer after the Doctor attempts to steal the Book and is arrested, Anji is derailed by a mob, and Fitz [[Brainwashed meets the woman of his dreams.dreams]].
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* ApocalypseHow:
* BodyHorror: The eventual fate ofIntroInductions [[IntroInductions]] Escort Angency. See TimeyWimeyBall below.
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* DoubleStandardAbuseFemaleOnMale: Averted, then not-so averted. Fitz has false memories implanted in his mind that make him fall overwhelmingly in love with Carmodi Litian. When the drugs begin wearing off, she tells him that she paid for him, and he's horrified, and tells her to keep away from him, even though saying so causes him physical anguish. His feelings of violation vs the lingering devotion to Carmodi caused by the drugs taking their time leaving his system, are discussed on several occasions. However, when Carmodi abruptly dumps him, little attention is given to her actions earlier, and in her final letter she mentions forgiving ''him''.
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* DoomsDayDevice: the world killing bombs, pretty straightforwardly.
* DoubleStandardAbuseFemaleOnMale: Averted, then not-so averted. Fitz hasfalse memories FakeMemories implanted in his mind that make him fall overwhelmingly in love with Carmodi Litian. When the drugs begin wearing off, she tells him that she paid for him, and he's horrified, and tells her to keep away from him, even though saying so causes him physical anguish. His feelings of violation vs the lingering devotion to Carmodi caused by the drugs taking their time leaving his system, are discussed on several occasions. However, when Carmodi abruptly dumps him, little attention is given to her actions earlier, and in her final letter she mentions forgiving ''him''.
* DoubleStandardAbuseFemaleOnMale: Averted, then not-so averted. Fitz has
* FakeMemories: Fitz is given a very "boy's own" dream sequence that tells the story of how he and Carmodi fell in love. Being Fitz, it involves Cavalier soldiers, epic swordfights, last-ditch escapes, and [[HoYay him wearing a beautiful wedding dress and marrying the Doctor]].
* GrandfatherParadox: Rhian insists that the time loop surrounding the Unnoticed is one, necessitating everyone jumping back to complete it, much to the Doctor's horror.
* GrandfatherParadox: Rhian insists that the time loop surrounding the Unnoticed is one, necessitating everyone jumping back to complete it, much to the Doctor's horror.
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MindRape: Uncomfortably close to literally.
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Lebenswelt, planet of endless parties, is home to a museum housing the most valuable object in the universe for a stranded time-traveler: the Book of the Still. Write your name in the book, and someone from the future can come and rescue you. Many people want the Book for less than altruistic reasons, however, and will resort to all manner of distasteful means to get hold of it. The Doctor, Anji, and Fitz only mean to spend a few hours visiting, but a few hours becomes rather longer after the Doctor attempts to steal the Book and is arrested, Anji is derailed by a mob, and Fitz meets the woman of his dreams.
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* DoubleStandardAbuseFemaleOnMale: Averted, then not-so averted. Fitz has false memories implanted in his mind that make him fall overwhelmingly in love with Carmodi Litian. When the drugs begin wearing off, she tells him that she paid for him, and he's horrified, and tells her to keep away from him, even though saying so causes him physical anguish. His feelings of violation vs the lingering devotion to Carmodi caused by the drugs taking their time leaving his system, are discussed on several occasions. However, when Carmodi abruptly dumps him, little attention is given to her actions earlier, and in her final letter she mentions forgiving ''him''.
* FairyTaleWeddingDress: Worn by Fitz of all people, in his epic fantasy dream-sequence.
* DoubleStandardAbuseFemaleOnMale: Averted, then not-so averted. Fitz has false memories implanted in his mind that make him fall overwhelmingly in love with Carmodi Litian. When the drugs begin wearing off, she tells him that she paid for him, and he's horrified, and tells her to keep away from him, even though saying so causes him physical anguish. His feelings of violation vs the lingering devotion to Carmodi caused by the drugs taking their time leaving his system, are discussed on several occasions. However, when Carmodi abruptly dumps him, little attention is given to her actions earlier, and in her final letter she mentions forgiving ''him''.
* FairyTaleWeddingDress: Worn by Fitz of all people, in his epic fantasy dream-sequence.
* {{McGuffin}}: the titular Book.
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* RapeByProxy: Oh-so-narrowly avoided by the fact that Carmodi's not technically interested in Fitz for sexual reasons. But see above.
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* FairyTaleWeddingDress: Worn by Fitz of all people.
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* TakingTheBullet: Fitz, for the Doctor. Only it's a laser gun, and he survives with just a painful burn.
* TimeyWimeyBall: The three minions get somehow merged together when physics goes out to lunch near the end of the book, but don't manage to separate themselves before reality reasserts itself. The resultant terrifying monster evolves over time into an entire species:[[spoiler:The The Unnoticed, who have been chasing Carmodi and the Book of the Still the whole time]].time.
* TimeyWimeyBall: The three minions get somehow merged together when physics goes out to lunch near the end of the book, but don't manage to separate themselves before reality reasserts itself. The resultant terrifying monster evolves over time into an entire species:
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* BodyHorror: The eventual fate of the henchmen. See TimeyWimeyBall below.
* BookEnds: An interesting framing device is created by writing the epilogue first, where Carmodi explains her actions and motivations to the reader, none of which make sense (not even the reason for reversing the order of prologue and epilogue) until the prologue at the end of the book.
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* IdiotBall: Why on earth Fitz would volunteer for a thinly veiled sex slave ring is beyond most readers, though it could just be because he's [[LoveableSexManiac Fitz]].
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* PluckyGirl: Rhian Salmond.
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* PimpedOutWeddingDress: Worn by Fitz of all people.
* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: Rhian and Carmodi's fates are ambiguous at best, and they count as examples because when the Doctor, Fitz and Anji leave, the two women get little to no explanation.
