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* LastMomentTogether: This tribute includes a scene of Mac boarding a bus, which triggers a flashback of him watching his wife, Claire, playfully stick her tongue out at him as she rides away on a bus to work on that day. Neither of them could know that she would perish when the towers fell just a short time later.
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* CantTieHisTie: Adam has so much trouble with his, Lindsay tells him, "By the time you're done, it'll be the 20th anniversary."
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* CantTieHisTie: Adam has so much trouble with his, Lindsay tells him, "By the time you're done, it'll be the 20th anniversary."anniversary" and ends up tying it for him.
* CheatedDeathDiedAnyway: Although the audience has known since [[Recap/CSINYS01E01 the pilot episode]] that Claire died on 9/11, it is revealed here that she had made it out of the first tower before being killed when the second one fell.
* CheatedDeathDiedAnyway: Although the audience has known since [[Recap/CSINYS01E01 the pilot episode]] that Claire died on 9/11, it is revealed here that she had made it out of the first tower before being killed when the second one fell.
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** Mac cuts himself shaving in the present day and recalls having done so exactly 10 years before. Later, he boards a bus and remembers riding one to work that morning with his Claire, not having any idea at the time that it would be the last moment they'd be together.
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** Mac cuts himself shaving in the present day and recalls having done so exactly 10 years before. Later, he boards a bus and remembers riding one to work that morning with his wife Claire, not having any idea at the time that it would be the last moment they'd be together.
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* {{Flashback}}: Other than Lindsay (who was still living in Montana at the time) and Adam (who shamefully admits to her that he'd slept thru the whole event), the team members are shown in flashbacks to what they were doing when and/or shortly after the towers fell. Lindsay and Adam share a moment in present-day when they tell each other how they had responded.
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* {{Flashback}}: FlashbackBPlot: Other than Lindsay (who was still living in Montana at the time) and Adam (who shamefully admits to her that he'd slept thru the whole event), the team members are shown in quite a few flashbacks to what they were doing when and/or shortly after the towers fell. Lindsay fell.[[note]]Lindsay and Adam share a moment in present-day when they tell each other how they had responded.[[/note]] A few examples:
** Mac cuts himself shaving in the present day and recalls having done so exactly 10 years before. Later, he boards a bus and remembers riding one to work that morning with his Claire, not having any idea at the time that it would be the last moment they'd be together.
** Sid, the coroner, flashes back to helping with the victims as he writes the current date (9/11/11) on a toe tag.
** Standing on the sidewalk, Jo sees dark smoke from a diesel truck and remembers seeing smoke at the Pentagon from the window of her then-office in D.C.
** Mac cuts himself shaving in the present day and recalls having done so exactly 10 years before. Later, he boards a bus and remembers riding one to work that morning with his Claire, not having any idea at the time that it would be the last moment they'd be together.
** Sid, the coroner, flashes back to helping with the victims as he writes the current date (9/11/11) on a toe tag.
** Standing on the sidewalk, Jo sees dark smoke from a diesel truck and remembers seeing smoke at the Pentagon from the window of her then-office in D.C.
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* DueToTheDead: The entire team attends the dedication ceremony.
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* TheDeadHaveNames: When a young co-worker at Piper asks Mac about his wife and keeps saying "she" and "her," he snaps, telling the girl that her name was Claire and that the victims are not just statistics - they have names. The girl goes silent and he immediately apologies, saying he knows she doesn't think that. (It being the 10th anniversary of the tragedy, he's more on edge about it than usual.)
* DueToTheDead: The entire teamattends attend the dedication ceremony.
* DueToTheDead: The entire team
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** Mike Black and Mike White.
** Jo Danville and Mac's fireman buddy, Joe Vincent.
** Jo Danville and Mac's fireman buddy, Joe Vincent.
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** Two suspects are named Mike Black and Mike White.
White. When choosing which guy to question:
--->'''Jo:''' I'll take Black Mike.
--->'''Flack:''' Great. I got Mike Black. The white guy. [''She gives him a questioning look, he grins.''] Don't think about. But trust me, it's right.
** Det. Jo Danville and Mac's fireman buddy, JoeVincent.Vincent. In this case, tho, they don't cross paths on-screen; Mac is the only one who talks to both of them.
--->'''Jo:''' I'll take Black Mike.
--->'''Flack:''' Great. I got Mike Black. The white guy. [''She gives him a questioning look, he grins.''] Don't think about. But trust me, it's right.
** Det. Jo Danville and Mac's fireman buddy, Joe
