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* IncurableCoughOfDeath: Yvonne; suffering from a chronic lung complaint, she hasn't been able to replace them with cyborg organs, and can only make do with pills. Later, while she's unwittingly waiting for cyber-conversion, Sisterman Constant diagnoses her as an "acute consumptive" reveals that she'll probably be dead in a few weeks anyway.
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* IncurableCoughOfDeath: Yvonne; suffering from a chronic lung complaint, she hasn't been able to replace them with cyborg organs, and can only make do with pills. Later, while she's unwittingly waiting for cyber-conversion, Sisterman Constant diagnoses her as an "acute consumptive" reveals revealing that she'll probably be dead in a few weeks anyway.
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* WhamLine: There's a couple throughout the story, but this has to be [[ShockingMoments the most shocking one]]: [[AC: faaaTHER must ''seeeee'' MY [=UNIfooorm.=]]]
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'''Commander Zheng:''' And IIIIIII ''am'' supe''rior'' to you. Beeee proud ''while'' [[UnwillingRobotization you still haaaave the capacity]].
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'''Commander Zheng:''' [[AC: And IIIIIII ''am'' supe''rior'' to you. Beeee proud ''while'' [[UnwillingRobotization you still haaaave the capacity]].]]
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The one where we see the genesis of the Cybermen. Or at least the main branch.
The one where we see the genesis of the Cybermen. Or at least the main branch.
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An OriginStory for the Cybermen of Mondas, written by Creator/MarcPlatt. The story expands on the backstory of the Cybermen as detailed in [[Recap/DoctorWhoS4E2TheTenthPlanet "The Tenth Planet"]] and [[Recap/DoctorWhoS22E1AttackOfTheCybermen "Attack of the Cybermen"]].
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An OriginStory OriginsEpisode for the Cybermen of Mondas, written by Creator/MarcPlatt. The story expands on the backstory of the Cybermen as detailed in [[Recap/DoctorWhoS4E2TheTenthPlanet "The Tenth Planet"]] and [[Recap/DoctorWhoS22E1AttackOfTheCybermen "Attack of the Cybermen"]].
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-->'''Zheng:''' "Doctorman Allan, we will begin again."
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-->'''Zheng:''' "Doctorman Doctorman Allan, we will begin again."
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* WhoWantsToLiveForever: The Mondasians. The Mondasians want to live forever.
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* WhoWantsToLiveForever: The Mondasians. The Mondasians want Committee, to live forever.the extent of prioritising their own survival above that of the population.
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** The Doctor trying to convince Nyssa that Mondas is Earth, probably London. Nyssa, however, is fairly sure London isn't [[BeneathTheEarth in a cave.]]
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** The Doctor trying to convince Nyssa that Mondas is Earth, probably London. Nyssa, however, Granted, she does come from another planet, but even then Nyssa is fairly sure London isn't [[BeneathTheEarth in a cave.]]
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* DistantSequel: The story depicts the creation of the Cybermen, long before the First Doctor's encounter with them in Antarctica in December 1986 in "[[Recap/DoctorWhoS4E2TheTenthPlanet The Tenth Planet]]".
* DownerEnding: See ForegoneConclusion. It appears as though the Doctor has won the day. The Cyber-Planner is dead, Commander Zheng is dead, and Doctorman Allan is working on ways to reverse the process. The Doctor and Nyssa leave Mondas, wondering how things might have changed. Only Zheng isn't actually dead...
* DownerEnding: See ForegoneConclusion. It appears as though the Doctor has won the day. The Cyber-Planner is dead, Commander Zheng is dead, and Doctorman Allan is working on ways to reverse the process. The Doctor and Nyssa leave Mondas, wondering how things might have changed. Only Zheng isn't actually dead...
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* DistantSequel: The story depicts the creation of the Cybermen, long before the First Doctor's encounter with them in Antarctica in December 1986 in during "[[Recap/DoctorWhoS4E2TheTenthPlanet The Tenth Planet]]".
* DownerEnding: See ForegoneConclusion. It appears as though the Doctor has won the day. The Cyber-Planner is dead,Commander Cyber-Commander Zheng is dead, and Doctorman Allan is working on ways to reverse the process. The Doctor and Nyssa leave Mondas, wondering how things might have changed. Only Zheng isn't actually dead...
* DownerEnding: See ForegoneConclusion. It appears as though the Doctor has won the day. The Cyber-Planner is dead,
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* EarlyBirdCameo: The unseen young man Eric Krailford that the Hartleys mention is better known as Cyberman Krail in "[[Recap/DoctorWhoS4E2TheTenthPlanet The Tenth Planet]]", aka the one who introduces the species.
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* EarlyBirdCameo: The unseen young man Eric Krailford that the Hartleys mention is better known as Cyberman Krail in "[[Recap/DoctorWhoS4E2TheTenthPlanet The Tenth Planet]]", aka [[MrExposition the one who introduces the species.species]].
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* GhostPlanet: Mondas is turning into one, with the population down to a [[{{Planetville}} single underpopulated city]].
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* GhostPlanet: Mondas is turning into one, with the population down to a [[{{Planetville}} single underpopulated city]].city beneath the surface]].
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This story would inspire another television two-parter story eleven years later. [[Recap/DoctorWhoS36E11WorldEnoughAndTime "World Enough and Time"]]/[[Recap/DoctorWhoS36E12TheDoctorFalls "The Doctor Falls"]] deals with the origin of a different set of Mondasian Cybermen in a similar way. Probably due to the overwhelming popularity of this particular story, Creator/StevenMoffat went out of his way to avoid contradicting it, instead directly acknowledging it ''and every other Cyberman origin story'' as equally as "true" -- in the episode, the Doctor notes these new Cybermen are a parallel evolution of the race, [[ContinuityCavalcade just like on Mondas, Telos, Earth, Marinus and Planet 14]][[note]]If you're curious, that's "Spare Parts", various early episode novelisations, "Rise of the Cybermen"/"The Age of Steel" (and possibly [[Recap/DoctorWhoS34E11DarkWater "Dark Water"]]/[[Recap/DoctorWhoS34E12DeathInHeaven "Death in Heaven"]], Grant Morrison's [[Magazine/DoctorWhoMagazine magazine comic]] "The World Shapers" and David Banks' [[Literature/DoctorWhoNewAdventures Virgin]] novel "Iceberg". There are still various inconsistencies between these stories, but [[HandWave don't worry about it]].[[/note]]. That episode also takes some stylistic cues from this one, notably the pseudo-1950s setting.
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This story would inspire another television two-parter story eleven years later. [[Recap/DoctorWhoS36E11WorldEnoughAndTime "World Enough and Time"]]/[[Recap/DoctorWhoS36E12TheDoctorFalls "The Doctor Falls"]] deals with the origin of a different set of Mondasian Cybermen in a similar way. Probably due to the overwhelming popularity of this particular story, Creator/StevenMoffat went out of his way to avoid contradicting it, instead directly acknowledging it ''and every other Cyberman origin story'' as equally as "true" -- in the episode, the Doctor notes these new Cybermen are a parallel evolution of the race, [[ContinuityCavalcade just like on Mondas, Telos, Earth, Marinus and Planet 14]][[note]]If you're curious, that's "Spare Parts", various early episode novelisations, "Rise of the Cybermen"/"The Age of Steel" (and possibly [[Recap/DoctorWhoS34E11DarkWater "Dark Water"]]/[[Recap/DoctorWhoS34E12DeathInHeaven "Death in Heaven"]], Heaven"]] too), Grant Morrison's [[Magazine/DoctorWhoMagazine magazine comic]] "The World Shapers" and David Banks' [[Literature/DoctorWhoNewAdventures Virgin]] novel "Iceberg". There are still various inconsistencies between these stories, but [[HandWave don't worry about it]].[[/note]]. That episode also takes some stylistic cues from this one, notably the pseudo-1950s setting.
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This story was an inspiration for the ''Series/DoctorWho'' episodes [[Recap/DoctorWhoS28E5RiseOfTheCybermen "Rise of the Cybermen"]]/[[Recap/DoctorWhoS28E6TheAgeOfSteel "The Age of Steel"]], on which Marc Platt got a story credit. One of the story's most powerful scenes (a partially-converted Cyberman doesn't understand what's been done to her) is drawn from this audio. The character of Yvonne Hartman, appearing in [[Recap/DoctorWhoS28E12ArmyOfGhosts "Army Of Ghosts"]]/[[Recap/DoctorWhoS28E13Doomsday "Doomsday"]], is a CompositeCharacter of this story's Yvonne Hartley and Doctorman Allan.
This story would inspire another television two-parter story eleven years later. [[Recap/DoctorWhoS36E11WorldEnoughAndTime "World Enough and Time"]]/[[Recap/DoctorWhoS36E12TheDoctorFalls "The Doctor Falls"]] deals with the origin of a different set of Mondasian Cybermen in a similar way. Probably due to the overwhelming popularity of this particular story, Creator/StevenMoffat went out of his way to avoid contradicting it, instead directly acknowledging it ''and every other Cyberman origin'' as equally as "true" -- in the episode, the Doctor notes these new Cybermen are a parallel evolution of the race, [[ContinuityCavalcade just like on Mondas, Telos, Earth, Marinus and Planet 14]][[note]]If you're curious, that's "Spare Parts", various early episode novelisations, the revived series, Grant Morrison's comic "The World Shapers" and David Banks' Virgin novel "Iceberg". There are still various inconsistencies between these stories, but [[HandWave don't worry about it]].[[/note]]. That episode also takes some stylistic cues from this one, notably the pseudo-1950s setting.
This story would inspire another television two-parter story eleven years later. [[Recap/DoctorWhoS36E11WorldEnoughAndTime "World Enough and Time"]]/[[Recap/DoctorWhoS36E12TheDoctorFalls "The Doctor Falls"]] deals with the origin of a different set of Mondasian Cybermen in a similar way. Probably due to the overwhelming popularity of this particular story, Creator/StevenMoffat went out of his way to avoid contradicting it, instead directly acknowledging it ''and every other Cyberman origin'' as equally as "true" -- in the episode, the Doctor notes these new Cybermen are a parallel evolution of the race, [[ContinuityCavalcade just like on Mondas, Telos, Earth, Marinus and Planet 14]][[note]]If you're curious, that's "Spare Parts", various early episode novelisations, the revived series, Grant Morrison's comic "The World Shapers" and David Banks' Virgin novel "Iceberg". There are still various inconsistencies between these stories, but [[HandWave don't worry about it]].[[/note]]. That episode also takes some stylistic cues from this one, notably the pseudo-1950s setting.
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This story was an inspiration for the ''Series/DoctorWho'' episodes [[Recap/DoctorWhoS28E5RiseOfTheCybermen "Rise of the Cybermen"]]/[[Recap/DoctorWhoS28E6TheAgeOfSteel "The Age of Steel"]], on which Marc Platt got a story credit. One of the story's most powerful scenes (a partially-converted Cyberman doesn't understand what's been done to her) is drawn from this audio. However, rather than contradicting "Spare Parts", this two-parter details the origins of an alternate universe branch of Cybermen which the Doctor compares to those of Mondas. The character of Yvonne Hartman, appearing in the later episodes [[Recap/DoctorWhoS28E12ArmyOfGhosts "Army Of Ghosts"]]/[[Recap/DoctorWhoS28E13Doomsday "Doomsday"]], is also a CompositeCharacter of this story's Yvonne Hartley and Doctorman Allan.
This story would inspire another television two-parter story eleven years later. [[Recap/DoctorWhoS36E11WorldEnoughAndTime "World Enough and Time"]]/[[Recap/DoctorWhoS36E12TheDoctorFalls "The Doctor Falls"]] deals with the origin of a different set of Mondasian Cybermen in a similar way. Probably due to the overwhelming popularity of this particular story, Creator/StevenMoffat went out of his way to avoid contradicting it, instead directly acknowledging it ''and every other Cybermanorigin'' origin story'' as equally as "true" -- in the episode, the Doctor notes these new Cybermen are a parallel evolution of the race, [[ContinuityCavalcade just like on Mondas, Telos, Earth, Marinus and Planet 14]][[note]]If you're curious, that's "Spare Parts", various early episode novelisations, "Rise of the revived series, Cybermen"/"The Age of Steel" (and possibly [[Recap/DoctorWhoS34E11DarkWater "Dark Water"]]/[[Recap/DoctorWhoS34E12DeathInHeaven "Death in Heaven"]], Grant Morrison's comic [[Magazine/DoctorWhoMagazine magazine comic]] "The World Shapers" and David Banks' Virgin [[Literature/DoctorWhoNewAdventures Virgin]] novel "Iceberg". There are still various inconsistencies between these stories, but [[HandWave don't worry about it]].[[/note]]. That episode also takes some stylistic cues from this one, notably the pseudo-1950s setting.
This story would inspire another television two-parter story eleven years later. [[Recap/DoctorWhoS36E11WorldEnoughAndTime "World Enough and Time"]]/[[Recap/DoctorWhoS36E12TheDoctorFalls "The Doctor Falls"]] deals with the origin of a different set of Mondasian Cybermen in a similar way. Probably due to the overwhelming popularity of this particular story, Creator/StevenMoffat went out of his way to avoid contradicting it, instead directly acknowledging it ''and every other Cyberman
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* EvenEvilHasStandards
** Even Dodd thinks digging up graves to recycle what's in them is going too far.
** Doctorman Allan has only been selecting people who are likely to die anyway for conversion. She's shocked on hearing the Committee intends to convert the entire population.
** Commander Zheng helps kill the Cyber Planner when he realises it's prioritizing its own survival over the people of Mondas.
** Even Dodd thinks digging up graves to recycle what's in them is going too far.
** Doctorman Allan has only been selecting people who are likely to die anyway for conversion. She's shocked on hearing the Committee intends to convert the entire population.
** Commander Zheng helps kill the Cyber Planner when he realises it's prioritizing its own survival over the people of Mondas.
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* NobleDemon: Commander Zheng, who helps kill the Cyber Planner when he realises it's prioritizing its own survival over the people of Mondas. Unfortunately TheEndOrIsIt shows he intends recommence the plan to process everyone despite the Doctor having left notes for Doctorman Allan on how to find other solutions.
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* InexplicableCulturalTies: Mondas bears an unusually strong resemblance to Earth, even for a ''Doctor Who'' planet.
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* InexplicableCulturalTies: Mondas bears an unusually strong resemblance to Earth, particularly England, even for a ''Doctor Who'' planet.
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* TakeAThirdOption: Stuck between using their resources to save themselves or the population, the Committee decide to convert the entire population into Cybermen.
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* TakeAThirdOption: Stuck between using their resources to save themselves or the population, city, the Committee decide to convert the entire population into Cybermen.
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* BritsLoveTea: Even if they're HumanAliens. Mr. Hartley's response to every crisis is to [[CalmingTea put the kettle on]]...until the power goes out and he can no longer do so. At the end of the episode, Nyssa gives him a packet of genuine tea leaves as a parting gift (to the Doctor's annoyance as they were a gift to ''him'' from the Emperor of China).
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* DrinkBasedCharacterisation: Mr Hartley's response to every crisis is the put the kettle on...until the power goes out and he can no longer do so. At the end of the episode, Nyssa gives him a packet of genuine tea leaves as a parting gift (to the Doctor's annoyance as they were a gift to ''him'' from the Emperor of China).
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* TakeAThirdOption: Stuck between using their resources to save themselves or the population, the Committee decide to convert the entire population into Cybermen.