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* AnAesop: Lying doesn't earn you friends; it'll only make you feel guilty.
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* AnAesop:
** Don't get competitive when it comes to making money.
** When selling your produce, you're free to show pizzazz, as long as it's honest.
** Don't get competitive when it comes to making money.
** When selling your produce, you're free to show pizzazz, as long as it's honest.
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* WeWillMeetAgain: Chip vows he will get the Greens next time for getting his tooth chipped from the fake produce, exactly what Bill worried would happen.
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* WeWillMeetAgain: Chip vows he will get the Greens next time for getting his tooth chipped from the fake produce, exactly what Bill worried would happen.happen.
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* EstablishingCharacterMoment: When the Greens (and the audience) meet Chip for the first time, he's snapping his fingers at Bill demanding his attention; in many places snapping your fingers is considered rude, and is often a sign of abuse/bullying, doing that at school/at work/in a relationship. This should give you a hint about Chip's personality and how he's used to have his way. He assumes that the Greens are putting on a humble but quirky farmer act in order to garner sympathy sales. Then when he and Bill shake hands, he notices Bill's severed right index finger and gets noticeably disgusted. He tries to hide how grossed out he is in order to make Bill agree to sell his produce in his supermarket, but he can't stop looking at the finger and when the two stop shaking hands, he takes out a handkerchief and cleans his hand, like if he touched something that is dirty or poisonous. This should give you a hint about how vain he is and how much he values his looks.
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* EstablishingCharacterMoment: When the Greens (and the audience) meet Chip for the first time, he's snapping his fingers at Bill demanding his attention; in many places snapping your fingers is considered rude, and is often a sign of abuse/bullying, especially when doing that at school/at work/in work of when in you are in a relationship. This should give you a hint about Chip's personality and how he's used to have getting his way. He assumes that the Greens are putting on a humble but quirky farmer act in order to garner sympathy sales. Then Then, when he and Bill shake hands, he notices Bill's severed right index finger and gets noticeably disgusted. He tries to hide how grossed out he is in order to make Bill agree to sell his produce in his supermarket, but he can't stop looking at the finger and when the two stop shaking hands, he takes out a handkerchief and cleans his hand, like if he touched something that is dirty or poisonous. This should give you a hint about how vain he is and how much he values his looks.
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* CreateYourOwnVillain: Not only does the fake produce have horrible consequences for eating them, it also causes Chip Whistler to turn against the Greens.
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* CreateYourOwnVillain: Deconstructed. Not only does the fake produce have horrible consequences for eating them, it also causes Chip Whistler to turn against the Greens.Greens, but that was of his own accord as he outright ''ignored Cricket's warning not to eat it.''
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* AlliterativeTitle: '''S'''upermarked '''S'''candal.
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* AlliterativeTitle: '''S'''upermarked '''S'''upermarket '''S'''candal.
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* AbsenteeActor: Gramma doesn't appear in this nor the first segment, making her absent from both segments for the only time to date.
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* AbsenteeActor: Bill and Gramma are absent.
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* IdiotBall: Cricket has no excuse to not quickly grab the fake food out of Chip's hand to stop him from eating it.
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* CreateYourOwnVillain: Not only does the fake produce have horrible consequences for eating them, it also causes Chip Whistler to turn against the Greens.
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* AppleOfDiscord: In a literal case, Chip eats the 8-ball apple, which chips his tooth and turns him against the Greens for the sake of the fake food ruining his teeth. Naturally, this is exactly what Bill predicted what would happen if customers eat the fake food.
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* TorchesAndPitchforks: Cricket's ImagineSpot features angry customers using these against his family.
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* TorchesAndPitchforks: Cricket's ImagineSpot features angry customers using these against his family.family.
* WeWillMeetAgain: Chip vows he will get the Greens next time for getting his tooth chipped from the fake produce, exactly what Bill worried would happen.
* WeWillMeetAgain: Chip vows he will get the Greens next time for getting his tooth chipped from the fake produce, exactly what Bill worried would happen.
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-->'''Bill:''' Kids! Whaddya think will happen when people eat your fake food?!\\
'''Cricket:''' Uh...gee Dad, I don't know. You really think ten steps ahead.\\
'''Bill:''' At most, that's like ''two!''
-->'''Bill:''' Kids! Whaddya think will happen when people eat your fake food?!\\
'''Cricket:''' Uh...gee Dad, I don't know. You really think ten steps ahead.\\
'''Bill:''' At most, that's like ''two!''
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* EstablishingCharacterMoment: When the Greens (and the audience) meet Chip for the first time, he's snapping his fingers at Bill demanding his attention, in many places snapping your fingers is considered rude, and is often a sign of abuse/bullying, doing that at school/at work/in a relationship, this should give you a hint about Chip's personality and how he's used to have his way. He assumes that the Greens are putting on a humble but quirky farmer act in order to garner sympathy sales. Then when he and Bill shake hands, he notices Bill's severed right index finger and gets noticeably disgusted. He tries to hide how grossed out he is in order to make Bill agree to sell his produce in his supermarket, but he can't stop looking at the finger and when the two stop shaking hands, he takes out a handkerchief and cleans his hand, like if he touched something that is dirty or poisonous. This should give you a hint about how vain he is and how much he values his looks.
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* EstablishingCharacterMoment: When the Greens (and the audience) meet Chip for the first time, he's snapping his fingers at Bill demanding his attention, attention; in many places snapping your fingers is considered rude, and is often a sign of abuse/bullying, doing that at school/at work/in a relationship, this relationship. This should give you a hint about Chip's personality and how he's used to have his way. He assumes that the Greens are putting on a humble but quirky farmer act in order to garner sympathy sales. Then when he and Bill shake hands, he notices Bill's severed right index finger and gets noticeably disgusted. He tries to hide how grossed out he is in order to make Bill agree to sell his produce in his supermarket, but he can't stop looking at the finger and when the two stop shaking hands, he takes out a handkerchief and cleans his hand, like if he touched something that is dirty or poisonous. This should give you a hint about how vain he is and how much he values his looks.
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* EstablishingCharacterMoment: When the Greens (and the audience) meet Chip for the first time, he's snapping his fingers at Bill demanding his attention, in many places snapping your fingers is considered rude, and is often a sign of abuse/bullying, doing that at school/at work/in a relationship, this should give you a hint about Chip's personality and how he's used to have his way. He assumes that the Greens are putting on a humble but quirky farmer act in order to garner sympathy sales. Then when he and Bill shake hands he notices Bill's severed right index finger and gets noticeably disgusted. He tries to hide how grossed out he is in order to make Bill agree to sell his produce in his supermarket, but he can't stop looking at the finger and when the two stop shaking hands, he takes out a handkerchief and cleans his hand, like if he touched something that is dirty or poisonous. This should give you a hint about how vain he is and how much he values his looks.
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* EstablishingCharacterMoment: When the Greens (and the audience) meet Chip for the first time, he's snapping his fingers at Bill demanding his attention, in many places snapping your fingers is considered rude, and is often a sign of abuse/bullying, doing that at school/at work/in a relationship, this should give you a hint about Chip's personality and how he's used to have his way. He assumes that the Greens are putting on a humble but quirky farmer act in order to garner sympathy sales. Then when he and Bill shake hands hands, he notices Bill's severed right index finger and gets noticeably disgusted. He tries to hide how grossed out he is in order to make Bill agree to sell his produce in his supermarket, but he can't stop looking at the finger and when the two stop shaking hands, he takes out a handkerchief and cleans his hand, like if he touched something that is dirty or poisonous. This should give you a hint about how vain he is and how much he values his looks.
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* EstablishingCharacterMoment: When the Greens (and the audience) meet Chip for the first time, he's snapping his fingers at Bill demanding his attention, in many places snapping your fingers is considered rude, and is often a sign of abuse/bullying, doing that at school/at work/in a relationship, this should give you a hint about Chip's personality and how he's used to have his way. He assumes that the Greens are putting on a humble but quirky farmer act in order to garner sympathy sales. Then when he and Bill shake hands he notices Bill's severed right index finger and gets noticeably disgusted. He tries to hide how grossed he is in order to make Bill agree to sell his produce in his supermarket, but he can't stop looking at the finger and when the two stop shaking hands, he takes out a handkerchief and cleans his hand, like if he touched something that is dirty or poisonous. This should give you a hint about how vain he is and how much he values his looks.
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* EstablishingCharacterMoment: When the Greens (and the audience) meet Chip for the first time, he's snapping his fingers at Bill demanding his attention, in many places snapping your fingers is considered rude, and is often a sign of abuse/bullying, doing that at school/at work/in a relationship, this should give you a hint about Chip's personality and how he's used to have his way. He assumes that the Greens are putting on a humble but quirky farmer act in order to garner sympathy sales. Then when he and Bill shake hands he notices Bill's severed right index finger and gets noticeably disgusted. He tries to hide how grossed out he is in order to make Bill agree to sell his produce in his supermarket, but he can't stop looking at the finger and when the two stop shaking hands, he takes out a handkerchief and cleans his hand, like if he touched something that is dirty or poisonous. This should give you a hint about how vain he is and how much he values his looks.
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* EstablishingCharacterMoment: When the Greens (and the audience) meet Chip for the first time, he's snapping his fingers at Bill demanding his attention, in many places snapping your fingers is considered rude, and is often a sign of abuse/bullying, doing that at school/at work/in a relationship, this should give you a hint about Chip's personality and how he's used to have his way. He assumes that the Greens are putting on a humble but quirky farmer act in order to garner sympathy sales. Then when he and Bill shake hands he notices Bill's severed finger and gets noticeably disgusted, he tries to hide how grossed he is in order to make Bill agree to sell his produce in his supermarket, but he can't stop looking at Bill's right hand and when the two stop shaking fingers, he takes off a handkerchief and cleans his hand, like if he touched something that is dirty or poisonous, this should give you a hint about how vain he is and how much he values his looks.
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* EstablishingCharacterMoment: When the Greens (and the audience) meet Chip for the first time, he's snapping his fingers at Bill demanding his attention, in many places snapping your fingers is considered rude, and is often a sign of abuse/bullying, doing that at school/at work/in a relationship, this should give you a hint about Chip's personality and how he's used to have his way. He assumes that the Greens are putting on a humble but quirky farmer act in order to garner sympathy sales. Then when he and Bill shake hands he notices Bill's severed right index finger and gets noticeably disgusted, he disgusted. He tries to hide how grossed he is in order to make Bill agree to sell his produce in his supermarket, but he can't stop looking at Bill's right hand the finger and when the two stop shaking fingers, hands, he takes off out a handkerchief and cleans his hand, like if he touched something that is dirty or poisonous, this poisonous. This should give you a hint about how vain he is and how much he values his looks.
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* EstablishingCharacterMoment: When the Greens (and the audience) meet Chip for the first time, he's snapping his fingers at Bill demanding his attention, in many places snapping your fingers is considered rude, and is often a sign of abuse/bullying, doing that at school/at work/in a relationship, this should give you a hint about Chip's personality and how he's used to have his way. Then when he and Bill shake hands he notices Bill's severed finger and gets noticeably disgusted, he tries to hide how grossed he is in order to make Bill agree to sell his produce in his supermarket, but he can't stop seeing Bill's right hand and when the two stop shaking fingers, he takes off a handkerchief and cleans his hand, like if he touched something that is dirty or poisonous, this should give you a hint about how vain he is and how much he values his looks.
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* EstablishingCharacterMoment: When the Greens (and the audience) meet Chip for the first time, he's snapping his fingers at Bill demanding his attention, in many places snapping your fingers is considered rude, and is often a sign of abuse/bullying, doing that at school/at work/in a relationship, this should give you a hint about Chip's personality and how he's used to have his way. He assumes that the Greens are putting on a humble but quirky farmer act in order to garner sympathy sales. Then when he and Bill shake hands he notices Bill's severed finger and gets noticeably disgusted, he tries to hide how grossed he is in order to make Bill agree to sell his produce in his supermarket, but he can't stop seeing looking at Bill's right hand and when the two stop shaking fingers, he takes off a handkerchief and cleans his hand, like if he touched something that is dirty or poisonous, this should give you a hint about how vain he is and how much he values his looks.
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* CerebusRollercoaster: Due to the introduction of Chip Whistler this episode and given his words to the Greens in the end, it's the moment the series will start to become serious on occasion, usually whenever Chip shows up.
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* NoGoodDeedGoesUnpunished: The kids manage to sell out all the vegetables and fill the order, with fake produce spliced in-between, but they are forced to buy it all back when Bill reveals the disastrous consequences of eating the fake produce, and lose all the money because of it.
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* BookEnds: The episode starts and ends with Tilly watching Cricket go off to play with Remy.
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* LiarRevealed: When Andromeda is in danger, Tilly is forced to reveal she lied about the gargoyles just to make friends with her, leaving her disappointed.
* SurprisinglyHappyEnding: At first it seems Tilly doesn't get a friend, but then she gets a letter from Andromeda apologizing for ditching her and inviting her on a new theory, revealing she won her indeed.
* OnlyKnownByTheirNickname: Implied. Andromeda shushes herself before writing down her name for Tilly; when Tilly asks if that's her real name, she says "Yesssss" while shaking her head.
* SurprisinglyHappyEnding: At first it seems Tilly doesn't get a friend, but then she gets a letter from Andromeda apologizing for ditching her and inviting her on a new theory, revealing she won her indeed.
* OnlyKnownByTheirNickname: Implied. Andromeda shushes herself before writing down her name for Tilly; when Tilly asks if that's her real name, she says "Yesssss" while shaking her head.
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Cricket tries to get a big profit by selling fake food to a supermarket, unaware of the horrible consequences that lay ahead of him.
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When the Greens open their vegetable stand at the Farmer's Market, Cricket tries to get a big profit by selling fake food to a supermarket, unaware of the horrible consequences that lay ahead of him.
