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* EarnYourHappyEnding: Nanny lived the better part of her life with regret that her daughter died with no one to call help for, and she had to put up with her nasty charge Beth. But after Amanda reunites her with her ghost daughter, the two [[AscendToAHigherPlaneOfExistence go on to the afterlife]] where they can be together as mother and daughter once more.
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* EarnYourHappyEnding: EarnYourHappyEnding:
** Nanny lived the better part of her life with regret that her daughter died with no one to call help for, and she had to put up with her nasty charge Beth. But after Amanda reunites her with her ghost daughter, the two [[AscendToAHigherPlaneOfExistence go on to the afterlife]] where they can be together as mother and daughter oncemore.more.
** Likewise, Amanda gains new friends from the experience, and her cousin Beth is no longer top dog of the group. After putting up with her cousin's cruelty, Amanda gets to spend the best summer of her life.
** Nanny lived the better part of her life with regret that her daughter died with no one to call help for, and she had to put up with her nasty charge Beth. But after Amanda reunites her with her ghost daughter, the two [[AscendToAHigherPlaneOfExistence go on to the afterlife]] where they can be together as mother and daughter once
** Likewise, Amanda gains new friends from the experience, and her cousin Beth is no longer top dog of the group. After putting up with her cousin's cruelty, Amanda gets to spend the best summer of her life.
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* LaserGuidedKarma: For her nasty attitude towards everyone who puts up with her, Beth recieves her just desserts in perfect HumiliationConga fashion. First, the ghost has Beth lured and trapped in the mirror. Later, she's back in the real world but now stuck in the closet, leaving her at Amanda's mercy. Finally, Amanda joins with Beth's bullied friends to make her promise to stop bullying them all. It's implied that Beth's friends are now Amanda's friends, and they only let Beth hang out on a whim.
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* LaserGuidedKarma: For her nasty attitude towards everyone who puts up with her, Beth recieves receives her just desserts in perfect HumiliationConga fashion. First, the ghost has Beth lured and trapped in the mirror. Later, she's back in the real world but now stuck in the closet, leaving her at Amanda's mercy. Finally, Amanda joins with Beth's bullied friends to make her promise to stop bullying them all. It's implied that Beth's friends are now Amanda's friends, and they only let Beth hang out on a whim.
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* NiceToTheWaiter: Whilst Amanda does Beth's laundry, Nanny offers to do it in her stead and even promises to keep it a secret, knowing full well Beth forbade their interaction.
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* NiceToTheWaiter: Whilst Amanda does Beth's laundry, Nanny offers to do it in her stead and even promises to keep it a secret, knowing full well Beth forbade their interaction.
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* AdultFear: Disappearance of a child.
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Alone in the darkened woods, Kristen is surprised by David, who hands her a birthday present for next week. By the campfire, Eric throws pieces of popcorn and catches them in his mouth. He gets a nasty fright when Frank sneakily pours in some water. Tonight, David has a story of two kids who don't get along - and a love that transcends the grave. Submitted for the approval of the Midnight Society, he calls this story “The Tale of the Lonely Ghost.”
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Alone in the darkened woods, Kristen is surprised by David, who hands her a birthday present for next week. By the campfire, Eric throws pieces of popcorn and catches them in his mouth. He gets a nasty fright when Frank sneakily pours in some water. Tonight, David has a story of two kids who don't get along - and a love that transcends the grave. Submitted for the approval of the Midnight Society, he calls this story “The "The Tale of the Lonely Ghost.”
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Beth, still trapped in the phantom reflection, wanders back into view. The phantom reflection fades, taking Beth with it. Amanda approaches the mirror, which once more reflects the room’s disused state. Now from inside the wardrobe, Beth calls for help. On Beth's agreement not to boss around Amanda or Beth's friends, Amanda lets her out
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After the others disperse, Kristen opens her present from David - a locket, like in the story. Delighted, she kisses him on the cheek, and they run to catch up with the others.
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After the others disperse, Kristen opens her present from David - a locket, like in the story. Delighted, she kisses him on the cheek, and they run to catch up with the others.
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Beth, still trapped in the phantom reflection, wanders back into view. The phantom reflection fades, taking Beth with it. Amanda approaches the mirror, which once more reflects the room’s disused state. Now from inside the wardrobe, Beth calls for help. On Beth's agreement not to boss around Amanda or Beth's friends, Amanda lets her out
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After the others disperse, Kristen opens her present from David - a locket, like in the story. Delighted, she kisses him on the cheek, and they run to catch up with the others.
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After the others disperse, Kristen opens her present from David - a locket, like in the story. Delighted, she kisses him on the cheek, and they run to catch up with the others.
After the others disperse, Kristen opens her present from David - a locket, like in the story. Delighted, she kisses him on the cheek, and they run to catch up with the others.
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* BullyBrutality: “Some mean kids” chased the mute child home, locked her in her bedroom, and left her there. Unable to call for help, she died.
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* BullyBrutality: “Some "Some mean kids” kids" chased the mute child home, locked her in her bedroom, and left her there. Unable to call for help, she died.
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* AlphaBitch: Beth is spiteful and vindictive to anyone who’ll put up with it
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* AlphaBitch: Beth is spiteful and vindictive to anyone who’ll put up with itit.
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* AlphaBitch: Beth is spiteful and vindictive to anyone who’ll put up with it
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* TheBully: Beth is spiteful and vindictive to anyone who’ll put up with it.
