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* HomeBase: The Alpha Squadron's team base is widen in the forest with moat surrounding it and a draw bridge for a door.
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* HomeBase: The Alpha Squadron's team base is widen hidden in the forest with moat surrounding it and a draw bridge for a door.
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* PlayingWithFire: Cody's Quirk "Flame" lets him morph his body parts into fire and launch {{Fireballs}} or be used as a flamethrower.
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* PlayingWithFire: Cody's Quirk "Flame" lets him morph his body parts into fire and launch {{Fireballs}} or be used as a deadly flamethrower.
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* VillainHasApoint: Luz acknowledges and hates this aspect of Shigaraki.
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* ClothingDamage: Stanley only receives a singed shirt and pants from Cody's fire attacks thanks to his Shock Absorption.
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* ClothingDamage: Stanley only receives a singed shirt and pants from Cody's fire attacks thanks to his Shock Absorption.Absorption Quirk.
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* NukeEm: The Governor plans to do this to Luz if his project suceeds.
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* NukeEm: The Governor plans to do this to Luz if his project suceeds.succeeds.
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* StarterVillain: Cody'ss first superhuman enemy Luz fights and has her team back her up.
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* StarterVillain: Cody'ss Cody's first superhuman enemy Luz fights and has her team back her up.
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* ShoutOut: * Cody Johnson's Quirk "[[PlayingWithFire Flame]]" is based on [[Manga/OnePiece Portgas D. Ace's Flame-Flame Devil Fruit]] allowing him to create, control and transform into fire.
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* ShoutOut: * Cody Johnson's Quirk "[[PlayingWithFire Flame]]" is based on [[Manga/OnePiece on Portgas D. Ace's Flame-Flame Devil Fruit]] Fruit from ''Manga/OnePiece'', allowing him to create, control and transform into fire.
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* ShoutOut: * Cody Johnson's Quirk "[[PlayingWithFire Flame]]" is based on [[Manga/OnePiece Portgas D. Ace's Flame-Flame Devil Fruit]] allowing him to create, control and transform into fire.
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* DetectivesFollowFootprints: While not a detective, Cody claims he found the Alpha Squadron by following their footsteps.
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* DetectivesFollowFootprints: While not a detective, Cody Johnson claims he found the Alpha Squadron by following their footsteps.
* NukeEm: The Governor plans to do this to Luz if his project suceeds.
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* PungeonMaster: Downplayed. Cody states to the enemy team they're toast as he launches a pillar of fire towards Jean.
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* PungeonMaster: Downplayed. Cody states to the enemy team Alpha Squadron that they're toast as he launches a pillar of fire towards Jean.
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* AssKickingPose: Luz and her scouts do this at the climax of the chapter by summoning their Quirks before taking on Cody.
* ClothingDamage: Stanley only receives a singed shirt and pants from Cody's fire attacks thanks to his Shock Absorption.
* CreepyBlueEyes: Like Stanley, Cody has blue eyes. Unlike Stanley he's a bad guy.
* DetectivesFollowFootprints: While not a detective, Cody claims he found the Alpha Squadron by following their footsteps.
* DetectivesFollowFootprints: While not a detective, Cody claims he found the Alpha Squadron by following their footsteps.
* EvilRedHead: Cody has deep orange hair and attacks Luz's team with intent to kill.
* PlayingWithFire: Cody's Quirk "Flame" lets him morph his body parts into fire and launch {{Fireballs}} or be used as a flamethrower.
* PungeonMaster: Downplayed. Cody states to the enemy team they're toast as he launches a pillar of fire towards Jean.
* SayMyName: Luz screams Stanley's name as takes full blast of Cody's attack. He's fine, by the way.
* StarterVillain: Cody'ss first superhuman enemy Luz fights and has her team back her up.
* SarcasticClapping: Cody does this when Jean points out he's an enemy calling him a smarty.
* StarterVillain: Cody'ss first superhuman enemy Luz fights and has her team back her up.
* SarcasticClapping: Cody does this when Jean points out he's an enemy calling him a smarty.
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* TakingTheBullet: As the rest of the team scatter away from Cody's [[PlayingWithFire flamethrower attack]], Stanley pushes one of his comrades who couldn't get away from the flames and takes the full blast... only to NoSell it being no worse for wear due to his SuperToughness.
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* TakeCover: Luz tells her team to scatter as Cody attcks them.
* TakingTheBullet: As the rest of the team scatter away from Cody's [[PlayingWithFire flamethrower attack]], Stanley pushesone of his comrades Jean, who couldn't get away from the flames flames, and takes the full blast... only to NoSell it being no worse for wear due to his SuperToughness.
* TakingTheBullet: As the rest of the team scatter away from Cody's [[PlayingWithFire flamethrower attack]], Stanley pushes
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* TheBigGuy: Stanley is described as having massive muscles large enough to make some professional bodybuilders cry. Its mentioned he can punch hard despite not having SuperStrength.
* {{Fireballs}}: Cody introduces himself to Alpha Squadron by firing a massive one of these at them.
* InnocentBlueEyes: Stanley is described as having blue eyes and is a NiceGuy.
* InternalReveal: Luz reveals to her team that her Quirk can give powers others, as well and could potentially turn someone brain-dead. They take this better than she expected.
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* SuperSoldier: Maxwell notes while he ''could'' make Luz into the perfect super soldier after she steals all the Quirks in the area as another easy alternative to get her out of the way, rather than just have her killed.
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* StunnedSilence Luz's scouts are left in shocked silence when she reveals her Quirk could potentially be a TouchOfDeath power.
* SuperSoldier: Maxwell notes while he ''could'' make Luz into the perfect super soldier after she steals all the Quirks in the area as another easy alternative to get her out of the way, but he'd rather than just have herkilled.killed after he pulls a YouHaveOutLivedYourUsefulness on Luz.
* SuperSoldier: Maxwell notes while he ''could'' make Luz into the perfect super soldier after she steals all the Quirks in the area as another easy alternative to get her out of the way, but he'd rather than just have her
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* WhatTheHellHero: Downplayed. Stanley briefly calls out Luz for using her PowerParasite Quirk on Julia at the risk of causing her brain damage. Luckily, after Luz explains to him that she informed Julia beforehand and it was consensual he accepts it.
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* AreWeThereYet: Ronny whines this to his team as they search for supplies in the scorching heat. Judy threatens to hurt him with her Quirk if he doesn't stop complaining, but luckily Luz breaks up the fight before it begin to get physical.
* DontGoInTheWoods: Luz, seeing too many horror movies based in the woods, views the forest she and her team in as this, despite it being beautiful. Though this case its enemy teams in a Death Game to be worried about.
* ExposedToTheElements: Inverted and Defied. Luz and were being beat down by the 45 degrees summer heat, with Judy seemingly to had it the worst, wearing a thick leather jacket. Though Luz, being more used to the hot summers, is least affected.
* ExposedToTheElements: Inverted and Defied. Luz and were being beat down by the 45 degrees summer heat, with Judy seemingly to had it the worst, wearing a thick leather jacket. Though Luz, being more used to the hot summers, is least affected.
* TheGambler: The Governor sees himself as one, with him creating the Death Camp being his biggest gamble.
* MirthlessLaughter: Luz gives a nervous chuckle as she tried to stop a fight breaking out between a heat-stressed Ronny and Judy.
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* SuperSolider: Maxwell notes while he ''could'' make Luz into the perfect super soldier after she steals all the Quirks in the area as another easy alternative to get her out of the way, rather than just have her killed.
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* SuperSolider: SuperSoldier: Maxwell notes while he ''could'' make Luz into the perfect super soldier after she steals all the Quirks in the area as another easy alternative to get her out of the way, rather than just have her killed.
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* FantasticRacism: As far as Rodger Maxwell is concerned, the fewer of these superhujman "freaks" that existed, the better.
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* FantasticRacism: As far as Rodger Maxwell is concerned, the fewer of these superhujman superhuman "freaks" that existed, the better.better. He also refers to Luz as the "parasite".
* {{Greed}}: Exploited. Maxwell also adds the incentive of a bigger cash prize of $1.1 Billion for Heaven's Devils and Foxtrot to pull an EnemyMine on the Alpha Squadron. [[ILied Not that he had any intention on paying up.]]
* {{Hypocrite}}: Governor Maxwell believes no one person should have that so power, despite a Governor of a State who regularly abuses his lately.
* IndyPloy: The Governor admits that the Death Camp he arranged is a half-baked plan. This was all sprung at him with no sudden warning, including Luz’s power. This whole thing was slapped together in a matter of hours.
* IndyPloy: The Governor admits that the Death Camp he arranged is a half-baked plan. This was all sprung at him with no sudden warning, including Luz’s power. This whole thing was slapped together in a matter of hours.
* KickTheDog: The Governor doesn’t plan to give the kids back to their parents. He plans to make the [[ForcedIntoEvil camp counsellor]] lie and say that some tragedy occurred and they all died.
* KidsAreCruel: Governor Maxwell has this opinion on children.
--> ''Kids were greedy like that. Money was money was money. Kids didn’t care the amount, pay’em and they’d do it. Morals? Who needs’em when you can be a billionaire? Rights? Pfft! What do human rights have to do with them getting rich?''
* LeaveNoSurvivors: If the first round of intimidation when he rounded the superpowered teens all hadn’t worked, then the governor's Plan B would’ve just had to kill them all outright. Though he admits this would create new problems for himself.
* KidsAreCruel: Governor Maxwell has this opinion on children.
--> ''Kids were greedy like that. Money was money was money. Kids didn’t care the amount, pay’em and they’d do it. Morals? Who needs’em when you can be a billionaire? Rights? Pfft! What do human rights have to do with them getting rich?''
* LeaveNoSurvivors: If the first round of intimidation when he rounded the superpowered teens all hadn’t worked, then the governor's Plan B would’ve just had to kill them all outright. Though he admits this would create new problems for himself.
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* ManipualtiveBastard: The governor plans to set something up between the 3 groups that would cause a massive fight to ensue, and once it was done, introduce Luz to the situation, in where then she could take the powers from the fallen, and kill the rest of the stragglers after taking their powers, then rinse repeat until there were no more left in his State.
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* ManipualtiveBastard: ManipulativeBastard: The governor plans to set something up between the 3 groups that would cause a massive fight to ensue, and once it was done, introduce Luz to the situation, in where then she could take the powers from the fallen, and kill the rest of the stragglers after taking their powers, then rinse repeat until there were no more left in his State.
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* FantasticRacism: As far as Rodger Maxwell is concerned, the fewer of these superhujman "freaks" that existed, the better.
* ManipualtiveBastard: The governor plans to set something up between the 3 groups that would cause a massive fight to ensue, and once it was done, introduce Luz to the situation, in where then she could take the powers from the fallen, and kill the rest of the stragglers after taking their powers, then rinse repeat until there were no more left in his State.
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* TheReveal: In Maxwell's POV, its reveals his Death Camp wasn't sanctioned by the government and is running it illegally out of fear and FantasticRacism. He also plans to make Luz [[PowerParasite take all of the powers]] of those in Connecticut while contained in the forest, before then bombing the area with Luz inside.
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* PoliticallyIncorrectVillain: Rodger's main motivation for putting 33 superpowered kids into a Battle Royale-style DeadlyGame is so that he can get rid of those with superpowers, due to his personal disdain for them. He is very open about his hatred for them while thinking over his plans for the future, that being making Luz take all of the powers of those in Connecticut while contained in the forest, before then bombing the area with Luz inside; all because of his disdain for superpowers.
* TheReveal: In Maxwell's POV, its reveals his Death Camp wasn't sanctioned by the government and is running it illegally out of fear andFantasticRacism.FantasticRacism, as a test run. He also plans to make Luz [[PowerParasite take all of the powers]] of those in Connecticut while contained in the forest, before then bombing the area with Luz inside.
* TheReveal: In Maxwell's POV, its reveals his Death Camp wasn't sanctioned by the government and is running it illegally out of fear and
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* VillainTakesAnInterest: Governor Rodger Maxwell readjusts his plans as soon as he witnesses Luz use [[PowerParasite All For One]] viewing her as the perfect solution to contain the [[MassSuperEmpoweringEvent power boom]] that occurred which is leaving the government in shambles.
* WellIntentionedExtremist: The governor tries to present himself as this, explain his motive for kidnapping 33 superpowered children to contain the power outbreak. [[NotSoWellIntentionedExtremist Though its clear he's just making excuses for his bigotry and fear for his position of power in jepordy.]]
* WellIntentionedExtremist: The governor tries to present himself as this, explain his motive for kidnapping 33 superpowered children to contain the power outbreak. [[NotSoWellIntentionedExtremist Though its clear he's just making excuses for his bigotry and fear for his position of power in jepordy.]]
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* BlatantLies: He promised to keep the winning team alive and give them billions, when he had no plans on letting them any of them live. He also claims he didn't legally kidnap them, when he obviously did.
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* FinalSolution: His EvilPlan is to try and wipe all superhumans from his state out of FantasticRacism.
* {{Foreshadowing}}: Governor Maxwell notes that Luz's PowerParasite Quirk either had no limit, or there was one, and she just hadn’t reached it yet.
* {{Foreshadowing}}: Governor Maxwell notes that Luz's PowerParasite Quirk either had no limit, or there was one, and she just hadn’t reached it yet.
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* HomeBase: The Alpha Squadron's team base is widen in the forest with moat surrounding it and a draw bridge for a door.
* HumansAreTheRealMonsters: In a story that has superhumans, Rodger Maxell a state governor is Luz's most despicable villain so far.
* HumansAreTheRealMonsters: In a story that has superhumans, Rodger Maxell a state governor is Luz's most despicable villain so far.
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* LetsSplitUpGang: One half the team; which includes [[PowerParasite Luz]], [[BladeBelowTheShoulder Jean]], [[SuperStrength Ronny]], [[SuperToughness Stanley]], and [[CastingAShadow Judy]] goes out to get supplies. The other half stays behind to guard their base.
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* BilingualBonus: Jean sometimes speaks French. Translations below.
** Tu vois ''(You see)''.
** Tu vois ''(You see)''.
* GratuitousFrench: Jean at one point speaks in French.
* ItCantBeHelped: Luz notices her NervesOfSteel team seems to have this attitude towards their situation now.
--> '' Everyone seemed so… happy? No, not happy. No one here was'' happy. ''They were doing what it was that anyone in this situation would do. Coping. Coping at the fact that their families threw them away, unaware that they would be subjected to this. [[CommonalityConnection But even so, the act of throwing them away, it was something everyone here could at least relate to.]] They were doing the best that they could. And if moving forward was what would distract them from the truth, then she’d go along with it.''
* NiceGuy: Ronny was genuinely concerned about Luz's wellbeing after her talk with All For One.
--> '' Everyone seemed so… happy? No, not happy. No one here was'' happy. ''They were doing what it was that anyone in this situation would do. Coping. Coping at the fact that their families threw them away, unaware that they would be subjected to this. [[CommonalityConnection But even so, the act of throwing them away, it was something everyone here could at least relate to.]] They were doing the best that they could. And if moving forward was what would distract them from the truth, then she’d go along with it.''
* NiceGuy: Ronny was genuinely concerned about Luz's wellbeing after her talk with All For One.
* ThouShallNotKill: No one on Alpha Squadron wanted to even think about the prospect of spilling someone else’s blood, despite being in a DeadlyGame. They agree only to do so when there are no other options.
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--> ''She hated how he was right about damn near everything he said. Wake-up call after wake-up call was something that [Luz] was used to, but not with the [[BrutalHonesty bluntness that Shigaraki provided]]. Most people danced around every subject, but Shigaraki didn’t. [[HannibalLecture He went straight to the heart of the problem and ripped the bandage off with a pair of pliers each and every time]]. First, it was about using [[PowerParasite her power]], then it was about the [[FantasticRacism reality of the situation she was in]], and recently it was about [[ParentsAsPeople her mother and her actions]].''
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--> ''She hated how he was right about damn near everything he said. Wake-up call after wake-up call was something that [Luz] was used to, but not with the [[BrutalHonesty bluntness that Shigaraki provided]]. Most people danced around every subject, but Shigaraki didn’t. [[HannibalLecture He went straight to the heart of the problem and ripped the bandage off with a pair of pliers each and every time]]. First, it was about using [[PowerParasite her power]], then it was about the [[FantasticRacism reality of the situation she was in]], and recently it was about [[ParentsAsPeople her mother and her actions]].''''
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!!This chapter contains examples of:
* BringIt: After he tanks Cody's attack, Stanley proceeds to laugh, start KnuckleCracking and give a wordless look that says this, which encourages his teammates that they could take on their attacker working together.
* ConvenientlyAnOrphan: Ronny Armstrong sees himself as this.
* EyesAlwaysAverted: Luz notes that making eye contact with anyone was hard enough for herself as it was when she's in a good mood, let alone when she's upset.
* InnocentlyInsensitive: Ronny, one of Luz's teammates, makes a joke to Luz that their parents must hate them if they sent them here to some shoddy education camp. A depressed Luz, who Shigaraki put in her head that Camila is a ResentfulGuardian, says he might be right, making the boy grimace and immediately takes it back telling her not to take him seriously.
* TheReveal: In Maxwell's POV, its reveals his Death Camp wasn't sanctioned by the government and is running it illegally out of fear and FantasticRacism. He also plans to make Luz [[PowerParasite take all of the powers]] of those in Connecticut while contained in the forest, before then bombing the area with Luz inside.
* TakingTheBullet: As the rest of the team scatter away from Cody's [[PlayingWithFire flamethrower attack]], Stanley pushes one of his comrades who couldn't get away from the flames and takes the full blast... only to NoSell it being no worse for wear due to his SuperToughness.
* TryingNotToCry: Luz does this when she thinks back on Shigaraki's words not wanting to believe the idea that her mother was glad that she was out of her hair.
* VillainHasApoint: Luz acknowledges and hates this aspect of Shigaraki.
--> ''She hated how he was right about damn near everything he said. Wake-up call after wake-up call was something that [Luz] was used to, but not with the [[BrutalHonesty bluntness that Shigaraki provided]]. Most people danced around every subject, but Shigaraki didn’t. [[HannibalLecture He went straight to the heart of the problem and ripped the bandage off with a pair of pliers each and every time]]. First, it was about using [[PowerParasite her power]], then it was about the [[FantasticRacism reality of the situation she was in]], and recently it was about [[ParentsAsPeople her mother and her actions]].''
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!!This chapter contains examples of:
* BringIt: After he tanks Cody's attack, Stanley proceeds to laugh, start KnuckleCracking and give a wordless look that says this, which encourages his teammates that they could take on their attacker working together.
* ConvenientlyAnOrphan: Ronny Armstrong sees himself as this.
* EyesAlwaysAverted: Luz notes that making eye contact with anyone was hard enough for herself as it was when she's in a good mood, let alone when she's upset.
* InnocentlyInsensitive: Ronny, one of Luz's teammates, makes a joke to Luz that their parents must hate them if they sent them here to some shoddy education camp. A depressed Luz, who Shigaraki put in her head that Camila is a ResentfulGuardian, says he might be right, making the boy grimace and immediately takes it back telling her not to take him seriously.
* TheReveal: In Maxwell's POV, its reveals his Death Camp wasn't sanctioned by the government and is running it illegally out of fear and FantasticRacism. He also plans to make Luz [[PowerParasite take all of the powers]] of those in Connecticut while contained in the forest, before then bombing the area with Luz inside.
* TakingTheBullet: As the rest of the team scatter away from Cody's [[PlayingWithFire flamethrower attack]], Stanley pushes one of his comrades who couldn't get away from the flames and takes the full blast... only to NoSell it being no worse for wear due to his SuperToughness.
* TryingNotToCry: Luz does this when she thinks back on Shigaraki's words not wanting to believe the idea that her mother was glad that she was out of her hair.
* VillainHasApoint: Luz acknowledges and hates this aspect of Shigaraki.
--> ''She hated how he was right about damn near everything he said. Wake-up call after wake-up call was something that [Luz] was used to, but not with the [[BrutalHonesty bluntness that Shigaraki provided]]. Most people danced around every subject, but Shigaraki didn’t. [[HannibalLecture He went straight to the heart of the problem and ripped the bandage off with a pair of pliers each and every time]]. First, it was about using [[PowerParasite her power]], then it was about the [[FantasticRacism reality of the situation she was in]], and recently it was about [[ParentsAsPeople her mother and her actions]].''
