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-> ''"Uh… who are you?"''
-> ''"Ah, you'll learn that in due time, my dear Luz. For now, take a seat. We have much to discuss and so little time in which to do so."''
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-->[-Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn: [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/42252129/chapters/106397982 HERE]]-]
-> ''"Uh… who are you?"''
-> ''"Ah, you'll learn that in due time, my dear Luz. For now, take a seat. We have much to discuss and so little time in which to do so."''
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* FrenchJerk; Averted. Jean Pierre is of French descent but is a decent enough guy.
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* BlankWhiteVoid: Luz's dreamscape is this, except its black.
* DarkIsEvil: All For One wears dark clothes, exists in the dark void of Luz's MentalWorld, and was the most powerful villain in his world.
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* LuminescentBlush: Luz has this when she realises she just hugged Julia without asking and apologises. Luckily, for her Julia doesn't mind at all.
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* SharpDressedMan: All For One is described as wearing a black two-piece business suit not too dissimilar to what the Governor wears.
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* WhamEpisode: At the end of the chapter, Luz meets All For One himself, her Quirk's predecessor, in her MentalWorld after she fell asleep and he ''knows'' her name. There’s no way Luz is prepared to have that manipulative monster in her mind, the way he was with Tomura in canon.
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* AmbiguouslyBrown: Stanley Stanley, Theodore and Ronny have tan skin but there's no indication what their ethnicity is.
* FrenchJerK; Averted. Jean Pierre is of French descent but is a decent enough guy.
* TheGlomp: Luz does this to Julia when thanking her for offering to be her NumberTwo.
* TheGlomp: Luz does this to Julia when thanking her for offering to be her NumberTwo.
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* RambunctiousItalian: Inverted. Marcone Giovanni is of Italian descent but has a more composed demeanor.
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* YouGotGuts: Stanley has this opinion on Luz for admitting that's she's ''super'' nervous to actually be leading a team, but will try her best to be a good leader. He tells her made the right call joining her.
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* CampfireCharacterExploration: Luz and her team introduce and start to get to know each other around the camp fire outside their base.
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* TheLeader: Their names chosen at random, Luz Noceda, Kennedy Jennkins and Emilia Worstoch are the team leaders of The Alpha Squadron, Heaven's Devils and Foxtrot, respectively.
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* NonconformistDyedHair: Judy Valentina has dyed half-pink and half-brown hair.
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* ShortTeensTallAdults: Governor Rodger Maxwell is over 6 ft. tall, one of Luz's teammates, Arla Thatcher, is around 4 ft. tall.
* ShoutOut: The Alpha Squadron flag is based on the FBI flag from ''VideoGame/CallOfDutyBlackOpsII''.
* ShoutOut: The Alpha Squadron flag is based on the FBI flag from ''VideoGame/CallOfDutyBlackOpsII''.
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* UnwittingInstigatorOfDoom: Camila may have been the one to send Luz to Summer Camp, but notes she knew nothing about it being turned into a Death Camp.
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* AmbiguouslyBrown: Stanley has tan skin but there's no indication what his ethnicity is.
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** Oh, Dios mío! ''(Oh my god)''
* BilingualBonus: Luz once again speaks in Spanish. Translations below.
** Oh, Dios mío! ''(Oh my god)''
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* HeroicBuild: Stanley has the body build, height, and posture of an Olympic track runner and is a NiceGuy.
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* NervesOfSteel: TheLeader: Their names chosen at random, Luz Noceda, Kennedy Jennkins and Emilia Worstoch are the team leaders of The Alpha Squadron, Heaven's Devils and Foxtrot, respectively.
* LeaderWannabe: Inverted for Luz. She ''really'' doesn't want to lead.
* LegalizedEvil: Governor Maxwell tells the superhuman kids that any crimes they commit the Death Camp will be swept under the rug. And he does mean ''any crime.''
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** Julia, to Luz's surprise, can be this, too.
* LeaderWannabe: Inverted for Luz. She ''really'' doesn't want to lead.
* LegalizedEvil: Governor Maxwell tells the superhuman kids that any crimes they commit the Death Camp will be swept under the rug. And he does mean ''any crime.''
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!!This chapter contains examples of:
* DeadlyGame: Luz refers to the Death Camp as "murder with extra steps".
* {{Greed}}: Exploited. Maxwell also adds the incentive of a cash prize of $1.1 Billion to the winning team.
* InstantWristwatch: The Governor looks at his watch every now and again as the kidnapped collect their composure.
* {{Irony}}: When she is kidnapped and put in a DeadlyGame with other superhuman teenagers, Luz is especially alarmed for, as far as she could tell, everyone else in the room had stronger, better powers than her holed hands. Turns out she has the infamous [[PowerParasite All For One]] Quirk, making her potentially the most dangerous and lethal combatant of all.
* NervesOfSteel: Stanley Richardson shows this, being one of the first of the kidnapped kids to calmly question the AntagonisticGovernor that orchestrated the whole thing, while most were too afraid to say anything at all.
* NumberTwo: Julia not long afterwards offers to be her second-in-command, so that Luz doesn't feel too pressured. TheLeader is so happy she hugs her for it.
--> '''Julia''': Every good leader has someone to fall back on if they're heavily wounded or tired, right? King Arthur had Sir Geraint. So you can have me? Why not? Besides, I don't mind. It's not like you're forcing me to take up this role, in the first place.
* StunnedSilence: For over a minute, the kidnapped teenagers are quiet with terror, and dread at the horrendous situation they're in.
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!!This chapter contains examples of:
* DeadlyGame: Luz refers to the Death Camp as "murder with extra steps".
* {{Greed}}: Exploited. Maxwell also adds the incentive of a cash prize of $1.1 Billion to the winning team.
* InstantWristwatch: The Governor looks at his watch every now and again as the kidnapped collect their composure.
* {{Irony}}: When she is kidnapped and put in a DeadlyGame with other superhuman teenagers, Luz is especially alarmed for, as far as she could tell, everyone else in the room had stronger, better powers than her holed hands. Turns out she has the infamous [[PowerParasite All For One]] Quirk, making her potentially the most dangerous and lethal combatant of all.
* NervesOfSteel: Stanley Richardson shows this, being one of the first of the kidnapped kids to calmly question the AntagonisticGovernor that orchestrated the whole thing, while most were too afraid to say anything at all.
* NumberTwo: Julia not long afterwards offers to be her second-in-command, so that Luz doesn't feel too pressured. TheLeader is so happy she hugs her for it.
--> '''Julia''': Every good leader has someone to fall back on if they're heavily wounded or tired, right? King Arthur had Sir Geraint. So you can have me? Why not? Besides, I don't mind. It's not like you're forcing me to take up this role, in the first place.
* StunnedSilence: For over a minute, the kidnapped teenagers are quiet with terror, and dread at the horrendous situation they're in.
